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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Fabulous chapter
Ani bhav & Ri are sister cum best friends
But Ri is so lonely
Though she is happy for Anika & Bhavya
She can't seem to be a bit jealous
She also wants the same

But her break up with Samar has got doubts in her
Wonder why did they seperate
Was Gauri being non committal the problem

Loved how Gauri didn't want to leave
Everyone loves her so much
That shivika were even ready to cancel their date
Glad Omkara accompanied shivaay

Both had an instant liking for eachother
Gauri thinks its the alcohol talking
But there are sparks b/w them
Hope after this night
Ri gives Om chance
She wants a baby
Will Om be the one
I just wish so


Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Fabulous chapter

Ani bhav & Ri are sister cum best friends
But Ri is so lonely
Though she is happy for Anika & Bhavya
She can't seem to be a bit jealous
She also wants the same

But her break up with Samar has got doubts in her
Wonder why did they seperate
Was Gauri being non committal the problem

Loved how Gauri didn't want to leave
Everyone loves her so much
That shivika were even ready to cancel their date
Glad Omkara accompanied shivaay

Both had an instant liking for eachother
Gauri thinks its the alcohol talking
But there are sparks b/w them
Hope after this night
Ri gives Om chance
She wants a baby
Will Om be the one
I just wish so


Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon


Thank you so much Vrinda 😳
Yes Ggauri is an abolute sweetheart, and everyone loves her for who she is. yes, she may at times cross her boundaries, but in the end, she also knows to repair the broken ties. But will it be the same when it comes to Omkara? Will it make her push him away? Will it draw her to him? Time will tell...

@bold: Yes, Gauri is commitment phobic. She has seen a few things in life that is hard for her to believe in relationships. The girl needs love, but is scared to label that relationship. This particular area will be explored when RiKara get close (LOL Which is going to happen in the near future)

Yes, Gauri knows she is lonely. And she feels that a child will fill that void. Is she right? No one knows except the future. Will Om be the father of her child. Maybe! Maybe not! And if she gets pregnant, will he accept her? Only Om can tell.

Thank you once again, Vrinda 😳 Stay tuned for the next update soon-ish
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
This is freaking HOT! The passion between them... The pain.. Gauri being non-commital and Omkara willing to give.. Sigh! Can you please write the next chapter now? I don't think I have the willpower to wait for days for the next update! Pretty please! It was just... wow! You made us feel various emotions in just a chapter.. Hats off to you gurl! This chappy was wicked brilliant. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Firstly, thanks for allowing me to call you Savvy...and dear, this story of you is gonna be a bang...
I loved AniRiVya bond..they're actually like my gang..my TriRoChiNi..they gave me sister vibes more than besties wali feelings...

Happy for Anika and Bhavya..they found their happily ever after..but my Ri is a loner...she really need someone in her life to make her realise how significant she is to her dear ones...don't want to comment on her family...we're going to have a long journey to know the reasons of Ri's commitment phobia..I wonder if there's some other reason of her breakup with Samar Rana...if she really want a baby, she must had plans to settle down in her life...and there's something bothering her to commit...

But the moment she met him, something in her inner self dared to think once again about her own perspectives..I just want her to realise that..
Lekin koyi jaldi nehi hain dear...abhi toh kahani shuru huyi hain...it's gonna be a intense one, I know...so go with your plans, girl...
Will be waiting to read more of their sparkling chemistry...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
I know you are fab keep up good work
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Nyc update😊
PM me for the next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
what a start loving it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
this was superb!! Hats off to the Gauri you created! so unconventional! Battling her own insecurities and loneliness with such panache👏 and the businessman artist omkara with his ever so hypnotic smile!😳 The connection they share is instantaneous ! Gauri is a little intoxicated and has her priorities straight in her head and the aftermath of the night probably wouldnt shake her as much.. what exactly is om thinking? just a fun night ahead or something more? well well he did handle her... little too well😳
fantastic update! 👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: maivelli

I know you are fab keep up good work

Originally posted by: MITHMA99

Nyc update😊

PM me for the next chapter


Thank you so much, everyone! The next update would come in a day's time or two. Ii'm glad you'll liked it 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani

This is freaking HOT! The passion between them... The pain.. Gauri being non-commital and Omkara willing to give.. Sigh! Can you please write the next chapter now? I don't think I have the willpower to wait for days for the next update! Pretty please! It was just... wow! You made us feel various emotions in just a chapter.. Hats off to you gurl! This chappy was wicked brilliant. 👏


Ahh thank you so much 😳 I'm soo soo glad you liked the chapter.
I've already begun to write the chapter *types faster and furiously* And i hope it should be ready by tomorrow 😳 But, thank you again for reading this chapter and giving this story a Go! 😳

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