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Posted: 11 years ago
part 52
awesome dear...
excellent...
wow the arrangements all are done for Maan and Geet's engagement...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 53

After sagayi Maan leaves for the training camp...

Geet returns to Delhi...

This time they couldn't bear the separation ...

Maan finds it hard to concentrate in his game...

Geet keeps calling him and messaging him all day...

And the nights are spent chatting with each other...

Wedding is planned after Maan's series...

It's after a month...

Geet needs to do the shopping for Maan too...

Maan is busy and hardly finds time to relax...

Geet keeps him out of the wedding planning as she wants him to stay stress free and enjoy his game...

But Geet keeps him updated about the happenings...

Maan misses the pre-wedding masti he could have with his Mishti...

How he hates this tours...

But it's his choice...his love...

So he had to get used to it...

Or he could take Geet along after their wedding...

Maan has secret plans for his HM too...

He wants to surprise Geet...

One morning at the Handa house...

Ranno wkaes Geet up early in the morning and says that someone is at the door wanting to see Geet...

Geet had been working late the previous night and is very tired...

She asks Ranno to send him back and tell him to come to Sanjeevani...

But that guy wouldn't leave without meeting Geet...

Geet goes to see who he is...

As soon as he saw Geet he smiled and said...

"Gud Morning m'am"

Geet gets angry..."tum yahi kehne aayein ho?"

He keeps smiling and greets her again with a red rose...

"have a nice day m'am, Maan sir sent you this..."

He gives her the rose...

Geet is happy...

She gets the rose and immediately calls Maan to thank him...

But Maan has switched off his mobile...

Maybe he is still sleeping...

Geet has lost her sleep and she gets ready...

She had to go to sanjeevani to submit a report...

As she is hurriedly stuffing her mouth and trying to finish her work at the same time someone is at the door again...

Vicky: Geeet, jaldhi aao

Geet runs to find the same guy smiling at her again...

Geet: tum kuch bhool gaye ho kya?

"ji m'am...this is for you, Maan sir wants to wish you gud morning..."

He gives her a card...

It's a ILU card from MSK...

Geet likes it very much...

She tries to call Man but his mobile is still switched off...

Geet is disappointed...

She wanted to speak with him...

She wanted to tell him how much she loved him...

Geet then rushes to work...

She goes to meet chief...

But someone is already waiting for her...

It's the messenger from Maan...

Geet gets irritated...

Geet: tum?

Messenger: welcome to sanjeevani m'am, Maan sir wishes you to have a very good day...

Geet: ab kya?

He gives her a bunch of orchids...

Geet: aur kuch?

Mess: nahi

He leaves...

Geet doesn't call Maan now...

Let him call her if he wants...

And what's this?

Aaj toh valantine's day bhi nahi aur meri b'day bhi nahi...

Phir ye sab kya hai?

Aur Maan ko achanak kya ho gaya?

Geet keeps the flowers on her desk and keeps thinking about Maan...

She forgets her meeting with chief...

Chief waits for a while and he leaves...

Ridhi reminds her about her report...

Geet runs only to find that chief has left...

She will have to wait till noon...

Geet goes to meet her patients...

And the first person she meets is that messenger...

Geet gets angry...

Geet: ye kaise mazak hai?

Tumme jo bhi dena hai ek saath dedo, mere waqt kyun karab karthe ho?

He just smiles and leaves a miss you card from Maan...

Geet too misses him very much...

She should call him and warn him to stop playing like this...

But Maan is not switching on his mobile at all...

This is frustrating...

She just needs to speak with him immediately...

What the hell is wrong with him?

Why is he not attending her call?

After a while that man comes again with a huge bouquet...

Everyone is astonished to see the size of that bouquet...

It looked as if someone has sent her a bloomimg garden...

" Maan sir wants you to have a pleasant day m'am"

Geet replies in anger..."thanks...ab aap jaa sakthe..."

Geet goes crazy as she couldn't speak with Maan...

She keeps thinking what's all this?

What's in Maan's mind?

Geet takes permission and goes home...

She couldn't do anything but think about Maan and his crazy messenger...

No sooner she reached her home than she found that man waiting for her...

Geet: what? you again? Babaji, kuch toh karo

Mess: gud afternoon m'am

Geet: tumme koi aur kaam nahi hai kya?

Mess: yahi mera kaam hai m'am

Geet: toh ab tummare Maan sir ne kya bheja?

Mess: have some ice cream m'am, Maan sir wants to tell you that this will cool you down

Geet: what?

Mess gives her an big tub...

