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Part - 22

Now back to business, sorry cricket...

Maan ne toh pehle hi iss injury ke wajhe se ek series miss karli...

Agla series shuru honewala hai...

Team selection honewala hai...

Usse pehle Maan ko champions trophy khelna padega...

He has to prove his abilities ...

Team mein jagah banana itna asaan thodi nahi...

Competition tough hai...new boys are waitng for their chance...'

Maan plays for India A...

Some seniors have taken rest...

Maan hits 67 runs in 45 balls to win a match for his team...

In the match against the seniors he makes an impressive 50...

He is back in the side...Geet is very happy...

This time Indai goes to England...

The team would stay there for a couple of months...

But Maan is only playing the one dayers...he will be there for 15 days...

Still eh can't stay away from Geet...he wants Geet to accompany him...

England tour hai, Geet would love to go with him...

Moreover he has many oppurtunities to take up drinking again...

It may be a ccasual drink but that would be enough to kick start his addiction...

Geet is only concerned about that...

Btu Maan is confident, he had no reason to quit drinking before, btu now he has Geet, he won't loose Geet for that silly habit, he knows the value of his life now, now he is not alone , he has shared his life with someone special and he owes her everything including his health...

Geet had commitments at sanjeevani and she can't go with him...

Maan is very disappointed...this is the first time he is playing after Geet entered his life, he would love to have her right behind watching him live and cheering him...

Btu their relationship is still under cover, hare they haven't admitted to it...

And Geet is hesitant b'coz she wants Maan to believe that she will accept him only when he keeps up his promise...it's testing time for Maan, haina?

.maan intrezaar karnewalon mein nahi haina? He wants his Geet, right now, this moment...

Maan is upset and is angry with her...

Geet promises to accompany him next time...

She constantly keeps encouraging him on the mobile...

She also reminds him of his promise often...

Maan is annoyed by her repeated warnings but he needed that as he was tempted many a time and he had no one to control him, even her teammates shared a drink once in a while...

But Maan never touched it, for Geet trusts him so much and he can't betray her...

Dhoni's men crush England and Maan had little chance to play...but whenever he had the opportunity he proved his selection right and made a few quick runs...

Itne din toh Maan ko apne experiences ko share karne ke liye koi nahi tha, par ab Geet haina?

Maan hanesha akhela hi rehna chahatha...he likes to be left alone except when he is drinking...

Now that he has given up drinking most of his friends have vanished, but maan is not alone now...

He dosen't need them now, he has his Geet who is his true friend...

His mobile is kept busy 24*7 except for the match-time when Geet stays glued to the TV...

As always Geet watches the matches at Ridhi's palce along with Armaan, Sid and Vicky...

This time Pari too joins them...

Every run scored is cheered with a lot of joy and music...

Poor Ridhima! She had to stay back at sanjeevani to get some peace of mind...

Ghar to iss cricket gorillas ne occupy kardhi haina?

As soon as Maan comes to the pitch Geet gets nervous...

she orders them to be calm...

Everytime Maan clears the boundary he shows his thumbs up and that's for Geet...

Ye toh sirf Geet ko patha hai, aaise Geet sochthi!

But seeing her blush watching Maan's action it becomes an open secret...

The boys start teasing her...

Sid: dekho dekho, Geet ka chehra lala mirch se bhi zyada lal ho gaya

Armaan: haan haan, ye toh mirchi se bhi hot haina?

Pari: come on guys, Geet ko tang mat karo, ussko chain se pyaar karne do

Armaan: wah, kaisa ye pyaar hai? majhnu world TV pe apne laila ko pyaar ke sandesh bhejtah, hazooron logon ke samne

Sid: Armaan tujhe toh bollywood joinkarna chahiye, kya dialogue hai?

Armaan: haan, mein bhi bahut din se soch raha tha, mera pehla film to hiss laila mujhnu ki love story hi hogi

Geet: guys, aap aaise hi karthe raho toh mein ghar chali jaoongi

Sid: ahchA Armaan, aaj ke liye itna hi khaafi hai, aur Vicky toh bahut naraaz hai

Armaan: tujhe kya ho gaya?

Vicky is shocked to hear that...

