Bin Tere-ZaYa SS|LAST CHAPTER Pg.21 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Aneesha.

Very well written vinu...one cn feel the pain zaya is going through jst by reading it...how beautifully their emotions. hv been described in ths...way to go girl👏

Originally posted by: zaya.fan

Vinu mela baby...u r just tooo good... 😳
Update soon 👏

Originally posted by: vinu127

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

@bold...Matlab?😊frankly bolu? u r one of my inspirations when it comes to writing.. and getting such a comment from u makes me feel very very happy😃😃

😳 Its out nickname for each other.. like janu..honey..baby😉☺️good.. keep good nicknames to YOUR YOUNGER BRO!😛😛

Originally posted by: vinu127

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

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awesome work vinu..👏👏👏
sorry couldnt comment earlier as was a bit busy...
but really awesome work... loved it entirely...
please please please pm me when u update..
and thanks for posting a link at the thread...
love your work and continue soon...
take care... and do pm me...
-tanya..😳

thank u so much for those lovely comments...I tried my level best to update as fast as possible and here is the result...this chapter is purely for the Abdullahs... I wanted to update the next chapter before my long break from I-F (don't worry... I'll not abandon this... long break means 5 days!) but unfortunately this did not shape up the way I had actually wanted it to be... so sorry if I end up disappointing you.

It has not been proof read so pls forgive me for typos! MS Word has an irritating auto-correct!

Accha here ends my kitkit and the 2^nd chapter of Bin Tere begins

CHAPTER 2

Usmaan had been shifted to the ICCU while Zain had been sitting there, lifelessly for over 3 hours! Fahad had tried to break his trance when his Mom pulled Aliya out of the hospital but had failed miserably. He knew Aliya could never do that! Forget the fact that the person in question was her beloved Maamu. She could not do such a thing to any other person in the world. She was a pure soul. He knew it. But he was helpless! He could not dare to go against his mother at this point of time. She needed his support and standing for Aliya will only make her anger rise because then she would feel that Aliya has created distance between her and her sons. He could not let that happen. If he could not mend things, he did not want to damage the situation further too. He simply closed his eyes and tried to accept the fact that at that point of time, he was devoid of 2 very important people in his life. One a sister-in-law who filled the space of a sister he never got to live with and the other, his father whom he did not want to live without.

Shazia was more than happy with Aliya's departure. She had never liked her and especially after the incident when she was tricked by Aliya to reveal Barkat aka Bobby's truth and made her loseher weekly income of 2 lakhs, she had this peculiar dislike towards her! And her star struck or should I say money-struck mind had shamelessly started thinking about how she could get Zain to marry Gauhar now! The condition of her Father-in-law unfortunately had no effect on her!

Nafeesa had definitely felt bad when Aliya was being dragged out but she had cornered those thoughts by accepting what Suraiyya had told as the truth! Aliya had cheated Zain and the entire family and needed no mercy!

Poor aayat was at home, with the kids, supporting them and convincing herself and her parents that her Maamu will be fine very soon, not knowing what her sister was going through at that instance!

In all this Zain had been out of the loop! He had no idea what was going around till Rizwan and Zubbu came there. They were somehow not aware of the accident until Fahad had called Rizwan telling him about whatever happened. Rizwan had called Zubbu and the duo had made it to the hospital. Suraiyya was furious seeing Zubbu will be an understatement and so will it be if I said that Zubbu was disgusted by her thoughts, behavior and actions! He could not believe that she would frame him and his aalu of such a deed! He was angry at Suraiyya but at the same time he was guilty that somewhere he was responsible for whatever happened.

But before any words could be exchanged, the doctor walked out of ICCU and addressed Suraiyya "It's a good news Mrs.Abdullah! Mr. Abdullah is responding positively to the treatment. Agar aisa hi woh respond kate rahe toh bahut jald woh emotionally active state me aajayenge. Aur uske baad dheere se who poori tarah se normal hojayenge" "thank you doctor thank you so much" said a voice that had been suppressed and suffocated since the past 3 hours! The Abdullahs and Rizwan and Zubair were very happy that Zain was finally out of his trance while the doctor spoke up "Aise cases me itni jaldi itna progress dikhna mamooli baat nahi hai Mr. Abdullah. Lagta hai Allah ne aap sabki duae qubool kar di hai" and left. Zain smiled and said "Dua qubool toh unhe karna hi tha. Aakhir unki laadli hai jis ne dua maanga apne maamu keliye. Waise yeh Aalya hai kaha? Dargah gayi hai kya?" he asked looking around

No one knew how to react! Zain looked at everyone! Fahad's helpless face, Shazia's who cares face, Nafeesa's now how do I tell u face, Rizwan's what do I do now bro face, Zubbu's I can't believe this face and finally his Mom's face! That had no clear expression on it! She did not want his son to think of her again! But now, the first person who he talks of is her! What had she done to her son that he could not see what that lady was! A cheapster who had cheated on him!

