New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh. such a sweet update dear.. u r being 1 of my fav writer.. nice ud dear..😳
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Part - 27

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aap hamesha pinne ke barein mein hi sochthe ho

Maan: kaise sochtha Geet?

Geet looks at him...

He is still staring her...

Maan: tum mere dimag se nikhalthi toh mein kissi aur baat ko soch saktha

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan geet, aajkal toh mein apne barein mein nahi, sirf tummare barein mein sochke rehtha

Geet: isska matlab hai ki aap bimar ho

Maan: achcha?

Maan gets closer and closer...

Geet: jaldh hi isska illaj karwado, warna mujhe aapko milne apple lekhe pagal kana aana padega

Maan laughs...

Geet: kyun hasthe ho? mein bahut serious baat kar rahi hoon, agar aaise hi chaktha toh aap zaroor pagal ho jaooge

Maan: waise mein toh pehle hi pagal ho chukka hoon

Maan pulls her closer and Geet almost hits him...

She tires to get away...

Maan holds her back...

Geet: Maan, chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi chod saktha

Geet: mein chilathi toh aap ko abhi pagal kana jaana padega Mr.MSK

Maan: ek baat bathao Geet

Geet: kya?

Maan: log patients ko apple hi kyun dethe? Kuch aur phal kyun nahi dethe?

Geet laughs...

Geet: aapko ye bhi patha nahi? Aap toh kehthe ho ki MSK sab jaantha hai, ye choti si baat nahi jaanthe?

Maan: tum doctor ho, tumme hi patha hoga

Geet: aapne suna nahi? " Daily an apple keeps the doctor away"

Maan: Geet, usske aage bhi bolo

Geet: what?

Maan: " if the doctor is smart keep the apple away"

Maan looks at Geet and winks...

Geet blushes...

Maan: aaise doctor milthi toh mein peena kya khana bhi chod saktha hoon

Geet: batein karna toh koi aapse seekhe

Maan: nahi batein karna toh tummare aankhon se seekhe koi

Maan looks into her eyes...

Geet: bas bas, aaj ke liye yahi kaafi hai

Geet pushes him off...

Maan: what? Geet, hummare paas sirf do din hai

Geet: toh kya? do din mein sab kuch karna chahathe ho?

Maan: tum chahthi toh kar sakthe hai Geet

Maan hugs her from behind...

Geet: ha ha ha, chodo mujhe, pehle ye bathao ki mujhe kidnap karke kahan lekhe jaa rahe ho?

Maan: mujhe kya patha?

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum kahan jaana chahathe ho?

Geet: mein toh ghar jaana chahathi hoon, chalo ab mujhe ghar choddho

Maan: what? Itne jaldhi?

Geet shows the watch...

Maan: what?

Geet: Maan, 11 bhaj chuke hai

Maan: so?

Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Maan: mujhe bhi

Maan tries to get to her lips...

Geet turns him away...

They start walking back to the car...

Geet is so tired...she stops...

Maan immediately lifts her and takes her back to the car...

Geet: batsman hone ka ek aur faida hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: kabhi bhi gadhi karab ho toh lift miljattha, haina?

Maan: haan, mere biceps ko dekha tumne?

Maan shows off his biceps...

Geet touches his arms and Maan loses his senses...

Maan: inn haathon ka kamaal toh tumne on-field dekha hai, kabhi kabhi off-field bhi dekho inka kamaal

Maan moves her hair aside and slowly makes way to her lips...

He caresses her cheeks and places his fingers on her seductive lips...

She is frozen...

Maan traces her lips with his long fingers and gets ready to savour them with his...

Geet stops him by holding his fingers...

Geet: aapke lambe hathon ka kamaal meinne pehle hi dekhliya hai, ab toh chalo

Maan: Geet, tumne pura picture dekha nahi, picture abhi baki hai

Geet: haan haan, pehle ticket toh lelo

Maan: what?

Geet: hare, pehle shadhi, phir pura picture dekh sakthe

Maan: chalo ek trailor toh bantha hai

Geet: nahi

Geet moves back and hits the door...

Maan leans forward and reaches her lips...

Geet couldn't resist...

For she also needed it badly...

There is no stoping Maan...Maneet liplock...mahi...

Maan gets carried away and he is ready to jump to the next step...

But Geet gets back to her senses and stops him...

