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Complete 2,000 words…. Long na… first it was around 1,554 words then I added some more scenes , I was adding up more maaneet scenes and then it reached to 2,000 words… In this FF, I thought to give you short updates but then land up with long parts…. What to do????
Part-51
He brushed his lips again with hers while her one hand was roaming on his back shamelessly, , he grabbed her lips in his, , and nibbled slowly, , she too responded him back in the kiss, , and the slow kiss turned a passionate kiss, , both were chewing each other lips, , she gasped for air and he at once caught her tongue, , their tongue danced with each other, tasting the sweet honey nectar of their mouth, , it was like a heaven for them…
their passionate kiss was broken due to lack of breath, both were panting, breathing rapidly, their heart were pumping fast against their chest, , maan kept his head in the hollow of her neck breathing properly and playing with her senses now, tickling her by his warm breath, , she felt tickled sensation in her body due to his warm breath and by the nuzzled with the tip of his nose, ,
a giggle escape from her mouth gaining maan's attention…. He raised up his head looking at curvy lips which were formed in a smile now… he smiled at her and nuzzled his nose again at her jaw line sensuously making her heart beat rapid, she closed her eyes in acceptance and she hugged him really very tight…..
"thank you geet for coming in my life and for making it beautiful…" he placed some sensuous kisses on her jaw line tracing it down to her neck by his lips like licking her skin, , his hand was making pattern on her waist over the cloth making her moan in pure ecstasy….
she pushed herself more into him, her upper body almost against his neck…. He groaned at once feeling bosom like this, , "geet" taking out her name from his mouth……. and his kisses became more slow, , lusty and sensuous… he was placing full mouth kisses on her neck, throat and collarbone almost wetting her skin by his saliva which was on his lips… …. She was almost wet by this passion of his.. , , She moaned his name in pleasure then replied after struggling a lot….. "maan….. no thanks please…. Otherwise I'll thanks to you also.." maan raised his face again and smiled back at her reply….
He placed a kiss on her forehead, , a simple gesture for loving and respecting someone…. They wished good night to each other by kissing on cheek like they usually do, , and slept over there on that single bed in study itself leaving Vedanta there in bedroom though the gate was opened of study room which is adjoin with their bed-room….
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It was party day, , everything was finalized, preparation was on full swing but our sweetu , ctuie Vedanta, birthday boy was still sleeping on maaneet's bed and maan & geet were admiring him…. They wanted to wish him first but if he'll get up then na….
Geet-maan, please wake him up na, , I want to wish him… she pouted and complaint cutely…. Maan smiled at her,,,,,
Maan-geet, seems Vedanta is not b'day boy, you are b'day girl and complaining that none had wished you….. geet, he is baby… let him sleep, when he'll wake up then you'll be with first one who will wish him….
Geet-hmm, , ok till then I'll get ready…. And yes Happy Diwali maan… she kissed his cheek slightly little wetting his cheek by her wet lips… maan blushed with her cute gesture, , and he too kissed her back…
Maan-Happy diwali to you too geet…. And pecked on her forehead and then embraced her in his arms
They glanced at Vedanta then engrossed in their work,,,, maan was busy with his cell, , calling peoples and arranging everything, though event planner was there but still he have take care of each and everything, , Arjun was also managing and Reyhansh also…. They knew very well that how to manage and on which level, after all, Maan Singh Khurana is throwing the party and that too double occasion….
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After an hour, Vedanta woke up , Vedanta went happily near to geet because he knew that today is his 4th birthday,…. "mama, papa, where are you?" he was asking so impatiently…. Geet and Maan entered in the room without making any voice…. "boo" they shook him and he got scared at once, , they showed his gift to him and his all fear vanished in a second seeing the gift…..
"Happy Birthday To You… Happy Birthday to you… Happy Birthday to dear Vedu (by geet) / baby (by maan), Happy Birthday to you… and Happy Diwali to you" and then geet shoved a big piece of dairy milk chocolate in his small mouth, , (kuch meetha ho jaaye, hehehe…) his small mouth was filled with chocolate and he was chewing it slowly-2 , ,
they sang birthday song for him and maan & geet pecked his cheeks together on his both cheeks… Vedanta jumped in joy in happiness and pecked their cheeks in return….. Vedanta gulped the chocolate….
"thank you mama… thank you papa aur…. Happy Diwali to you too...love you muah..." Vedanta squirmed in happiness….
Just then Reyhansh, Ashlesha, Anwesha, and dadi entered in their room along with their gifts… and wished him Happy birthday…. He was very happy…. He never get so many gifts like this and none celebrate his birthday before like this…. He didn't remember much, after all he is a small kid… only 4 yrs. now…. and then they called nakul in their room and nakul clicked their snaps one by one when they were giving gifts to Vedanta and then a family picture, Vedanta was sitting with his gifts and all were also sitting beside him….
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After some time Vedanta was searching geet, , but suddenly he afraid of something and screamed in fear….. "mama, , papa… bhoot… aahh" and started crying his eyes out…. Maan who was sitting on the couch in the attached hall of his room heard Vedanta's scream and ran in the bedroom, , he was panic hearing his scream….
