Star Commentor Award (Part 28)
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Runner-ups: Creampuff,
SpecialMention: Alamelu
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Part 29
G- Maan. Tea
He looks over his shoulder and accepts the cup
Geet kuch snacks bhi rakh deti hai
G- Have this too
He nods
Both are sipping their tea while gazing at the non- existent city view
Maan breaks the silence and speaks up
M- Why are you dating other men then?
He asks staring at her directly
She is confused gasping for air and struggling to form words
She didn’t expect Maan to register her confession and even ask this question
He is waiting... still gazing at her directly
G- I am not
He is still looking at her
G- I met him for arranged marriage... stuff....
G-…he is a doctor too
She adds, as if that info changes anything
He smirks...Maan ki wo signature ironic half mocking smirk jisko dekh ke Geet ko lagta hai ki bole ki, taunt karna hai toh karna siddha!
She goes in
Thodi der baad Maan bhi aata hai
M- Aren’t you going out for work?
G- No, I am on leave
M- For how long
She isn't meeting his eyes
G- A week
M-Why?
G- Coz...you...emm...why can’t I take a break?
M- It’s because of me
Maan says mater of factly
Geet tries to hide her surprise ki how does he know
G- Go and shower. Geyser chala diya hai...naya toothbrush sink ke upar hai
M- Why am I here?
G- ehh
M- To sober me up?
Maan is stepping towards Geet
M- What makes you think you could ever do it?
She moves a step back
He moves a step further
M-Do you know why I even…
G- You never told me
M- Did you ask?
Their faces are inches apart
G- You were also snogging that girl!
Geet comes with a comeback for his “why are you dating other men” question, now
He frowns
M- What?
G- My geyser will burst. Go take shower
Geet moves away and walks again towards the bathroom
Yaad aaya ki bathroom m uski bra latak rahi hai
Bra chupaake le aayi
Maan ko bhej deti hai nahaane
She sits on the bed hugging her knees
This is going to be more difficult than she expected
What did you expect? That Maan will smile and agree to everything?
Her counter ego argues
I expected that, I like an idiot, won't say ‘I love you’. This is beyond awkward now
She replies to her counter ego
Everything happened so suddenly that she realizes she has no plans whatsoever ki ye hafte mein karna kya hai
Geet TV chala leti hai
Maan aata hai nahaake
Sits beside her
Both are aimlessly staring at the TV
Maan says after 15 min of watching a Bigg boss type tv show that both of them don’t follow
M- I am not an addict
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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