OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep - Page 11

Originally posted by: minnie2308

minnie on pink fluffy clouds...

Wish something like this happens on screen so I could relish what I've read.

I can see that Shehanshah has an edge oven the queen in your story😉... Typical lashy style, may I say?

Good to see the light hearted banter, so unlike the actual serial, where these two fight like pepsi and coke

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

hey plz update soon.😊

Very nice writing

Originally posted by: lashy

In the serial (currently at least) both are equally balanced fools...so one can't have an edge over the other...😆

Fight like pepsi and coke..haven't heard that analogy ever! but me likes it!😛

Hmmm as far as I remember - in my time pass stories 🤔- a person who's cool and collected always has an edge over the short-tempered variety...in Samyukta, shrewd ananya always had an edge over quick-tempered/but good-natured Veer...here cunning Jalal has an edge over quick-tempered good-natured Jodha...

and as for the romantic sequences - don't know minnie...but I think its better we go with our expectations NIL...if not, me thinks we'll be quite disappointed...I wouldn't deny we'd get a few rare treats like the sword fight and arthi scenes...but the makers seem unable to sustain that (and this seems to be the case for most serials!)

Yeah... What I meant was that the king is cool and collected.

Updated dearies...the last and final chapter to this series..

just superb. read it many times

Ausme update...
U wrote it very beautifully... Liked it very much...

Lovely end to your ss it was brilliant..👍🏼.
Loved seeing the caring and concerned jalaal again who cares for jodha's sentiments and took her to the bhagwati mata temple she wanted to pay a visit to..😊.
I liked how smartly moti made jodha realize why she was avoiding jalaal's question and that was not because she felt hatred for him but because she felt something for him..😊.
Jalaal was quite restless because he wanted an answer from jodha and without that he would'nt get peace though he refused to believe it but jodha Is an important part of his life..❤️.
I liked how they conveyed their feelings for each other in the end a unique confession through the eyes..
Keep up the good work..👍🏼 ❤️.

Lashy lashy lashy read all the parts and I must say that u r an amazing writer. Loved all the scenes in this ff. Deary I think u should write more.. Everyone is in love with ur SS.. I love the ending cauz it was different from others.. Just love the last scene... It was amazing

Wonderful, awesome!!!👏👏👏