Armaan tells him about Maneet ...

Geet ko aaise kush dekhkke Vicky bhi kush hai...

Aur toh aur usska jija toh cricket star hai, Vicky ko ab kya chahiye?

He is so proud ...

Ab toh har match TV pe nahi stadium mein dekh saktha haina? Woh bhi bilkul free...

Aur toh aur, ab match dekhne ke liye Geet ke saath ladhna bhi nahin padega...

And as the series is won by India Maan confirms his place in the side...

After all the matches the boys go shopping...

Maan pehle bar bahar aaraha hai...

Geet had warned him not to come empty handed...

Usually Maan gets some sports gears for himself whenever he goes abroad...

This time he can't do that...

He has no time to shop for himself, Geet has ordred him to get something for Dadi and that meant for everyone na?

Ab Geet kasie kahegi ki mere liye kuch lao...

Ye ladhkiyan hamesha aaise hi hohte? They never ask for anything but expect the men to get everything for them...

Now Maan gets Dadi her favourite chocolates...yes, Dadi is a chocoholic, if someone comes and opens the fridge at KM they would definitely think that there are a dozen kids in the house...

You will find loads of chocolates there...

And for Geet Maan is confused...

If she had asked for something he coul;d have somehow managed to get that for her...

But now he has no idea what she would want...

He had heard fron his teammates who have girlfriends saying that girls like soft toys...

Maan calls Sid and he says that Pari doesn't like soft toys...

Maan is all the more confused now...

He then calls Ridhima, she might give a better idea...

Ridhma syas that Geet too likes soft toys...

Anything would do, she asks him to get whatever he likes...

Maan gets her a lifesize teddy...a cuddly teddy...

Delhi pohunchthe hi Maan geet se milne seedhe sanjeevani jaatha...

Geet bhi Maan ko dekhne ke liye taras rahi thi...

She missed him very much...

Achcha hua ki TV pe Maan ki live action dekh pathi...

Par Maan sirf Geet ki awaaz sun saktha ...

Geet come to know that Maan is at sanjeevani...

She rushes to see him...

New OS ...Mystery Behind Mishty... posted

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Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Awesome update
maan back to the team and played well too!!!
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part 21
awesome...
Maan is too much...
but nice...
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good that maan fully n finally away from drinks
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Part - 23

Maan is waiting for her room...

Geet comes running and opens the door...

She gets emotional seeing Maan...

Geet: Maan

She looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Maan Geet ko aakhon se hi bhulatha...

Geet runs towards him...

Maan eagerly waits to embrace her with his arms wide open like SRK...

Maan had kept the teddy beside him...

Geet goes and hugs the teddy instead of Maan...

Maan is disappointed...

Geet: kitna cute haina? Mein isse cutie bhulathi hoon, cutie mere utie

Maan gets angry...

Maan singh Khurana samne kada hai, elkhin issko dekho?

Koi aur ladhki hothi toh ussko sirf Maan dikahyi detha, haina?

Par ye toh Geet handa hai, sab se alag...haina?

Maan: Geeet, shayad tum bhol gayi ki yahan koi hai, tere samne

Geet: doesn't care a bit...

She is busy with cutie...

Geet: Maan, I love cutie, thank you so much, cutie, Maan ko hai bolo

Geet starts playing with her cutie...

Maan: Geeet, mein tumse milne aaya hoon, bahut dhoor se

Geet: aapko patah ahi? Cutie mujhse milne London se aaya hai, haina cutie?

She hugs cutie again...

Maan can't wait...

Maan: Geet, tum iss cutie se khelthi raho toh hummara cutie cutie bachon se kaise khelogi?

Geet: kya?

Maan catches hold of her and pulls her towards him...

Maan: I missed you Geet

Geet: me too

Maan: Really?

Geet: what? You don't believe me?

Maan: tujhe dekhke toh aaise nahi lagtha

Geet: kyunki aap toh hamesha mere saath hi rehthe ho

Maan: toh ab mein tere dil mein rehtha hoon?

Geet: nahi nahi

Maan: nahi?

Geet: ye dekho, aap mere mobile mein rehthe ho, jab bhi aapki yaad aathi mein aapke videos dekhthe rehthi

Geet shows some clippings of Maan playing...

