This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 110

Posted: 3 years ago

Great part 

Always something happens when maaneet meet 

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Posted: 3 years ago

Omg 🀣 in dono ke zindagi mein drama bharpoor hai πŸ˜‹ what a roller coaster ride. 

Seriously Geet ne heel se mara. 

But finally all are safe. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats to the winners


Part 56

Thrilling update..... fabulously written

of cos no one expected this to happen

Loved this feisty Geet

great that Maan intervened when things got hectic

well know chainsaw but her heel is good enough

so Maan has his gun

what an end to the night

now they have a fifth wheel lol!!

update soon


thanks for the pm 

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

These two, where ever they goes,the problems also will be there to say hai to themπŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ,

His gun gives a cameo appearance again after a long time,welcome back

No words to describe them,they are one mad couple, hilarious to the core,and their thoughts are on another level,no one can compete them in that area...

Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 56)

Winners:  Umadevi97, Alamelu

Runner Ups: Creampuff, Kkiran,,

Special Mention:  Neenad

 

 

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):  Kkiran,sanum23,aparna3011

 

Congratulations to all the winners

 

QnA Time

Its againtime for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that


-~-


Part 57

 

So sab bhag liye wahan se

 

Jisko jiski car mein jagah mili wahan baith gaye

 

Fortunately, Maan didn't let go of Geet’s hand entire time so he drafted her to his car and floored it

 

Unfortunately, Geet didn't let go of the ex- hostage friend and now there's a 5th wheel in the car

 

The friend is so terrified and shocked

 

She can't stop trembling

 

Seeing such a faint-hearted person Maan also clams up

 

Probably now is not the best time to commend Geet on her aima nd fighting skills or bring up chainsaw or scalpels

 

Friend might pass out then

 

Geet tries her best to calm her down

 

5-10 min baad baaki logo ka call aaya ki ; Head count. Sablog aagaye? All ok?

 

Geet puts phone on speaker thinking ki baki logon ko awaaz sunkar the friend will calm down

 

Unknowing, other side asks Geet ki,

 

β€œMaan koi mafia gangster hai or some psycho?”

 

β€œ To carry a gun to a dinner with friends”

 

β€œKya hai ye sab??”

 

The Friend looks at Maan and Geet and gets more scared

 

Maan cup chap hai

 

Drive kar raha hai bass

 

The friends are all shocked and want to gossip

 

Unko kya pata ki Maan bhi sunn lega and phone loudspeaker par hai

 

Geet quickly switches off the loudspeaker

 

Plan banta hai ki-

 

β€œAage ek crowded Diner hai. Let's regroup there”

 

G-Maan, aage ek Diner hai, sabka wahin milne ka plan hai

 

M-I will drop you two off

 

He heard the friends commenting that whether he is a psycho

 

He can see how scared the girl is

 

He feels maybe meeting the next day is better when events aren't so fresh in everyone's mind

 

Geet could feel that Maan felt bad due to the friend’s careless comments

 

G-Chup chap chalo. Jitna kaha hai utna hi karo

 

+++++

 

Diner ki parking pe pohonche

 

Maan car mein hi tha

 

Geet drops off the friend quickly

 

G- Take care. See you

 

β€œArre tum kahan jaa rahi ho?”

 

The friends ask

 

G- I may have sprained my ankle. So I will just get back now and take some rest. You guys enjoy the dinner

 

She makes an excuse

 

β€œIs it too bad? Should we drop”

 

G- No it's okay. I will manage. Maan is there, he will drop me

 

β€œHum drop kar denge”

 

β€œLet's not bother Maan”

 

Maan finally opens his mouth to say ki

 

M-It's no bother

 

Geet nods in affirmation

 

The friends try to convince her but Geet nahi maani

 

 β€œYou call us once you reach and let us know if you want us to bring any medication or anything”

 

β€œJust call us” (to let them know that she is safe)

 

The friends are just shocked and worried.  What if Maan is mafia??  It's good he saved them but what future is there with mafia boss for Geet? That’s why they are little anxious

 

She nods and gets in Maan’s car

 

Maan starts driving

 

She looks at him

 

Maan chup chap drive kar raha hai

 

G-Hey

 

She nudges him

 

M-Hmm?

 

G-You did good!

 

He nods

 

Maan ka mood better nahi hua

 

She leans towards him

 

G-You are my hero! You saved me

 

She says putting her arms around his shoulders

 

G-Don’t get bothered with what people say.  


Maan doesn't say anything


She looks at him dreamily


G-You were so hot out there. I just wanna eat you up

 

Geet says biting a little on his ear

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

 Maan felt bad whatever her friends commented on him geet trying best to cheer him up 

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 57 

Omg her friends think maan is a mafia boss !!!! πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£

So carrying a gun is psycho but a chainsaw is totally normal ?????? πŸ˜•

Do these so called friends actually know geet at all ........ & the fact she almost took out someone’s eyeball with her heel does not alarm them !!! πŸ€”

They think maan is not normal but neither is geet ...... they are perfectly abnormal in their unique ways but they make a dynamic duo ....... it is like Batman & robin πŸ˜†

Sad that maan had to hear her friends & it upset him πŸ˜”

But totally not suprised that geet finds maan extremely hot after the club incident. πŸ˜†

Thank you di πŸ€—

Posted: 3 years ago

57

maan save all geet n her friends n all are gossiping about him which upset maan .

geet trying to lighten maan's mood hope it works 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by coderlady


part 55

Both are a drug for the other. They just don't realize it.


so true

Posted: 3 years ago

Here all r very well in assuming things and on top of that their assumptions are πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ,be it the friends now there,geet,maan,each person has that skill,

Now comes to geet,she is πŸ˜‚πŸ˜

Looking forward to his response to her 



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