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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: writergenie17
Ooh ooh ooh... I love this!
Both Ri and Kara are just so adorable and interesting!

Poor Omki had to take care of not only a drunk Ri but also the task of cleaning up after her! And he didn't get to do anything either...

Their mutual attraction is sure to just explode all over our screens soon... nothing happened, there was even a drunk and puking Ri to take the edge off of the sexual tension but this was still so hot! Like... these two have no business being so sexy and making our tharki brains all riled up!

Hopefully there's some epic *cough* ahem ahem *cough* in the offing!

Seriously tho... can't say it enough. You. Write. Beautifully.

Thanks for sharing this with us...

Can't wait for more! Update soon...

Genie! One of my favourite writers (I am guilty that i haven't commented on your work, but i just love love love your stories ❤️) Do you know, do you even realize how much this appreciation means to me? Feels like I'm doing something right somewhere 😳

I wanted to portray the sexual tension between them without them getting tangled between the sheets. The love-making, or the explosion as you called it, will happen at the right time, and i promise to make it worth the wait. I also promise you wouldn't have to wait for too long for the epic *cough* ahem ahem *cough* 😆

Thank you so, so much Genie. Makes me so glad and inspired to write more 😳

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Rati0992
Hey lyk lyk

Originally posted by: mailanchi
Such a long and nice chapter. Om is such a nice person. Eager to see how and when they wud meet next...

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Awesome update
loved it

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..
It was sooo awesome! I loved it so much!
Omkara is so cute 😃
And thanks for the PM ❤️

Thank you so much 😳 Glad that you'll are liking the story this far 😳😃

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Savvy dearie, it was beautiful...Ri's insecurities always make her behave like an arrogant...loved the sparkling chemistry between them...glad you didn't made her first meeting a sexual one...both of then are actually getting attracted to each other..and they need to feel that gravity...Ri is seeing Kara as an gentleman...indeed he is...they way he took care of a drunk and puking Ri was adorable...and he's leaving his impression on her..the independent and damn care characteristic Ri is listening to his orders like a baby girl...I'm quite sure he's gonna make her realise who she's...and I just hope Ri's harsh words won't affect her relation with Anika..I'm hooked with this story...try to post the next part soon...plz..pretty plz..!!

Heyyy! They are certainly attracted to each other and will admit the same to themselves soon. And yes, Omkie seems like a playboy, but is a sweetheart. you'll see more of their individual characteristics in the next update, which will also give an insight into their upbringing and their equations with their respective family 😳

About AniRi, they are my most favourite bond, obviously after RiKara. Annika and Gauri are sister-soulmates, and are friendship goals. Their bond is something that a girl can easily connect to, because lets face it, we've all fought with our besties over trivial issues. Now, how will Gauri handle Annika's broken heart? and how will Annika react to Gauri's approach? Let's wait and read 😳

Thank yu so so much dearie 🤗 Your comment just made me a happier person 😃

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ahista
Hi savina, Shaima here. Thank you for the pm. I love the Gauri u have conceived😉. And I love the dynamics between your Gauri and Omkara. The alternate universe u created is awesome.
One other thing I loved is AniRi. The way they talk is so relatable to real life friendships like we do.
Your Omkara is sooo sexy that I have fallen for him. I love the show Omkara too, but I like imagining him this hot😉
The who am I , where am I syndrome made me ROFL. U really have a penchant for writing. And the necrophilia part🤣- you are awesome Girl- where do u get these ideas
Looking forward to more of the updates. Sexykara and confusedRi
Beautiful work dear.
Let more updates come
Love- Shaima

PS. Please do pm me

Hey Shaima 😃 Thank you so much! I'm glad you're liking the story's RiKara. Yes, i fantasize about Omkie being this hot too 😆 Alas, I can only fulfill my cravings by penning these fantasies 😆

I'm so glad you liked the story 😳 Thank you again, Shaima 🤗

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Fantastic update
But Gauri was too harsh on Anika
I can understand all the alcohol in her system
That she is shocked with all the surroundings
But still she shouldn't have
Feel bad for Anika
Hope they sort it out soon

Now coming back to our Rikara
Gauri was in for some surprises
Nothing happened as we might have imagined
From last chapters ending

Gauri was nervous
Wanted to know what happened
Omkara being a gentleman
Told her exactly what happened
Gauri was so embarrassed
But really liked
How omkara took care of her

Wish Omkara never returns her clothes
That t-shirt was totally not her

Vrinda! How i love long comments! You make me so happy 😳

Yes, AniRi had a tensed moment, but if you ask me, I'm sure they'll sort it out in a very matured manner 😳

Isn't Omkie a sweetheart? I'm in love with his character. He someone who is an open book, contrary to the impression that is created about him. Unlike our IB'S Omkie, this Omkara is very vocal about his thoughts and I am giving away the story if i say anything else further.

I'm glad you're liking the way the story is shaping up. Please do stay tuned for further updates. Thank you so much 😊

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: JesiC
Awesome update.. can't wait for the next update..