It's her favorite black currant flavor...

Geet couldn't stop herself from tasting it...

Infact she keeps it down only after finishing it...

Really, that cooled her down...

She just keeps looking at the cards Maan sent again and again...

Ohhh she missed him a lot...

Kash Maan aaj Geet ke paas hotha...

Kash uss badar ke jage Maan kudh aatha?

Geet just wants to hug him and thank him...

And there comes the next message...

This time it's a gift...

Geet opens and finds Maan's portrait...

His latest one...

Geet keeps drooling looking at Maan...

And it's an hour since the mess last came...

There he is...

"Maan sir sent you a card m'am, have a wonderful evening m'am"

Geet opens the card ...and it's again Maan's picture saying..."Miss me Mishti?"

Geet wanted to yell...yes I miss you MSK...

Now Geet keeps looking at the clock and waits for the messenger...

And she keeps thinking now what would Maan send?

And Maan has sent a payal along with a note..."pls wear it Mishti"

Geet wears it...

And as she walks she could hear their jingles and she is reminded of Maan...

She keeps marching to and fro in her room...'

Hearing her payal's sound Ranno is surprised and she thinks that her Geet has really gone mad...

She hopes that Geet remains sane till her marriage...

The next card reads..."Did you hear the payal chanting Maan Maan Mishti?"

Yes, she heard only his name every time her payal made a sound...

At this rate she would definitely turn mad by the end of the day...

After birnging a card or a gift every hour the messenger finally came with the gud night message at 9 pm...

Geet is relieved that it's over...

"Maan sir wishes you Gud Night m'am...see you tomorrow"

Geet is shocked...kal bhi?

She had already missed a day's work...'she is yet to submit her report...

Chief would be mad at her...

Geet finally decides to get some sleep...

But with so many things surrounding her reminding Maan she could hardly sleep...

And Maan is still not answering her calls...

Next morning...

Maan calls Geet...

Geet: Maaan

Geet is so happy to hear from him atlast...

Maan: Gud morning Geet

Geet: Maan, ye sab kya hai?

Maan: woh Geet mein kal thoda busy tha

Geet hears the bell...

It's Maan's messenger...

Maan: toh Geet, akise raha mera surprise?

Geet: aapko mein badh mein dekhthi hoon

Geet goes and opens the door...

"Maan sir wishes you Gud morning m'am"

He give her a rose..."have a nice day m'am"

Geet: ha ha ha, aaise toh mera din hi kaarb hojaatha

She slams the door...

Maan: kya hua Geet? koi pareshaani?

Geet: nahi toh, mein toh aapke surprise ko dekhke bahut kush hoon

Maan: kyun Geet? tumme pasand nahi aaya?

Geet: Maaan, ye kya tamasha hai?

Maan: Geet, mein toh bas tumme madat karna chahatha tha

Geet: madat, kaise madat?

Maan: tum toh apne kaam mein bechare MSK ko bhool hi jaathe ho

Geet: what? meinne kab bhoola?

Maan: dekha? Tumme toh yaad bhi nahi hai ki tumne kya kiya

Geet: Maan, meinne kya kiya?

Maan: Geet, tumne toh do din se mujhse baat nahi kiya tha, aur ek msg bhi nahi choda

Geet: woh...mein conference attend kar rahi thi, issiliye bhool gayi hogi

Maan: tum toh bahut asaani se kehthi ho ki bhool gayi hogi

Geet: I'm sorry Maan

Maan: Geet, mein tere call ke intrezar kar karke pagal ho raha tha, issiliye meinne socha ki tumme meri yaad dhilane ke liye ek aadmi ko kaam pe rakhloon

Geet: what an idea sirji?

Maan: ab dekhtha hoon ki tum mujhe kaise yaad nahi karthi?

Geet: Maan, aapko patha hai ki kal mein sachi pagal ho gayi, maa ne toh mujhe doctor ke paas lekhe jaane ko socha tha

Maan laughs hearing that...

Geet: haso haso, mein toh raat bar aapke yaad mein so hi nahi payi thi

Maan: ab patha chala mera haal

Geet: Maan, ye kya mazak hai?

Maan: mazak nahi hai Geet, Geet apne Maan ko bhoolthi hai toh ye mazak kaise hotha?

Geet: achcha baba, galthi ho gayi, maaf kardho

Maan: aaise kaise maaf karoonga?

Geet: phir?

Maan: tum kudh mere paas aakhe maafi mangthi toh shayad mein maaf kar saktha

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, iss weekend tum Bangalore aajao

Geet: par Maan, achanak mein kaise aathi?

