Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#5, #6link added

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this is specially for GEET-2,, kindly please visit this page for the updates of this ff... i'll update it once in a week... only in Monday...






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this is specially for GEET-2,, kindly please visit this page for the updates of this ff... i'll update it once in a week... only in Monday...


character sketch...

Maan singh khurana-26 years old a rough tough business tycoon', arrogant, rough tough with his behavior' has a rough look on his face' but from inside very calm and caring towards one person only' . and his heart like a rock but has a soft corner only for one person whom he loves so much' sorry & patience words are not in his dictionary'.but these two words are allowed only for one person' loves his dadi maa and younger sister annie so much'. Rest about maan you all know'' did his MBA'. Md of KHURANA TEXTILES'.





Geet handa/geet maan singh khurana-21 years old, a chirpy, bubbly, fun-loving sweet natured girl' loved her family a lot and her friends means a world to her' she is in last year of her BBA' she likes fashion designing but due to her love she joined BBA'she has 3 best friends but two of them are her childhood friend' she became little mature before the time'





Anvesha khurana (annie)-20 years old, sweet natured, fun loving girl' 2nd year in her graduation' loved her dadi & big brother a lot' always craving for mother's love.. she lost her mother when she was born'.sometimes she scared from her brother's temper'






Arjun singh rathore- 23 years old , a sweet but very intelligent guy' has a charm so that all girls drooled over him but her never gave them a damn'. Geet's best friend.. like a big brother' pamper her a lot but sometimes tease her so much' love her like a sister' finished his MBA and going to be the MD of Rathore Group of Industries'





Alka tiwari- same age as geet.. 21 years old' geet's best friend' met with geet when both are in high school' after that both became best friend and alka entered in geet's group and they four became best friends'. She is with geet in BBA because geet choose BBA' she can do anything for her'





Vickram kapoor (vicky)- same age as geet & alka, 21 years old, hot & happening guy' mast mola types' he is the 2nd childhood best friend of geet' he is so possessive about geet.. he can do anything for her.. if anyone's gaze fell on geet then god knows what will happen.. arjun & Vicky made that person's life like a hell' he is the rising star of fashion world' he is a model too' and doing his fashion designing' younger brother of Ram kapoor'





Tej handa- big brother of geet.. loves her a lot' he loves her friends so much.. they mean a family to him'handling the family business'.




Tanya handa-wife of tej' she loves tej & geet so much.. she considers geet as her own sister' she also did her masters in management but she prefers to be at home for her family' she wants to give her whole to her family.. she cares them so much' loves geet so much.. tanya is like a mother for geet.. she pampers her a lot'




Sameera- 25 years old beautiful, sharp minded, was the hottest girl in the college' she was the friend of maan.. sameera , maan and rahul were friends in college..



Vedanta-3 years old a little boy'.

Prologue

E Khuda Aaj Ye Faisla Karde,
Use Mera ya Mujhe Uska Karde.
Bahut Dukh Sahe He Maine,
Koi Khusi Ab Toh Muqadar Karde.
Bahot Muskil Lagta Hai Usse Duur Rehna,
Judai Ke Safar Ko Kum Karde.
Jitna Duur Chale Gaye Woh Mujhse,
Use Utna Kareeb Karde.
Nahi Likha Agar Nasib Me Uska Naam,
To Khatam Kar Ye Zindagi aur Mujhe FANAA Karde.

Time and circumstances bind them in a relation of marriage'. Will maan accept this marriage?

Will geet able to get maan's love? Will maan forgive her for her one mistake? Will maan love her ever in his life? Will they be happy in this relation? Will their relation of marriage can survive?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello, hello, hello, first of all, thank you so much for supporting me this much, , we have reached on 5th thread…. Woop woop wee…………. Yippie….. thank you…

Ok here is little teaser for further updates…. Not only one, , part- 50(D), 51, 52, 53 or may be more parts…. Ok…

And yes I didn't typed anything till yet, , typed only teaser….. will try to type tomorrow….

TEASER

Maan eyed to Vedanta for calling geet while he was adjusting camera….. Vedanta nodded and went to calling geet, , she was getting ready to her bedroom while maan was in attached hall which is attached by their bed-room, ,

…….

Maan pulled her saree pallu and she fell back on him, , both were lying on the couch, , maan was underneath geet, ,

……..

"bro, explain in some words that what geet bhabhi matters to you?"

"aaye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahaar banke, meri dil mein yuhi rehna, , " where geet shied hearing his words, ,

………

Maan, everything happened because of her, , she is the main culprit of all this…. Trust me maan, , maan mai keh rahi hu na uss raat isi ki wajah se wo sab huya jo nahi hona chahiye tha…

……..

"Not a word more, , enough is enough…. Tum hoti kaun ho mere aur maan ke rishtey par sawaal uthane wali? "

….

"Maan, iski baat bat vishwaas mat karna, , here is the evidence , , she is the main culprit…. Here is her confess….. "


"par alka, tumhe ye sab kaise pata?"

"wo jiju, when I went mall for buying a gift for Vedanta and geet, then I heard geet's name, , I got to know everything there…."

…….

She was crying her eyes out, hiding her face in his chest, pouring her heart out, the pain, the sadness, the truth was piercing her heart like needle, ,


"maan, hamara baby…, hamara baby maan" she clutched his shirt hard in her fist digging her nails in his skin over his shirt, where maan's eyes were also red due to crying and pain, , but he was trying to calm her with his soothing words but nothing is working…

Ok, here is the little teaser…

Hope you'll like it…..

Love ya

Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread👍🏼
the teaser is little bit confusing😕
waiting for the update
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congratzzz dear for te new thread
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Congrats on the new thread
Awesome Teaser
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread
please update wating
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congrats on the new thread
teaser is very interesting

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congrats for the new thread🥳
nice teaser
eagerly waiting for update
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Originally posted by: maanugeetu

congrats for the new thread👍🏼

the teaser is little bit confusing😕
waiting for the update



thanks dear, , hehehe i know confusing hai...

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