Star Commentor Award (Part 55)
Winners: Creampuff,Taahir004
Runner Ups: Alamelu, khwaishfan
Special Mention: sanum23, Kkiran,
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Alamelu,ferdouz,Swapna.p
Congratulations to all the winners
QnA Time
Its again time for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that
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Part 56
Their lips move closer to meet for a kiss
Tabhi kahin se jhagde ki awaaz aayi
Geet is able recognize the voice of her friends
She stops Maan to see what the commotion is
Dekha toh ekdum bar brawl ki naubbat hai
Hua kya pata nahi
Seeing one of the rowdies push her friend
Geet rushes forward and pushes back ki- Keep your dirty hands off!
Dhaka mukki start ho gayi
Geet bhi jhagad rahi, uske dost bhi jhagad rahe
Geet and friends want to leave now
But the people they are fighting have blocked the entrance
Maan Geet ko nihar raha hai
My tigress
Reminiscing all their pranks and fights
He knows ki aisa fight hota rehta hai
Bar ka bouncer aa kar sabko seedha kar dega
And kaaafi bada group hai, Geet is safe
Let her enjoy
Tabhi kahin se to bottle tootne ki awaaz aati hai
Udahr dekha toh bouncer ke sar par bottle phek kar tooti gai
Abhi Geet and friends ko realize hota hai ki saame waliparty to danger hai
Situation is getting bad
One of bad people catches hold of one of Geet’s friend and starts swearing and saying ki no one is leaving we will do this and that to you
Udhar another one heads towards Geet ki yeh bhi zyaada uchal rahi hai
Maan also sees ki it's not normal situation any more
He walks towards them
He tries to pull Geet back and tell others ki let's try to leave
But raasta blocked hai
There is a mild hostage situation, they can't leave a person behind
Geet, who was arguing and fighting at first; seeing situation is getting bad tries to stay away from the rowdies but she is still arguing and thinking of how to get her friend back
Geet ka dhyaan sara uski friend par tha
She didn't notice a guy trying to grab her from behind
But Maan did
He rushes in and shoves the guy hard away from Geet
Who aadmi bhi thoda 6-7 steps peeche hokar girta hai
Maan grabs Geet’s hand and instructs other friends to grab each other and try to get off of here
Udhar wo aadmi drunk and pissed, grabs and smashes a beer bottle and points the jagged edge towards Maan ki :
“Where do you think you are going?”
He rushes towards Maan
Maan ko laga ki ab situation aur control nahi ho sakti
He takes out his gun
And points it at the guy
M- Move. Right now
The words were hardly out of Maan’s mouth ki side se Geet ki 5-inch heel flies towards the man with the bottle and hits him on his right eye
The man drops the bottle and grabs good his face howling
Pub mein aur zyada bhagdar type match gayi
Maan half turned to see Geet holding her remaining heel in hand and telling the other man to release her friend or else....
Maan also points the gun in same direction and Geet’s friend is finally freed
Seeing the gun, the bad guys back off a bit
Geet and friends quickly get out
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So sab bhag liye wahan se
Jisko jiski car mein jagah mili wahan baith gaye
Fortunately, Maan didn't let go of Geet’s hand entire time sohe drafted her to his car and floored it
Unfortunately, Geet didn't let go of the ex- hostage friend and now there's a 5th wheel in the car
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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