Maan: Vciky ke saath aao, meinne sara intrezaam kardhi

Geet: toh ye toh already planed hai?

Maan: haan Geet, jab tak mein tumse nahi miltha mein teek se khel bhi nahi saktha

Geet: achcha? Itne din kaise khelthe the?

Maan: wahi toh problem hai? jab se tum aayi ho, mere zindagi mere haath mein nahi raha

Geet: ha ha ha, joote

Maan: sachi Geet, ab toh tum meri zaroorat ban gayi ho

Geet: mein bhi aapse milna hi chahathi thi

Maan: see you soon

Geet: bye

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Part - 54

Bangalore trip...

Maan stays in the team hotel and Geet and Vicky stay at a nearby hotel...

Geet ko bahut bhura laga ki itne paas hokke bhi Maan se teek se baat bhi nahi kar sakthi...

Par iss waqt Maan ko apne cricket mein concentrate karna chahiye, haina?

Geet tries to convince herself that Maan's priority is his game now...

And after the game is over she can take over her Maan...

Then no one can stop her from seeing him and talking with him...

She just wants to stay with him as much as possible...

That night...

Maan couldn't stop thinking about Mishti...

And his game plans have taken the back seat...

Iss waqt toh Maan ka dimag kaam hi nahi kartha...

Kaise karega, Geet ne jo usske dimag ki kabsa toh karli...

Maan decides to keep dreamimg about his Mishti and that would energize him and boost his confidence...then he can face the opponents easily tomorrow...

Maan knows that he needs to take some rest...

He keeps hs Mishti in his mind and goes to his dreamland...

Geet ko bhi neendh nahi aathi toh raat ko dedh bhajhe call karke sawaal poochthi...

"Maan, app so gaye?"

Maan kaise sotha...abhi abhi bahut mushkil se Geet ke khayalon se nikhalke sone ki koshsih kar raha tha...:

Maan: nahi Geet, mein toh kuch zaroori baat soch raha tha

Geet: kaise zaroori baat?

Maan: woh hummare SR mein tum kya pehnogi? Wasie mujhe lagtha ki tumme koi tension lene ki zaroorat nahi hai, waise uss din toh tumme apne pehle b'day ka dress pehenlena chahiye, tum kya kehthi ho Geet?

Geet: Maaan, aap bahut bhure ho, Dhust Danav

Maan: achcha, itne raat ko mere neendh karab karke tum achchi ho gayi ho, aur mein bhura hoon?

Geet: aap so rahe the?

Maan: nahi, mein toh Ghana sun raha tha?

Geet: achcha, kaunsa Ghana? Chak de...chak de India

Geet begins to sing...

Maan: Geet, kal mera match hai

Geet: jaanthi hoon

Maan: tum chahthi ki mein kal match nahi kheloon?

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geet, mujhe lagtha hai ki mujhe atleast ek ganta sona hai, hum kal ye batein continue karenge

Geet: sorry, aap sojao, gud night

Next day...

The chinnaswamy stadium is brimmimg with energy...

And Geet is there as Maan's guest cheering him...

What else Maan wants?

India choose to field againt Eangland...

And Maan fields in the boundary...

Very close to Geet...

And it's so special for him...

Playing for India and also for someone very near and dera, his Mishti...

Maan enjoys very bit if it...

And the crowd cheers him specialy for his come back...

Maan even interacts with some kids during drinks break...

He signs autographs for them and they are also very happy...

A lot of things have changed this time...

Maan could see the world around him in a different way...

Verything seem to be perfect...and there is happiness all around him...

He could grack some jokes and enjoy a fun moment with the kids...

And their joy gives him double joy...

And Geet too likes the changes...

He is now the new favourite among kids...

MSK starts loving his life more than ever...

He feels as if he is the happiest person on the earth...

And when the second innings starts Maan is ready to go out in the middle and fire the guns...

India are chasing a low total of 220...

And the bowlers have done their job pretty good and it's now up to the batsmen...

India are a strong batting side at home...

So everyone bets that it's all over and the game is India's now...

But the wicket plays the devil and the English bowlers make the most of it...

Suddenly the cheers are gone and there is silence in the ground...

India are a mere 87/ 4 in 35 overs when Maan comes to bat...

This is s huge oportunity for him...

The kids cheer him as he enters the field...

The England players are confident that it's their game now...

The expectatins are high and this is a huge responsibility for Maan...

The first ball Maan faced is a short ball and it nearly missed his face...

