MG OS- Pal-pal soch me aana na.. Last Part-pg71/ Next OS LINK-pg83 - Page 2

waiting fr more...

congratulations fr starting second part of dis trilogy 😉🥳

Hi..!
Sorry for taking so long in updating. Anyways here is the first part of this story. I know its short..but abhi ke liye itna hi..
Read it & do tell me how is it?
Shona.😊

Part1
"Geet"...he took her name with hesitation, fearing her reaction. He waited for her to say something..to shout at him, curse him, fight with him, anything..but nothing came his way. There was complete silence on the other side..which increased his nervoussness & fear. Is she still mad at him?? Doesnt she want to talk to him anymore?? Did she really meant it..when she had said that she wont talk to him??
So many questions & doubts came to his mind..scaring his heart in those few seconds of silence! At one point he really thought that she doesnt want to talk to him & probably has cut the call. His restlessness increased with each passing second. Is she still there or not?? This silence & uncertainty was getting unbearable for him now.
Not being able to controll anymore...he despearatly called her name once again.. And to his hearts little relief... this time he got her response..
"MAAN...!!"
He could clearly feel the surprise in her voice!
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She hadnt expected him to call her..never! Infect, after whatever had happened between them...she had doubted that he will even speak to her again ever. So reciving a call from him was really unexpected.
But she was happy. Hearing his voice after so many days, gave her heart, the peace for which it has been carving from so long..so despeartly.
She has been crying silently, all days & nights, hiding in her room and pretending to be happy & smiling in front of others.
And now, after hearing his voice...All those feelings & emotions which she has been trying to supress, all the pain & hurt she has gone through in these few days, just coz of him, everything came out in the form of tears!
But there was a slight smile playing on her lips too, with those tears.
Smile.. Coz he has called her.. finally!
Smile... Coz finally, god has granted her hearts most desired wish..for which it has been parying with its every beat!
Smile...coz of the realisation, that may be she cant get her first love..
But she still has her best friend whos friendship is too pericious for her to loose.
She was happy after so many days. She was lost in her new found happiness, when she heard him call her again.. & she replied this time..
"maan.." ..she wisphered with a teary smile.

nice update

nyc part...
evn u granted our wish... i sooo much wished to know maans side of story...
toh aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai

finally she heard his voice...
loved d upd.

so finally aap dono ko hosh aa hi gaya😳

Originally posted by: Diva7

so finally aap dono ko hosh aa hi gaya😳

pehla maan babu ko yeh ki unko geet ko phone karna hai

aur dusri aap jinhe badi der se yaad aaya ki isse bhi update karna hai😡

luvd d way u described his anxiety ..he ws nervous n fearing dat she isn't goin to talk to him ... well it serves him right 😈

geet ko bol maanu d majnu ko zaada bhav dene ki zarurat nahi hai 😆i

luvd d behaal haal of majnu maan😆

nice one n brilliantly written😊

nxt update kab de rahi hai tu ...do char mahine na laga dena ,yaad rakhiyo woh dono abhi bhi phone par hi hain...do char mahine phone nahi pakade reh sakte woh dono😆😆

😆 main toh hosh me hi thi yar..tabhi toh maan ko bhi hosh me la pai..😆
Actually i was stuck at a point and i am still not sure how to continue this phone conversation..means how to shape it! Isliye short update.
But i am glad that u liked this part.
R u sure maanu jaanu ko bhav nahi dene hai??
Waise do chaar mahine phone pe rahenge toh bill kitna aagyega.😉