Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 3 years ago

 Congratulations to all Winners 


 of Part 54 


Well Done Everyone !!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 55 

Awesome update 

Maan & geet are dressed to kill 

Are they still trying to impress each other ??? ( Creampuff whispering to them : no need to try to impress each other , you already have the hots for each other 😆)

But the exotic dark club is perfect setting for some romance 😳

My absolute favourite part of this update was when geet showed maan her nails saying they change colours to detect roofies but maan starts kissing her hand & he draws attention to her blushing as the colour change !! 💕💗 what a amazing scenario - well thought out di 

But you left us hanging .......,

Can’t wait till next update 

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 55


Chill and Relaxing with a Romantic drop


Geet dressed well and of course she needed Maan to compliment

her first but at times he just takes moments for granted 

Geet's friends are in awe that she is with Maan

both Maan and Geet finally get a chance to be alone 

yes he is right its very dangerous not keeping an eye on one's drink

I liked how he kisses her fingers asking if the color of her nail polish has changed 

but instantly tells her its her cheeks and he kisses it 

Geet truly needs to relax and just give herself and Maan a chance 

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Posted: 3 years ago

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geet expecting advances from maan but he maintain distance thinking of geet's dilemma regarding their relation  

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Posted: 3 years ago

  Geet friends thought maan as her boyfriend but geet always in deny sach comment so maan too maintaining distance when they alone bz he knows she's confuse and not ready fr any relationship but she wants maan to come close and when he kissing her she didn't mind hope she get ready to give him chance not all rich guys r same

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats to the winners


Part 55

Exceptional update..... splendidly written

of cos Geet is dressed to impressed....

but Maan has already fallen for her

fascinating pub.

at least she introduced Maan to her friends

well they are shocked

sad that she she told her friends that he is not her bf

then what is he?

glad she complimented Maan

not surprised that she was fishing for the same

liked that indirectly told her to stay in London

can understand why Maan is taking things slowly

wow she is wearing nail polish that detects a roofie

Loved how Maan kissed her hand and teases her about her blushy face

superb moments

these two seem to be playing it safe

update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

WOW so desperately wants him to hold her hand. He does not want to scare her by holding her hand but will openly stalk her *face palm* I cant with these 2 they just need to like let things go and maybe live in the moment and get some assurance. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 55)

Winners: Creampuff,Taahir004

Runner Ups:  Alamelu, khwaishfan

Special Mention: sanum23, Kkiran,

 

 

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):   Alamelu,ferdouz,Swapna.p

 

Congratulations to all the winners

 

QnA Time

Its again time for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that



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Part 56

 

Their lips move closer to meet for a kiss

 

Tabhi kahin se jhagde ki awaaz aayi

 

Geet is able recognize the voice of her friends

 

She stops Maan to see what the commotion is

 

Dekha toh ekdum bar brawl ki naubbat hai

 

Hua kya pata nahi

 

Seeing one of the rowdies push her friend

 

Geet rushes forward and pushes back ki- Keep your dirty hands off!

 

Dhaka mukki start ho gayi

 

Geet bhi jhagad rahi, uske dost bhi jhagad rahe

 

Geet and friends want to leave now

 

But the people they are fighting have blocked the entrance

 

Maan Geet ko nihar raha hai

 

My tigress

 

Reminiscing all their pranks and fights

 

He knows ki aisa fight hota rehta hai

 

Bar ka bouncer aa kar sabko seedha kar dega

 

And kaaafi bada group hai, Geet is safe

 

Let her enjoy

 

Tabhi kahin se to bottle tootne ki awaaz aati hai

 

Udahr dekha toh bouncer ke sar par bottle phek kar tooti gai

 

Abhi Geet and friends ko realize hota hai ki saame waliparty to danger hai

 

Situation is getting bad

 

One of bad people catches hold of one of Geet’s friend and starts swearing and saying ki no one is leaving we will do this and that to you

 

Udhar another one heads towards Geet ki yeh bhi zyaada uchal rahi hai

 

Maan also sees ki it's not normal situation any more

 

He walks towards them

 

He tries to pull Geet back and tell others ki let's try to leave

 

But raasta blocked hai

 

There is a mild hostage situation, they can't leave a person behind

 

Geet, who was arguing and fighting at first; seeing situation is getting bad tries to stay away from the rowdies but she is still arguing and thinking of how to get her friend back

 

Geet ka dhyaan sara uski friend par tha

 

She didn't notice a guy trying to grab her from behind

 

But Maan did

 

He rushes in and shoves the guy hard away from Geet

 

Who aadmi bhi thoda 6-7 steps peeche hokar girta hai

 

Maan grabs Geet’s hand and instructs other friends to grab each other and try to get off of here

 

Udhar wo aadmi drunk and pissed, grabs and smashes a beer bottle and points the jagged edge towards Maan ki :

 

“Where do you think you are going?”

 

He rushes towards Maan

 

Maan ko laga ki ab situation aur control nahi ho sakti

 

He takes out his gun


And points it at the guy

 

M- Move. Right now

 

The words were hardly out of Maan’s mouth ki side se Geet ki 5-inch heel flies towards the man with the bottle and hits him on his right eye

 

The man drops the bottle and grabs good his face howling

 

Pub mein aur zyada bhagdar type match gayi

 

Maan half turned to see Geet holding her remaining heel in hand and telling the other man to release her friend or else....

 

Maan also points the gun in same direction and Geet’s friend is finally freed

 

Seeing the gun, the bad guys back off a bit

 

Geet and friends quickly get out

 

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So sab bhag liye wahan se

 

Jisko jiski car mein jagah mili wahan baith gaye

 

Fortunately, Maan didn't let go of Geet’s hand entire time sohe drafted her to his car and floored it

 

Unfortunately, Geet didn't let go of the ex- hostage friend and now there's a 5th wheel in the car

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Loh what a dhamaka of the night. Geet knows how to fight back and LMAO Maan just standing thier awww look at her fight my god this man is to much. Glad he stepped in and kept his gun for the right moment but wow what a weapon Geet used love her throwing her shoes lol. Poor 5th wheel she probably going to be like kahan fhass gayi.