Maan: ab toh mein bhi tumme kabhi bhi kahin bhi apne saath lekhe jaa saktha

Geet: kaise?

Maan: aaise

Maan has recorded Geet playing with cutie...

Geet: mera cutie kitna achcha hai?

Maan: meri Mishti se zyada nahi

Geet: achhca?

Maan gets closer...

Geet steps back...

And as usual she is cornered...

Maan locks her within his arms...

He keeps staring her...

Geet apne aakhon se poochthi ki kya baat hai?

Maan: ab toh kissi video ki zaroorat nahi hai

Geet: kyun?

Maan: ab toh meri qwaab sach mein mere samne kadhi haina?

Maan lifts her...

Geet: hare, ye kya kar rahe ho? chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi chodoonga

Geet: Maan, ye Sanjeevani hai

Maan: toh?

Geet: yahan aaise nahi karthe

Maan: par Sanjeevani mein har koi yahi kartha haina? Meinne bhi yahi pyaar karna seekha hai, tumne hi mujhe sikhaya hai Geet

Geet's mobile beeps...

She has got a msg from chief, she has got to go...

Geet: chalo, ab mujhe jaana hai

Maan: lekhin Geet?

Geet: mein shamko ghar aathi hoon, mujhe Dadi se bhi milna hai

Maan: pacca?

Geet: promise, ab mujhe jaane do, bye

That evening...

Dadi arranges a special treat for Geet...

Maan makes sure that Geet's favourite items are on the menu...

With the little information Maan has from Sid and party Maan knows that Geet is a foodie...and she likes junk food, masaledar chaat type khana, and KM's kitchen is turned into a chaat stall today...

Dadi is also happy, she is also bored eating the continental dishes...

She has good company now...she can enjoy desi food with Geet hereafter...

Maan waits for Geet...

Geet pehle bar KM aarahi haina?

He wants to make it special...

He had a lot of plans for tonight...

He would make it a memorable evening today...

She can never forget it in her lifetime...

This is going to be her home for the rest of her life...

She is going to be a Khurana anytime...

Dadi too knows it, this is like her home comimg...it's her sasuraal...

Geet comes...but she has not come alone...

She has company...

Maan ka sara plan flop ho gaya...

Geet comes with Dr.Armaan and Dr.Ridhima...

What's wrong with this girl?

Ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardeghi...

Pehle toh mujhe chodkke uss teddy bear se romance karthi rehthi aura b dekho apne dosthon ke saath mere ghar pe party karne aagayi?

Ey mujhe kya samajthi?

Let me teach her a lesson, MSK kissi ke peeche nahi jaatha, log MSK ke peeche aathe hai...

Ab issko bhi patha chale MSK ke barein mein...

Now he won't be able to romance her...haina?

Maan is upset...

He is angry...he wouldn't talk with her now, let her come to me if she really loves me...

Bas, ab bahut ho gaya, ab MSK kissi ke samne aaise nahi kidgidayega...

Btu Geet too didn't expect them to come to KM...

They wanted to invite Maan and Dadi for their wedding...

Geet has to take them along...poor Geet, she is also little disappointed...

She knows very well that Maan would be mad at her...

Iss mein bechari Geet ki kya galthi hai?

Ab dekhthe hai ki Maan ki Geet ki swagat kaise kartha?

Aur Geet MSK ke gusse ko kaise sambalthi?...

updated OS...Mystery Behind Mishty...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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yeh geet sach much yeh dum anokha piece hai😆😆😆patha nahi aagey aagey maan ka kya haal hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 22
awesome...
nice one...
Maan is determined this time...
haye long distance calls...
Vicky is fine with Maan and Geet...
hmmm interesting...
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part 23
awesome dear...
nice...
oh ho these 2 have also come...
but this Maan thinks otherwise...
cont soon dear...

PS - yaar edit ur update number in the title...its 23 and now u gonna post 24...
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Part - 24

Dadi is surprised to see Dr.Armaan and ridhima...

She was also expecting Geet only...

Maan was so excited and he had been eagerly waiting for Geet...

Dadi had planned to leave them alone...

