New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 18
awesome dear...
excellent...
Maan is too much...
he has come to know about about Geet and Daadima...
but he hasnt lost his cool...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 19
awesome dear...
excellent...
so Maan is sure about Geet...
Daadima is so happy...
now Geet and family are yet to know about this...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updates maan ko patha chalgaya geet ki wajah se dadi usse milne nahi aayi par phirbhi wo apna pyaar confess kiya dadi se and dadi ready bhi hogayi indono ki shaadi keliye
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Part - 20

Next day...

Maan ghar jaane wala hai...

Geet has come to say goodbye to dadi(?)...

Geet toh Dadi se hi baat kar rahi hai...

Aur Maan bahut cool rehtha...

Woh bhi Geet ko bother nahi kartha...

Geet ko hi bhura lagtha...

Ye achanak issko kya ho gaya?

Hospital se jaathe jaathe mujhe bhool jayega kya?

Geet says goodbye to Dadi and is about to leave...
Maan doesn't look at her at all...
she keeps looking at Maan as she leaves...
she is desperate...she wants him to sop her...
and Maan stops her...
But only to ask her to call Sid...
Geet feels very bad...
Maan Sid ko bhulatha...aur Sid turanth hazir hotha...
Geet bhi peeche hi aathi...maybe something's wrong...
Sid hugs Maan as soon as he comes...
Maan has a big smile on his face...
Geet ko tang karne mein jo maza aatha woh toh Maan ko bahut pasand haina...

Ab inkki dosti pakki ho gayi...

Ye toh Geet ki hi galthi hai...

Sid comes and they both keep talking some secret...

Geet wants to know what's going on...

Kahin ye Sid pfir se Maan ko apni Gandhi aadat ki yaad toh nahi dilatha?

Zaroor dal mein kuch kala hai...

Mein aaise kabhi nahi hone doongi Mr.MSK...

Jab tak ye Geet hai aap ussko choo bhi nahi sakthe...

Geet ka shak toh sahi nikhla...

Ye donno kissi party baat hi kar rahe hai...

Agar aaisa kuch hua toh Geet iss Sid ko zinda nahi chodegi...haina babaji?

Sid: Maan, tumne Geet ko bathadiya haina?

Maan: nahi

Sid: kya? tumne abhi tak Geet ko bathaya nahi?

Maan: nahi

Sid: phir woh kaise aayegi?

Maan: mujhe patha hai ki ussko wahan kaise lana hai

Sid: mujhe nahi lagtha ki Geet aayegi, Geet ko aaise parties pasand nahi hai

Maan": tum kyun fikar karthe ho? Geet zaroor aayegi

Sid: are you sure?

Maan: 200% sure

Sid: but I doubt, it's not going to work

Maan: tum bas waise hi karo jaise mein kehtha

Sid: teek hai

Maan: toh Sid, bye

Maan winks...

Geet: Sid, Dr.Sid

Sid looks at Maan and smiles...

Sid: toh Maan sataurday night ko bhoolna mat, Good Luck pub, 8 bajhe

Maan: don't worry, mein kaise bhool saktha?

Sid: I'll be waiting

Maan: pari aarahi haina?

Sid: ya ya, she is coming

Maan: then I'll be there at 8 pm sharp

Sid: see you there, take care

Maan: bye Sid

Maan has conveyed the message, now Geet will be there on Saturday night...

Maan ko watch karna haina? Kahin phir se talli MSK banjaatha toh?

Aur toh aur woh Pari wahan kyun aayegi?

Geet bahut pareshaan hojaathi...

She needs some help...

She goes to see Ridhima...

Ridhi ko Sid ke barein mein patha hai...

Woh Geet ko koi achcha idea degi...

Aaise mamale mein Ridhi Geet se zyada experienced haina?

Shayad Armaan bhi unki madat karega?

Ridhi: Geet, kya baat hai? tum itna pareshaan kyun lagthi ho? ohhh, Maan ghar chala gaya haina? Issiliye tum udaas ho?

