This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 29

Star Commentor Award (Part 15)

Winner: Khwaishfan, Creampuff

Runner-ups: Umadevi97, ferdouz

Special Mention: coderlady, NeenaDd

EarlyBird Award (For readers havingf irst 3 comments): aparna3011,mkd.70, ferdouz

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏

Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game& song game to double the fun

Writer’s two cents: Notice Geet jitnabhi uncaring & sassy dikhaye...she cares for Maan....cares ki he might bedrunk & all...they are just an unexpressive couple….(Readers: Thoughts and discussions please)

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

Mujhe somehow ye part post karte huye Kalank ka title song zehen mein ghum raha hai. Specially the lines:

Hawaaon mein bahenge

Ghataon mein rahenge

Tu barkha meri

Main tera baadal piya

Jo tere na huve toh

Kisi ka na rahenge

Deewani tu meri

Main tera paagal piya

Hazaaron mein kisi ko

Taqdeer aisi

Mili hai ik Ranjha

Aur Heer jaisi

And the line:

Main gehra tamas tu sunhera savera

Main tera o, main tera

Musaafir main bhatka tu mera basera

Main tera o... main tera

Tu jugnu chamakta

Main jungle ghanera

Main tera

O piya main tera, main tera, main tera

Ho... main tera

Ho... main tera, main tera, main tera

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Part 16

Geet removes the drink from Maan's hand

G-Enough Maan. We have to leave

Maan protests with his gibberish ki ghar nahi jaana ye wo...nahi jaana...dont wanna be alone

G-You won’t be alone. I will be with you.

She says sincerely looking into his eyes

She grabs his coat and mobile

G-Get up now

He stumbles while standing up

M-f*ck….i am so...dru-nk

She smiles ki isko ab pata chal rahi hai

Geet is in two minds ki Maan ko pakde ki nahi coz she has never held him...also he is broad & heavy

She doesn’t’ know how to take care of a drunk man

He is holding onto the chair for now

He stepped away from the chair and was about to fall...

Geet holds him

G-Maan! God! You are heavy

She heaves giving him support

G-Try and not fall on me please. I will fall if you just keep your whole weight on me. You weight double

He moves away...ki i am ok...i am ok...

M-i am...verfectly...fi-ne...

Maan stumbles back few steps

Geet wants to not hold him & let him be even he is drunk coz she is doing enough and holding him is a cliche that she doesn’t want to do

But she also doesn’t want to injure him in this little experiment of hers

Is there any do’s & don’ts, she can google she is wondering

She tried holding him as shown in movies...bit it seems he is crushing her with his weight...

She feels either he is stupid, or she is

Maan every time makes her doubt her intelligence.... Maan ka superpower that he himself is not aware of

Not even all the bullies in hospital and society can do it

Maan stumbles backwards

G-Don’t fall!

He falls on his back & starts laughing drunkly

Geet rolls her eyes thinking this was such a bad idea

She leaps to help Maan

G-Are you hurt?? omg..what? why are you laughing? Idiot!

She sighs

G-I will kill you someday

She mutters

G-or maybe you will

The bar staff help Geet to help Maan get up

Manager- Mam I guess instead of going to parking lot...we can arrange a hotel room...

G-Fine!!...hotel room

She also thinks she can’t endure this till the parking lot

She asks Maan

G-Where is the key to your hotel room?

As Maan had mentioned going to the room so she knew he had already booked a room

Maan starts talking gibberish...while going for another drink at the bar...

She slaps his hand

She searches his coat pockets for the keys

Kuch nahi mila

Geet thinks seriously- I am not searching his pant pockets

But she has no choice

Geet ke dimaag mein aaya hi nahi ki Front deskke paas extrakeys rehti hain....

That’s why she calls herself idiot when she is with Maan

She thinks Maan ke back pocket mein wallet hoga

She thinks she is a doctor...she has done & seen more

She navigates her hand into his back pocket

His drunk mind thinks Geet is openly groping me in public.Reason- I have a nice ass… She wanted to grope it... she finds the chance and did it... she is super attracted to me

M-Geez...you...(he gives her a huge smile)...i like...you like..?

She is flabbergasted how can Maan reach this conclusion

G-F*ck you! idiot!

She takes out the key

She thinks, isko baaki kisi ka sense nahi hai, bakwaas ka sense hai

Originally posted by: ferdouz

Part 14 and 15 were intriguing.

Both have started caring and feeling for each other but like stubborn mules don't want to accept it 😅

Let's see how Geet is going to handle a drunk Maan 🤭

She has promised him not to leave him alone. Wada ki hai tho nibhana padega 😁

🤣stubborn mules! I love this line

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm....

Congrats to all the winners😊

the writer also deserves an award for her hard work👏

Part 15

superb update..... awesomely written

glad that Geet was honest with Maan about hookups.

can understand why she hates hotel rooms

why does Maan not want to go home?

Geet's dilemma is well poytrayed.

liked Geet's concern for Maan

so Maan's thoughts understandable

I knew she would not leave Maan alone

Gosh Maan drank so much

great that Geet shouted the manager

surprised that she did not correct the manager when he said that Maan is her boyfriend

well Maan does not want to be alone

so she is taking Maan to her house....

loved that she assures him that she is there with him

update soon

Thanks for such kind words dear. The readers like you reading and commenting are my most precious awards

Part 16

Omg di what a hilarious update !!!!

Drunk maan is totally hilarious...... he is totally cool & he has lost his arrogance

He is making sensible geet lose her marbles & over think the simplest things

Where should I hold him ..... wait I should google it !!

Should I go into his pockets for the keys ..... for goodness sake you are a doctor

Maan falling & cracking up laughing continuously.......

my favorite where maan thinks geet is groping her ass ........... di I couldn’t stop laughing

“ you like , I like”

Omg di you outdid yourself , this update was extremely funny !!

Thank you for the award & congrats to everyone & thank you for the update

Awesome update..

Thank you for pm..

Waiting for next update..

Funny update 😀

Maan is so cute while drunk loved this part

Update soon

Hi Nilz. I am sorry I disappeared after the first chapter. Just got busy. I will try reading all the chapters by the weekend and get back with my comments. And a very Happy New Year.

Omg Geet is so cute and hilarious 😂

She wants to google do and donts from Google 🤣

Indeed Maan is driving her nuts 🤪

Bechari Geet is doubting herself🤭

Finally key mila hotel room ka. Loved the groping part 😅

Waiting for next

Superb enjoyable ud

Part 16

I'm speechless right now... 🤣🤣🤣all i can do is laugh like an idiot and get stared at like a weirdo.... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 it's a really funny update Di always wondered how you could pull off that all the time.... Really...? Nice ass..... 😜...that's really hilarious. Good one Di.... And Geet is really frustrated with Maan's antics ek toh talli hogai phir uper se Geet ko bhi pareshan karahe hai.... Waiting for more fun.... Thanks for the update and award Di... 🤗

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