arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t
Awesome update!!!!
Loved it...
Beautiful ending...very happy that u don't let ASR die...

hi sirivalli.t,

thank you so much.

he he i am not so brave that i will let asr go... he will laugh at me and say, "my name is arnav sigh raizada, apni aukat mein raha karo, samjhi tum!"

so glad you loved the last chapter. see you at the epilogue.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: supervin76
Hi Indi,
What a lovely befitting last chapter for such a beautiful story. It is definitely not the end for them. You have written this story so well, sketched out each character so perfectly, I want to go back and read it again and again and again. This will remain one of my most favourite stories of all time. Thank you Indi.

hi supervin,

thank you so much for reading without you and so unabashedly enjoying it. what you say about reading again just fills my heart. i hope from time to time you do want to come back and turn the pages again... i hope asr and khushi always call out.

you are right, this is not the end of them. just a major rest point in their story... i wonder if i'll start seeing what next as i leave them alone for awhile and get lost in ad...

thank you so much for saying it will remain one of your favourite stories... i just feel so grateful.

see you soon... epilogue round the corner.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: Horizon
Here I am after so many months searching for the last update as you said, as there was no pm...but could find it some how.
Even after missing the read all these months, It all flowed beautifully without any speed breakers becos you made them emanate the essence they are made of at the core til the end. Glad to see anjali's life line like little one coming back to life...i got the hints after reading your corresponding epi analysis ..it was a truly beautiful closure in all respects for both the siblings..
that curtains down in the end felt symbolic .. i remember the passion / the reason it started out with last year.. and it seem stuck to its essence.. will catch all the missed parts soon..

Congratulations on a great story indi..

sorry sorry sorry, did i not add you to the pm list? forgive me.

indu thanks for saying that about the flow and essence of character. for me, the character is essential... if i change them drastically, they no longer are the people i fell in love with... i am so glad to here the basic character feel sthe same. i know i pushed khushi toward a more bold stance vis a vis examining her own sexuality and things... actually in ncofl even more so... but i felt she could be this way... especially here... after she has found and accepted love and been loved the way she has... and al that has happened to their lives.

anjali's baby... i tried to push the whole thing away... let her grow out of her misery... face shyam... let go of shyam... start feeling like herself again... warm to the doctor who had saved her brother's life... begin to trust again... begin to want o be woman... yet something felt not done, not told... that child... i rarely plan anything in the stories... i just have asenc=se of direction... when the baby talk started i let it come...

till i had asr going to meet urmila jana i wan't sure if she would have the baby we were after... but when she had to pick apicture, i just knew she would pick shyam's

later i thought how strange how astory leads you. started with asr in anaccident, a point suggested by extrememly bad and heartless story ending toyed with by original makers... that led to hospital... to dr vijay verma... to the access to nurses and all the secrets of hospitals we rarely get to know... but they are there we do know...

sorry to bak bak.

hey, read as and when you feel like. there never is any compulsion. i am grateful you read at all. i am pretty bad with fanfiction myself... only read the blast stuff.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#854

Gooddd... Didi, this mother-daughter reunion scene is definitely one of the most beautiful moment i've read so far... this is AMAZING... too beautifully portrayed... loved it to core...

it's been such a loonnnggg and breathtaking journey Didi... around 20 months, right... i still get goosebumps remembering the prologue with that disastrous picture u posted all those months back... i remember i couldnt sleep... as if getting nightmares... u said something like 'it's not easy to scare ASR's fans'... and that moment u got me hooked Didi... i knew i can trust you to do justice to them... and see what an amazing result you have given us of that bharosa... so much way they have crossed... so much has happened in their life... so much they made us feel... crying with them... hoping with them... dreaming with them... we laughed... we smiled... got angry... frightened... the changes in their lives made us see differently... helps us imagine so much that only they can do to us... it's been a terrific journey as a reader Didi... i've read sooo many stories here, nd believe me when i say this i cant remember if i ever felt this nostalgic about ending of any story... hats off to you Indi Didi... and THANK YOU sooo much for this amazing piece of creation... i love you for this bas...

i logged in after so many days today to change my status that i'll be back in 2 weeks, and saw ur PM on top of my 175 unread PMs... couldnt stop myself from running ti the thread... i know my comment is not about todays update, but i'm just too overwhelmed with some unknown feeling to write something coherently... see you soon... love ya Didi...