Maan: ye toh teek nahi hai Geet, it's like forcing a pinch hitter to defend

Geet: b'coz it's defence time, aap ke basha mein bole toh abhi bhi aap 12th man hi ho, jab aapka moka aayega tab aap khel sakthe, tab tak ke liye toh filal aapko apne andar ke hitter ko kaabhu mein rakhna padega

Maan: tum toh aasani se kehthi ho, par tumme kya patha ki ye kitna mushkil hotha, woh bhi itne ahcchi shuruvaad ke badh beech mein apne aapko rokhna bahut hi mushkil hai, khaas karkke humme

Geet: humme? Isska kya matlab?

Maan: you know men , and their desire

Maan strokes her hair as he is uncontrollable...

Geet: kyun? Hum mein koi farak nahi padtha hai kya?

Maan looks surprised...

Maan: toh aag donno taraf hai, toh aaj toh apna jalwa ho jayega

Maan is overwhelmed...he almost jumps off his seat...

Geet: rukh jao

Maan: nahi rukh saktha

Geet: Maan, mera phet

Maan: what?

Geet: mujeh bahut zor se bhook lagi hai

Maan: aur mera kya?

Geet: aap ka aaj vrath hai

Maan: ye toh zabardasthi hai

Geet: Maan, I'm famished

Geet puts her hands on her tummy and acts as if she has not seen food for years...

Maan: chalo, isski nautanki shuru ho gayi, ab toh iss drama queen ka kuch karna hi padega

Geet: aapne kuch kaha?

Maan: kuch nahi, tum zara apna drama bandh kar sakthi?

Geet: kya? mein drama karthi? Aapko lagtha ki mein joot bholthi hoon?

Maan: hare, meinne kab kaha ki tum jootie ho?

Geet: jootie? Aap gadhi rokho, abhi

Maan: what?

Geet: mujhe nahi jaana aapke saath

Maan: Geet, tum pagal ho gayi ho

Geet: pagal? Ab mujhse nahi hoga

Geet tries to stop the car...

Maan: tum aaise nahi manogi?

Maan stops the car and ties her hands with her duppatta...

Geet struggles but she couldn't stop him...

Maan looks at her...

Geet is scared...

Maan: ab toh mein kuch bhi kar saktha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: mujhe koi nahi rokh saktha

Geet: Maaan

Maan: tum bhi nahi

Geet: nahi, aap aasie nahi kar sakthe

She almost pleads...

Maan: ab mein dekhtha hoon kit um kya karthi

Geet: mujhe maaf kardho, pls, mujhe kuch mat karo

Maan: ab ayega maza

Maan gets closer and Geet stares him and is helpless...

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Maza aagaya update padhke...



Maan bohut hi naughty hota jaa raha hain...kyun na ho Geet ka nasha jo chadha hain...ab isse kaise chudwayegi?...he he...

ab Geet ko toh pata hi nahi hain ki Maan ko kaise roke...but hume bohut maza aa raha hain...Lage raho Maan babu...


Aur yeh apple wala dailog to lagta hain ki Maaneet ko dekh ke hi banaya hain...😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 27
awesome dear...
lovely...
Maan is too much...
but Geet went to see watch the film leaving him...
hahaha...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
so naughty update.. maan is being shamles.. nice 1..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan tho din ba din naughty hothe jaaraha hai aur geet ko tang karna ka koi bhi mauka miss nahi karraha hai😉
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Part - 28

Geet looks at Maan...

Ye toh bina kuch pithe hi itna nashe mein kaise ho saktha?

Hare Geet! ye nasha toh zindagi bar ka hai...kabhi nahi uthrega...

Haan...ye pyaar ka nasha hai...

Pine ki nasha se bahut bada aur zyada katharnak...

Tum zara sambalkke rehna...

Iss nashe mein bhi aadmi galthi kar saktha...

Tum jaanthi haina ki kaise galthi?

Geet turns pale thinking about it...

Maan keeps drooling...

Geet se apna nazar hatatha hi nahi aur toh aur kareeb aathe rehtha...

Ab toh donno ke beech hawa bhi nahi chal sakthi...

Geet: mein chilaoongi

Maan: chilakke dekho, yahan koi nahi aayega

Geet: nahi, babaji mere madat karenge, haina babaji?

Maan: aaj toh babaji bhi tummare madat nahi karenge

Geet: kya?

Maan looks into her eyes...

Geet closes her eyes in fear...