Maan is angered by it and decides to teach the bowler a lesson...

He comes forward to hit a big six in the next delivery but the bowler was clever to pitch the ball up this time...

And the keeper doesn't miss the stumps...

Maan is out of the crease and is stumped...

What a silly mistake...

And his anger is still not under his control and India had to pay the price for it...

Yes, India couldn't come back after that and the wickets stumble in quick succession...

And England wins with a few balls to spare by 65 runs...

India are all out...

The fans are very disappointed...

And the blame game begins...

And the easy target this time is Maan...

The media makes up a story that it's was Maan's hangover that had caused him the wicket and he is still struggling to quit drinking...

Maan knows that it's his fault...

He had to control his anger and focus on the game...

He had to learn to be patient and wait for the right ball...

Geet is the one most disappointed...

She feels that she is unlucky for Maan...

She always brings trouble for him...

Geet: ye sab meri galthi hai, mein aapke saath nahi hothi toh ye sab nahi hotha

Maan gets angry with this stupid hypothysis of Geet...

Maan: Geeet, aaisa kuch nahi hai

Geet: nahi, mujhe patha hai, aap bhi yahi sochthe haina?

Maan: kya?

Geet: jab se ye aayi hai mere saath sab kuch galat hi hotha

Maan: Geeet, tum pagal ho gayi ho

Geet: dekha ab toh aap bhi mujhe daandhthe ho

Maan: Geeet

Geet; mein chale jaathi hoon wapas, aur ab kabhi aapko pareshaan nahi karoongi

Geet tries to leave...

Maan holds her back...

Maan: Geet, tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho, tum mere saath Chennai aarahi ho, agle match dekhne

Geet: nahi, mein Delhi jaathi hoon, mein aapke saath nahi aa sakthi

Maan: Geet, mujhe dekho

Maan lifts her chin...

Geet looks into his eyes...

She is very upset...

She wanted to see his succeed,,,,

She just wanted to see him happy...

He wanted Maan to get what he loves, his cricket, he just wants to play cricket...

Maan: Geet, isme teri koi galthi nahi hai, ye meri galthi hai, uss kambat ne toh mere gusse ka faida utaya, ye toh hummari ladayi hai, iss bar mein har gaya toh agle bar dekho Geet, tummra Maan zaroor jeet jayega, lekhin uss ke liye tummare saath hona bahut zaroori hai

Geet: par Maan

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha? Ab jaldhi apna samaan pack karlo, Vicky tickets lekhe aayega

Geet: mere aana itni zaroori hai?

Maan: haan, mujhe toh tummare galatfami dhoor karni hai, mere liye nahi toh kam se kam tummare liye toh mujhe ye stabit karna hoga ki Geet paas hothi toh Maan kabhi nahi har saktha

Geet smiles...

Maan asks her to come closer...

Geet moves forward...

Maan holds her waist and pulls her closer...

Maneet passionate hug...mahiii...

And just as Maan promised he takes revenge at Chennai...

He makes a century and india win easily...

The Chennai crowd loves his batting and the Chennai super kings are impressed by his sudden popularity and they want to sign Maan for their team...

They tell Dhoni and Dhoni feels that it's a great idea...

And the IPL is coming soon and the bidding for MSK is tough this time...

Geet is very happy and they return to Delhi victorious...

Dadi is the one worried...

These two are not showing any interest in their shadhi...

Jab dekho ek dusre ke saath baat karthe rehthe par kuch kaam ki baat nahi, bas bak bak karthe rehthe...

Aur Dadi ko hi sara kaam karna pada...

Luckily she has got her Sanjeevani pariwaar to help her...

Armaan and party take charge of the marriage arrangemants and they don't want to disturb Maneet as they have come together after three years...

Shadhi ke ab sirf do din bakhi hai...

Geet is busy in the parlour with Ridhi...

And the girls spend hours at the parlour...

Maan doesn't like this at all...

Geet has no time for him, and why does she waste her time for make-up?

She is a natural beauty, and this is the llast few hours they have got before their marriage...

Then they wiil become husband and wife and ther will be no fun...

Maan thinks that it's high time he did something...

He wants to spend these hours with Geet and make it special...

He calls Geet...

Only the attendrer at the parlour answers..."m'am abhi busy hai, aap ek gante badh call karo"

Maan gets very angry and he just comes to the parlour to meet Geet...

Geet has applied mask and is waiting ...

Maan: geeet

Geet is surprised...

Geet: Maan?

