Great part
Always something happens when maaneet meet
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Omg π€£ in dono ke zindagi mein drama bharpoor hai π what a roller coaster ride.
Seriously Geet ne heel se mara.
But finally all are safe.
Congrats to the winners
Part 56
Thrilling update..... fabulously written
of cos no one expected this to happen
Loved this feisty Geet
great that Maan intervened when things got hectic
well know chainsaw but her heel is good enough
so Maan has his gun
what an end to the night
now they have a fifth wheel lol!!
update soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years agoThese two, where ever they goes,the problems also will be there to say hai to themππ,
His gun gives a cameo appearance again after a long time,welcome back
No words to describe them,they are one mad couple, hilarious to the core,and their thoughts are on another level,no one can compete them in that area...
Star Commentor Award (Part 56)
Winners: Umadevi97, Alamelu
Runner Ups: Creampuff, Kkiran,,
Special Mention: Neenad
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Kkiran,sanum23,aparna3011
Congratulations to all the winners
QnA Time
Its againtime for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that
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Part 57
So sab bhag liye wahan se
Jisko jiski car mein jagah mili wahan baith gaye
Fortunately, Maan didn't let go of Geetβs hand entire time so he drafted her to his car and floored it
Unfortunately, Geet didn't let go of the ex- hostage friend and now there's a 5th wheel in the car
The friend is so terrified and shocked
She can't stop trembling
Seeing such a faint-hearted person Maan also clams up
Probably now is not the best time to commend Geet on her aima nd fighting skills or bring up chainsaw or scalpels
Friend might pass out then
Geet tries her best to calm her down
5-10 min baad baaki logo ka call aaya ki ; Head count. Sablog aagaye? All ok?
Geet puts phone on speaker thinking ki baki logon ko awaaz sunkar the friend will calm down
Unknowing, other side asks Geet ki,
βMaan koi mafia gangster hai or some psycho?β
β To carry a gun to a dinner with friendsβ
βKya hai ye sab??β
The Friend looks at Maan and Geet and gets more scared
Maan cup chap hai
Drive kar raha hai bass
The friends are all shocked and want to gossip
Unko kya pata ki Maan bhi sunn lega and phone loudspeaker par hai
Geet quickly switches off the loudspeaker
Plan banta hai ki-
βAage ek crowded Diner hai. Let's regroup thereβ
G-Maan, aage ek Diner hai, sabka wahin milne ka plan hai
M-I will drop you two off
He heard the friends commenting that whether he is a psycho
He can see how scared the girl is
He feels maybe meeting the next day is better when events aren't so fresh in everyone's mind
Geet could feel that Maan felt bad due to the friendβs careless comments
G-Chup chap chalo. Jitna kaha hai utna hi karo
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Diner ki parking pe pohonche
Maan car mein hi tha
Geet drops off the friend quickly
G- Take care. See you
βArre tum kahan jaa rahi ho?β
The friends ask
G- I may have sprained my ankle. So I will just get back now and take some rest. You guys enjoy the dinner
She makes an excuse
βIs it too bad? Should we dropβ
G- No it's okay. I will manage. Maan is there, he will drop me
βHum drop kar dengeβ
βLet's not bother Maanβ
Maan finally opens his mouth to say ki
M-It's no bother
Geet nods in affirmation
The friends try to convince her but Geet nahi maani
βYou call us once you reach and let us know if you want us to bring any medication or anythingβ
βJust call usβ (to let them know that she is safe)
The friends are just shocked and worried. What if Maan is mafia?? It's good he saved them but what future is there with mafia boss for Geet? Thatβs why they are little anxious
She nods and gets in Maanβs car
Maan starts driving
She looks at him
Maan chup chap drive kar raha hai
G-Hey
She nudges him
M-Hmm?
G-You did good!
He nods
Maan ka mood better nahi hua
She leans towards him
G-You are my hero! You saved me
She says putting her arms around his shoulders
G-Donβt get bothered with what people say.
Maan doesn't say anything
She looks at him dreamily
G-You were so hot out there. I just wanna eat you up
Geet says biting a little on his ear
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoMaan felt bad whatever her friends commented on him geet trying best to cheer him up
Part 57
Omg her friends think maan is a mafia boss !!!! π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
So carrying a gun is psycho but a chainsaw is totally normal ?????? π
Do these so called friends actually know geet at all ........ & the fact she almost took out someoneβs eyeball with her heel does not alarm them !!! π€
They think maan is not normal but neither is geet ...... they are perfectly abnormal in their unique ways but they make a dynamic duo ....... it is like Batman & robin π
Sad that maan had to hear her friends & it upset him π
But totally not suprised that geet finds maan extremely hot after the club incident. π
Thank you di π€
so true