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Horizon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: indi52

sorry sorry sorry, did i not add you to the pm list? forgive me.

indu thanks for saying that about the flow and essence of character. for me, the character is essential... if i change them drastically, they no longer are the people i fell in love with... i am so glad to here the basic character feel sthe same. i know i pushed khushi toward a more bold stance vis a vis examining her own sexuality and things... actually in ncofl even more so... but i felt she could be this way... especially here... after she has found and accepted love and been loved the way she has... and al that has happened to their lives.

anjali's baby... i tried to push the whole thing away... let her grow out of her misery... face shyam... let go of shyam... start feeling like herself again... warm to the doctor who had saved her brother's life... begin to trust again... begin to want o be woman... yet something felt not done, not told... that child... i rarely plan anything in the stories... i just have asenc=se of direction... when the baby talk started i let it come...

till i had asr going to meet urmila jana i wan't sure if she would have the baby we were after... but when she had to pick apicture, i just knew she would pick shyam's

later i thought how strange how astory leads you. started with asr in anaccident, a point suggested by extrememly bad and heartless story ending toyed with by original makers... that led to hospital... to dr vijay verma... to the access to nurses and all the secrets of hospitals we rarely get to know... but they are there we do know...

sorry to bak bak.

hey, read as and when you feel like. there never is any compulsion. i am grateful you read at all. i am pretty bad with fanfiction myself... only read the blast stuff.

Indi,

I am sorry, didn't mean to make you go guilt trips for missing me in the pm list.. i know it happens very easily while sending messages to a chunk of people..just that i really wanted to catch up the last part, and the urgency of the extra few min. it took to find it speaking..

that in red, 1000% true. and that lack of closure to most important things of some one's (anjali) whole existence can frustrate to disappoint to lead us (you) to conceive and write seemingly impossible stuff like keeping the baby alive here.. you wanted that to happen.. you managed it logically.. altho just from reading this one update i wasn't clear as to the details of exactly how that was possible as i am reading the name of the nurse for the first time...but i haven't read so much in between, i am sure there will be clues there,

for me, anjali is as important as asr and khushi for the whole story as some one who gave him the whole sense of purpose, direction in that young stage, she was conveniently sidelined in the original, for reasons we can talk for n threads, i am glad you set out to render some peace to this woman, much deserving.

Khushi, not sure what you did with her. last chapter i read before this was where asr- khushi go out some place with open verandah, they sleep, he wakes up and can't find khushi.. long time ago that was. but till then she felt like the woman i always wanted to see her to be.. the emotions of her etched beautifully ..

it felt indeed sad when u announced the end month or two ago, mainly becos your characters stuck so much to the essence that it essentially felt like an extension of the original , and hence closure of the original!

congrats again indi, i hope you find inspiration again and come back to writing desk of ffs..

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#856

In di I remember reading the first chapter of without you and almost fainting! ASR was dying it couldnt be true! But I also knew if anyone could get away with killing him it would be you! Though I am really glad he recovered I sometimes wonder what the experiment would have been like! Even after dying would he have ever died In di?

No one knows better than you he is the stuff of which dreams are made and the substance of all possibilities possible.The ultimate man.

The part of him that was missing or hidden was completed and complimented by his ardhangini, his other half Khushi. And they built vishwas together!

Your last chapter was in essence that. And his niece was the symbol of a new beginning, a reward for the man who fought all odds to protect his Di! That is how ASR was born. And life came back to him full circle! Krishna's lila! Excellent In di! ⭐️ 👏

I will miss without you. For me its the end of an era😭

Edited by wiwy - 10 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: roopathomas
Thank u for giving us a great story... I enjoyed reading it. It was a passionate love story... A true arnav n khushi story. Hope u don't stop writing.

thank you for reading without you and enjoying it. thank you for saying that in pink... made my day. i too hope something comes along and i feel like writing again... take care. see you wednesday.