SS: Silence... UPDATED Epilogue

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She was sitting on the shore looking at the vast expense of the sea. RK beach is a famous one in vizag and she was enjoying the cool atmosphere. It was around 8 in the evening and only few people were there it being an weekday. Geet looked around trying to find maan. He had said he will come back in a minute.

This was there first date and she was suddenly feeling insecure sitting alone. Suddenly Geet felt a hand engulfing her in a hug . It was maan , she didn't need to open her eyes to confirm.

As she opened her eyes she saw him holding an ice-cream cone infront of her and smiling.

" I had gone to get this for you geetu...U love butterscotch,right??"

" For few moments i felt so alone maan, as if you just left me..."

" Oh geetu!! don't you know i love you so much...I can never stay away from you dear!! Just remember one thing geetu..This maan can never stay away from his dearest geetu...love you a lo dear!!!"


..." geet, hey geet, get up dear.you will be late for office"

As geet got up she found meera looking at her and waking her up. For a moment she was dazed to even understand but slowly realization sank in that she had dreamt yet again...like every promises maan made to her his promise of staying with her forever is broken as well...In fact it had been almost two years they had even met and almost four years of their break up... only some broken promises and unsaid words is left between them along with life long silence...

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part 12 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3566079&TPN=30�

part 13 :https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3566079&TPN=34�

part 14 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3566079/ss-silence-updated-epilogue?pn=40�

part 15 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91489939

part 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92202193

part 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92356243

Part 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92525464

Part 19-A:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92884816

Part 19-B:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93210564

part 20::https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93335013

part 21 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93764552

part 22 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94186586

part 23 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95203718

part 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95274885

Part 25: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95716497

part 26:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96011487

part 27:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96279193

part 28:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96948326

part 29:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97406965

part 30:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97965032

Last part :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98943930

Epilogue : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99539344


Guys this is my very first attempt to write something so please bear with my mistakes. I don't know how that came out but will look forward to your views.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good job dear!
I almost believed the dream.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thats beautiful for a first timer...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me on the phone ll comment frm laptop after reading 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue dear.! Loved it very much 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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looking forward to read more...please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pretty nice start buddy.The name itself is so attractive.Love to read further.Pls Pm me the next parts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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captivating start ...wud luv to read more... plz do continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start ! do continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing!! 😃
I love RK beach and I could imagine Geet sitting there waiting for Maan! Only if dreams could come true!!

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