Now Dadi can't help Maan much...

Kitne din ke badh KM mein koi mehmaan aaye hai...

Dadi is very happy that Maan has made some good friends at Sanjeevani...thanks to Geet...

Atlast Maan is not alone and he has found some genuine friends...

Dadi: Dr.Armaan, what a pleasant surprise?

Dadi looks at Maan...

Maan is staring Geet...

Dadi: Maan bete, kya dekh rahe hai aap? Apne Geet ko pehle dekha hi nahi hai kya?

Dadi teases Maan...

Geet blushes...but Maan is angry...

Armaan: halo Maan, hummare taraf bhi dekho bhai

Maan: halo Dr, welcome

Ridhima: Armaan

Armaan: what?

Ridhi asks him to get Dadi's blessings...

Ridhima: bhool gaye kya?

Armaan: ohh haan, Dadi humme ashirvaad kijiye

Dadi blesses them...

Dadima: hamesha aaise hi ek dusre ke saath kush raho, Geet bete aap bhi toh ahsirvaad lelo

Geet suddenly bows...

Dadi looks at Maan...

Maan is still angry...he is looking somewhere else...

Dadi: jaldhi aapki shadhi ho aur aap apne sasuraal ko apne kushiyon se mehekaye, hum bhi intrezaar kar rahe hai, aapke sasooral aane ki

Geet is embarrassed...

Dadi: hare, hum subhe se aapke hi intrezaar kar rahe the, haina Maan bete?

Maan: aap intrezaar karthe hi raho, kissi ko aapki koi fikar nahi hai

Ridhi: Geet, what's wrong?

Ridhima asks Geet in a low tone...

Geet: mujhe kya oatha? Ye toh hamesha aaise hi rehthe hai

Ridhima: maybe he wanted to meet you alone

Geet: nahi nahi, hum subhe hi mille the

Ridhi: Armaan, invitation do

Armaan: Dadi, ye specially asapke liye hai, aap zaroor aake humme ashirvaad kijiye

Dadi: sure Dr

Armaan: Maan, tum Geet ke yadhoon mein Dadi ko bhoolna mat

Maan: mein kissi ki tarah bhooltha nahi

Ridhi: toh Dadi, hum chalthe hai

Armaan: haan Maan, humme shopping bhi karna hai

Maan: what? Nahi nahi, aap hummare saath dinner karkke hi jaa sakthe

Dadi: haan haan Dr, hum pehle bar hummare ghar aaye ho, Nakul

Dadi takes them in...

Maan doesn't even look at Geet...

Geet is disappointed...

He keeps talking with Armaan only...

They discuss about the England trip...

Ridhi is not interested in cricket conversations...

Dadi takes the girls to her room...

Maan takes Armaan to his gym...

Dadi: Dr. Ridhima aapne bahut ahccha faisla kiya hai, shadhi karne ki, shadhi ko zyada postpone nahi karthe, haina Geet?

Geet sharmathi...

Dadi: humme bhi jaldhi hummare Maan ki shadhi ki tayaariyan karna padega

Ridhi: warna Geet Maan ko lejkhe bhaag jayegi

Geet: Ridhi?

Dadi: Geet bete, Dadi se kya chupana? Hum toh sab jaanthe hai

Geet: dadi?

Dadi: jaise subhe se Maan ghar pe hi aapke aane ke intrezaam kar rahe the, humne pehle bar Maan ko aaise ghar mein rehthe hue dekha hai

Ridhi: mujhe patha tha, humme toh phir kabhi aana chahiye thi, ye Armaan mere baat ko kahan mantha?

Dadi: ab lagtha hai Maan bahut gusse mein hai

Geet: haan dadi

Dadi: aap fikar mat kijiye...Maan ka gussa jitna tez aatha uthna hi tez bhaag bhi jaatha

Ridhi: Geet, ab toh tumme isski aadat dalna hoga

Dadi: aap bahut sahi kehthe hai

Geet ko toh pehle hi isski aadat ho chuki haina?

Aur Geet ko ye bhi patha hai ki Maan bahut dher Geet se bina baat karein reh hi nahi saktha

Dadi: Geet bete, aapne apne maabaap se baat kiya haina?

