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Posted: 11 years ago
part 24
awesome dear...
nice one dear...
oh ho Maan ka gussa bhi na...
what Geet's alliance?
if Maan hears this he will blow a fuse...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 25

Ridhi: Geet, meinne pehle hi kaha ki tum uncleji se baat karo, ab dekho kya ho gaya?

Dadi: abhi bhi kuch nahi bigadha, aap jaldhi apne mann ki baat apne parivaar walon ko bathao

Lekhin Geet ko pehle Maan se apne mann ki baat bathana hoga, haina babaji?

Maan and Armaan come...

Maan is surprised to see Geet worried...

Maybe she is upset that Maan is angry with her...

Maan gives up his anger...

Ye toh hamesha mujhe pareshaan karthe rehthi hai, aur ye kya? aaj toh kudh pareshaan ho gayi?

Maan: Dadi, kya baat hai?

Armaan: toh Maan hum chalthe hai

Ridhima: haan Dadima, hum chalthe hai

Geet looks at Dadi...

Geet: hum chalthe hai Dadi

Maan keeps looking at Geet...

Geet tries to go with Ridhi...

But she couldn't...

She makes her way slowly still looking back at Maan...

Maan stops her and holds her back...

Maan: tum kahan jaathe ho?

Ridhi and Armaan want to leave her back with Maan...

Ridhi: Geet, tum baat karke aao

Ridhi winks and leaves...

Dadi: Maan bete, humj bhi calthe hai, gud night

Maan: gud night Dadi

Geet: Dadi?

Dadi: gud night Geet

Dadi too leaves them alone...

Ab toh wahan koi nahi hai...

Geet stands still staring Maan...

She is very upset...

Maan Geet ko aaise udaas nahi dekh saktha...

Maan: kya hua Geet? Tum pareshaan kyun ho?

Ab issko kaise bathayegi ki Geet ki shadhi fix ho gayi hai?

Geet blinks...

Maan: Geet, mein kuch pooch raha hoon, jawaab do

Maan pulls her closer...he is worried looking at her teary eyes...

Geet: woh...woh

Geet struggles to find words...

Maan: ab tum kuch bathaoge bhi ya phir mein chale jaoon?

Maan tires to move away...

Geet holds him back and hugs him tight...

Maan is pleasantly surprised...

She is speechless...Maan too wants to cherish this moment for a while...

Maan: Geet

Maan wipes off her tears and lifts her chin...

Maan: Geet, kuch toh bolo

Geet: Maan

She looks into his eyes...

Maneet eyelock...Mahi...

Geet: I love you

Maan didn't expect this...

Maan is taken aback...Ye achanak kaise hua?

Maan: I'm sorry Geet

Geet is shocked to see his reaction...

Geet looks puzzled...she looks at Maan ...

Maan: woh, mujhe nahi laga ki tum itna serious hogi

Geet: kya?

Maan: mujhe laga tum cutie se pyaar karthi ho

Maan teases Geet...

Geet: what? Aap mere mazak udathe ho? aapko mera pyaar mazak lagtha?

Geet gets angry...she starts to walk away...

Maan: hare Geet, rukho

Geet wouldn't stop...

Maan runs after her...

Maan: hare, kahan jaa rahi ho?

Geet: shadhi karne

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, mere papaji ne mere liye koi achcha ladhka dhoondke rakha hai, mein ussi se shadhi karnewali hoon

Maan: teek hai Geet, All the best

Geet: kya?

Maan catches her hand and pulls her closer...

Geet: chodo mujhe, ab kyun rokhthe ho?

Maan: hare Geet, tumme toh uss ladhke se milna chahiye haina?

Geet: aap ussko jaanthe ho?

Maan: haan, bahut achche se jaantha hoon, bechara, tumse bahut pyaar kartha hai, issiliye meinne hi ussko tummare papa ke paas bheja

Geet: kya? aap bahut bhure ho, dhust danav, mujhe toh aapko waise hi chodna chahiye tha

Maan: tum mujhe aaise hi chodthi toh tumme itna achcha ladhka kaise miltha?

Geet is confused...

Maan: kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: aap kabhi bhi serious nahi hoge?

Maan: kyun? Abhi toh mein bahut serious hoon Geet, shadhi ke maamle mein koi mazak kartha hai kya? mujhe dekho Geet, mere aakhon mein aakhen dalkke dekho, kya ye tumme mazak lagtha?

Geet looks at him...

Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Maan hugs her tight...

Geet: Maan

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet is still not clear what's going on...

Maan is looking so cool...

Maan: Geet, tumme ye ladhka pasand haina?

Maan shows his image on the mirror...

Geet : ye kya hai?

Maan: yahi hai woh ladhka

Maan has actually went and met Handaji with dadi and told about their love and fixed their marriage...

