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Congratulations to all Winners
of Part 54
Well Done Everyone !!!!
Part 55
Awesome update
Maan & geet are dressed to kill
Are they still trying to impress each other ??? ( Creampuff whispering to them : no need to try to impress each other , you already have the hots for each other 😆)
But the exotic dark club is perfect setting for some romance 😳
My absolute favourite part of this update was when geet showed maan her nails saying they change colours to detect roofies but maan starts kissing her hand & he draws attention to her blushing as the colour change !! 💕💗 what a amazing scenario - well thought out di
But you left us hanging .......,
Can’t wait till next update
Thank you 🤗
Part 55
Chill and Relaxing with a Romantic drop
Geet dressed well and of course she needed Maan to compliment
her first but at times he just takes moments for granted
Geet's friends are in awe that she is with Maan
both Maan and Geet finally get a chance to be alone
yes he is right its very dangerous not keeping an eye on one's drink
I liked how he kisses her fingers asking if the color of her nail polish has changed
but instantly tells her its her cheeks and he kisses it
Geet truly needs to relax and just give herself and Maan a chance
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geet expecting advances from maan but he maintain distance thinking of geet's dilemma regarding their relation
Geet friends thought maan as her boyfriend but geet always in deny sach comment so maan too maintaining distance when they alone bz he knows she's confuse and not ready fr any relationship but she wants maan to come close and when he kissing her she didn't mind hope she get ready to give him chance not all rich guys r same
Congrats to the winners
Part 55
Exceptional update..... splendidly written
of cos Geet is dressed to impressed....
but Maan has already fallen for her
fascinating pub.
at least she introduced Maan to her friends
well they are shocked
sad that she she told her friends that he is not her bf
then what is he?
glad she complimented Maan
not surprised that she was fishing for the same
liked that indirectly told her to stay in London
can understand why Maan is taking things slowly
wow she is wearing nail polish that detects a roofie
Loved how Maan kissed her hand and teases her about her blushy face
superb moments
these two seem to be playing it safe
update soon
WOW so desperately wants him to hold her hand. He does not want to scare her by holding her hand but will openly stalk her *face palm* I cant with these 2 they just need to like let things go and maybe live in the moment and get some assurance.
Star Commentor Award (Part 55)
Winners: Creampuff,Taahir004
Runner Ups: Alamelu, khwaishfan
Special Mention: sanum23, Kkiran,
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Alamelu,ferdouz,Swapna.p
Congratulations to all the winners
QnA Time
Its again time for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that
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Part 56
Their lips move closer to meet for a kiss
Tabhi kahin se jhagde ki awaaz aayi
Geet is able recognize the voice of her friends
She stops Maan to see what the commotion is
Dekha toh ekdum bar brawl ki naubbat hai
Hua kya pata nahi
Seeing one of the rowdies push her friend
Geet rushes forward and pushes back ki- Keep your dirty hands off!
Dhaka mukki start ho gayi
Geet bhi jhagad rahi, uske dost bhi jhagad rahe
Geet and friends want to leave now
But the people they are fighting have blocked the entrance
Maan Geet ko nihar raha hai
My tigress
Reminiscing all their pranks and fights
He knows ki aisa fight hota rehta hai
Bar ka bouncer aa kar sabko seedha kar dega
And kaaafi bada group hai, Geet is safe
Let her enjoy
Tabhi kahin se to bottle tootne ki awaaz aati hai
Udahr dekha toh bouncer ke sar par bottle phek kar tooti gai
Abhi Geet and friends ko realize hota hai ki saame waliparty to danger hai
Situation is getting bad
One of bad people catches hold of one of Geet’s friend and starts swearing and saying ki no one is leaving we will do this and that to you
Udhar another one heads towards Geet ki yeh bhi zyaada uchal rahi hai
Maan also sees ki it's not normal situation any more
He walks towards them
He tries to pull Geet back and tell others ki let's try to leave
But raasta blocked hai
There is a mild hostage situation, they can't leave a person behind
Geet, who was arguing and fighting at first; seeing situation is getting bad tries to stay away from the rowdies but she is still arguing and thinking of how to get her friend back
Geet ka dhyaan sara uski friend par tha
She didn't notice a guy trying to grab her from behind
But Maan did
He rushes in and shoves the guy hard away from Geet
Who aadmi bhi thoda 6-7 steps peeche hokar girta hai
Maan grabs Geet’s hand and instructs other friends to grab each other and try to get off of here
Udhar wo aadmi drunk and pissed, grabs and smashes a beer bottle and points the jagged edge towards Maan ki :
“Where do you think you are going?”
He rushes towards Maan
Maan ko laga ki ab situation aur control nahi ho sakti
He takes out his gun
And points it at the guy
M- Move. Right now
The words were hardly out of Maan’s mouth ki side se Geet ki 5-inch heel flies towards the man with the bottle and hits him on his right eye
The man drops the bottle and grabs good his face howling
Pub mein aur zyada bhagdar type match gayi
Maan half turned to see Geet holding her remaining heel in hand and telling the other man to release her friend or else....
Maan also points the gun in same direction and Geet’s friend is finally freed
Seeing the gun, the bad guys back off a bit
Geet and friends quickly get out
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So sab bhag liye wahan se
Jisko jiski car mein jagah mili wahan baith gaye
Fortunately, Maan didn't let go of Geet’s hand entire time sohe drafted her to his car and floored it
Unfortunately, Geet didn't let go of the ex- hostage friend and now there's a 5th wheel in the car
Loh what a dhamaka of the night. Geet knows how to fight back and LMAO Maan just standing thier awww look at her fight my god this man is to much. Glad he stepped in and kept his gun for the right moment but wow what a weapon Geet used love her throwing her shoes lol. Poor 5th wheel she probably going to be like kahan fhass gayi.
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