Geet: kaise baat?

Ridhi: Geet, ye kaise sawaal hai?

Dadi: hare, shadhi ki baat

Geet: shadhi? kisski shadhi?

Ridhi: mere aur Armaan ki shadhi

Geet: haan, unko tph bahut pehle hi patha hai

Dadi: Geet bete, hum aapki shadhi ki baat kar rahe hai

Geet: kya?

Dadi: haan bete, shadhi ki maamlein mein dher nahi karthe, aapke gharwale aapki shadhi kahin aur fix kart5he toh kya karenge aap?

Geet: meri shadhi ki kya jaldhi?

Dadi: aaise aap sochthe honge, har maa apne beti ko koi achche se sasuraal mein jaana chahthe haina? Aur jaldhi apni beti ko apna ghar basane chahthi

Geet: lekhin papa ne kaha ki shadhi toh tabhi hogi jab mein chahathi hoon

Ridhi: Geet, uncleji keh rahe the ki tummare liye koi ahchca rishtha aaya hai, woh tumse baat bhi karna chahthe hai

Geet: kya?

Dadi: Geet bete, aapne ab tak Maan ke barein mein apne papa se baat nahi ki?

Geet: ye tum log kaise batein karthe ho? meinne toh abhi tak apne shadhi ke barein mein sacho hi nahi

Dadi: what?

Ridhi: Geet, jaldhi faisla karlo, kahin dher na ho jaye

Dadi: humme laga ki aap ne bathadhiya hoga, aapse toh ye kaam nahi ho saktha, chalo hum hi baat karthe hai

Geet: nahi nahi, pehle mein papa se baat karthi hoon

Dadi: toh ye lijiye, baat kijiye

Dadi gives her the mobile...

Geet looks at Rdidhi...

Ridhima is rxcited...chalo chalo, jaldhi karo...

Geet ko lagtha hai ki pehle Maan se baat karna hoga...lekhin ye log toh samajthe hi nahi...

Ridhima calls Handaji ...

Ridhi: Uncle, Geet aapse baat karna chahathi hai

She gives the mobile to Geet...

Geet: papaji

Papa: Geet bete, tum kahan ho?

Geet: mein? Mein Ridhi ke saath hoon

Papa: bolo Geet, kya baat hai?

Geet: woh... Papaji

Geet couldn't speak...

Paap: mein bhi tumse ek zaroori baat karna chahatha hoon

Geet: kya?

Geet is shocked...

Papa: pehle tum bathao, kya baat hai?

Geet: nahi nahi, pehle aap bathao

Papa: ye bahut kush kabri hai, tum sunthi toh bahut kush hogi

Geet: papaji?

Papa: ab hum apni pyaari beti ki shadhi karwana chahathe hai

Geet: itne jaldhi?

Papa: waise ek ek kar ke tummare sare friends ki shadhi ho gayi hai, ab Ridhima bhi shadhi kar rahi hai, tummare shadhi bhi hona chahiye haina?

Geet: lekhin papaji, woh...

Papa: humne toh ladhka bhi dekhliya hai, aur humme bahut pasand hai beta, hum sirf aapki kushi chahateh hai

Geet: aap meri kushi chahthe hai toh ye shadhi abhi rokho

Papa: kya?

Geet: haan, mujhe koi shadhi nahi karni

Paap: par Geet beta, humne toh teri shadhi pakki kardhi

Geet: kya? aap mujhse poochthe bina aaise kaise kar sakthe? Abhi unko bathao ki mujhe ye shadhi pasand nahi hai

Papa: lekhin Geet, mujhe laga tumme bhi pasand aayega

Geet: nahi, mein kissi ullu ke patte se shadhi nahi karoongi, samje aap?

Dadi: hare Geet bete, aap itna kyun sochthe ho? jaldhi jaldhi papa ko bathao ki aap kisse shadhi karna chahthe ho

Geet: papaji, meinne kabhi nahi socha ki aap aaisa karenge, mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni

Geet cuts the call...

Geet bahut pareshaan hojaathi...

OS... Mystery Behind Mishty ... Uppdated

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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uhoh yeh kya naya twist? cont soon hun.. fab update

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