This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I

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Starting Note: I am starting a new MG story. This story is so much fun yet so realistic that its like flowing water. I am personally so excited about the story. Hope you all will like it too. Special thanks to my best friends- Farah and Meghna. So a big shout out to them. Hope you all like the story and share your thoughts with me


PART 1


It’s a huge conference hall

Aaram se raja ki tarah pair pe pair rakh ke Maan baitha hua hai while swirling his amber colored whiskey

Its oozing raw power from his aura

M-Sign the lease.

He speaks up in his deep voice

He scans the old man reluctantly signing on the papers

++++++++++

Its late in the night

The roads are empty and silent

Maan is in his luxury car while his driver is driving

Maan's car stops with a screech

It’s an accident

It seems a pizza delivery guy with his bike had come up in front of the car and collided

The driver rushes to Maan

Driver-Sir!!

M-Kya hua?

D-sir, ladki hai

Maan frowns and gets out of his car

A petite girl in her mid 20's is laying on the road, he is unable to see her face as she is scrambled near the rear tire on her back with her brown hairs covering her face

Maan kneels down to check if she is breathing

As he kneels down Geet turns and in lightning speed grabs astone and hits him on his head, immobilizing him for few moments


She grabs the opportunity and drags him into the car while locking it up

He finds himself scrambled in his car with the girl holding a knife to his neck

G-zyada hoshiyaari ki toh ye scalpel se precise 1 mm ka cut lagake tumhara oxygen flow damage kar dungi

M- What the hell, who are you..?? Kya chahiye tumhe..????

G -Sign karo.

She moves a legal paper in front of his face

Maan knits his brows while registering her words in his mind...

He gave her a stare and holds the papers

M- Kya hai yeh???

G- ye document kehte hain ki jo aaj tumne deal sign karwayi naa mere dad se...I mean zabardasti pressure mein sign karayi ki wo building tumhari hai...wo deal ab nullified hai. Tumhe kya laga, hum middle class log hain toh tum apni pehchaan lagake kuch bhi kara loge? Ab karo sign!

M-Tum hoti kon ho is sab mein bolne wali... Pori keemat di hai maine... aur shayad original keemat se zyaada. So, it's better not to mess with me...

G- Ye lo tumhara check... (she throws a check ) aur bhaad mein jao apne paise leke!! Aur ek bhi shabd kaha naa...ye scalpel tumhare gale ke aar paar hoga! Don’t try me. Sign karo!!!

Maan thinks for a while and moved a bit to catch her hand and get out of her hold. But to his luck, it didn't seem that she is naive.

She touches the scalpel to his skin; he could feel the cold sharp metal on his skin...piercing little

M- Pachtaogi... Barbadkar dunga!!!

She was getting on his nerves, but This was not a time, he realized it

She smirked

G-haan haan thik hai thik hai...sign karo....(she almost shooed him)


He takes the paper and goes through it... He was reading sharply as finding any weak clause to which he can turn this document in his favor

This document was perfectly designed where he is going to lose this building legally.

He gave her a deadly stare

He signs the paper and threw it on her face

But she noticed his hand wobble while he finished the last sign

She looks at him intently

G-Shit! he is having a concussion!

She shrieks as he is in verge of passing out


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Index


Thread-I

Part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i


Part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=5#155152171


Part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=8#155164360


Part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=13#155186020


Part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=15


Part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=18


Part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=19


Part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=21


Part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=24#155292103


Part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=26


Part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=29


Part 12


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=32


Part 13


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=33


Part 14


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=35#155400679


Part 15


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=37


Part 16


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=39



Part 17


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=41


Part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=44


Part 19


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=46


Part 20


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=48


Part 21


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=51


Part 22


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=53


Part 23


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=56


Part 24


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=59


Part 25


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=62


Part 26


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=66#155714487


Part 27


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=68


Part 28

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=70#155746074


Part 29

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=73


Part 30


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=75


Part 31


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=78#155804529


Part 32


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=80#155814524


Part 33

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=83#155834269


Part 34

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=85


Part 35


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=86#155852489


Part 36


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=88#155862929


Part 37


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=90


Part 38


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=93#155892265


Part 39


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=96#155902573


Part 40

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=98#155935761


Part 41


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=102#155957556


Part 42


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i?pn=104


Part 43


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=111#156020294


Part 44


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=113#156040991


Part 45


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=116#156052441


Part 46


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=118#156064523


Part 47


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=120#156076965


Part 48


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=122#156095439


Part 49


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=125#156106201


Part 50


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i


Part 51


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=131#156130036


Part 52

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=132#156143033


Part 53

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=136#156155104


Part 54

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196165?pn=137#156164332


Part 55

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5196165/this-is-not-love-mg-part-59-page-149-thread-i


Part 56

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156190326


Part 57

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156207151


Part 58

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156221159


Part 59

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156241491


Thread-II

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5216188#156257144

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Commelina thumbnail
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yay!!! Me first 😃


Congratulations on your new story. Enjoyed the first part. It was so much fun. Maan is rich, and haughty type, used to getting his ways and Geet, a fierce and unafraid woman. And a doctor too, it seems. Khub banegi jodi!

Excited to read the story.


Thank you for the update.

Edited by Commelina - 4 years ago
NilzStorywriter thumbnail
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Originally posted by: Commelina

Yay!!! Me first 😃


Congratulations on your new story. Enjoyed the first part. It was so much fun. Maan is rich, and haughty type, used to getting his ways and Geet, a fierce and unafraid woman. And a doctor too, it seems. Khub banegi jodi!

Excited to read the story.


Thank you for the update.


Hehehehe first reader!! Yay! Thanks for the wonderful comment. You surely read between the lines. I freaking love it. 😊😊😊😊

Both are stubborn and strong willed. Lets grap popcorn n enjoy!!☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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congrats on new story waiting for it to start looks interesting

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Wow way to go geet. Good job of turning the tables on maan who seems so cocky and arrogant.

Let’s see what happens

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Originally posted by: Alamelu

Wow way to go geet. Good job of turning the tables on maan who seems so cocky and arrogant.

Let’s see what happens


HahHhaha i love how you describe Maan🤣..All the way team Geet🥳All hail the Queen! Keep reading and commenting

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Brilliant start ! 👏

Congrats on the new story

Very interesting start

Geet seems very daring & her character is definitely out of the box

Now that maan has signed the paper , he will find payback

Just curious what maan will do next

Thank you !!

Please continue

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Hi Di nice concept, I like this version of Geet she's not scared of Maan. She's a badass girl and good start with the story line its really nice and challenging too. Thanks for the pm and do continue with the superb story Di... 🤗

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Congratulations on your new story


Title sounds Fascinating and Interesting too


looking forward to reading this

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Captivating Start


Maan had forced and bought over a building

but unfortunately for him

as time he meets the daughter and I think its Geet

who has already a legal document for Maan to sign over

the building once again

and I liked that she is bold and brave too

but seems like Maan is going to faint now


will be waiting for the next update to see what happens

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