Maan whispers in a husky tone...

Maan: tum babut koobsurat ho Geet

Geet is shocked...

She opens her eyes and stares...

Maan: kya dekhthi ho?

Geet: ye bahut ahccha hai, mein toh bahut dar gayi thi

Maan: achcha? Toh tum toh sab ke liye tayaar ho?

Geet: what?

Maan: toh Geet, mein bhi tayaar hoon

Geet: Maaan?

Geet stares him...

Maan: what? Meinne toh shuru bhi nahi kiya hai?

Geet: aaj toh yahi katam karthe hai

Maan: nahiii

Geet: bas bahut ho gaya aapka nautangi

Maan: Geet, aaisa moka bar bar nahi milega, socho

Geet: mere haath kholdo

Maan: woh mein nahi kar saktha

Geet: kyun?

Maan: tum kahin bhaagjaathi toh mere sazur ji ko kya jawaab dunga?

Geet: ha ha ha, aapko apne sazur ji ki itni fikar hai toh itni raat ko unkke pyaari beti ko aaise choron ki tarah utakke kyun aathe?

Maan: what? Mein aaise kyun karoonga? Meinne pehle hi unse kehdiya ki aaj aapki beti mere saath bahar jaarahi hai, aap usska intrezaar mat karna

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, warna tummare papaji abhi tak police station mein complaint karthe haina?

Geet: papaji, aap ne mujhe inkke saath kaise jaane diya? Ab dekho, aapki beti kaise pasgayi? Babaji, ab mein kya karoon?

Maan closes her mouth...

Maan: chup...bilkul chup...

Geet : hmmm hmmm

Maan: tum ek minute bhi chup nahi reh sakthi ?

Geet bites his finger...

Maan: Geeet, ye mera finger hai, finger chips nahi

Geet: ab toh mujhe yahi khana padega, haina babaji

Maan: what?

Maan takes off his hands...

Maan: ek minute, yahan paas mein mere friend ka dhaba hai, hum wahan jaathe hai

Geet: jaldhi

Maan: tummare gharwale tumme kaise sambalthe? Issiliye toh tummare papaji ne kushi kushi tumme mere saath bhejdhi, aaj toh woh chain se sogaye honge, mein yahan tummare saath pasgaya hoon

Geet: meinne kab kaha ki mujhe bahar lekhe jaao, aap hi chahathe the mere saath jaane ki, haina?

Maan: agle bar tumme pehle kuch khilakke lekhe aana padega, tum toh bhook mein bhoothni banjaathe ho

Geet gets even more angry...

Geet: mein bhoothni hoon toh aap bhooth ho, Dracula ho, aur

Maan: lo aagaya happy singh ka dhaba, pehle isske tank fill karna padega, warna ye mujhe hi khajayegi

Happy is very excited to see Maan...

Maan comes with his friends often for a drink here...

Geet just runs in...

Maan parks the car and comes...

Geet has already ordered...

Maan is shocked...

Maan: Geet, tumne toh pure sanjeevani ke liye order kardhi, woh log bhi aarahe hai kya?

Geet: ye toh mere liye hai aapko kuch chahiye toh aap order karlo

Maan: what? Tum ek doctor hokke bhi itna kcuh khathe ho?

Geet: kyun? Hum khana nahi khathe hai kya?

Maan: khathe ho, woh bhi ek hafthe ka khana ek saath khathe ho

Geet: aapko nahi khana hai toh mat khao, par mujhe disturb mat karo

Geet toot padhi...

Maan just keeps wondering how she could eat so much...

Happy comes seeing Maan...

He welcomes Maan with a bangra...

Hare Maanu, bale bale, hare lucky, chaki, munna aao, Maan aaya hai

Sab Maan ko dekhke bahut kush hothe hai...

Maan tips them heavy na?

They feel that they are lucky whenever Maan comes...

Geet stops eating and looks at Maan...

He has friends even at this dhaba?

Geet wonders what kind of a person he is...

He is mostly rude and so proud about himself that he never respects anyone...

But when he is drunk he becomes another man altogether...

Maan dabang banjaatha...

So everyone loves him then...and also he asks everyone to join him for dinner and pays for everyone...even the boys who work there have a great feast that day...

Sometimes Maan serves them himself...

That's why they just love him so much and is happy that he got selected in the Indian side...

Whenever Maan plays Happy switches on the TV and they all cheer Maan...

