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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss

suprb update dear...maan ne realize nai kiya n unknowingly geet ko hurt kiya...now he realize k ussne geet ko kitna hurt kiya...waiting for nxt

thank u dear:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flopsy

Wooow, another update so soon 😊 😊

awesumm update. Superbly written , and so touching. 😊 😊

Enjoying reading all the parts thorughly.

thank u dear..😊
glad that u liked the surprise update and enjoyed it too..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Sorry for late comment...

Part 8...past...

Maan budhu hai...aapni hi feeling nahi samjta...kab tak vo dil aur dimag ke beech ladta rahega?

HAAI KOI BATLAAI KE MAIN KIS RAASTE JAAUN
DIL KE HAATON MAJBOOR HUN
AUR DIMAAG SE PARESHAAN HUN
"AARZOO" KO DIL AUR DIMAAG KI
KASHMAKASH NE MAR DAALA...

Present...

Usne phone rakh diya...baat bhi nahi ki...?
Wow! Maan ne geet ki book apne paas rakkhi hai!!
Handwriting ko dekh kar emotional to ho jata hai...aur kiss bhi karta hai...
Ab lagta hai premrog lag gaya!

Sheeshe me mera...hai saaya tera...ye koun sa song hai...😲
Maine google bhi kiya...😭

he has been holding the reciver even after the call has ended long back.
And the song is "pal pal soch me aana na.." frm movie TUJHE MERI KASAM..
Ye lines antre ki hai..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Part 9

Maan ko dar lagta hai ki kahi geet friendship tod na de...isliye door raheta hai!
Ab maan ko samaj me aa raha hai ..usne geet ke sath kya kiya...kitna gussa...kitna rude behaviour...phir bhi geet ne kabhi complain nahi ki!

Past

Maan ne geet ko naraj kar diya...
Geet maan ke behaviour ke baare me complain karti hai..par maan to confuse ho kar chup khada raheta hai...at last geet use kaheti hai...vo ab maan se baat nahi karengi aur vaha se chali jati hai...geet ke Jane ke baad vo mahesus karta hai..usne kya kiya! Jiska dar tha vahi ho gaya!
Ab maan geet ko kaise manayega ??


even i dont hav any clue ke wo kya karega..
Just wait a little..maan khud bata dega..;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0033">wow...fab update...👏loved it...❤️</font>

thank u:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8 n 9
nice updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part10

Aahatien..
Kisi ki jab aati hai..
Mujhe toh lagta hai ye..
Ke jaise tu aai hai..


His impetient and expectant eyes were glued to the door of their classroom...waiting for her deasperatly. But it seems she wanted to test his petience as she was taking so long. No she wasnt late..but it was him..who was bit early today.
Everytime, he would hear someone coming...his heartbeats would increase thinking and expecting it to be her. But then would feel disappointed on finding someone else instead of her.


He wanted to meet her as soon as possible and apologies to her.
Yesterday when she went away from him like that, he realised what big mistake he had commited in his confusion..how he was loosing her in his foolishness. Her words had hit him so hard..making him regrate his actions. He felt chocked with emotions...helpless..he wanted to stop her and tell her that he was sorry, he didnt intended to hurt her. But he couldnt..he was numb..as the only thing which was running in his mind was.. that he had lost her!!!


The strom of emotions was so strong.. But he wasnt able to express himself to anyone. And for the first time..a lone tear escaped his eyes..showing his helplessness. The thought of loosing her & her friendship forever scared him..made him restless. He wanted to save it anyhow..and he decided that he will ask sorry from her! He will go and appologies to her for his every mistake. He didnt know what reason he will give her for his unacceptable behaviour..how he will explain it to her?
He just knew one thing that he cant loose her! He cant let her think that he didnt valued their friendship. He has made up his mind and thats why was early to meet her & right now was waiting for her.


He again heared footsepts and raised his head, hoping that this time its her. And to his relief..it was actually her! He looked at her carving for her one glance..wanting to catch her attention, he didnt move his eyes from her.
A moment later, she looked up and their eyes met..but instead of feeling contented..his heart ached when she averted her gaze at the very moment it met his!
He felt so hurt by her little act of avoiding him.. But he couldnt even complain as his heart instantly taunted him..reminding him of all those times when he used to treat her just the same way. How much it must have hurted her than..he realised it now! And with this realisation, his guilt increased all the more and he couldnt gather up the courage to talk to her. His heart wanted to beg forgiveness from her..but he couldnt go to her in fear of rejection.. He wont be able to bear her ignorance to him..he could never take it..Thats the reason he never wanted to reveal his feelings to her at the first place.


He hated going to school & tutions..knowing she wont even look at him now. But then that was the only way, his heart would be clam..seeing her infront of his eyes for those few hours. It was difficult..but he somehow managed to control himself & his heart.
Their internal exams started but he couldnt concentrate at all. He would only think about her all the time..even in exam hall, he would look at her every now & then..wishing that she would look at him atleast for once. He wanted just one chance to apologies..he used to sit in the room even after compeleting his paper or wait for her outside..hoping to talk her..but at the time of doing so..his heart used to feel nervouss & uncertain..and his fears would not let him to face her!
As the last day of exam was approching..his restlessness grew more..realise that he wont get the chance again until the school reopens after the vacations. He didnt know if she would forgive him or not..but he atleast wanted her to know that he was really sorry for his behaviour. And then it will be her choice..if she wanted to be friends with him or not!


On the last day, he could hardly concentrate on the paper..his mind was busy thinking as to how he will approch her. Anyhow, he submitted his paper & went out to wait for her.
He was waiting for her..when his class teacher saw him and called him in the staff room..and was asking about his papers. He answered him half heartedly...and rushed out hoping that she hasnt left yet.
He waited near the gate for next 20minutes..wondering were was she? And then the last & final bell rang. All remaining students started caming out & left one by one.. But she was not there..coz she has already left..his heart cried painfully!

Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Maan looking 4 her bt seems like she left! Well written, update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc part...
kya maan galti ksrti tym nai socha n ab sory bolne k liye itna soch raha hai??
she is ur frnd yaar...come on dude...jst go n clear everything..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome upd.
Loved it so much.
Fab.
Though it was heart wrenching.
Tfd PM.

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