Maan: Geet, tum chalo

Geet: Maan, aap yahan kya kar rahe ho? ye ladies parlour hai

Maan: Geeet, tum abhi mere saath aao

Geet: par Maan, mein beech mein kaise aa sakthi?

Maan: mujhe kuch patha nahi, ab tum mere saath aarahi ho, and that's final

Geet: aaise nahi aa sakthi?

Maan: nahi aa sakthi?

Maan pulls her hands...

Geet: rukho Maan

Maan takes the water sprayer and splashes water on her face...

The attender tries to stop him but no one could stop MSK...

Geet knows that it's no use fighting with Maan now...

She herself washes her face and goes with Maan...

Geet: ab kya hai?

Maan: Geet, tum kitne din yahi rahogi?

Geet: kya? Maan, mein bas aaj subhe aayi thi

Maan: mein nahi aatha toh tum waqt pe shadhi ka mandap bhi nahi pohunchthi

Geet: Maaan, aap ko ye sab maloom nahi hai toh aap isse dhoor raho

Maan: mein toh bas apne Mishti se dhoor nahi reh saktha

Maan pulls her closer and embraces her in his arms...

Geet: ah ha ha ha, isski koi zaroorat nahi, mein abhi bhi naraaz hoon

Maan: tum naraaz ho?

Geet: haan

Maan: par kyun?

Geet: Maan, aap aaise sba ke samne mere mazak udathe toh mujhe gussa nahi aayega? Ab sab mera mazak karenge

Maan: kisski himmat hai meri Geet ki mazak udane ki? Tum bolo Geet, mein sabko sambaloonga

Geet: aap? Ye sara tamasha toh aapke wajhe se ho raha hai

Maan gets angry...

Maan: what?

Geet: aapne mera appointment waste kardhi, ab mein kal kya karoongi?

Maan: tumme kuch bhi karne ki zaroorat nahi hai Geet, tum jaise bhi ho bahut achchi ho

Maan looks at her admiring her beautiful eyes...

He just keeps staring at her...

Geet: Maaan, I have to do my eyebrows, aur mujhe apna hair straight karni hai

Maan: par Geet, tumme curls bahut achche lagthe hai

Geet: par shadhi ke samay toh mujhe perfect lagna haina?

Maan: meinne kaha na, tum abhi bhi Aakash se uthri Pari hi lagthi

Maan cubs her face...

Geet looks into his eyes...

It's full of love for Geet...pyaar bare naina...

Maan: tum toh hamesha meri pyaari Pari ho Geet, meri Mishti

Geet toh bigal jaathi...

Maan takes her out for dinner and they enjoy a romantic night under the moonlight...

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part 53
awesome dear...
lovely...
Maan is so naughty...
my God he kept on giving her gifts...
and its coz Geet darling forgot to contact Maan for 2 days...
so sweet Maan babu...
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part 54
awesome dear...
oh Maan doesnt like this distance even if its for Geet to get ready for the marriage...
oh ho Maan and his anger...
these people are always behind Maan...
stupid people...
but Maan proved Geet's worry for good...
hahaha Daadima is worried seeing these not getting married...
cont soon dear...
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nice update...
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Part - 55

As they sit under the moonlight and keep drooling...

Geet looks at the moon and smiles...

Her cheeks turn red...Geet is blusjing...

Maan had noticed that...

Maan: Geet, kya baat hai? tum toh bahut sharmathi ho, ye mein pehle bar dekh raha hoon

Geet: kya? Aapne mujhe sharmathe pehle kabhi dekha nahi?

Maan: dekha toh hai, par ye toh bahut alag nadaz ka hai

Maan winks with a naughty smile ...

Geet: what? aap na, bahut gandhe sochthe ho, Dhust Danav

Maan: mein aaise nahi sochtha, gandha toh teri soch hai

Geet: chatto, humme ab jaana haina

Geet tries to escape...

Maan holds her back...

Geet tries to move but Maan is holding her duppatta...

Maan pulls it and Geet resists...

And in that pulling and pushing her duppatta flies off...

Geet and Maan try to get hold of it but end up in each others arms...

Geet feels very nervous without her duppatta and bows her head not able to face Maan...

Maan: Geet, mujhe dekho Geet

Geet aur sharmathi...

She burries her face in his chest...

Maan strokes her back...

Maan: tum abhi bhi aaise sharmathi toh HM pe kya karogi?

Geet gets excited hearing that...

Geet: hummara HM?

Maan: hare wah Geet, tum toh bahut tez ho, lagtha hai mujhe hi peeche choddegi tum aaise mamle mein

Geet's face turns even more red...

