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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 21

Whoa wait a minute.... Yeh kya ho raha hai😳... Dono phir jagda shuru kar rahi hai arre di yeh toh mamle ko sulaj ne se aur ulaj rahe hai.... Yeh Maan bhi na har wakt lafango wali baat karke Geet ko chida rahe hai aur sath me Geet ko bhi dara diya dusth danav kahika...Maan ki imagination ko museum me rakna chaiye,this is what happens when you drink too much....🤢 Aur Geet ne bhi Maan ki kaano ki band bajayi...🤣 Woh bhi achese chilla kar.... Ab Maan ki nasha utara Geet ne dekhte hai kya hoga dono ki bich me.... Mamla sulaj jayegi ya aur bhigad jayegi... 😛

Btw Di I have questions for Geet... if given a chance to hit Piyush black and blue will you do it...?😈

Second question is if given the chance to a torture room who is your first choice...?😈

Third question is for Maan why are you bullying Geet ...?do you have any idea how she's feeling...? And are you still doing the revenge thingi on Geet....?😲

Fourth question if given a chance will you fall in love with Geet and vice versa...? 😅

It's a fabulous update Di awesome and thanks for the pm and award Di... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

He is a rare one here,omg his theories😂,poor geet,he is still not able to believe his theories is not right,super hilarious and loved the interview tooo....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 21


Fabulously Awesome Update


I truly admire the fact that Maan

actually encouraged Geet , that indeed was needed

for Geet to hear

so Maan must be disappointed now knowing that

nothing happened that night between himself and Geet

while Geet is still hiding what actually happened

and how Maan fell asleep

both care for each other , this has been shown


will Maan still want to be with Geet or will he try and stay away

as now he is aware closeness makes Geet feel uncomfortable

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonderful update superb 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

His make ego took a bruising. Everything he was thinking turned out to be different from what he remembered.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter


I am fine dear. Thanks for your concern. Me and my husband went for a weekend road trip. Hence couldn't update


hi.... glad that you are well.

hoped you had a lovely trip

are you from India?

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi.... thanks for the pm and update

Congrats to all the winners.....

Intriguing Q&A....


Part 21

splendid update... well written

glad that Geet opened up to Maan

he was correct that she should not feel ashamed

wow he told she is beautiful!

did not expect that he would kiss her

Geet's thoughts on the kiss well explained

she was going through a myriad of feelings

should he have kissed her?>

Gosh she called him a sick pervert

well Maan though they were having a moment

great argument regarding this.... he assumes emotional moments are followed by a physical gesture

when will Maan see the video???

of cos they both are discerning views

Omg he feels she took advantage of him when he was drunk

as expected the argument continues....

she is scared when they both land on the bed

shocked that Geet was rendered speechless

Maan has some faint memories but assumes that she groped him

great she clarified what happened

so he was disappointed that nothing happened

liked his question to her....

ahh was she tempted?


Question to Maan

Why do assume she took advantage of you?

did you even see the video?


Question to Geet

so were you tempted?

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Posted: 4 years ago

21

enjoyed reading very much

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 21)

Winner: Creampuff⭐️

Runner-ups: UmaDevi97

SpecialMention: ferdouz

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): ferdouz,Creampuff, craxyfriends007

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

QnA- Episode 4

Nilz: Helloall, welcome to the Fourth episode of QnA with Maan & Geet. This episode we have questions from two readers: UmaDevi97 & Khwaishfan. So UmaDevi97, lets start with your questions

UmaDevi97: I have questions for Geet... if given a chance to hit Piyush black and blue will you do it...?

Geet opens her mouth to respond but Maan cuts in

Maan: Yes.She will and I will join her too

Geet smiles giving Maan a side glance

UmaDevi97: Second question is if given the chance to a torture room who is your first choice...?

Geet: What? Nobody. I am a doctor I believe in healing people

Maan is nodding looking so unconvinced

UmaDevi97: Third question is for Maan why are you bullying Geet ...?do you have any idea hows he's feeling...? And are you still doing the revenge thingi on Geet....?

Maan: Wha….what???I am not bullying anybody, and I told her there is no revenge plot going on….not anymore. Didn’t I tell you, Gee?

Geet widens her eyes ki don’t call me ‘Gee’ at least not in front of people

UmaDevi97: Fourth question if given a chance will you fall in love with Geet and vice versa...?