By then, zain has begun to realize everything. He could hear Aliya's pleading voice reverberate in his ears "Zaaiin.." she had called out for him... once, twice, thrice! He hated himself at that moment! He had not stood by his wife when she needed him the most! He had not held her hand when it reached out for him with a hope of support and companionship! He had broken his word of being with her forever, through every thick and thin! He had let her break! He had let her be dragged away from all the happiness she deserves!

He looked at his mom with disbelief! How could she do this? He remembered each word of hers! Those words that would have pierced into his MEZ's heart and broken it into a trillion pieces! That thought crushed the pieces of his already broken heart "nahi karna chahiye tha mom...aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha!" suraiyya could not take that! She had definitely done the right thing! She would not let anyone play with her family! "maine joh kiya bilkul sahi kiya zain! Uss ladki tumhe dhoka de rahi thi! Andhere me rakhi thi tumhe! Aur aaj who tumhaare dad ki jaan lene jaa rahi thi! Iss zubbu ke saath affair chal raha hai uska" "Bas!" they heard an angry voice! No, not Zain's! it was Zubair! "Bas Maami! Bahut kuch keh diya aapne! Aalu aur mere beech ka rishta kitna paak hai, yeh Allah bhi jaante hai! Aur aap use aise ghatiya rang de rahe ho! Aur humpe Maamu ki accident ki inzaam laga rahe ho! Mujhe samaj me nahin aa raha hai ki main aapko kaise samjhau!" he was clearly disgusted!

"kya samjhau ge tum? Toh batau mujhe! Abb tak yahi kyun ho? Tumhe toh kal hi chale jaana tha na? aur kya kar rahe the tum office me? Kyun message bheja Aliya ko ki who usman saab ko office bheje? Kya hai woh kaam jise poore kiye bina tum yaha se nahi jaane waale the? Bolo?" Zain was not able to take this anymore! He had heard enough! But these questions had to be answered. But he knew the answer to none! He knew nothing, except the fact that his Aalya could not be wrong!

"zubair zain ka cabin design kar raha tha! Iss liye yaha ek din aur ruka! Iss liye Aliya se uncle ko office bhejne ko kaha! Taaki who design approve kar sake! Yahi hai woh kaam jise poore kiye bina ye yaha se nahi jaane waale tha! Aur iss sab me main uska saath tha! Har pal! Lekin aapne bina kuch soche samjhe bhabi ko..." Rizwan could not complete the sentence! He really could not as his eyes landed on zain's face! He looked hollow! Hollow having lost his life! Hollow having lost his self-respect! Hollow at having losing his trust, faith and respect for his mother! Hollow was what he was once Aliya was not in his life!

Suraiyya was unable to comprehend her thoughts! She replayed all the things after knowing this dreaded truth! From the beginning! First realization hit her when she remembered that the person who planted the seed in her brain was a cheater! An imposter of her dead daughter! Each moment of Aliya and Zubair she had witnessed did not seem all that wrong now! And she remembered Aliya telling Usman Saab to go to office to approve Zain's cabin! She remembered the moments Aliya had spent with Usman Saab in her presence! She really loved him! She realized how much Zain loves Aliya! The world started revolving around her head!. What had she done! She had spoilt her son's life! She, with her own bloody hand and mouth had driven Zain's soul out of his life! Worst of all! She could not undo any of her actions! She could not forgive herself! "zain" She turned to face Zain but he was no where to be found!

That was when everyone realized that Zain was not there! They looked around but he wasn't there! Suddenly the phone on the hospital chair rang. It was Aliya's phone. Rizwan picked it to see Zain calling! He immediately received the call "Zain... Zain tum kaha chale gaye? Kaha ho tum Zain?" Blank! There was not one sound from the other end! Zain had lost one road to her! Kaisa rahunga main Aalya? Kaise rahunga bin tere?

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PART 3