Maan: Geet. tum toh sharmathe hue bahut hot lagthe ho, mein toh abhi ke abhi tujhe lakhe bhaag jaatha, aur meinne toh sare intrezaam bhi karli, usse thoda prepone bhi kar hi skathe, waise mujhe abhi koi aur kaam bhi nahi hai

Geet: mujhe patha hai aap kitne bade badmaash ho'geet pushes him off and runs...

Maan follows her and catches her...

Maan pulls her hard and Geet comes within his embrace within seconds...

Maan hugs her and kisses her forehead...

Geet: Maan, mein toh aapse yahi kehna chahathi thi ki meinne hummare HM ke liye ek bahut ahccha jagah select kiya hai

Maan: meinne decide karliya hai Geet, hum na NewZealand jaayenge

Geet: mahi UK, whana ek bahut romantic county side hai, jab mein UK mein thi mein ek bar wahan gayi thi, aur apko patha hai ki meinne aapko kitna miss kiya tha? Jahan sab log apne pair ke saath kushyan mana rahe the mein akheli aapke barein mein sochke beit rahi thi

Geet thinks of the past...

Maan: ye toh tummari galthi hai, tumme kisne mujhe chodkke jaane ko kaha, tumme toh mujhe bhi tere saath lekhe jaana tha, abhi tak toh hum secnd HM ke plans bana rahe honge

Geet: whai toh, issiliye meinne tabhi decide karliya tha ki hum upne HM manana wahi aayenge, aur tabhi se meine sapne dekhna shuru kardhi

Maan: kaise sapne Geet?

Maan hugs her tighter and starts teasing her nape...

Geet: Maan

Maan: kyun Geet, kya mein tummare sapne se behthar hoona?

Geet: mera sapna HM ka tha

Maan: woh, toh tum issiliye zaraaz ho gayi? Par Geet aaise khule jagah pe mujhe bhi toh sharm aathi hai, lekhin tum fikar mat karo, hum gadhi mein continue karenge

Maan lifts Geet and takes her to the car...

Geet: Maan, ab mujhe dher ho rahi hai, jaldhi karo

Maan: haan Geet, mein jaldhi jaldhi katam kardhoonga

Geet: Maaan, mujhe neeche utharo

Maan: Geet, toh phir tummara sapna adhura reh jayega

Geet: haan Maan, toh hum UK hi jaarahe haina?

Maan: nahi nahi tummein sirf HM ka matlab haina? Jahan bhi ho tummara Maan tumme disappoint nahi karega, samjhi tum

Maan tries to kiss her...

Geet: ha ha ha, hum UK jaa rahe hai, samjhe aap

Maan: mahi NZ

Geet: aap ko NZ itna pasand hai toh aap chale jao, mein nahi aa rahi hoon

Maan: par Geet, meinne sare bookings kar dhi

Geet: kya? Mujhse poochna chahiye tha na?

Maan: meinne socha tum isske barein mein kya janogi? Par Geet, mein toh bahut galat tha

Maan teases her...

Geet: aapne akhela decision liya haina? Toh phir aap akhela hi jao

Maan: par Geet, bookings toh do log ke liye haina?

Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi

Maan takes out his mobile and calls Sid...

Sid is sleeping...

Maan: hai Sid

Sid: halo Maan, gud night

Sid cuts the call...

Geet snatches the mobile...

Geet: ye aap kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: hare, mujhe bhi company chahiye haina? Afterall ye mera pehla HM trip hai

Geet: toh aap Sid ko lekhe jaoge?

Maan: hare Geet, tum pagal ho gayi ho kya? Tumne mere barein mein aaisa socha hi kaise?

Geet is relieved...

Maan: meinne suna aaise mamale mein Sid expert hai, woh bahut sare ladhkiyon ko jaantha jo aaise waqt pe humme ahchce company dethe jab hummara girlfriends hummra gil thodthe

Geet: Maan, aap ko dusri ladhki chahiye?

Geet starts beating him...

Maan: tumne hi kaha na Geet, tum nahi aa sakthi

Geet: toh aap kissi aur ke saath jaoge?

Maan: HM pe akhele jaatha toh mere izzat ka kya hoga?

Geet: aapka izzat? Mere izzat ka kya hoga?

Maan: tum chaho toh tum Ridhima ko lekhe jao, mein Armaan se baat kartha hoon

Geet: kya? Aap kpi hot chick ko lekhe jaoge aur mein Ridhi ko?

Geet bahut upset ho jaathi...

She starts to run away...