They admire him so much...

Geet is happy that he is loved by all alike...

And he treats them alike...

Happy looks puzzled seeing Maan with a girl...

He keeps staring Geet...

Maan had never got a girlfriend...

And he hates them...

Geet is embarrassed...

Geet: bhajji, khana bahut badiya hai

Happy: oye, thanks ji

Maan: ye Geet hai

Maan introduces Geet...

Happy: weocome to happy singh da dabha

Geet smiles...

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet signals him to pay attention to the others too...

Maan smiles and looks at Happy...

Happy: oye mera sher, kya chakka marthe ho yaar! Uss angrezi mundon ko hummara Punjabi kamaal dikahdiya tumne, tussi great ho

Maan: toh kaise ho sab?

Happy: happy toh hamesha happy hai yaar, bas Maan ko dkehna tha, tum toh bahut din se yahan nahi aaye ho, humme laga ki Maan ab cricketer bangaya aur humme bhool gaya

Maan: aaise kaise bhool saktha? Mein thoda busy tha

Happy looks at Geet and smiles...

Happy: busy toh hona hi tha, Lage raho Maan babu

Happy winks ...

Geet blushes...

Happy: yahi haina tumme busy rakhne wali? Haye, kitne soni gudhi hai?

Maan: haan

Happy: oye bale bale, oye chotu, motu, Maan ki setting ho gayi hai, oye bale bale, oye, dol shol bhajao, happy bahut happy hai

Music on hotha...dol shol bhajne laga...

Happy asks Geet to dance...

Geet thoda dance karthi...

Happy drags Maan...maan full on masti kartha...

And suddenly...

Happy looks at Maan and winks...

Maan pareshaan hojaatha...

Happy: toh Maanu, hojaaye?

Maan tries to stop Happy...

But it's too late...

Chotu desi daru lekhe aatha...

Geet stares Maan...

Geet: Maan, aap na, bade DHust Danav ho

Geet gets angry and leaves...

Happy: hare behenji, rukhjao

Maan: Happy Singh, tum toh mere love story ka sad ending karwana chahthe ho yaar

Maan runs after Geet...

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part 28
awesome...
lovely dear...
Maan is too much...
but Geet is also smart...
oh ho what has Happyji done...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 29

Happy understands what Maan is saying atlast...

Happy: chotu, ussko wapas lekhe jao, Maan bhaji ko ab usski company ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, unko sachi saathi milgayi, haina behenji?

Maan holds Geet back...

Geet: kyun? Aap ko meri zaroorat thodi nahi padegi, haina?

Maan: hare Geet, tum abhi bhi mujhpe vishwas nahi karthi?

Geet: kaise karthi? Aap kehthe kuch aur karthe kuch aur

Maan: Geeet

Geet: mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni

Maan holds her hand and turns her towards him...

Geet tries hard to release from his hold but she could barely move...

Maan: mujhe dekhke bolo Geet

Geet can't answer...she can't meet his fiery eyes...

Maan: ussko kaise patha hoga ki mein ab badal gaya hoon

Geet: aapne pehle hi ussko bathaya kyun nahi?

Maan: toh ye bhi meri galthi hi hai?

Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi, aapne pehle inkaar bhi nahi kyat ha, achcha hua aaj mein aapke saath hothi, warna

Maan loses his temper...

He tightens his hold almost crushing her bones...

Maan: warna kya hai Geet?

Geet is realy scared...

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: bathao Geet, tum kya kehna chahthi thi?

Geet: woh...meinne bas yuhi

Maan: toh tumme abhi bhi shak hai ki mein peetha hoon, haina?

Geet: aaise nahi hai

Maan: meinne tumse vada kiya hai Geet, toh mein vada kaise thod saktha?

Geet: ye aap bol rahe ho?

Geet looks at him and smirks...

Maan ne kitne bar Dadi se vada kiya tha, haina babaji?

Agar Dadi se diye vada hi thod saktha toh Geet ka kya?

Maan: Geet, ye sach hai ki meinne 100 bar vada kiya hai aur ussko nibane ki koshish bhi nahi ki

Geet: ye koi nayi baat hai kya? sab ek jaise hi hothe hai

Maan: lekhin iss bar aaise nahi hoga

Maan looks into her eyes...

He is very serious...

Geet had to believe him ...

