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Posted: 11 years ago
part 6
awesome...
is this the same timeline when Geet fell for him?
or is it a later one?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
awesome...
is this the same timeline when Geet fell for him?
or is it a later one?
cont soon dear...

its a later one..geet realised the change in her feelings after that school trip.
But maan took a little more time i guess..;)
i didnt went in details as i didnt wanted to bore u all..:-P
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

ab dosti ki hai toh..nibhani toh padegi..na..;) and promises are meant to be kept dear..:-)
thank u so much for liking dear. Ur comments make my day!
Maana ke dono thode slow & confused souls hai..bt hammer se marna thik nahi hoga na..
If something went wrong..bina unke meri story ka kya hoga..aanya..;-(
i'll say a thank u to maan's bro on ur behalf..ok..!
Luv u..
Will update nxt one soon..:)

ok waiting do update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

confusion jealousy hesitation

that resulted in his outbrust!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I refused to give up..
I refused to give in..
...
I dont want to give up..
I dont want to give in..
..
One love dhadkan kahe..
One love milkar rahe..
One love ek aasma..
Aur hai ek jahan..
One love naya josh hai..
One love nai soch hai..
One love hume hai yakeen..
One love is all we need.. :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part7
He never wanted to hurt her. His fights with her..his snapping at her rudely..used to make him upset. So to avoid all this..he started maitaining distance from her. He thought that that was the best solution!
He used to avoid talking to her..but he couldnt stoped his eyes who would search for her all the time.
They had been so close to eachother that now it was hard for him to ignor her like that. But still he tried. Though he was successful in avoiding her..but he didnt have any control on those feelings..they were still there..getting deeper each passing. He was still not able to accept the fact that he liked her in a diffrent way.. And thus the inner fight was still on.
*****

His brother & brother's friends were going to the fair. His brother had asked him to join them...but he had refused coz of his tutions...as they were having an important topic that day.
He went to the tutions..but wasnt able to concentrate at all! And the reason was.. Her!!!
She hadnt come to the tution that day! At first he thought that she might have got late..and would be coming any moment. He kept looking at the door every now & then, expecting her.. But she didnt came!
He felt disappointed..he felt restless..he felt desperate..and he felt frustated!
Disappointment..coz he was waiting for her but she didnt came!
Restlessness...he wanted to know that why didnt she came.. as it wasnt usual for her to miss school or classes.
Desperation...he wanted to see her at that moment..just once..he didnt know why he was feeling like that..but he needed to see her.
Frustated...coz he was still in denial of his feelings! He tried to concentrate..but couldnt!

He was in a very bad mood. All the time he kept thinking.. "why didnt she came today?"
"kal school toh aayegi na..?" this particular thought increased his restlessness.
he couldnt even sleep properly that night.
*****
next day..
He has been worried that if she will come to school or not? But was relived..seeing her already at her seat!
He wanted to asked her where were she yesterday? Why didnt she came to tutions? And most important.. Why didnt she told him if she wasnt going to come..?? But he controlled somehow.

He was sitting with his friend..when he heard a boy telling the other that how yesterday he had went to the fair and had so much fun. He wouldnt have listented to their talks but then he took geets name and mentioning of her name caught his attention. That boy was flaunting saying that geet too was there and they went to the rides together.

He instantly felt jealous! He didnt liked the thought of her being with someone else..it was unbearable. He wanted to be the only person who will be close to her.
And these emotions were so intense that he couldnt stop himself.. and without even thinking once..he went to her and told her that from next time she must tell him if she planned to go anywhere..that they would go together.

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Posted: 11 years ago
me first
awesome dear
loved it
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Maan thinking abt her! Maan jealous! Well written, update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan ne apne pairo par kuladi mari hai... N curse kar raha hai geet ko

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