Geet: mazak mat karo, ye toh bahut serious problem hai

Ridhi: problem? Kaise problem?

Geet: tum uss Pari ek barein mein kya sochthi ho?

Ridhi: nice girl, bahut ahchi Dr banegi

Geet: hare, woh nahi hai

Ridhi: toh phir, kya hai?

Just then Armaan comes...

Armaan: Geet, tum Pari ke barein mein jaana chahthi ho? toh phir mujhse poochna chahiye, hamehsa kissi ladhki ke barein mein kissi ladhke se hi poochthe, haina?

Armaan winks...

Ridhi: what?

Armaan: she is the new hot chick of sanjeevani, hayee, do saal pehle kyun nahi aayi?

Ridhi: Dr Armaan?

Armaan: sorry dear, lekhin sach toh yahi hai

Ridhi gets angry...

Geet: Ridhi, he's right, sare ladhke usske peeche hi padhe hai

Ridhi: haan haan, meinne bhi dekha

Ridhi stares Armaan...

Armaan: tum log batein karo, mujhe koi kaam hai

Armaan wahan se escape hotha...

Geet: ye Sid toh kissi bhi ladhki ko nahi chodtha

Ridhi: mere samne usske naam mat lo

Ridhima gets angry...

Geet looks worried...

Geet: lekhin Maan bhi? Sare ladhke ek jaise hi hothe hai, haina ridhi?

Ridhi: haan, ye Armaan bhi

Geet: you know Ridhi? This Sid is after something, this Saturday, Good Luck pub mein kuch toh honewala hai

Ridhi: tumme kaise patha?

Geet: meinne Sid aur Maan ki baat sunli

Ridhi: zaroor koi naya chakkar hai, Geet, tum Maan Sid se dhoor rakho toh hi achcha hoga

Armaan jaathe jaathe Geet ke baat ko sunkke jaatha...

Good Luck Pub, Saturday night...teek hai...

Geet: Ridhi, meinne uss Sid ko Maan se millake bahut badi galthi kardhi

Ridhi: Geet, ab kya karogi?

Geet: mujhe jaise bhi Maan ko rpkhna hoga, kahin Maan phir se peena shuru karthe toh?

Ridhi: you are right, I know these alcoholics, har subhe vada karthe aur har raat uss vade ko bhool jaathe, it's a very serious problem, and repetitive too

Geet: haan ridhi, issiliye toh mujhe bahut dar lagtha

Ridhi: you don't worry Geet, hum kuch karenge

Geet: teek hai ridhi, tum mere saath aayegi na? Saturday ko

Ridhi: haan, zaroor, mujhe toh ab Armaan pe bhi koi barosa nahi hai, hot chick? My foot

Geet: so, Are you in?

Ridhi: yep, let's do this, ey ladhke kya humme ullu samjthe hai?

Ladhkiyan toh jung mein utharne ke liye tayaar hai, toh boys, get ready to rock the party...

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Posted: 11 years ago
niice updt...bt no maneet moments...so maan 200% sure Geet will come
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
poor geet trap in maan's plan
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 20
awesome dear...
nice...
what is Maan planning along with Sid?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 21

It's Saturday...

Geet goes to Ridhi's apartment...

Ridhima is still confused about her dress, what to wear...

Geet: Ridhi, jaldhi karo, kitne dher lagayegi?

Ridhi: hare, bas do minute

Geet: waise Dr Armaan kahan hai?

Ridhi: usska koi important appointment hai, chief ke saath

Geet: chief ke saath?

Ridhi: haan, kyun?

Geet: kuch nahi, meinne suna ki chief aaj kissi friend se m,ilne chale gaye

Ridhi: kya?

Geet: hare, tum jaathe haina, ye Sanjeevani ke rumors

Ridhi: par mujhe toh thoda shak hotha

Geet: aur kitne dress badlogi? Hum kya kissi fashion show mein ramp wlak karne jaarahe hai?

