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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 9 and 10 r amazing.

Maan realizing and changing his plan.

Now feeling guilty he buys a gift for Geet.

I just so love this Kick ass Geet 😁

Indeed made for each other physco couple 😅

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 10

Nice Di ab dono ko aap ne psychopath jodi bana diya Maan with a gun aur Geet das kadam agey nikli chainsaw...🤣really a good one di and Maans line is perfect for the situation...😆Ye Piyush ne bhi kiss jungle mein shaadi karni hai! Kanjoos saala!...🤣🤣🤣...it's a funny update Di and I'm also reminded of the song from Bobby hum tum... Bilkul situation se judi hai. And like I guessed Geet ne Maan ki gift accept nahi kiya... In my own opinion its really awkward to give a gift all of a sudden doesn't matter big or small cheap or expensive it's really awkward cause she doesn't even know him properly and yeh dono toh inke revenge game me pade the abhi tak... 🤔. Really awesome Di and thanks for the award and pm.... Waiting on how will the wedding goes... Woh bhi jungle me🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey so here I am 😃

Just read the story so far in one go! Sorry I have been crazy busy so didn’t get to read earlier.

So basically Maan and Geet both started off as rivals and now they’re acquaintances. I am sure there will be more to it as time goes one and can’t wait to read more of it. Has Maan really dropped the idea of revenge or is that another ploy to trick Geet?

I dunno why but the song I am thinking of while reading the story is “paune baara baje dono ghar se chale” 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update

Seriously geet 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome goons get surprise

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to the Winners


of Part 9

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 10


Feisty and Action Filled Update


Geet not wanting Maan's gift as the jewel set is very expensive

this is something that I like about her , even though she is a doctor

she does not seem to be very concerned about wearing expensive items

wow seeing Geet in action again was great and thrilling too

while Maan holds a gun Geet has a chain saw

yeah and the goons ran away ,

Maan is thinking about pepper spray when he indeed already had

an experience with Geet

indeed Geet can defend herself in any situation


I guess , Maan will tease Geet about the chainsaw

and they finally arrive at the wedding venue

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just came across your story

Awesome concept

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 10)

Winner: Ferdouz,Creampuff

Runner ups: UmaDevi97

SpecialMention Neenad, preetidhawan, Almelu

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32



Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 11

Maan realizes that Geet is holding a chainsaw in her hand

She pulls the lever to start it in full force with a smile on her lips

Maan thinks other gals keep pepper spray in their bags for safety she keeps a chainsaw in her dickey?

She walks ahead so that her back touches Maan’s

They are standing back to back with gun & saw in their hands with a gleeful wicked smile

Ab gunde toh bhaag gaye ki kya psycho couple hai

Geet ko bhi surprise hua ki Maan carries a gun

Dono jaake chup chap car mein baith jaate hain

M- Why do you carry that?

He asks without looking at her

G- For self-protection

She answers without looking at him

M- Women carry pepper spray for self-protection, not a hacksaw!

She shrugs

G- You also carry a gun

M- I do

Dono chup ho jaate hain

Geet speaks up after a while

G- That means that night also you were carrying the gun!

She says, referring to the fateful night they met

M- I was


He answers matter of factly while not looking at her

G- Then why didn't you use it?

Maan doesn't answer for a moment but when he realizes Geet won't budge

He speaks

M- I don’t know

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They reach the wedding venue in silence

Wedding is going on

So, they attend the wedding

Uske baad wedding feast

Groom(Piyush) and Bride were making circles greeting guests

Abhi Maan bhool gaya ki he had messaged Piyush saying ki-

Geet really wants to attend but she doesn't wanna say directly to you, so can I get an invite?

Matlab Maan ne adha scene pehle hi setup kar rakha tha to make it look like ki Geet can't get over her ex-Piyush

This part ab Maan forgot

While greeting the guests

Piyush Maan aur Geet ke saamne aaya

Piyush smirks and says:

P-Really Geet! You have to quit stalking me...It's over

Geet khana kha rai thi

Adha fish muh mei tha adha fork mein

Piyush’s blabbering sound like dead noise after a while but he was going on


She puts down the fork...

Piyush is still going on with his drivel

Aas paas ke log bhi thoda ikhkhata huye ki kya hua

Geet wipes her mouth

Then turns to Maan giving him a look ki tum nahi sudhroge

Maan tries to speak up but Geet stops him by showing her hand

Then gives her best charming smile to Piyush

G- Hello congratulations. I think you confused me with someone.I came as plus one with Maan. I don't think we have met before. Oh, and here

She takes out the super expensive necklace ka dabba

G-Happy married life to you both

Geet bride ke gale milti hai

G-You look gorgeous. Congratulations again.

Then looks at Maan

G-Ye Maan bhi na... He just wants to show he is also not"alone" after all these years... he is so childish

She again looks at Piyush

G-We'll be going now. Once again congratulations

Geet turns and leaves... fully sassy walk out of the venue

Maan looks like a little guilty and stupid and then realized ki people are looking at him

M-Oh I have the keys I need to go

He runs out after Geet making an excuse about the keys, which was of course Geet had with her

Geet hikes up her dress and runs to the car throwing out Maan’s luggage and drives away; giving the middle finger to Maan who had just reached the parking

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

What a character geet is. So strong. Loved how she turned the tables on maan. And hilarious her throwing out his stuff and leaving him back and giving his gift to her to piyush and his bride.


What is maan going to do now


maan cannot answer to geet or to himself why he did not use the gun the first time they met ...,

Edited by Alamelu - 4 years ago

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