Star Commentor Award (Part 21)
Winner: Creampuff⭐️
Runner-ups: UmaDevi97
SpecialMention: ferdouz
EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): ferdouz,Creampuff, craxyfriends007
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏









































QnA- Episode 4
Nilz: Helloall, welcome to the Fourth episode of QnA with Maan & Geet. This episode we have questions from two readers: UmaDevi97 & Khwaishfan. So UmaDevi97, lets start with your questions
UmaDevi97: I have questions for Geet... if given a chance to hit Piyush black and blue will you do it...?
Geet opens her mouth to respond but Maan cuts in
Maan: Yes.She will and I will join her too
Geet smiles giving Maan a side glance
UmaDevi97: Second question is if given the chance to a torture room who is your first choice...?
Geet: What? Nobody. I am a doctor I believe in healing people
Maan is nodding looking so unconvinced
UmaDevi97: Third question is for Maan why are you bullying Geet ...?do you have any idea hows he's feeling...? And are you still doing the revenge thingi on Geet....?
Maan: Wha….what???I am not bullying anybody, and I told her there is no revenge plot going on….not anymore. Didn’t I tell you, Gee?
Geet widens her eyes ki don’t call me ‘Gee’ at least not in front of people
UmaDevi97: Fourth question if given a chance will you fall in love with Geet and vice versa...?
He shrugs
Maan: Well…I…she is beautiful
Geet is looking at UmaDevi97 with disbelief
Maan looks at Geet
Maan: Uma,I think Geet doesn’t wanna answer it. Can we slide it?
He says patting Geet on the head
UmaDevi97:Oh ok-ay
Nilz: Now next set of questions by our very own Khwaishfan
Khwaishfan: Question to Maan: Why do assume she took advantage of you?
Maan: Well, as per my memory…I believed what I remembered
Geet: Or mis-remembered. Pervert!
Maan rolls his eyes
Khwaishfan:Did you even see the video?
Geet: Yes. Answer this
Maan looks at Geet then at Khwaish
Maan: Yes , I did. So? You could have said anything in the video…I would believe…what I…well…just let it go
Maan stops sensing Geet getting furious
Khwaishfan: Question to Geet, so were you tempted?
Maan starts laughing
Geet is about to burst she is turning the color of beetroot
Maan gets up and signals everyone to leave
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Part 22
G-Nothing happened. I left after I made sure you were sleeping ok and wouldn't choke on your vomit
He sighs and rolls over to the side
Now they are lying side by side
Geet draws in a deep breath ki jaan mei jaan aayi
M- ok…so you didn't do anything…but didn't you at least get tempted?
Geet grabs a pillow and pounds Maan ka face with it making sure he chokes a bit for air
Maybe that will clear his head
M-ok ok fine. I get it. You aren't that attracted to me. Stop hitting me
Geet lies back down feeling utterly exhausted...
This has been a total rollercoaster...
Maan rises up a little so that he is lying on his side facing Geet
He is looking intently at her face as if trying to figure out some deep mystery of universe
Geet subtly looks down to check all clothes are on place and she isn't exposing any unwanted skin
After few mins of staring, he speaks up
M - I really can't say I would have been such a saint if our positions were reversed
G -Good to know. Note to self. Never be intoxicated around MSK@123
Maan laughs and his deep laugh sends tingle up Geet's spine
He keeps staring at her with same the expression.
Geet ko nahi pata what he is thinking is it deep or is about something perverted?
Not able to take it anymore she snaps
G-Stop staring!!
He lies back down again besides her with a sigh
Both looking at the celling
M-Are we good now?
G-How can you ask that after the stunt you pulled just now?
M-Are you feeling ok now?
G-I am afraid if I say yes you will think we are having another moment
M-Stop hiding behind jokes, Gee. Are you really ok or not?
She is stupefied by his question, but answers after a moment
G - I was always ok
M- You were crying
G -Dust in my eyes
M- You still feel less of a woman because of your condition
He says as if reading her mind
She answers after a pause
G -No! I have made my peace with it
She lies trying to convince herself more than him
M -Gee.... Tum nahi manogi?
She tenses up....
G-I am fine really... I don't need your counseling... I know who I am and what I can and cannot have in my life
He turns his head to look at her. His eyes telling her -last chance
Geet doesn't wanna say she is still insecure... she wants Maan to think of her as a strong independent woman and not a broken girl who needs his sympathy
She averts eye contact
She can lie to his face but it's difficult with looking straight into his eyes
This time Maan pulls her towards himself and places her on top of him. So that Geet is straddling him now. Her hair falling over him and creating a curtain around for a semi-private world
She immediately tries to roll away….to get up but he is holding her firmly by her waist
She knew this guy was again up to something… she should have rolled away and ran out of the door as soon as she heard him say tum nahi manogi
Geet puts her hands on his chest to maintain balance and to avoid fall down to lie completely on top of him
G- Maan! What is wrong with you!! Stop this nonsense this instance!!
M-Geet, you are one of most beautiful women I know. And not just judging your looks.
G -Maan, we will not have another moment. We are not going to 'roll in the sheets' and I certainly hope you don't think you are a messiah for my disease and are going to try and have s*x with me. I swear to God, I will chop off your sick and feed it to dogs!!!
Maan nods hmm hmm
M-Good. You don't need me or any other man to validate your femininity for you
G-Are you listening to me?
M- As much as you are listening to me
Geet takes a deep breath to calm down a little
A few deep breaths more and she realizes…Okay. She is on top... so it's not like Maan is gonna force himself on her from his position...nor is he touching inappropriately... Guess this is his twisted version of shock therapy or something
M - Do you believe me?
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