Raidhi: tum nahi jaathe ki wahan ke girls kaise kapde mehenthe, tum toh behenji lagthi ho Geet, tum bhi apna dress badaldo

Ridhi forces Geet to change her dress...

Something hot and Geet looks pretty in that...

At the Pub...

Sid is eagerly awaiting Geet's arrival...

Maan knows that she will be here anytime...

Every girl has come with her boy firend...

These two are the odd ones out...

Geet and ridhi sneak in...

They feel very uncomfortable...

It's very noisy and crowded...

But Maan easily spots Geet...

She looks gorgeous as usual...and a little hotter today...

Geet looks for Maan and finds Sid...

Geet: Ridhi woh dekho

Ridhi: Sid, Geet Maan nazar nahi aatha

Geet: haan, aur ye Pari bhi kahin dekhayi nahi dethi

Ridhi finds Pari sitting in a table waiting for her drinks...

Ridhi: Geet, woh dekho, Pari wahan hai

Someone gets her the drink...it's Maan...

Geet: haaa, babaji, ye kya hai?

Ridhi: Geeet, Maaan

Ridhi shouts...

Geet closes her mouth ...

Geet: kyun chilathe ho? meinne bhi dekha hai

Ridhi: ab kya karein?

Geet: dekhthe hai ki kya hotha?

They begin to drink...

Geet is very disappointed...

How can Maan do this?

Maan phirse kaise pee saktha?

Geet is just worried about maan's drinking, Geet has done so much to keep him away from this bad habit, and now here he is back drinking...

Log sahi kehthe hai, iss bimaari ki koi illaz nahi hai...

Geet is almost in tears...

But she won't let him get back to drinks...

She has to do something for Dadi's sake...

After a couple of drinks they start dancing together...

Where's the party tonight...

Maan has lost his senses...he is drunk...

Geet tries to get him out of that place...

But Maan is enjoying himself...

Ridhi is stranded in the middle...

She triers to get out...she hits someone...it's Armaan...

Ridhi: toh Dr. Armaan, kahan hai chief?

Armaan: baby, tum mujhe galat samajthi ho

Ridhi tirs to leave...Armaan holds her back...

Armaan: Ridhi, I just came to help you

Ridhi: joot mat bolo

Armaan: I swear

Ridhi: you liar

Armaan: Ridhi, chief out out town hai

They also begin to dance...

Ab sirf Geet akhele reh gayi...

Dr.Sid haina?

He comes and asks Geet for a dance...

Geet is mad at him...

Geet: tumne aaisa kyun kiya?

Sid: what? Meinne kya kiya?

Geet: tum Maan ko yahan kyun lekhe aaye? Dekho woh pfir se pee rahe hai

Sid: nahi Geet, it's just cola

Geet: mujhe ullu mat banao

Sid: sachi, lo, tum taste karkke dekho

Geet: mujhe nahi chahiye

Maan comes near them...

Maan: Geet, tum yahan?

Geet: kyun? Aapko shock laga?

Maan: waise mujhe toh pehle hi patha tha kit um zaroor aaoge

Geet: kya?

Maan: meinne hi tumme iss party ke barein mein batahya tha, haina?

Geet: aapne vada kiya tha

Maan: vaad?

Geet: bhool gaye? Itne jaldhi?

Maan: Geet, tumse vada karkke mein ussko bhool saktha hoon kya?

Geet: toh yahan kyun aaye ho?

Maan: mein sirf Sid ko madat karne aaya hoon, haian Sid?

Sid: haan Geet, meinne hi Maan ko yahan bhulaya tha

Geet: isski madat? Jaise madat?

Maan: ye kissiko pyaar kartha hai

Geet: what? Phir se?

Maan: ye aaisa pyaar nahi hai Geet, sacha pyaar hai, haina?

