OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep

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Ritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Woww... Beautiful nd niceee...
Luvd it

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

loved the whole story...wisg we have a scene like this in the show.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Thank you daisydee and Shreshtha 🤗

Awww sweetdiksha you read it many times? I'm quite pleasantly surprised - seeing how the parts are quite long...but am happy if you liked it...😃

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Lovely end to your ss it was brilliant..👍🏼.
Loved seeing the caring and concerned jalaal again who cares for jodha's sentiments and took her to the bhagwati mata temple she wanted to pay a visit to..😊.
awww thank you...yes he didn't want to disappoint...however, his earlier reasons for having not taken her were that the place was unsafe ...
coincidentally we had a temple scene in the serial too...😃

I liked how smartly moti made jodha realize why she was avoiding jalaal's question and that was not because she felt hatred for him but because she felt something for him..😊
True...

Jalaal was quite restless because he wanted an answer from jodha and without that he would'nt get peace though he refused to believe it but jodha Is an important part of his life..❤️.
Waiting for something like this in the serial too

I liked how they conveyed their feelings for each other in the end a unique confession through the eyes..
Actually they conveyed their feelings more through gestures...she by wearing the dress he'd given her i.e. first time wholeheartedly accepting a gift he'd given her...and him by acknowledging it...their mischievous silent-banter at the end was supposed to confirm their stance

Keep up the good work..👍🏼 ❤️
Thanks dear for penning your words here - it made it all worthwhile...😳

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ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

lashy, WHy? Why did u have to end this ss especially the way u ended? It was so beautifully written. I actually felt like i was watching last exchange of silent dialogues live.

this was much mroe than satisfying read but u could make this into ff, pleassseee or at least give us a new ss or ff. But, i think it would be awesome if you can make this into ff by continuing it where u left off.

Thank you so much for this beautiful and amazing ss.👏👏😃

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dlip

@dlip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Nice story. Amazing end with lot of promises for future.

Keep writing!

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known as KAI, name is Jasmine

@Kai.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Beautiful write up😛 so J & J are conversing through gestures now!!

The CVs should take a page from your SS...this is the kind of story development we need. Slowly and steadily they are getting to know about either other through their banter.

I loved the below line of Jalal's😎

With a subtle smile on his lips, he studied her for a moment 'I needed to return to Agra urgently and your health wasn't showing signs of recovery...I was wondering if your Gods were angry since I'd not permitted you to visit last time...' he shrugged casually 'Better not to displease them, I thought...'

It was sad to see Jalal leave for his conquest and the ending of your SS!!😔

I had something interesting to look forward to during the weekends!

Anyways, thanks Lashy🤗🤗

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kanika

@kank_dah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

it was beautiful especially the end.plz continue,would love to read more.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
Lashy lashy lashy read all the parts and I must say that u r an amazing writer. Loved all the scenes in this ff.
Thank you sooo much dearest Tahni 😳 Your words mean a lot to me..

Deary I think u should write more.. Everyone is in love with ur SS..
Haila...what? how? where? heee hee what made you say that?😳

I love the ending cauz it was different from others.. Just love the last scene... It was amazing
I'm glad the last scene had the effect it was supposed to, since it was the climax the culmination of the SS...does she hate me or not?😳
Not immediately, but will try and see if I can come up with some other ideas in a month's time or so..till then, love you loads 🤗

Originally posted by: Az3003
Wonderful, awesome!!!👏👏👏
This was such a beautiful story and so well written👏👏

I'm so sad that it had to come to an end😭😭

Please either continue with this or write something else😃 I really love your work and I'm really looking forward to reading more🤗😛

Awww thank you so much Az...😳 aap newbie hain na...

anyway as I'd told Tahni...possibly not immediately... but will try and see if I can come up with some other ideas in a month's time or so..thanks for your encouragement🤗

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ashpat
lashy, WHy? Why did u have to end this ss especially the way u ended? It was so beautifully written. I actually felt like i was watching last exchange of silent dialogues live.

this was much mroe than satisfying read but u could make this into ff, pleassseee or at least give us a new ss or ff. But, i think it would be awesome if you can make this into ff by continuing it where u left off.

Thank you so much for this beautiful and amazing ss.👏👏😃

plz make it into an ff,plz plz plz.