Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 113

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 58

Magnificent update.... tremendously written

Can understand Maan's reaction hearing Geet's comments

admire her efforts to cheer him up

enjoyed their banter

so she wants to Maan to go with her to her hotel room

Of cos he is proud of her

his concern is reasonable

Maan ever underestimate Geet

ha ha she had a scalpel

not surprised with her question

liked their dinner date

Geet should not have told Maan that he friends think he will rape her

I am sure he will not be pleased...

Geet never knows when to shut her mouth

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Posted: 3 years ago

58

geet got success  in changing maan's mood 

both are talking with smile

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Question to Maan:

why are you afraid of commitment?


Question to Geet:

If you love Maan why can't take the relationship forward?

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Yeh naturally aisi hai Maan yeh to drink ko bhi pani bana de.  Abhi abhi jaan bachi hai aur yeh zaroor Maan ka accident karwaye gi apni harkaton se.  Maan aur rape yeh to khud apni izzat Geet ko dene ko tiyar hai. These loonies need to shut up and eat thier dinner Geet is fine for love of god carrying a scalpel in her bra. 

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Star Commentor Award (Part 58)

Winners:   Kkiran, ,

Runner Ups: Creampuff

Special Mention:  UmaDevi97

 

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Neenad, ,UmaDevi97, Creampuff

 

 

Congratulations to all the winners

 

QnA Time

Itsagaintime for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that


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Part 59


**Matured content

 

G- My friends think you will rape me

 

Geet  blurts out

 

Maan slows down chewing and looks up

 

G- I challenge you to rape me , Maan Singh Khuraana!

 

She says laughing

 

Maan rolls his eyes and goes out to throw the trash not answering her

 

G- I challenge you

 

She says stuffing her face with burger and fries

 

Maan faltu ki baaton ka jawaab nahi deta

 

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They reach Geet’s hotel

 

She looks at Maan & says

 

G-Do you wanna get lucky tonight?

 

He raises his brow

 

M-Do you?

 

She shrugs

 

G-Well, I am anyways using you for s*x

 

She says jokingly

 

M- Or maybe coz I give you earth shattering org*sms

 

G-Well, that you do

 

She answers coyly

 

G-You introduced me to the world of it. I admit

 

He is smiling wickedly while Geet goes to set up the bath

 

G-I wonder, what’s in there for you in this

 

M-I have never experienced a woman having such dramatic orgs

 

Also, it makes him feel selfless , like a better person that he doesn’t say to Geet

 

G-Weirdo

 

She says to hide her extreme blushing

 

G-Do I have to send you a format invite to join the bath?

 

He joins her in the tub

 

She realizes,  first time she is so romantically adventurous with a man

 

First time so comfortable

 

She didn’t expect that

 

She was always uncomfortable with Piyush, she guessed that might be because of their status difference but life was surprising her with these moments

 

She feels at ease with Maan

 

Both know and accept each other's flaws

 

There is no fake pretense

 

They have bath together

 

Was it romantic?

 

Romance? They don’t wanna think about it since they will part ways very soon, these are some brief moments they stole from life

 

But it was their first time taking a bath together

 

It was pleasant

 

Maan had seen these stuff in romantic movies

 

He didn’t imagine him doing such things and enjoying

 

But it was not cheesy

 

He thinks, Geet has such a sassy sense of humor that she laughs it out about everything

 

Geet is thinking, he has such a perfect bod, it looks hotter, wet ...dripping in water

 

Maan cuddled to her

 

She was super giggly

 

He was also laughing with her

 

M- You will bring down the roof. Slow down

 

G-Why are you tickling then?

 

She says between her giggles

 

M- I am not. You are just rubbing your head to mine and laughing

 

G- It feels good

 

He raises his brow amused

 

M-You get pleasure rubbing heads?

 

She chuckles

 

M- You goofball!

 

He picks her up in his arms

 

She gasps

 

G- I am still wet!

 

M- I will make you wetter!

 

Geet fails to retort to his double meaning sentence

 

He carries her to the bed

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She never felt comfortable doing this before and he was never into this kind of intimacy but they somehow use the word romance. Is anyone going to go missing in the monring.

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Them😍❤

Experiencing new things 

They in their own world

Enjoying these new things and the moments they share together

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Wow is this geet?  How much she has changed. Taking the initiative and asking maan to join her in the bathroom and be romantic with her. 

They are both are really taking every moment as their last one together not knowing what is going to happen in future 


really wish they take the future in their hands instead of thinking they are going yoeqch go their way.  

They know they really enjoy each other’s company.     

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 Geet invited him to with her tonight and both enjoying their togetherness she feel comfortable around him 

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Part 59 

Wow our sassy gal really has transformed........ 💕

This no nonsense , I don’t need anybody type of gal actually blushes 😳, giggles & has become quite open 

Maan has brought about this change 

Maan who once was a player  has become self-less ........ he is more concerned with geet’s happiness than his own . 

These two have opened up their hearts to each other but they really need to open their mouths 😆

Thank you 🤗