Sid: haan Geet, this time it's real, I'm in love Geet

Maan: actually Geet, ye tumse kuch kehna chahatha hai

Geet is shocked...ye Sid beech mein kyun tapaktha?

Hare babaji! meinne kya socha aur yahan kya ho raha hai?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan Geet, ye tummare saath dance karna chahatha hai

Sid: haan Geet, just one dance

Maan: come on Geet, kitne pyaar se bhula raha hai

Geet blinks...pyaar? meinne soha Maan mujhe pyaar se bhulayenge, magar yahan toh sab kuch ulta ho raha hai? ab mein kay karoon? Ye Rdidhi kaha hai?

Geet searches Ridhi...

She is dancing with Armaan...

Sab ka setting ho gaya, seva Geet Handa ki...babaji, ye teek nahi hai...

Maan pushes them on the dance floor...

Maan shows a thumbs uo to Sid...

They begin to adnce...

Maan joins Pari...

Everyone is dancing merrily...

Maan ka nazar toh Geet pe hi hai aur Geet bhi Maan ko hi dekhthi rehthi hai...

Maan: excuse me...

Maan comes near Geet, he wants to tell her something...

Geet is excited...Maan gets closer and whispers...

Maan: Geet, ye kya kar rahi ho?

Geet is confused...ab ye kya kehna chahatha hai?

Maan: hare Geet, tum apne partner ko dekhkke dance karo, warna ussko bhura lagega

Geet: what?

Maan: haan, dekho bechare kitna udaas hai?

Geet looks at Maan desperately...

Maan: tum fikar mat karo, meinne Geet ko samjaadhi

Maan smiles and leaves...

Sid thanks him...

Geet: babaji, aap jaanthe haina ki mein Maan se kitna pyaar karthi? Phir ye sab kya hai? aap mujhe kahan fusana chahathe ho?

Geet looks at sid...

Sid toh kahin aur dekh raha hai...

Geet looks in that direction...

He is looking at Pari...

Geet ka shir goomtha...ye sab kya hai?

Geet ko chakkar aatha...

Sid: Geet, Are you alright?

Sid holds Geet and takes her to the table...

Sid: Geet, what's wrong? Galthi se tumne koi gaalt drink toh nahi piya haina?

Maan and Pari too come...

Maan: Geet, tumme kya hua?

Maan bahut pareshaan ho jaatha...

Maan: it's all my fault, iss Sid ke chakkar mein tumme kamakaam fusaya meinne, I shouldn't have done this

Geet: mein teek hoon

Maan: chalo, hum chalthe hai

Geet: lekhin Sid

Sid wahan nahi hai...

Maan: usska kaam ho gaya

Maan smiles...Geet gets angry...

Geet is confused...

Geet: aap kyun hasthe ho? mere haal dekhke aapko hassi aatha hai?

Maan: woh Sid haina?

Geet: haan, Sid ka kya ?

Maan: Geet, Sid tumse

Geet: mujhse?

Geet bahut tension hothi...

Maan: sorry Geet, Sid tumse nahi, Pari se pyaar kartha hai

Geet: what?

Maan: wahan dekho, donno ek dusre ke bahon meinne kaise kho gaye hai

Maan shows Sid dancing with Pari...

Geet: toh aapne mujhe yahan kyun bhulaya?

Maan: sid ki madat karne

Geet gets angry...she tires to leave...

Maan holds her back...

Maan: aur

Maan stops...

Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock

Geet: aur?

Maan gets closer and closer...

Geet apne nazar churathi...

Geet ko kuch kuch hotha haina?

Maan lifts her and takes her to the dance floor...

They start dancing...

BGM...

Chura liya hai tumme jo dil ko...

Nazar nahi churana sanam...

Badalthi hai ye zindgani...

Kahin badal na haye na hum...

Lo karlo baat Maneet ki setting bhi ho gayi...

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maan n sid dono ka setting hogaya
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lol sioo bad maan.. bechari geet kahan phas gayi.. cont soon hun..

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