arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#841

Indi, you've written his helplessness, his frustration so well. That debilitating feeling that he's failed at the very thing that has kept him going for so long ... taking care of his Di. And that silent communication between Anjali and him was so painful to witness. She's forced to accept that her child is no more. Grief, apology, powerlessness, all there in that glance. But, as you wrote, her subconscious never embraced it. Her instinct did prove correct. But her graciousness when she met Urmila was creditworthy. It all turned out well at the end, but to be able to look beyond the initial intent is not easy.

I loved the way wrote of the sheer love Arnav and Khushi have for each other. The vishwas' she has on him ... and that aap hamari dhadkan hain' ... perfect.

Indi, as you curtain band karo' on this story, can I just say I've loved reading it and, more so, interacting with you :)

Thank you!

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#842

I read so many Arshi ffs. Every time when a story ends I feel a strange pang in my heart what I felt on the last episode of ipk. I have a divine bonding with ipk and Arnav-khushi. They are actually an important part of my life.

I gave such a long preamble, cause I am feeling gloomy that you ended the story. I wish if you would not finish it. But the ending was perfect. Asr could bring smile on his di's face agin. He gave her back her precious child, who not anjali but made the whole family happy. What Amused me the most is khushi's enormous love for her husband. she was happy for anjali like the way asr was. They are soul mates in true sense. I love the way how you always express asr's urge for khushi. It always felt that She is not just his wife but his life, his oxygen to breath. He really can't live without her. And I know he will be like this forever. Both of their love for each other will never decrease and will increase more with every passing day.

Their dhadkane not only coalesce but they are dhadkan of each other.

I hope you may start another Arnav- khushi story soon.

waiting eagerly for the epilogue.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#843

Originally posted by: sonia_1
It's a beautiful end.
Loved it to the core.
Thank you for this beautiful FF 😊

sonia,

thank you. i so enjoyed meeting you and watching you follow the story, enjoy it... especially asr. see you at the epilogue.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#844

Originally posted by: spilla
Nice update

thank you, spilla... glad you enjoyed.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#845

Originally posted by: laksh65
very interesting chapter, will miss this story

thank you, laksh... i am so happy to hear you enjoyed without you. i will miss updating.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#846

Originally posted by: ranogill
loved it ...awesome story but you ended it quite quickly...we are going to miss it..and please do not stop writing about arshi

hi ranogill,

i will miss the story and all of you. i am thinking here that i have been dragging the story for over a year and a half and you must be tired of my infrequent updates and yay you say i am ending too soon... you know their story, never really ends... who knows, maybe i'll find something to tell this moment onward and be back in a while... let's see... but for now, i felt we had come to a significant point of rest. so loved writing and chatting with all of you. thank you.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#847

Originally posted by: kizh72
Lovely, Indi di. A retelling of their story keeping the essence of the characters, what we knew it to be, and not what it was made out to be.
You could never let ASR die! The Raijjaddan he lives forever.

hi kizh,

yeah, sigh... now way could i let him die, no matter how tragic heroine a pose i struck... there he was bounding with vita very very dolce. life itself in that beat of his... and she a complete dance. sigh i will miss these two. you think i was good with their characters? just felt my way through the murmur of all my feelings about them... if it worked out, me leaping and oera singing. thanks so much for reading, sir. and always being really good to me.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Thankfully you didn't let ASR die.
Or you would have broken my heart.
I hate tragedies.

The last chapter was beautiful.
Anjali got back her Rajkumari.
And her chance at happiness.
Shantivan has become a happy place again.

hi 1chilly,

just couldn't let him go... i'd have been heartbroken too. what would be there to write after that...

i have trouble too with tragedies unless it takes one to the depths and heights through a really powerful and meaningful story.

tragedy for the sake of maudlin sentimentality is awful.

this notion of romance being one which needs heavy duty dying to live on forever in our hearts i think is a rather silly formula adopted by lazy writers. and really, i would like to know what might have happened if juliet and romeo had lived.

thanks for enjoying the evolution of the story, its end point... i don't know if in real life such things happen, are babies thought to be dead found after a year, hale and hearty... but i do think the strangest and the most wonderful to bizarre things happen in life... in that scenario, this felt highly plausible. i never could stomach that baby killing and she was almost full term... something in me said, uh huh... child is around somewhere...

funny how, a doctor became important in the story. i didn't plan it... but the accident led to him and he took us to the child. crazy.

see you soon and thank you for reading without you with so much enthusiasm.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: shiv456
Superb update

thank you so much, shiv... glad you enjoyed.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#850

Originally posted by: Archu61
All well that ends well ,what a gamut of emotions ,they have been through,you brought us to the pinnacle where a mom gets her most precious being back and she brings wellness hope and the continuity of life ,this story will always be a favourite as it made me feel that we were a part of the plot felt the essences and it gripped us till the end ,you really written a wonderful tale which will live on hope you get it published so more people can enjoy it thank you for this wonderful gift .

archu,

thank you. you all are in a way part of the story... it is absolutely wonderful to hear from readers, feel things and write with that colouring the thoughts and words... i have never written fiction before. you all helped me write in away. delighted you liked that "gamut" of emotions and were engaged till the end.

thank you for saying that about getting it published. when you or anyone else says it, i feel so happy... feels like it's published already.

thank you for reading and flip through the pages whenever you miss the without you pagal pyaar.