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
Omkara is awesome, Gauri is bad drunk and needs to apologize to her friends

Originally posted by: aman93

too good... loving it. different story

Originally posted by: BIaddict
Lovvve this Kara and Ri

Thank you so much peeps 😳 Glad that you'll are liking the story this far 😳😃

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Savina

@Savinaa

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: perfictionist
It just had to end with a cold shower! you are absolute brilliance! 👏👏
im so in love with this piece! everything about it is drafted to utmost perfection!
Gauri and her puking spree.. 😆😆😆 well i would be lieing to say that i guessed that cuz i didnt! naked on omkara's bed after their heavy duty club scene fuelled up my imagination on a veryy different tangent. lol. but then no disappointments cuz it completely made sense.. necrophilia! lol lol lol. couldnt stop laughing hard at that! good one savy👏
Omkara taking care of a puking (groaning) Gauri hahhaha and cleaning the place up with phenyl! awww poor poor omakra ! he definitely deserved after shower sex for all that he did for her😳 but im sure the wait would make it sweeter!
the lusty connection between rikara that you are exploring is very very very... well done savy! realistic raw and not at all gulneet ott. repeating myself all over again i just love love love the characterization! perfect to the T.

Ahh Miss Perfectionist! How i long to read your comments! Trust me, it makes me so happy when i read your feedback 😳

Thanks a bunch, darling. and yes, I am exploring the connection between RiKara, because if i wanted to show the Kya kar rahe ho aap, I'd have watched those million shows on TV *no offence to anyone* 😆

Yes, Omkie deserved the shower sex afterall, but i guess, i'll just make him wait until they both cant take it anymore, coz that's when there's fun in the explosion 😎

the rawness, the urge and the pulling attraction is what sets these two apart , and i just pray and hope i'm able to sustain that throughout. It's going to get more intense and dark, and maybe at a point, i shall be called cruel too *braces myself* But there's a long way to go for that, and i better stop myself from typing before i give away the plot 😆

Anyway, thank you so much dear. Your comment just made my day 😳

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Mehnaz

@DeewaniMastaani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Aaammaaazzing!! Can't wait for their next meet.

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Savvy, you made me cry...I can't see my Dabang Ri like this..she's just pretending to be a strong girl before the world...but andar se she's a broken angel..
I told you I won't comment on her family as I had least idea about them...actually I wanted to wait before saying anything about her personal life...but after reading this chapter, I just want to say if family is something Ri's living with for twenty years, then Anika was lucky she didn't have one...I mean, how can someone be so wicked (talking about Mrs.Sharma)..? And what kind of father Mr.Sharma is..!! Does he really thinks ke paise sab kuch khareed sakta hain..God..!! He never tried to understand his daughter's needs...bass paise diye aur zimmedaari khatam..!!
I'm really feeling hurt for Ri..she didn't let herself fall weak before anyone..not even her own father...but at the end of the day, she's all alone...I'm glad that you gave her friends like Ani and Bhavya...they're her soul sisters...Shivaay is such a sweetheart that he spoke to Ani and sent her to Ri...warna meri chhoti si chiraiyya akele hi roti rehti...you've set new goals of friendship by writing AniRiVya...thanks for this lovely bonding...
And what to say about Kara's family..!! They're more like the show..THE CRAZY OBEROI KHANDAAN...Daadi ki ishqbaazi ki lessens humein yaha bhi milega I hope...OmRu's moments was bliss...my personal fav male leads they are...
Khair, back to the story...I loved the rising attraction between my babies...both of them are taking their sweet time to think about each other...though their attraction seems more lusty than emotional one...yet I'm confident about your plannings...I'm still saying it's gonna be a INTENSE and EMOTIONAL story...so I'll wait for more of this...continue soon dear..aab tak toh meri desperation samajh h gayi hogi... 😆

Edited by tasnimrodela - 8 years ago

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Ahh Miss Perfectionist! How i long to read your comments! Trust me, it makes me so happy when i read your feedback 😳

Yes, Omkie deserved the shower sex afterall, but i guess, i'll just make him wait until they both cant take it anymore, coz that's when there's fun in the explosion 😎

Anyway, thank you so much dear. Your comment just made my day 😳

you are too kind 😳 im only too glad and excited to talk about this plot😆 and encourage you to shower us with your brilliance!❤️

also its perFICtionist.. someone who digs fiction😛

You gave us a very clear picture as to where Gauri's insecurities stem from and how deep-rooted those damn assumptions are😭.. Mr sharma is one of the many stupid fathers who think they can raise children by throwing money at them! unfortunately children arent stock investments.. actually scratch that even for stocks you have to pay some damn attention.. clearly Gauri isnt even an investment for him! pathetic. But you savy touched upon this sensitive issue like a goddess doing justice to the story line as well as the afflictions of a modern day society👏Omkara and his ever so loving crazy family! the stark contrast of their two lives have been portrayed very lucidly and it just makes my heart dance thinking Gauri would get all that she always yearned for eventually!! in the form of none other than the delicious omkara! (your refernce to delicacies were outstanding)

i am in love with the story and i cannot wait to read the next! especially when you are being so generous with your updates my heart is growing greedier every minute😉😆

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