arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed** - Page 87

Originally posted by: Rrpdxb

Beautiful di!😳

Such a great ending. Anjali has got back her pari. Asr and kushi living happily in their choti si duniya .

Di pls don't stop writing , you are a fabulous writer , ye dil mange more !😳

Thanku so much for the pm 🤗

Originally posted by: Tiramisu_coffee

Gonna miss them so much... I hope you start another one soon!!! Say yes, damnit!!!!

Originally posted by: lovebarun...

Thanks for this beautiful story...

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Indi, you've written his helplessness, his frustration so well. That debilitating feeling that he's failed at the very thing that has kept him going for so long ... taking care of his Di. And that silent communication between Anjali and him was so painful to witness. She's forced to accept that her child is no more. Grief, apology, powerlessness, all there in that glance. But, as you wrote, her subconscious never embraced it. Her instinct did prove correct. But her graciousness when she met Urmila was creditworthy. It all turned out well at the end, but to be able to look beyond the initial intent is not easy.

I loved the way wrote of the sheer love Arnav and Khushi have for each other. The vishwas' she has on him ... and that aap hamari dhadkan hain' ... perfect.

Indi, as you curtain band karo' on this story, can I just say I've loved reading it and, more so, interacting with you :)

Thank you!

Originally posted by: sohara

I read so many Arshi ffs. Every time when a story ends I feel a strange pang in my heart what I felt on the last episode of ipk. I have a divine bonding with ipk and Arnav-khushi. They are actually an important part of my life.

I gave such a long preamble, cause I am feeling gloomy that you ended the story. I wish if you would not finish it. But the ending was perfect. Asr could bring smile on his di's face agin. He gave her back her precious child, who not anjali but made the whole family happy. What Amused me the most is khushi's enormous love for her husband. she was happy for anjali like the way asr was. They are soul mates in true sense. I love the way how you always express asr's urge for khushi. It always felt that She is not just his wife but his life, his oxygen to breath. He really can't live without her. And I know he will be like this forever. Both of their love for each other will never decrease and will increase more with every passing day.

Their dhadkane not only coalesce but they are dhadkan of each other.

I hope you may start another Arnav- khushi story soon.

waiting eagerly for the epilogue.

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Gooddd... Didi, this mother-daughter reunion scene is definitely one of the most beautiful moment i've read so far... this is AMAZING... too beautifully portrayed... loved it to core...

it's been such a loonnnggg and breathtaking journey Didi... around 20 months, right... i still get goosebumps remembering the prologue with that disastrous picture u posted all those months back... i remember i couldnt sleep... as if getting nightmares... u said something like 'it's not easy to scare ASR's fans'... and that moment u got me hooked Didi... i knew i can trust you to do justice to them... and see what an amazing result you have given us of that bharosa... so much way they have crossed... so much has happened in their life... so much they made us feel... crying with them... hoping with them... dreaming with them... we laughed... we smiled... got angry... frightened... the changes in their lives made us see differently... helps us imagine so much that only they can do to us... it's been a terrific journey as a reader Didi... i've read sooo many stories here, nd believe me when i say this i cant remember if i ever felt this nostalgic about ending of any story... hats off to you Indi Didi... and THANK YOU sooo much for this amazing piece of creation... i love you for this bas...

i logged in after so many days today to change my status that i'll be back in 2 weeks, and saw ur PM on top of my 175 unread PMs... couldnt stop myself from running ti the thread... i know my comment is not about todays update, but i'm just too overwhelmed with some unknown feeling to write something coherently... see you soon... love ya Didi...

Originally posted by: Raadhiyaaa

beautiful update

Originally posted by: wiwy

In di I remember reading the first chapter of without you and almost fainting! ASR was dying it couldnt be true! But I also knew if anyone could get away with killing him it would be you! Though I am really glad he recovered I sometimes wonder what the experiment would have been like! Even after dying would he have ever died In di?

No one knows better than you he is the stuff of which dreams are made and the substance of all possibilities possible.The ultimate man.

The part of him that was missing or hidden was completed and complimented by his ardhangini, his other half Khushi. And they built vishwas together!

Your last chapter was in essence that. And his niece was the symbol of a new beginning, a reward for the man who fought all odds to protect his Di! That is how ASR was born. And life came back to him full circle! Krishna's lila! Excellent In di! ⭐️ 👏

I will miss without you. For me its the end of an era😭

Originally posted by: zehr_akhan

Omg story end superb story passion romance story lines awesun 👏