Maan: aaisa nahi hai ki mein tummare samne natak kar raha hoon, waise MSK aaise kabhi nahi kartha, khaas karkke tummare samne toh nahi Geet, patha nahi ki tummare aankhon ko dekhthe hi mujhe kya ho jaatha? Tummare samne mein joot nahi bol patha

Geet: achcha ji? Aap mujhse kabhi joot nahi bolthe? Ye toh sabse bada joot hai

Geet teases him...

Maan gets angry,,,,he stares Geet...

Maan: ye mazak nahi hai Geet, I'm serious, tum chaho toh mujhe test kar sakthi ho

Geet: nahi nahi, mere paas koi lie detecter nahi hai

Maan: haina? Tummatre paas

Geet: kahan?

Maan looks into her eyes...

Maan: tummare bade bade aankhon se koi kaise bach saktha

Geet: toh tayaar ho jao Mr.Maan Singh Khurana

Maan: mein tayaar hoon

Geet: toh teek hai, ab aap mujhe ye bathao ki aapka sabse bada fan kaun hai?

Bang comes the answer...

Maan: sameera

Geet is shocked...

Geet: what? Toh mein aapki sabse badi fan nahi hoon kya?

Maan: meinne kaha na? tummare samne mein joot nahi bol saktha

Geet: aaise moke pe aapko mera naam lena chahiye tha

Maan: aaise kaise ho saktha? tum toh mujhe abhi abhi jaanthi ho, lekhin sam toh 5 saal se mujhe support kar arhi hai

Geet is a little jealous...

Geet: Sam?

Maan: haan Sameera ko pyaar se sab aaise hi bhulathe hai

Geet: pyaar se aap bhi ussko Sam bulathe ho, haina?

Maan: haan, aur jab bhi Chandigarh mein match hotha Sam mujhe support karne zaroor aathi

Geet: 5 saal se aap ke peeche padhi hai?

Actually Sam's brother is a ranji player and she comes to support him and she also likes Maan as a friend of her brother...

Man continues...he enjoys how Geet has become so possessive in such a short time...

Geet: emin bhi aapko support karthi thi jab se aap pehle bar India team nein aaye

Maan: abhi nahi, jab se mein Ranji khel raha hoon tab se , ab tum hi bolo Geet, kaun meri sabse badi fan hai?

Geet: haan haan, sameera hi hai, ab kush?

Geet looks disappointed...

Maan: Geet, kahin tum usse jalthi toh nahi?

Geet: nahi toh

Maan: iss bar tum bhi mere saath Chandigarh aarahi hona? Mein tumme Sam se milwatha hoon,bahut pyaari hai, tumme bhi bahut pasand aayegi

Geet: mujhe bhi? Toh aapko Sam bahut pasand hai?

Maan is in a naughty mood...

Maan: ye bhi koi poochne ka sawaal hai ?

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: Geet, mein toh mazak kar raha tha, btu I'm sure ki tum Sam se bahut jalthi ho

Geet: meinne kaha na? mein kissi se nahi jalthi, aap celebrity ho, aaka hazaroon fans honge, mein sabse jalthi rehoon kya?

Maan: lekhin sam toh lakhon mein ek hai

Geet: toh kya hua? Woh kabhi bhi Geet Handa nahi ban sakthi, samje aap?

Maan: ye oth hai, iss duniya mein , duniya mein kya? pure universe mein tere jaisa koi nahi hoga

Geet: haan, kyunki mein sabse alag hoon

Maan: haan haan, koi bhi ladhki apne pehle date pe apne boyfriend se itne sawaal nahi karthi

Geet: mein aaise hi sawaal karoongi, mujhe haq hai, samje aap?

Maan: ye haq tumme kissne diya hai?

Geet: koi nahi, mein kudh legayi, ab toh aap chahe toh bhi ye haq mujhse nahi cheen sakthe

Maan: hare, cheen ne ka sawaal hi nahi hotha

Geet: aaise kabhi sochna bhi mat

Maan: meinne toh apne sare haq khodhi Geet

Geet: batein karna toh koi aapse seekhe

Maan: aur pyaar karna toh koi tummare shararat aankhon se seekhe

Geet apne nazar chukathi...

Maan lifts her chin...

Maan: nahi Geet, mujhse aakhen nahi churao, mujhe apne Mishti ki aakhon mein khone do

Maneet eyelock...mahi...
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geet feeling jealous sam ki naam sunnkar aur maan mazey lerahehai😆

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