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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Shonameet

hi aanya..😊
first of all thank u so much for the beautiful comment! I loved it! I am extremly happy that u liked my story that much! It really a special feeling.
Yes..they both fears that their new feelings can damage their friendship which they couldnt afford! But then it isnt easy to hide ur feeling whn that person is always around u!
Lets see how they will manage.
And u can read my other stories frm here..
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3613254/kissa-hum-likhenge-index-updted

thank u for the link will read it
and yes want u to update this as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: aanya84


thank u for the link will read it

and yes want u to update this as soon as possible

i will try my best!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
part 4
nice part...
so Maan has started to fall for Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
nice part...
so Maan has started to fall for Geet...
cont soon dear...

thoda thoda..dheere dheere..;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
superb!!!
loved it😊
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: sandymg

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">superb!!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">loved it😊</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">continue soon...</font>

thanks:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
very nice part...
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
awesome
liked a lot dear
sorry for not replying for so long
as i was away due to some personal reasons
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Part5
He never realised the obivious changes in his behaviour towards her...or the difference in his feelings for her!

Wo hua..
Jo pehle kabhi na hua..
Kahin bhi dil naa lage..
Ye tune aisa kya kiya..


usually they used to patch up instantly after every silly fight.. But once they didnt talked for whole day. To be honest, he was at fault that time..and he wouldnt have mind appologiesing to her.. But then what made him angery at her was.. she had told him.."baat mat karna mujhse.."
And hearing that his stupid ego had stoped him from talking to her. He had thought.."achha toh she doesnt want to talk to me now..thik hai dekhta hun kitni der tak baat nahi karti.."
and thats why, he delibratedly had avoided her for rest of the day.
Though he had thought that "not talking to her" wouldnt affect him much..he have other friends, he could be with.. But as the day went by and school finished.. He started to get irritated. He was almost yelling and getting angery at small small things at home. His mom had even asked.."kisi se zagda karke aaya hai kya..?" that simple question had annoyed him all the more. He didnt talked to anyone at home and starightly had went to his room..hoping to do some studies..but wasnt able to concentrate on anything at all. That moment only her thoughts were running in his mind. He was getting angery at himself.. "galti teri thi na..toh ek sorry bolne me kya problem thi.."
He kept thinking how he will monify her..as he kew that she must be really angery at him!
Next day he got late for school..he was still thinking how to say sorry to her.. But when he entered the classroom... And saw her..he forgot everything else &automatically..a smile came to his lips without even him realising.. And it got bigger..when she too returned it with her beautiful smile.
*****
He wouldnt have admited it that time..but he had never liked it.. if she would talk to other boys..specially a coupal of boys..whom he disliked as they used to just show off and werent in his good list!
But then started the real change..he couldnt tell..when & how?? But he started geeting these annoying feeling.. Whenever he used to see her with others... Though most of the time she would be with him only.. But then also, he never liked if she gave attention to anyone else..other than him.
*****
It was break time..when he saw a guy rohan, from there class..was talking to geet. And with that.. came back that strange & irritating feeling. He went to her after that guy left..and asked her what was he saying.
She told him that he was asking for some notes and she had agreed to give him after school.
He really didnt know that what got in to him that he said.."arre wo notes to mujhe chahiye the..infect main wahi toh lene aaya tha tujhse.."
"but tere notes toh complete the na.." ..she had asked him.
"nahi..thoda sa baki tha.." ..he had lied to her. Why? He didnt knew!!
"par..maine toh usse han bol diya hai..it wont look good na..agar ab mana karungi toh.." ..she asked him.
"Tell him ke tere notes mere paas the..aur tujhe yad nahi tha..toh wo kisi aur se le le.." ..he had replied causally.. she didnt had any choice..so she did what he had told her!


Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
possessive maan...good one...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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