arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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supervin76

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Posted: 10 years ago

#831

Hi Indi,

What a lovely befitting last chapter for such a beautiful story. It is definitely not the end for them. You have written this story so well, sketched out each character so perfectly, I want to go back and read it again and again and again. This will remain one of my most favourite stories of all time. Thank you Indi.

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Horizon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#832

Here I am after so many months searching for the last update as you said, as there was no pm...but could find it some how.
Even after missing the read all these months, It all flowed beautifully without any speed breakers becos you made them emanate the essence they are made of at the core til the end. Glad to see anjali's life line like little one coming back to life...i got the hints after reading your corresponding epi analysis ..it was a truly beautiful closure in all respects for both the siblings..
that curtains down in the end felt symbolic .. i remember the passion / the reason it started out with last year.. and it seem stuck to its essence.. will catch all the missed parts soon..

Congratulations on a great story indi..

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roopathomas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#833

Thank u for giving us a great story... I enjoyed reading it. It was a passionate love story... A true arnav n khushi story. Hope u don't stop writing.

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256748

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Posted: 10 years ago

#834

Awesome

Finally Anjali got her doughter .

Edited by hajr - 10 years ago

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tanu_15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#835

loved d ff very much
end was good

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Rrpdxb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#836

Beautiful di!😳

Such a great ending. Anjali has got back her pari. Asr and kushi living happily in their choti si duniya .

Di pls don't stop writing , you are a fabulous writer , ye dil mange more !😳

Thanku so much for the pm 🤗

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Tiramisu_coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#837

Gonna miss them so much... I hope you start another one soon!!! Say yes, damnit!!!!

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Anuradha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#838

Thanks for this beautiful story...

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#839

After I read this chapter I went back to read all my comment for the previous chapters.. I wanted to leave you with this.. My first comment on a fan fiction .. Without you...

Reality( in this case the show) and fiction (in this case yours) are blurred.. Absolutely brilliant!

Knew your ASR would be stylishly perfect but you took Khushi to where the show could have taken her.. I loved how even though she did not say it aloud out of hesitation but she had intense feelings for her Arnav..

It started so sad that I was scared to read further yet helpless to stop.. But Arnavji woke up and everything is how it is meant to be.. Non stop reading ahead.. 😊

❤️ Hope your imagination takes flight and you start with an indi52 love story. Thank you for without you.

Edited by aarwen - 10 years ago