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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Ooh ooh ooh... I love this!

Both Ri and Kara are just so adorable and interesting!

Poor Omki had to take care of not only a drunk Ri but also the task of cleaning up after her! And he didn't get to do anything either...

Their mutual attraction is sure to just explode all over our screens soon... nothing happened, there was even a drunk and puking Ri to take the edge off of the sexual tension but this was still so hot! Like... these two have no business being so sexy and making our tharki brains all riled up!

Hopefully there's some epic *cough* ahem ahem *cough* in the offing!

Seriously tho... can't say it enough. You. Write. Beautifully.

Thanks for sharing this with us...

Can't wait for more! Update soon...

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Savvy dearie, it was beautiful...Ri's insecurities always make her behave like an arrogant...loved the sparkling chemistry between them...glad you didn't made her first meeting a sexual one...both of then are actually getting attracted to each other..and they need to feel that gravity...Ri is seeing Kara as an gentleman...indeed he is...they way he took care of a drunk and puking Ri was adorable...and he's leaving his impression on her..the independent and damn care characteristic Ri is listening to his orders like a baby girl...I'm quite sure he's gonna make her realise who she's...and I just hope Ri's harsh words won't affect her relation with Anika..I'm hooked with this story...try to post the next part soon...plz..pretty plz..!!

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Deepa

@mailanchi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Such a long and nice chapter. Om is such a nice person. Eager to see how and when they wud meet next...

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Saivir

@Saivir

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Hi savina, Shaima here. Thank you for the pm. I love the Gauri u have conceived😉. And I love the dynamics between your Gauri and Omkara. The alternate universe u created is awesome.

One other thing I loved is AniRi. The way they talk is so relatable to real life friendships like we do.

Your Omkara is sooo sexy that I have fallen for him. I love the show Omkara too, but I like imagining him this hot😉

The who am I , where am I syndrome made me ROFL. U really have a penchant for writing. And the necrophilia part🤣- you are awesome Girl- where do u get these ideas

Looking forward to more of the updates. Sexykara and confusedRi

Beautiful work dear.

Let more updates come

Love- Shaima

PS. Please do pm me

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Rex

@StarLord_Owen

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

It was sooo awesome! I loved it so much!

Omkara is so cute 😃

And thanks for the PM ❤️

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Fantastic update

But Gauri was too harsh on Anika

I can understand all the alcohol in her system

That she is shocked with all the surroundings

But still she shouldn't have

Feel bad for Anika

Hope they sort it out soon

Now coming back to our Rikara

Gauri was in for some surprises

Nothing happened as we might have imagined

From last chapters ending

Gauri was nervous

Wanted to know what happened

Omkara being a gentleman

Told her exactly what happened

Gauri was so embarrassed

But really liked

How omkara took care of her

Wish Omkara never returns her clothes

That t-shirt was totally not her

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JesiC

@JesiC

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Awesome update.. can't wait for the next update..

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Omkara is awesome, Gauri is bad drunk and needs to apologize to her friends

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aman

@aman93

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

too good... loving it. different story

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

It just had to end with a cold shower! you are absolute brilliance! 👏👏

im so in love with this piece! everything about it is drafted to utmost perfection!

Gauri and her puking spree.. 😆😆😆 well i would be lieing to say that i guessed that cuz i didnt! naked on omkara's bed after their heavy duty club scene fuelled up my imagination on a veryy different tangent. lol. but then no disappointments cuz it completely made sense.. necrophilia! lol lol lol. couldnt stop laughing hard at that! good one savy👏

Omkara taking care of a puking (groaning) Gauri hahhaha and cleaning the place up with phenyl! awww poor poor omakra ! he definitely deserved after shower sex for all that he did for her😳 but im sure the wait would make it sweeter!

the lusty connection between rikara that you are exploring is very very very... well done savy! realistic raw and not at all gulneet ott. repeating myself all over again i just love love love the characterization! perfect to the T.

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