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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 55


Chill and Relaxing with a Romantic drop


Geet dressed well and of course she needed Maan to compliment

her first but at times he just takes moments for granted

Geet's friends are in awe that she is with Maan

both Maan and Geet finally get a chance to be alone

yes he is right its very dangerous not keeping an eye on one's drink

I liked how he kisses her fingers asking if the color of her nail polish has changed

but instantly tells her its her cheeks and he kisses it

Geet truly needs to relax and just give herself and Maan a chance

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Posted: 4 years ago

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geet expecting advances from maan but he maintain distance thinking of geet's dilemma regarding their relation

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet friends thought maan as her boyfriend but geet always in deny sach comment so maan too maintaining distance when they alone bz he knows she's confuse and not ready fr any relationship but she wants maan to come close and when he kissing her she didn't mind hope she get ready to give him chance not all rich guys r same

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congrats to the winners


Part 55

Exceptional update..... splendidly written

of cos Geet is dressed to impressed....

but Maan has already fallen for her

fascinating pub.

at least she introduced Maan to her friends

well they are shocked

sad that she she told her friends that he is not her bf

then what is he?

glad she complimented Maan

not surprised that she was fishing for the same

liked that indirectly told her to stay in London

can understand why Maan is taking things slowly

wow she is wearing nail polish that detects a roofie

Loved how Maan kissed her hand and teases her about her blushy face

superb moments

these two seem to be playing it safe

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

WOW so desperately wants him to hold her hand. He does not want to scare her by holding her hand but will openly stalk her *face palm* I cant with these 2 they just need to like let things go and maybe live in the moment and get some assurance.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 55)

Winners: Creampuff,Taahir004

Runner Ups: Alamelu, khwaishfan

Special Mention: sanum23, Kkiran,

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Alamelu,ferdouz,Swapna.p

Congratulations to all the winners

QnA Time

Its again time for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that



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Part 56

Their lips move closer to meet for a kiss

Tabhi kahin se jhagde ki awaaz aayi

Geet is able recognize the voice of her friends

She stops Maan to see what the commotion is

Dekha toh ekdum bar brawl ki naubbat hai

Hua kya pata nahi

Seeing one of the rowdies push her friend

Geet rushes forward and pushes back ki- Keep your dirty hands off!

Dhaka mukki start ho gayi

Geet bhi jhagad rahi, uske dost bhi jhagad rahe

Geet and friends want to leave now

But the people they are fighting have blocked the entrance

Maan Geet ko nihar raha hai

My tigress

Reminiscing all their pranks and fights

He knows ki aisa fight hota rehta hai

Bar ka bouncer aa kar sabko seedha kar dega

And kaaafi bada group hai, Geet is safe

Let her enjoy

Tabhi kahin se to bottle tootne ki awaaz aati hai

Udahr dekha toh bouncer ke sar par bottle phek kar tooti gai

Abhi Geet and friends ko realize hota hai ki saame waliparty to danger hai

Situation is getting bad

One of bad people catches hold of one of Geet’s friend and starts swearing and saying ki no one is leaving we will do this and that to you

Udhar another one heads towards Geet ki yeh bhi zyaada uchal rahi hai

Maan also sees ki it's not normal situation any more

He walks towards them

He tries to pull Geet back and tell others ki let's try to leave

But raasta blocked hai

There is a mild hostage situation, they can't leave a person behind

Geet, who was arguing and fighting at first; seeing situation is getting bad tries to stay away from the rowdies but she is still arguing and thinking of how to get her friend back

Geet ka dhyaan sara uski friend par tha

She didn't notice a guy trying to grab her from behind

But Maan did

He rushes in and shoves the guy hard away from Geet

Who aadmi bhi thoda 6-7 steps peeche hokar girta hai

Maan grabs Geet’s hand and instructs other friends to grab each other and try to get off of here

Udhar wo aadmi drunk and pissed, grabs and smashes a beer bottle and points the jagged edge towards Maan ki :

“Where do you think you are going?”

He rushes towards Maan

Maan ko laga ki ab situation aur control nahi ho sakti

He takes out his gun


And points it at the guy

M- Move. Right now

The words were hardly out of Maan’s mouth ki side se Geet ki 5-inch heel flies towards the man with the bottle and hits him on his right eye

The man drops the bottle and grabs good his face howling

Pub mein aur zyada bhagdar type match gayi

Maan half turned to see Geet holding her remaining heel in hand and telling the other man to release her friend or else....

Maan also points the gun in same direction and Geet’s friend is finally freed

Seeing the gun, the bad guys back off a bit

Geet and friends quickly get out

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So sab bhag liye wahan se

Jisko jiski car mein jagah mili wahan baith gaye

Fortunately, Maan didn't let go of Geet’s hand entire time sohe drafted her to his car and floored it

Unfortunately, Geet didn't let go of the ex- hostage friend and now there's a 5th wheel in the car

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Loh what a dhamaka of the night. Geet knows how to fight back and LMAO Maan just standing thier awww look at her fight my god this man is to much. Glad he stepped in and kept his gun for the right moment but wow what a weapon Geet used love her throwing her shoes lol. Poor 5th wheel she probably going to be like kahan fhass gayi.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Nice. Both dressed really well for the fancy pub. And her friends are shocked to see she has a boyfriend here. But Ofcourae geet tells them that she met up with him here since he is here too


Yeah right!!! So believable geet!!! Lol

But maan not getting too close to her, afraid of being mistaken by her Does not complement her. Poor girl. She had to do the honors first to get back a return one from him. Finally he holds her hand and gets close to her.

These two na. At this rate they will be old by the time they speak their minds and accept their true feelings for each other and confess it
hopefully this wedding trip they will make some more progress


otherwise it is 2 steps forward no four back



Thats the thing naa, there are so close but still there is like a glass wall between them of their fears & insecurities. And that even resists them from having clear dialogue with each other. The fear of being too desperate, fear of giving too much and then losing everything in a heartbreak. Since they are accomplished in their own lives, they fear what they have created for themselves

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Posted: 4 years ago

Fighting started in bar somehow they manage to get out

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Originally posted by: ferdouz

Oh wow 😍

Just hoping Geet doesn't pull back 😅

Loved the way they are comfortable with each other.

Expectation tho full on hai Geet ke from Maan but accept nahi karegi 😄


Accept kar liya toh expectations se aur expectation badegi, lagaav badega, chance of heartbreak badega. Thats her logic

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