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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Firstly, thanks for allowing me to call you Savvy...and dear, this story of you is gonna be a bang...
I loved AniRiVya bond..they're actually like my gang..my TriRoChiNi..they gave me sister vibes more than besties wali feelings...

Happy for Anika and Bhavya..they found their happily ever after..but my Ri is a loner...she really need someone in her life to make her realise how significant she is to her dear ones...don't want to comment on her family...we're going to have a long journey to know the reasons of Ri's commitment phobia..I wonder if there's some other reason of her breakup with Samar Rana...if she really want a baby, she must had plans to settle down in her life...and there's something bothering her to commit...

But the moment she met him, something in her inner self dared to think once again about her own perspectives..I just want her to realise that..
Lekin koyi jaldi nehi hain dear...abhi toh kahani shuru huyi hain...it's gonna be a intense one, I know...so go with your plans, girl...
Will be waiting to read more of their sparkling chemistry...

Yes, Ri is commitment-phobic. She's seen things, not very far away, but in her own house. She needs and craves love, and is willing to do anything that would bring some love into her life. Her loneliness is her demon and she is eager to get rid of it; except that the dark shadows have latched onto her so badly, that she finds it almost impossible to connect at heart to anyone. Annika and Bhavya are all she considers her own; through Annika, she's found Shivaay.

And then comes our artist cum businessman- Omkara. Will Gauri crave from him, that unnamed desire, and will he be able to selflessly end her quest. Sh knows she wants a baby, but not a husband. She thinks that a child will cure her loneliness. why? maybe we'll know her point of view in the near future. No, Omkara has stirred something within her. Will that fizzle out? Or will things move up a notch higher. Let's wait and read.

There's a lot more awaiting, and I'm really thankful for the faith you've put in the story and in the characters. Thanks a bunch, dearest🤗.

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: perfictionist
this was superb!! Hats off to the Gauri you created! so unconventional! Battling her own insecurities and loneliness with such panache👏 and the businessman artist omkara with his ever so hypnotic smile!😳 The connection they share is instantaneous ! Gauri is a little intoxicated and has her priorities straight in her head and the aftermath of the night probably wouldnt shake her as much.. what exactly is om thinking? just a fun night ahead or something more? well well he did handle her... little too well😳
fantastic update! 👏👏

Thank you so much Miss Perfectionist 😳

Gauri is unconventional, indeed. She isn't the one to sit and mope around; well, at least not for now. A strong, fierce woman that she is, her only weakness is the emotional bond she shares with the ones she calls her own- Annika and Bhavya.

Now our suave hero walks into the scene, and churns something within her. Gauri THINKS she knows what she needs. She THINKS she has her priorities set, Does she? Omkara seems like the one whom Mamma told you to stay away from; he seems like trouble. Not the dangerous trouble; but yes, he is a mess any girl would love to get stuck in *pun unintended* But Is he?

Yes, they connect and crackle, and the result is sizzling. BUT, is that all to it? What's the fun in that, eh? 😆 A little love, a lot of lust, a truckload of passion and some seasoning of heartbreaks (that's for later on, though!)

Oh yes, he did handle her well; so well, that he excelled his own expectations. Let's see what the morning brings them in the next chapter.

Thanks a lot 😳

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Wow!! RiKara and that too for 18+..PERFECT.. Plus the burning feelings inside both of them makes it more lovable.. Iam a huge fan of such stories.

Iam in for this.

Update soonishhh... 😃

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JesiC

@JesiC

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Very nice start.. beautifully written..

Thanks for the PM..

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Maahzabeen
Wow!! RiKara and that too for 18+..PERFECT.. Plus the burning feelings inside both of them makes it more lovable.. Iam a huge fan of such stories.
Iam in for this.
Update soonishhh... 😃

Thank you so much Maahzabeen 😊

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: JesiC
Very nice start.. beautifully written..
Thanks for the PM..

Thank you dear 😊

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BIaddict

@BIaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Pls PM me updates. Interesting story

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Genie

@writergenie17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Oh wow!

You've got me so excited about this story yaar!

Now I wish I'd waited to read this so I'd have more of the story to consume.

The first chapter gave me a perfect aperitif... We got to know everyone, their relationships and we got to know this adorable Ri and sexy Kara. I am in love with these two and can't wait to get to know them better. The chemistry between them is just so explosive... this chapter had practically nothing but a couple of kisses but it was so frickin hot!

Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us...

Eagerly waiting for more awesomeness!

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: BIaddict
Pls PM me updates. Interesting story

Thank you so much 😊 Will definitely send you a PM once I've updated...

The next chapter is coming up in a few minutes time 😊

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Savina

@Savinaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: writergenie17
Oh wow!
You've got me so excited about this story yaar!

Now I wish I'd waited to read this so I'd have more of the story to consume.

The first chapter gave me a perfect aperitif... We got to know everyone, their relationships and we got to know this adorable Ri and sexy Kara. I am in love with these two and can't wait to get to know them better. The chemistry between them is just so explosive... this chapter had practically nothing but a couple of kisses but it was so frickin hot!

Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us...

Eagerly waiting for more awesomeness!

Thank you sooo much Genie 😳 This comment from you has made me soo glad 😳

Ii'm trying a slow pace in each chapter, and because it's an FF, i'm taking the liberty to get into detailing 😳

Thank you so much again.😃