Maan: Geet, mein mazak kar raha tha, rukho

Geet: aap jao, ussi ladhki ko shadhi bhi karlo

Maan: Geeet, shadhi toh mein tumse hi kar saktha

Geet: ha ha ha, mein sirf shadhi ke liye hoon?

Maan catches hold of her and looks into her eys...

Geet is confused...

Maan: Geet, shadhi toh ek bahana hai, tum chaho toh mein abhi tumme apna saktha

Maan unborrons his shirt...

Maan makes fun of her again...

Geet: aap ko har waqt mazak hi soochtha?

Maan: ye mazak nahi hai Geet

Maan pulls her and starts kissng her with vigour...

Geet is helpless...

She struggles to breath and Maan releases her...

Geet: aapki shararatein toh ab had se badkar jaathe hai

Maan: Geet, shadhi ke pehle ka thrill shadhi ke badh nahi hoga, mein chahatha hoon ki tum bhi sabko enjoy karo

Geet: aapke saath rehthi toh mein bhi aapke jaise pagal ho jaathi, babaji, mujhe maaf kardho, ye sab inkke galthi hai

Maan: Geet, issmein koi galthi nahi hai, shadhi ho ya na ho, tum toh kab se meri ho chuki ho aur mein tera, haina?

Geet: batein karna toh koi aapse seekein

Maan: kya karoon Geet? mein toh majbhoor hoon, aaise ladhki ke saath akhele hona aur usse dhoor rehna toh nahut hi mushkil hai

Maan hugs her from behind...

Geet: Maan, chalo, ab chalthe hai

Jaathe waqt...

Geet: toh Maan, humUk hi jaarahe haina?

Maan: nahi Geet, NZ

Geet: aap bahut bhure ho, aap mujhse sach mein itna pyaar karthe toh aap mere saath UK aao

Maan: Geet, mujhe aaise tum black mail nahi kar skathi, hum NZ jaa rahe hai, and that's final

Geet: toh aap mujhse pyaar nahi karthe ho?

Maan: ye sare sawaal shadhi ke badh poocho Geet

Geet: shadhi ke bahd kyun? Abhi jawaab do?

Maan: Geet, jawaab dene ke liye mein toh tayaar hoon, par tum toh tayaar nahi hona?

Geet: kya?

Maan: tummare sawaal ka jawaab tumme shadhi ke din hi millega

Geet: kaise?

Maan: uss raat tujhe patha chalega ki Maan tumse kitna pyaar kartha

Geet sharmathi...

Maan: dkeha, jab bhi tum mere saath rehthi toh mera dimag kaam hi nahi kartha

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: hum toh ghar ka rasthe se dhoor aagaye

Geet: Maan, aap jaan boochke aaise kar rahe ho, mujhe ghar jaana hai, abhi

Maan: toh jao

Maan stops the car and opens the door for her...

Geet: Maaan

Maan: mein toh kahin nahi jaanewala hoon Geet, mein toh aaj pure raat yahi rehna chahatha hoon, apne Mishti ke saath

Geet: Maan, kal hummari shadhi hai

Maan: toh?

Geet: Maan, ye kaise mazak hai? sab humme dhoondh rahe honge

Maan: dhoondhne do

Geet: mujhe na, aapke saath aana hi nahi chahiye tha, babaji, inko ab kaisa naya nasha chad gaya hai? dadi ma wahan pareshaan honge, papaji, papaji bhi mujhe dhoondh rahe honge, ranno, ranno toh ab bhoothni ban chuki hogi, babaji, ab mein kay karoon? Kaise ghar jaaoon?

Geet begins to complain...

Maan closes her mouth...

Maan: chup...bilkul chup

Geet blinks...

Maan: ye dekho

Maan shows his watch...

Maan: it's only 9 pm, we have a lot of time

Geet: for what?

Maan: for everything

Maan winks...

Geet: aap sach mein pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: relax Geet, ye hummari shahdi ke pehle ka aakhri raat hai, isse memorable banana haina?

Geet: kaise?

Maan: ab hum pure raat ek saath yahi rehhenge toh tum iss raat ko kbhi nahi bhool paoogi, and I promise Geet, I'll not disappoint you

Geet: what? aapka kya plan hai? aap bhool jao, mujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai

Maan gets a cake and a few candles from the back seat...

He lights them and asks Geet to blow them off...

Geet is surprised...

Maan: actually aaj mere bachelor party hai, mere friensd mere intrezaar kar rahe honge, par mein iss raat ko tummare saath bithana chahatha hoon Geet, kal se hum couples honge, so let's celebrate our last single night together

Geet is relieved hearing single night...so no problem for her to stay with Maan tonight...