He shrugs

Maan: Well…I…she is beautiful

Geet is looking at UmaDevi97 with disbelief

Maan looks at Geet

Maan: Uma,I think Geet doesn’t wanna answer it. Can we slide it?

He says patting Geet on the head

UmaDevi97:Oh ok-ay

Nilz: Now next set of questions by our very own Khwaishfan

Khwaishfan: Question to Maan: Why do assume she took advantage of you?

Maan: Well, as per my memory…I believed what I remembered

Geet: Or mis-remembered. Pervert!

Maan rolls his eyes

Khwaishfan:Did you even see the video?


Geet: Yes. Answer this


Maan looks at Geet then at Khwaish


Maan: Yes , I did. So? You could have said anything in the video…I would believe…what I…well…just let it go


Maan stops sensing Geet getting furious


Khwaishfan: Question to Geet, so were you tempted?


Maan starts laughing


Geet is about to burst she is turning the color of beetroot


Maan gets up and signals everyone to leave


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Part 22

G-Nothing happened. I left after I made sure you were sleeping ok and wouldn't choke on your vomit

He sighs and rolls over to the side

Now they are lying side by side

Geet draws in a deep breath ki jaan mei jaan aayi

M- ok…so you didn't do anything…but didn't you at least get tempted?

Geet grabs a pillow and pounds Maan ka face with it making sure he chokes a bit for air

Maybe that will clear his head

M-ok ok fine. I get it. You aren't that attracted to me. Stop hitting me

Geet lies back down feeling utterly exhausted...

This has been a total rollercoaster...

Maan rises up a little so that he is lying on his side facing Geet

He is looking intently at her face as if trying to figure out some deep mystery of universe

Geet subtly looks down to check all clothes are on place and she isn't exposing any unwanted skin

After few mins of staring, he speaks up

M - I really can't say I would have been such a saint if our positions were reversed

G -Good to know. Note to self. Never be intoxicated around MSK@123

Maan laughs and his deep laugh sends tingle up Geet's spine

He keeps staring at her with same the expression.

Geet ko nahi pata what he is thinking is it deep or is about something perverted?

Not able to take it anymore she snaps

G-Stop staring!!

He lies back down again besides her with a sigh

Both looking at the celling

M-Are we good now?

G-How can you ask that after the stunt you pulled just now?

M-Are you feeling ok now?

G-I am afraid if I say yes you will think we are having another moment

M-Stop hiding behind jokes, Gee. Are you really ok or not?

She is stupefied by his question, but answers after a moment

G - I was always ok

M- You were crying

G -Dust in my eyes

M- You still feel less of a woman because of your condition

He says as if reading her mind

She answers after a pause

G -No! I have made my peace with it

She lies trying to convince herself more than him

M -Gee.... Tum nahi manogi?

She tenses up....

G-I am fine really... I don't need your counseling... I know who I am and what I can and cannot have in my life

He turns his head to look at her. His eyes telling her -last chance

Geet doesn't wanna say she is still insecure... she wants Maan to think of her as a strong independent woman and not a broken girl who needs his sympathy

She averts eye contact

She can lie to his face but it's difficult with looking straight into his eyes

This time Maan pulls her towards himself and places her on top of him. So that Geet is straddling him now. Her hair falling over him and creating a curtain around for a semi-private world

She immediately tries to roll away….to get up but he is holding her firmly by her waist

She knew this guy was again up to something… she should have rolled away and ran out of the door as soon as she heard him say tum nahi manogi

Geet puts her hands on his chest to maintain balance and to avoid fall down to lie completely on top of him

G- Maan! What is wrong with you!! Stop this nonsense this instance!!

M-Geet, you are one of most beautiful women I know. And not just judging your looks.

G -Maan, we will not have another moment. We are not going to 'roll in the sheets' and I certainly hope you don't think you are a messiah for my disease and are going to try and have s*x with me. I swear to God, I will chop off your sick and feed it to dogs!!!

Maan nods hmm hmm

M-Good. You don't need me or any other man to validate your femininity for you

G-Are you listening to me?

M- As much as you are listening to me

Geet takes a deep breath to calm down a little

A few deep breaths more and she realizes…Okay. She is on top... so it's not like Maan is gonna force himself on her from his position...nor is he touching inappropriately... Guess this is his twisted version of shock therapy or something

M - Do you believe me?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago

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