This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 75

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Posted: 4 years ago

A nice butt. So she looked and liked. She is so clueless about relationships. Mann is right that now they will all think they are making out. So much for hiding.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 40)

Winner: Creampuff ⭐️,Khwaishfan⭐️

Runner-ups: kkiran,Alamelu

Special Mention: Taahir004, akkub.92

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Creampuff, crazyfriends 007, sanum23

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Part 41

Maan looks at his phone and excuses himself

Geet chupke khadi thi, he follows her

M-Why were you calling me?

G-You were right about them...I saw a hickey on Bani...oh my God!

M-You called me just to say this? Now they think we are making out here

G-What? Why would they? We are not!

M-Lets just go

He sighs

G-Why would someone make out like this...if they are a couple...I mean in a public place? is that fun?

Maan smiles nodding

M-It is

She looks up at him biting her lip

He kneels down a little

G-emm...okay...good to know....

She gulps tucking her hair behind her ear and walks towards the table

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Ab dono ko ghar ke paas chod dia doston ne.

As Geet ka ghar gali mein tha toh they decide to walk

They are walking on the deserted road

Kadmon ki awaaz bhi sunai de rahi hai

Sometimes their fingers are touching

G-I had fun

M-Me too

She nods

M-You looked beautiful

She smiles

G-You looked nice too

M-Thanks

She smiles to herself

G-This was our first proper dinner

He nods looking down, moving towards the side of the road and keeping Geet on the other side

G-It was so...

M-Why are you dating that other guy?

Maan cuts her

G-Huh?

She looks at him questioningly

He looks extremely serious

G-Which guy?

M-I saw you Geet, at the hotel....you didn’t even recognize me after colliding with me

G-I...I...I told you...that was for arranged marriage...andI wanted the insanity that we had between us to end.


G-I am not dating him


She adds

M-Then why does he keep messaging you?

G-What? You read my messages?

M-No, I did not. They were on your lock screen incessantly.He keeps on messaging you

G-Because I don’t reply

Maan shuts up for a moment

But again continues

M-You should tell him upfront that you are not interested

He notices Geet glaring

M-It’s not nice to let a person hanging

Geet doesn’t reply

M-You even used that shitty app for hookup...are you looking for hookups?

G-Look who's talking

M-Do you realize how I felt? Do you realize I was calling for help and you just....I got drunk coz....

G-Coz of some problem with your mother

Geet completes his sentence

M-No. It was you

G-I???I???

M-My mother abandoned me...you abandoned me. Damn! you abandoned me twice

G-What??? I was the one who stayed with you!!

M-Yes. I am good enough to stay with...but not good enough to date!! You confuse me, Geet

Geet sarr pakad leti hai

G-I never said you are not good enough to date!

M-Geet, you know what! if you would have been a man then you would have been a f*ckboy

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

She is such a cutie,

Love them😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Now where is this going suddenly, looking forward to further..

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Posted: 4 years ago

LMAO DEAD Geet a fboy....he may be right. Glad they got to spend some nice drama free time. It was much needed. Glad Maan came forward that he feels Geet abandoned him and where he is coming from this. She needs to come forward with her feelings and stop dragging strangers along.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 40

Superb update !!! smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

It was hilarious smiley37smiley37

Loved how geet made the extra effort to dress up for maan & how maan smiled when he saw her & was going to approach her but was interrupted by the girls smiley6

Geet’s response about what she likes about maan was over the top !!!!!smiley37smiley37smiley37she likes his butt smiley37smiley37 her friends where referring to his personality....... omg then geet said the other boys have nice buts !!! smiley37smiley37smiley37Just when I thought geet couldn’t get her foot stuck in her mouth anymore ... she makes the situation worse but that is our gal . But I do have to agree with her .... maan does have a nice butt smiley2smiley36 I guess geet is rubbing off on me smiley36 -hahahha see we cant blame Maan now for falling for her. Bandi ki personality hi addictive hai😉

I love 💗 how you made an innocent dinner amongst friends so comical .... the whole situation where her friends are secretly dating but geet does not know & maan figures it out the first time they meet each other smiley36--thanks for liking it❤️

Then the situation where her friends convienantly left the table together & geet was still clueless & maan had to join the pieces of the puzzle for her --as i say Geet ka love radar kharaab hai😆

But the icing on the cake was geet calling maan away but now maan told her what her friends will be thinking that they are secretly making out smiley37smiley37omg they should just make out b/c geet friends are already thinking that , so they can just confirm their suspicions smiley36---ahaan! such naughty thoughts you have gurl!😳

LOVED ♥️ this update di !!!!

Thank you for the update !!!! smiley31 You are most welcome. Thanks you for the wonderful 🤗comment



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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

Geet ka kuch nahi ho sakta


🤣you are so done with her! socho Maan ka haal...bechara

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Geet is too naive too understand these things maan told hr about hr blunder


as i say iska love-radar tutta hua hai😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi how are you? I am fine dear. It makes me feel so special when you ask about me in every post❤️🤗

Part 40

Fascinating update.... wonderfully written Thanks😃

at least Maan noticed how beautiful she looks. well...I am sure Maan ne toh wo pehle hi notice kiya hi hoga. remember the clinic scene

sad that they did not travel together

so they end up playing truth and dare

Gosh never expected that answer from Geet 🤣

what possessed her? ---foot in the mouth disease😆

seems like she has noticed his butt lol- well...Geet itni bhi bholi nahi hai....jitna wo dikhaati hai...samjhe naa😉

well she is embarrassed

liked that Maan knew Geet was tensed

at least she was honest with him

she does over analyse--yup & overthinks

Maan did have a valid point

why did she refuse to believe him when he told her that Bani and Suresh are dating---coz she doesnt realize her love radar is broken

nothing escapes him....--yup that's why he is a successful businessman

Geet is a unique piece--Tedha hai par medha hai (ye main nahi kehti, I am sure Maan kehta hoga)

only when she saw the hickey did she believe Maan

did she have to follow Maan?

now her friends will think they are making out!

Geet never ceases to amaze me---hahhaa well...one of the reasons Maan got attracted to her


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

Yeh sachi pagal eh! Looks like maan knows more about her friends then hers. She is stupidly naive. Poor Maan is like here he trying to make things better but no madam has to enrich everyones elses assumptions and then she will be like omg what will they be thing. NO duh Geet what else will someone will think when thats what you giving them lmao.


did i say I loveeeeeeee loveeee love your bluntness. You just call the spade a spade! yes! That's the spirit girl! enjoy each line of your comment❤️

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