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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting story ...maaneet broke up ...waiting to know th reason ..
plz ddo continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Geet sat near the window looking out blankly. In spite of the fact that she had a hectic day at office she didn't feel tired enough to sleep. Looking out at the dark night she felt the feeling of loneliness that often makes her vulnerable. Memories can be such dangerous thing. It can ruin you breaking your soul into pieces.

She looked towards meera who was sleeping peacefully. For the first time in life she envied meer. Meer could sleep peacefully. She closed her eyes as slight breeze came from the open window blowing her curls a little. Tonight she didn't want to sleep, tonight she wants to drift back to those beautiful days of past when she was someone else and life hadn't robbed her of her hope'''''

Class 11-A was very excited. They were having first outing of the year'' a shopping trip to Big Bazaar. It was a beautiful day and an entire class of 40 excited young girls were shouting at the top of their voice and gossiping round as they were taken for big bazaar. It took a 15-20 minutes' drive to reach there.

Geet was quite engrossed in shopping that she missed the announcement for them to board the bus back to school. She finished emptying her wallet buying clothes she didn't even need in first place and decided to have an ice-cream from the food bazaar above. Once she reached she bought a large cone of butterscotch ice-cream and turned only to be bumped by someone. She was totally disbalanced and was about to fall and to save herself she held on to a stack nearby. However the poor ice-cream fell down and was smashed immediately by the same stranger who was trying to balance himself as well.

She looked at her ice-cream as if it was some diamond pieces scattered and angrily looked into two most beautiful pair of eyes. There was something magnetic about those eyes that geet couldn't break the eye lock. However she remembered the condition of her ice-cream soon enough and her dreamy look turned into an angry glare as she spat," What the hell did you just do?"

" I am extremely sorry miss, but I was pushed from behind by the crazy crowd. I hope you are not hurt"

" You ruined my ice-cream."

The stranger had an amused smile as he said," well you can always get another one. "

" Why should i? Anyway I have already spent half of my pocket money in my shopping spree."

" well 'ummm'"

" I lost my ice-cream due to you. You get me another one. "

" okay "

Geet did not expect the stranger to oblige so quickly and suddenly felt that she was kind of rude. But remembrance of her smashed ice-cream soon took her out of the guilt feel.

" What flavour do you want? They have chocolate, strawberry and pesta"

" I want butterscotch. "

"ummm'actually there's no butterscotch flavour left. How about strawberry?" , he said eyeing at her pink attire.

" No, I hate strawberry flavour."

" But you like pink right?"

" so what, I hate the flavour."

" chocolate?"

" It's not good. It kind of I don't know'I don't like it "

" oh god!! Save me"'he whispered and then asked," how about pesta?"

" I am allergic to that'. I don't know anything. You have to get me a butterscotch ice-cram bas. It's due to you that I lost the one I bought."

" Okay, let's get out of big baazar, and I will get you some from outside."

" No I can't go. I am not allowed to leave the big baazar without warden," and suddenly it dawned on her that none of her friends are there. Watching her panicked expression he asked," What's wrong?"

" Oh no!!! I can't see any of my friends'..none of them are here"

" hey, cool down girl'I am sure they might be somewhere downstairs."

Maybe her tensed face or her innocent eyes compelled him to go along with her. They reached the cash counter in the ground floor and geet enquired," Where are the people from Vijeta internationals?"

The lady at the cash counter looked at her weirdly before answering," they had left an hour ago."

Geet panicked. She was new to the place and since she has joined the school just a week ago she doesn't even remember the address. Tears pooled in her eyes blurring her vision. Suddenly the stranger asked, " Hey, why are you crying? You can simply go back yourself"

She was quite for few moments before she spoke," I don't know how to go there. We came by bus."

" You can maybe call someone at your school."

" I don't remember the number."

" ohkay!! Do you know at least where your school is'maybe I can guide you."

" I don't remember. I am new to this place and this is all new to me'", she was by now in the verge of tears.

" Wait a minute. Don't go anywhere."

After few minutes of chat with the lady at the cash counter he came back.

" Come, let's go. I will drop you to your school."

" But how can I just go with you? You are a complete stranger?" , she asked him with so much innocence.

" well, you don't really have option. You missed your school bus and you don't know anything about your school so you have to trust me. "

Watching her still unsure he said, " Okay, how about a proper introduction. Hi! I am Maan, I am studying engineering and am in first year. So now tell me about yourself."

" ummm'.I am geet."

"Okay geet, Please trust me. I will drop you safely. I know it is difficult to trust but you see you need to reach your hostel and I don't think it's safe to travel alone when you have least idea about your destination."

""hmm."

Maan did not know what compelled him to help her but he felt protective about her. Maybe because she was so innocent . H shrugged off the questions out of his mind at both proceeded towards the exit unbeknownst to the fact that this was but just the first step of their journey together.

Hi guys!!!Thank you for all the likes and comments!!! It truly means soo much Hope you like this update!!! Please give your honest criticism and do press like and comment... Hope you enjoy this!!! And those who want pms please add me as buddy as it helps me to send pm

Edited by aditi_2010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
nice part
eagerly waiting for their past...reveal the past soon
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Awww

Maaneet first meeting was so cute,an ice cream accident.How authorativly Geet ordered Maan to get the ice cream of her choice to her!!!!

Loved d update.

But still curious to know why Maaneet separated and why is Geet alone????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
simply amazing
loved it
i am loving the way the story progresses...
it has a lot to offer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Beautiful attempt Dear , just read in one go 😊

Maaneet meeting was soo sweet 😳

Geet is so innocent & Maan so helpful

Then what led Maan to break up .?
Cont snn .!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Awww...Such a adorable update.! 😳
Loved their first meeting..It was damn cute.!

Keep it up dear.! Will be waiting for more updates.! Update soon...
Thanks 😊
Edited by -AnushaGurtian- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: angel_smily

nice part

eagerly waiting for their past...reveal the past soon
thanks for the pm
continue soon


Thanks dear for the lovely comment...well for the past to reveal you have to wait more...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Awww

Maaneet first meeting was so cute,an ice cream accident.How authorativly Geet ordered Maan to get the ice cream of her choice to her!!!!

Loved d update.

But still curious to know why Maaneet separated and why is Geet alone????


I am glad that you loved it...Frankly i was very nervous while posting it and your comment means much to me... and as to why maaneet are separated will be revealed...till then enjoy their journey!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing
loved it
i am loving the way the story progresses...
it has a lot to offer


I am gad that you liked it...Just have faith in me...I will put my best into it😊

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