Handaji was reluctant but Vicky confirmed that Maan is saying the truth, Geet is in love actually with this man, then Handaji agreed for this rishtha...

Dadi was just teasing Geet...and that's also Maan's plan ...

Geet is angry that he never told her about that...

Geet: aap na, kabhi nahi sudrege

Geet pushes him off and starts beating him...

Maan stops her and holds her hands back...

Maan: I love you Geet

Maneet ek dusre ke nazron mein kho jaathe...Mahi...

Geet: aap ne toh mujhe bahut daradhi

Maan: I'm sorry Geet, mujhe kaise patha hoga ki tum mere mazak ko itne serious logi?

Geet: ye kasie mazak hai? mujhe toh pasand nahi hai

Maan: tum mere samne uss cutie ko romance kar sakthi toh mein bhi tummare saath aaise mazak kar saktha hoon, haina?

Geet laughs...

Geet: aap cutie se itna jalthe ho?

Maan: Geet tummare pyaar ka pura haqdaar mein hoon, kyunki tum sirf meri ho, Maan ki Geet

Maan gets possessive and hugs her...

Geet: aur aap bhi sirf mere ho, samje Mr.MSK?

Geet too hugs him back...Maneet passionate hug...mahi...

Maan drops Geet...

Handaji is waiting for Geet...he is worried after her phone call...

Handaji is confused to see her coming with Maan...

Aajkal ke ladhkiyan bhi na? ab usse poocho toh kahegi ki hum sirf dosth hai, haina?

Handaji keeps looking at Geet...

Geet goes and hugs him...

Geet: papaji, mein bahut kush hoon

Maan Handaji ki aashirvaad letha...

Geet is surprised...but she is happy...

Ranno gets some lassi for Maan...

Everyone is happy...

Vicky keeps chatting with Maan while Maan keeps looking at his Mishty...

He is now the happiest person in the world...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww how sweet update.. muze last tak dadi pr shak nahi hua.. tahnk god maan ne sab sambhal liya.. or bechari geet sachi kehti hai, maan kabhi nahi sudhrege.. dusht danav..😆 bechari ko kitna sataya... esa koi krta hai kya.. prr ye to msk hai.. kuch bhi kr skte hai..na..😉😆
nice update.. waiiting for the next1...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
le yeh maan aur dadi ne milkar geet ki jaan hi nikalne waalee thay chalo ab indono ka rishtha pakka hogaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maaneet ka rishta taye hogaya😃
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wow...maan toh bahut hi fast nikla aur aisa koi karta hai kya...bechari geet...

superb update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 26

Next week...

Ridhima ki shadhi ki tayaariyan zor zor se ho rahe hai...

Geet is busy shopping and helping Ridhi...

Sid Armaan ko saath detha...

Friends hothe hi issi ke liye haina?

Chief is also happy for them...he is still single, so he is happy that atleast his juniors have founs their love, doctors ke liye toh duty first hai, lekhin kabhi kabhi aap exhaust hothe toh aapko recgarge karne ke liye koi toh hona chahiye haina?

He is ahppy as long as his patients are looked after to well...

Itne tight schedule mein Geet ko Maan se milne ki time kahan hothi?

Maan ke paas sirf do din hai, usske badh Maan agle series ki warm-up camp attend karne Boangalore chale jayega...

Geet is busy with her work...

She has to juggle between her duty at sanjeevani and Ridhi's wedding arrangements...

Aur toh aur Ridhi aur Armaan ek hafthe ki chute mein chale gaye toh Geet bahut hi busy rehthi 24*7...

Ye Sid toh Pari ke peeche hi pada hai...koi kaam nahi kartha...

Geet is attending to the patients...

Aaj toh kuch zyada hi patients aagaye...

Geet ek ek ko instructions dethi jaathi...

She comes across an old patient...

Ye yahan kya kar raha hai?

He is not a patient anymore?

Geet is surprised by his visit...

He has just come here to trouble Geet...

She is already behind schedule...and this man is sure to make things difficult for her...

She is happy to see him but pretends to be angry...

She knows that if she allows him to stay back then her day would end up with no work done...

Geet: what are you doing here Mr?

Maan smiles...he has seen the excitement in her eyes seeing him...

She is a poor actor! Haina?

Aur Maan ke samne Geet ki kuch bhi nahi chaltha...

Maan: doctor saiba se milne aaya hoon

Geet: Maan. Ye hospital hai

Maan: doctorji, shayad aap bhool gaye ho ki mein bhi aapka patient hi hoon

Geet: Maan, ye kaise mazak hai, aap chale jao yahan se, abhi

Maan: aap kaise doctor ho? patients ko aaise bhagaathe hai kya? mein chief se poochke aatha hoon ki aajkal sanjeevani mein patients ki koi kadar hi nahi hai kya?

