Irresistible Forces - Closure - Page 1 - Page 7

Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani

Aaammaaazzing!! Can't wait for their next meet.

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Savvy, you made me cry...I can't see my Dabang Ri like this..she's just pretending to be a strong girl before the world...but andar se she's a broken angel..
I told you I won't comment on her family as I had least idea about them...actually I wanted to wait before saying anything about her personal life...but after reading this chapter, I just want to say if family is something Ri's living with for twenty years, then Anika was lucky she didn't have one...I mean, how can someone be so wicked (talking about Mrs.Sharma)..? And what kind of father Mr.Sharma is..!! Does he really thinks ke paise sab kuch khareed sakta hain..God..!! He never tried to understand his daughter's needs...bass paise diye aur zimmedaari khatam..!!
I'm really feeling hurt for Ri..she didn't let herself fall weak before anyone..not even her own father...but at the end of the day, she's all alone...I'm glad that you gave her friends like Ani and Bhavya...they're her soul sisters...Shivaay is such a sweetheart that he spoke to Ani and sent her to Ri...warna meri chhoti si chiraiyya akele hi roti rehti...you've set new goals of friendship by writing AniRiVya...thanks for this lovely bonding...
And what to say about Kara's family..!! They're more like the show..THE CRAZY OBEROI KHANDAAN...Daadi ki ishqbaazi ki lessens humein yaha bhi milega I hope...OmRu's moments was bliss...my personal fav male leads they are...
Khair, back to the story...I loved the rising attraction between my babies...both of them are taking their sweet time to think about each other...though their attraction seems more lusty than emotional one...yet I'm confident about your plannings...I'm still saying it's gonna be a INTENSE and EMOTIONAL story...so I'll wait for more of this...continue soon dear..aab tak toh meri desperation samajh h gayi hogi... 😆

Originally posted by: perfictionist

you are too kind 😳 im only too glad and excited to talk about this plot😆 and encourage you to shower us with your brilliance!❤️

also its perFICtionist.. someone who digs fiction😛

You gave us a very clear picture as to where Gauri's insecurities stem from and how deep-rooted those damn assumptions are😭.. Mr sharma is one of the many stupid fathers who think they can raise children by throwing money at them! unfortunately children arent stock investments.. actually scratch that even for stocks you have to pay some damn attention.. clearly Gauri isnt even an investment for him! pathetic. But you savy touched upon this sensitive issue like a goddess doing justice to the story line as well as the afflictions of a modern day society👏Omkara and his ever so loving crazy family! the stark contrast of their two lives have been portrayed very lucidly and it just makes my heart dance thinking Gauri would get all that she always yearned for eventually!! in the form of none other than the delicious omkara! (your refernce to delicacies were outstanding)

i am in love with the story and i cannot wait to read the next! especially when you are being so generous with your updates my heart is growing greedier every minute😉😆

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Though Mr. Sharma loves Gauri a lot

He can't seem to express it well

Plus his wife too doesn't help

How can they accuse Gauri

Just cuz she wasnt home at night

Came back in Omkara's clothes

Seriously her mother is too much

Though his father provided her with every thing

He forgot the most basic necessity...love

Glad Anika was there

She came on time

Calmed her down

She needed someone that time

Happy that shivaay pacified her to go

Gauri too apologized for her harsh words

Anika cares so much

Even thinking against Omkara

If he did something to Gauri

But her blush told her otherwise

Omkara too is remembering Gauri

Wish dadi catches them together

She is good at match making

She will definitely get them married

With all the ideas Rudra has put in her mind

She won't be wasting any time

Wonder when and how will they meet again

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Savina! 🤗

Even though there was no RiKara in this chapter, Ri and Kara's familial bonds were beautifully displayed...

Omkara's relationships with Dadi and Rudy were adorable... Dadi's talking about marriage and Rudy trying to get his cousin in trouble... they're almost brothers like in canon.

On the other hand, Ri has a very strained relationship with her so-called parents. Seeing our strong Ri all broken up like that was heartrending. Glad that Anika was there to support her and help her get back on her feet. Sometimes friends are more family than actual family members...

Even the little bit of contemplation that these two do about each other is so magnetic!

You're drawing me further and further into this story as we go on...

Thanks for sharing... can't wait for more!

p.s.

Thanks for considering me a good writer... I'm happy someone as awesome as you considers me good.

About the *ahem ahem*... I wouldn't mind if these two didn't even go all the way in this story... the chemistry that you bring out is so attractive and satisfying in itself that even if they didn't do it in the confines of this story, I wouldn't complain a bit. Tho if you have something along those lines already planned, my tharki mind thanks you. 😆