They celebrate together and enjoy those precious moments when Maan is still Maan, the most wanted bachelor and Geet is still Geet Handa, every boy's dream girl

Maan drops her home at mid-night...

Ranno was a little stressed till Geet returned...

Geet went to bed with a thousand clorolful dreams about her life with MSK...

Next day the wedding takes place with all the rituals...

Geet ka grahapravesh bhi hojaatha...

Geet is very happy to enter KM with full rights...

Now this is no longer Dadi's house...

It's her own house now...

Now the Khurana pariwaar including Mr.Maan Singh Khurana belong to Geet Khurana ...

Geet just couldn't believe that she is now officially Geet Maan Singh Khurana...

And for Maan it's a dream come true...

Though Geet has been his constant support now she is going to be with him 24*7...

Her presence would definitely change Maan's world...

Maan just waited for her to come and fill the vacuum in his life...

Now he feels like a true family man...

He never thought shadhi would change one's perspective of life so much...

Now he knows that he has the responsibility of his family on his hsoulders and he would try harder to succeed...work harder to make his wifey proud... erase the bad memories of the past and fill the future with fun and happiness...

And the long wait ends...it's their SR...

Geet is still nervous...

She has been with Maan before but never felt so tensed...

Though they know each other so well they are yet to discover a lot about each other tonight...

This is crazy...

Geet feels like facing some examination...she is really scared...

And Maan has always hinted to be a romantic freak...

And this is the ultimate test for Geet...

She doesn't know how is she going to fulfil Maan's expectations...

But nothing was scary that night...

And she had very little to do for Maan is the master blaster in this field too...

Geet's work is confined to a night watchman...just to stay along with Maan and give him company as he hits the ball for six everytime without fail...

Geet palys a perfect match for Maan...

They slowly start to bulid a strong partnership that would last for a lifetime...

Next morning...

Geet wakes up and finds Maan still sleeping...he is tired after hitting a double century last night...

Geet too feels tired...

She moves towards Maan and Maan pulls her closer...

Geet hugs him and sleeps over his broad shoulders...

Maan is in a very good mood...

He kisses Geet...

Maan: love you Mishti

Geet: love you too Maan

Maan: you are too good

Geet: aapko abhi abhi patha chala? Itne din patha nahi chala?

Maan: par Geet, mein toh kal raat ki baat kar raha hoon

Geet blushes...

Maan: mujhe toh tumse bahut kuch seekhna hai

Geet: achcha?

Maan: toh let's start the lesson now

Geet: Maan, subhe subhe?

Maan: Geet, ab SR ho gaya hai toh raat ka intrezaar kyun karein?

Maan starts to remove the quilt...

Geet pulls it back...

Geet: Maan, humme packing bhi karna haina?

Maan: kaunsi packing? Mujhe koi match nahi hai

Geet: Maan, bhool gaye ho? aaj raat hummari flight hai, NZ ke liye

Maan: par meinne Adi se kehkke cancel kardhi, hum UK jaarahe haina?

Geet:nahi Maan, hum NZ hi jaa rahe hai, meinne Adi sir se lehdiya ki tickets cancel mat karo

Maan: par Geet, tumme NZ pasand nahi hai

Geet: kyun pasand nahi hai? agar aap saath ho toh mujhe NZ ya UK mein koi farak nahi padtha

Maan: ye hui na baat? HM ke liey toh sirf mein aur tum khafi hai, jahan bhi ho tum saath ho toh maza aayega, haina?

Maan pulls her and starts his duty...

Geet is also ready for a morning shot...

After lunch they staret packing and ehad to NZ...

The first two days are spent in their suit itself...

Then there is this match betweem NZ & Australia which Maan wanted to enjoy with Geet sitting among the crowd...

He had never got this opportunity to enjoy a match with his Mishti...

That's why he planned his HM trip here...

Geet too had been waiting to have fun with Maan in the galleries...

They enjoy the match Indian style loud and sound blowing whistles and beating drums...

The camera catches the new coulple of the cricket world...

The Sanjeevani gang along with geet's family enjoy seeing them on TV...

Vicky exclaims in front of everyone..." that's my little sister Geet, with her hubby MSK"

And this continues with Maneet mahi mahi...

**************THE END***********************

see you in "Ek Anokhi Grahapravesh" Thread...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3988018/mg-ss-ek-anokhi-grahapravesh-updated-last-pt-on-pg-39-jul-2

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