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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to all Winners


of Part 27


Well Done



Part 28


A Caring , Loving and Fantastic Update


Geet's decision of taking Maan to her apartment

was the most perfect one

because its also true Maan seems to want to fit in somewhere

he wants to be loved so having these friends that

party all the time , consume alcohol and use drugs will surely destroy him

but now the problem will be , if Maan can stay away from drugs

and I'm looking forward to seeing what will Geet do

I was surprised that Geet tells Maan she loves him

well its good that it came out

but now Maan wants to know why is she dating others

his question was as if its his lifeline

wanting and waiting for Geet just to come to him





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Posted: 4 years ago

28

geet confess her love to maan thinking he wont remember as he is not fully conscious but that is not case

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Posted: 4 years ago

thank you for the pm


Part 28

tremendous update! beautifully written

liked this bossy Geet

so Maan is more important for her

sad that she will move away after he gets well

can understand why she decided not to send Maan to a rehab

loved her concern for Maan

at least she is quarantined with Maan

great that Maan is now sober

gosh Maan's comment did indicate his feelings

as expected her confronts Geet

well she assumes Maan is still high

she told him she is helping him he helped her

he is indeed stunned....

Gosh she confesses she loves him

ha she thinks he will not remember

looks like he heard her

did not like the awkward silence between them'

not surprised with Maan's question

how will she respond?

wish that they talk about their feelings

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hope she speaks up and Hope ma’am asks what he has in his mind

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Geet confess her love to maan

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 28)

Winner: Taahir004⭐️ khwaishfan⭐️

Runner-ups: Creampuff,

SpecialMention: Alamelu

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): maangeet.gmmg, Creampuff, NeenaDd

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Note: I know there are many silent readers. I look forward to hear from each one of you. Please add even a small comment to share how are you feeling about the story. It means a lot

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Part 29

G- Maan. Tea

He looks over his shoulder and accepts the cup

Geet kuch snacks bhi rakh deti hai

G- Have this too

He nods

Both are sipping their tea while gazing at the non- existent city view

Maan breaks the silence and speaks up

M- Why are you dating other men then?

He asks staring at her directly

She is confused gasping for air and struggling to form words

She didn’t expect Maan to register her confession and even ask this question

He is waiting... still gazing at her directly

G- I am not

He is still looking at her

G- I met him for arranged marriage... stuff....

G-…he is a doctor too

She adds, as if that info changes anything

He smirks...Maan ki wo signature ironic half mocking smirk jisko dekh ke Geet ko lagta hai ki bole ki, taunt karna hai toh karna siddha!

She goes in

Thodi der baad Maan bhi aata hai

M- Aren’t you going out for work?

G- No, I am on leave

M- For how long

She isn't meeting his eyes

G- A week

M-Why?

G- Coz...you...emm...why can’t I take a break?

M- It’s because of me

Maan says mater of factly

Geet tries to hide her surprise ki how does he know

G- Go and shower. Geyser chala diya hai...naya toothbrush sink ke upar hai

M- Why am I here?

G- ehh

M- To sober me up?

Maan is stepping towards Geet

M- What makes you think you could ever do it?

She moves a step back

He moves a step further

M-Do you know why I even…

G- You never told me

M- Did you ask?

Their faces are inches apart

G- You were also snogging that girl!

Geet comes with a comeback for his “why are you dating other men” question, now

He frowns

M- What?

G- My geyser will burst. Go take shower

Geet moves away and walks again towards the bathroom

Yaad aaya ki bathroom m uski bra latak rahi hai

Bra chupaake le aayi

Maan ko bhej deti hai nahaane

She sits on the bed hugging her knees

This is going to be more difficult than she expected

What did you expect? That Maan will smile and agree to everything?

Her counter ego argues

I expected that, I like an idiot, won't say ‘I love you’. This is beyond awkward now

She replies to her counter ego

Everything happened so suddenly that she realizes she has no plans whatsoever ki ye hafte mein karna kya hai

Geet TV chala leti hai

Maan aata hai nahaake

Sits beside her

Both are aimlessly staring at the TV

Maan says after 15 min of watching a Bigg boss type tv show that both of them don’t follow

M- I am not an addict

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Well Geet he is not that much under the influence that he doesnt realize you just told him you love him, but has him taken a back a bit. They need to talk and I hope they can have a open conversation and not escape from their feelinngs.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 28

WOW 😲!!!! Superb update di !!

Geet actually confessed her love to maan !! 🥳🥳👏👏👏👏

Definitely worthy of a happy dance , party & standing ovation !!!

Even though geet thinks that maan will not remember he definitely heard her loud & clear 😉 Yup load & clear

Love the way she has reasoned keeping maan at her place ...... so she could yell at him & keep him in order 😆😆yes geet only you can do that yup, that's like normal to her & them...they are so crazy n unique..lol

& who wouldn’t want to be quarantined with maan ??? well...dont say this to Geet

But maan’s next question of why she is dating someone else did throw geet a curve ball but I am curious how she will answer !! Then, you have next part for it

Thank you so much for pm & update 🤗


Loved you mentioned Geet's reasoning and he heard her loud and clear....you have some sense of humor😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Hmm interesting reaction from maan - which is none. Expected him

To throw a fit or something but he is quietly listening to her and processing what she said. Geet thought he won’t remember but am sure he will

wonder where it’s going to go from here for them



well sometimes Maan reacts unexpectedly...isnt it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations to all Winners


of Part 27


Well Done



Part 28


A Caring , Loving and Fantastic Update


Geet's decision of taking Maan to her apartment

was the most perfect one

because its also true Maan seems to want to fit in somewhere

he wants to be loved so having these friends that

party all the time , consume alcohol and use drugs will surely destroy him

but now the problem will be , if Maan can stay away from drugs

and I'm looking forward to seeing what will Geet do

I was surprised that Geet tells Maan she loves him

well its good that it came out

but now Maan wants to know why is she dating others

his question was as if its his lifeline

wanting and waiting for Geet just to come to him






I loved this line-

his question was as if its his lifeline


❤️

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