OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep

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SplashRain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

wow amazing loved it dear
awsome

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Super Kool
Lovely update, lashy...forget jodha, even my heart fluttered reading the part where jalal tends her wound...jalal again surprised jodha...the young queen's dilemma and confusion are multiplying by the minute...😳

I love this ss...bas keh diya...😊😆

I know my heart fluttered too...cos its so nice to actually imagine PARIJAT in that scene...will we ever get such scenes in JA?

awww thank you SK...thank you sooo much 🤗

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ginco

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Lashy...

wat a wonderful piece of work...it's like a screenplay ;praiseworthy n magnificent...apt to be put into action ...

I hardly read SS , but this ones like smooth wine... fine n yet intoxicating... u have made up for wat we r missing on the show...

Officially a fan now !!!!!

Kashi

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@ Sara...shall multiply these by 100 too before I send them over to you 🤗thank you sooo much...am glad you're reading it and glad I could live up to the mark!

Thank you so much splashrain 😃

Originally posted by: kamla1
The most wonderful written update I ever read for any of the serials or episodes. Such a command of language and beautiful narration of the episode, I think WU is better than the actual show. The writer has a great future as author or Novelist.

Ok this comment ACTUALLY made my day...read it first thing in the morning...and then what more do I say... love you for it..and thank you for the encouragement 😳

As for my distinct future all I can see for now, is me running behind my two sons...😆

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simisworld

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Just found this...great story! You're a wonderful writer and I absolutely love the way you have portrayed their interactions. JA do fight but it is not as malicious as it is in the show at times. Jalal is clearly aware of his attraction and teasing Jodha as she comes to terms with hers. Great job again and can't wait to read more. Update soon!

Simran

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meghanajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Wow, you are a gifted writer. I read your story in one go, just amazing. I loved all the Akdha nok-jhoks and my Jalal the most!

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ginco
Lashy...

wat a wonderful piece of work...it's like a screenplay ;praiseworthy n magnificent...apt to be put into action ...

I hardly read SS , but this ones like smooth wine... fine n yet intoxicating... u have made up for wat we r missing on the show...

Officially a fan now !!!!!

Kashi

Awww thank you sooo much Kashi 🤗thanks for letting me know that I was able to live up to your expectations...

Originally posted by: meghanajain
Wow, you are a gifted writer. I read your story in one go, just amazing. I loved all the Akdha nok-jhoks and my Jalal the most!

awww thank you megha...I'll consider myself fortunate that I have a gifted writer like yourself reading what I've written 😃

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Shraddha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: simisworld
Just found this...great story! You're a wonderful writer and I absolutely love the way you have portrayed their interactions. JA do fight but it is not as malicious as it is in the show at times. Jalal is clearly aware of his attraction and teasing Jodha as she comes to terms with hers. Great job again and can't wait to read more. Update soon!

Simran

Sorry I missed your comment...thanks for the encouraging words...have one part left will do so this weekend...😃