Maan gets angry...nakli gussa?

Geet is embarrassed...

Geet: Maan, sab humme hi dekh rahe hai

Maan: Geet, kyun tension lethi ho? sabko patha hai ki mein yahan ka patient hoon, haina?

Chorus: haan

They all enjoy their nok jok with their eyes wide open...

Geet: Maan, ye teek nahi hai, chief abhi aathe hi honge

Maan: nahi aayenge

Geet: aapko kaise patha?

Maan: chief apna favourite Salman ki Jai Ho dekh rahe hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, meinne hi yahan ek special screening ka intrezaam kiya hai, woh bhi toh insaan haina? Tum logon ne unko Hitler banakke rakha hai, unka koi family bhi nahi hai, unko bhi thodi entertainment ki zaroorat hogi

Geet: kya? Salman ka Jai ho? aapne pehle kyun nahi bathaya?

Maan: batahtha toh kya karthi?

Geet respond nahi karthi...

Maan: Geet?

Geet toh chali gayi apne salman ko dekhne...she has gone to watch Jai ho with Chief...

Bechare Maan ko Geet ki patients ko smabalna pada...autograph aur photograph dekhe...

After the movie Maan Geet ko kidnap karke jaatha...

Maan atkes her for a long drive...

He stops the car...

Geet: Maan, aap kyun rukh gaye?

Maan: Geet, lagtha hai koi problem hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: ek minute, tum neeche uthro

Geet: Maan, humme wapas jaana hai

Maan: kyun Geet? Mujhe toh aaise hi pure raat tummare saath bithana hai

Geet: aap pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: chalo, walk pe chalthe hai

Geet: yahan?

Maan: kyun Geet? Tumme dar lagtha hai kya?

Geet: haan

Maan: mere saath hothe hue tumme dar kaise lag saktha?

Geet: aap ke saath hothe hue hi dar lagtha hai

Geet blushes...

Maan: toh ab tumme mere saath akhele rehne se dar lagtha hai?

Geet: nahi nahi

Maan: toh phir chalo mere saath

Geet: aap aaise nahi kar sakthe, mere ghar pe sab pareshaan honge

Maan: tumme toh sabki pareshaani dikhayi dethi, sirf meri pareshaani dikhayi nahi dethi, haina?

Geet makes an innocent face...

Geet: aap pareshaan ho? aapki kya pareshaani ho sakthi? Aap toh mijhe pareshaan karne mein dhule hue hai

Maan: kya? tumme meri pareshaani nazar nahi aathi?

Geet: aap hi bathao, aaka problem kya hai?

Maan: tum ho Geet

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, mere sare pareshaaniyan tummare wajhe se hi shuru hothe

Geet: toh mein aapki problem ban gay hoon?

Geet gets angry...

Maan: MSK toh zindagi mein kabhi kissi ki parwa nahi kartha tha, apne marzi ka malik tha, lekhin jabse tum meri zindagi mein aayi ho tab se MSK ki zindagi ulta chaltha, ab toh practice mein bhi mann nahi lagtha aur

Maan stops...

Geet stares him...

Geet: aur?

Maan: kuch nahi

Geet: aur kya? bathao Maan

Geet looks into his eyes...

Maan can't hide anything from her...

Maan: aur pinne mein bhi mann nahi lagtha

Geet: aap abhi bhi pinne ki sochthe ho?

Geet is very upset...

Maan Geet ko udaas dekhhte hi pareshann ho jaatha...

Maan: Geet

Geet: mujhse baat mat karo

Geet turns her face the other side...

Maan: yahan dekho, Geet. Tum mujhse baat nahi karogi toh mein phir se

Geet: phir se?

Geet bahut tensed hai...

Maan: mein phir se tumme pareshaan karoonga

Geet: abhi toh aap wahi kar rahe ho

Maan: achcha, isse pareshaani kehthe hai?

Geet: aur kya?

Maan: toh issko kya kahoge?

Maan stops and turns towards her...he looks at her with lust...

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: ek nasha toh chootgya lekhin ye nasha toh mujhe pagal kar raha hai

Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Peelon...

Hai pine ka mosam...

Geet hosh mein aathi...

She hits Maan...

Maan: hare hare, ye kay kar rahe ho?

Geet: aapko yahi Ghana yaad aaya?

Maan: hare, kitne achcha lyrics hai, Philoon

Geet: aap kabhi nahi sudhroge

Geet turns and walks off...

Maan runs after her...

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sahi mein maan kabhi nehi sudhdega...geet ko tang karne mein usse maaja jo ata hai...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 25
nice part...
lovely...
oh so its Maan's alliance only her father was talking about...
too good...
yeh Maan bhi na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 26
awesome dear...
lovely...
too good...
cont soon dear...

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