OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep - Page 19

Originally posted by: cosmosandme

that is a masterpiece !!! sooo beautifully written !!! i'm now at loss of words now...

ur jalal is such a wise and witty person, his remarks, replies,attitude,grandeur makes him THE ROYAL EMPEROR,... who can make people to do what he wants. for an instance i loved it when jodha was expecting a thank you, he made her thank him instead. and his way of distracting her when hakim did stitching , his way of turning down her demands and then fulfilling them with giving witty reasons behind rejections, not letting out his inner feelings come out but make her speak her mind instead makes him THE KING. who never let anyone have an eye on his possession , makes sure of his wife's comfort... praise her and make it pun at the end... and the list is endless. but this jalal has got style i must say, even ur moti is very intelligent. and last but not the list the climax ... unmatchable !!! for an instance i thought jodha wouldn't pay heed, i knew that had the slightest chance, but she didn't appear till morning made me anxious , that the worst is gonna happen !!! but what an end !!! she spoke everything without any words, what a subtle way ! i never ever thought she would come up with such a brilliant idea of conveying her message , definitely saying it bluntly was not easy for her.but she found an ultimate solution and she proved her self the wise QUEEN.

and they both lived happily ever after... 😃

u r a born writer ⭐️ and with this the supply of os comes to a halt (can't call it an end ). please keep writing such os if ff is not convenient to u. it was indeed brilliant. varsha was so true about them... and i'm thankful to her, had she not told me, i would have never known about it.