Maan went near him, went on his knees and trying to calm him down….. "beta, what happened? Why are crying?" asked maan impatiently…. Vedanta looked at him with his teary eyes and point out at some where in the room…. "papa, bhoot is over there…. " he said innocently…. Maan turned his face in the direction and then he saw a petite structure standing there in white top and jeans, hairs tied in a bun and face was covered with face pack….
Maan burst in laugh , Vedanta looked at him like he is seeing an alien …. "papa, what is so funny? Wo bhoot hai… please shoo away that bhoot" saying so he hid again behind maan…. Maan controlled his laugh and pulled Vedanta in front of him….
"baby, that is not bhoot… she is your mama.. unhone face pack lagaya hai" said maan calming him down… but geet was fuming in anger and still standing over there…. First ved afraid from her… she tried to go near him but he ran away and she stood there helplessly and second maan laughed on her…. She stamped her foot in anger and ran away in washroom again snapped the gate over maan's face….
"oops, madam is angry now" maan thought, , now he has to tolerate her anger, no,,no her cute anger… after all she looks so cute when she is so angry,,,, maan felt a tug on his pant… he looked down and found Vedanta is pulling him, , he sighed and knelt down to his level….
Vedanta-papa, what happened to mama's face? Asked Vedanta….. maan held him by his shoulder…
Maan- baby, , mama ne face par cream lagaya hai, mama ko sabse pretty lagna hai na party me….. Vedanta nodded and said…. "my mama is sabse pretty… hai na papa?" asked Vedanta….
"haan sabse pretty, most beautiful girl in the world… at last she is Vedanta's mama na!" he cheered Vedanta and tickled him… he laughed along with maan while geet was also smiling seeing them laughing and yes praising her also…. She felt that she is important for them now….
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It was evening, , geet was getting ready while maan was clad in his black tuxedo already…. And now he was setting Vedanta's hair…. Vedanta is also ready now, same like maan, looking like chhotu maan…. Copying his dad…. Maan set his hairs with gel and now clicking his pictures by his digital camera…. And Vedanta was giving cute pose….
Maan-baby, go and call mama,,, papa will click photo… go fast…. Maan told to Vedanta and Vedanta ran in bed-room calling geet…..
"mama, mama, , come fast… papa is calling you" Vedanta reached to geet who was setting her pallu standing in front of large mirror which is replying her back that how beautiful she is looking in this saree which was gifted by maan on the occasion of karwachauth, , the saree is in baby pink colour which is like a second skin of hers, , the same color like her skin, so pink, , and how beautiful she is looking in that saree….
geet's saree
"what vedu? Why is papa calling me now… papa is ready, you are ready, then let me get ready na…" replied geet back making plates of her pallu….
"no mama, , aap baad me ready hona, right now papa is calling you… hamein photo click karna hai… chalo abhi…" he held geet's hand and pulled her… she gave up and went behind him…. Vedanta was continuously blabbering, telling her how much gifts he get!, , and how beautiful mansion is looking! , annie bua is wearing this and ash bua is wearing this, rey chachu ne ajeeb si pant pehna hai par unka jacket achha hai…. And so on…
Geet-maan what is this? Please let me get ready na first… she made baby face while Vedanta was trying to made her sit on the couch….
Maan-"geet, it will take only some seconds… please… only one snap… btw you are looking beautiful..." He complimented her and she blushed… "ok, chalo sit there…" he signaled to her and she nodded…. Vedanta was in middle and geet in left… maan set the camera and put it on the tv, he ran and sit at the right side… he held geet by her shoulder and ,
"say cheeze…" geet told and just then a flashing light on and the sound of click… a photo of perfect family…. Geet got up for moving inside the bedroom for getting ready but maan held her pallu from behind and pulled her back… her front was visible now…
she was trying to get her pallu back but maan's sudden pull and she fell back on maan and vadanta was jumping, clapping, giggling over his parents who were romancing in-front of him… she was totally over him now on the couch while Vedanta was still giggling & clapping seeing his parents like this…..
"and sexy too" he slightly whispered in her ear making her cheeks crimson red… "maan" she whispered slowly while her lips curved in a shy smiled, cheeks were reddened and eyes were looking down in shyness and maan was enjoying this shy geet now…. Sometimes she became so bold that she kissed him and sometimes she became so shy that she can't even look in his eyes….
"maan, chhodiye na.." she stuggled but his grip around her waist tightened and he shook his head in denial making her more blush…. He is loving his shy wife….
"nahi chhodu then?" he asked showing her his naughty smirk….
"please maan, Vedanta is here" she signaled to him while Vedanta covered his mouth with his palm and giggling mutely….
"so what geet? He is baby now…" replied maan…. "papa, I am not baby now…" he replied back and stormed out of the room telling to annie bua about his parents romantic moments…
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hey friends don't Worry this is not any new Story i just changed the name of story nothing more so relax and enjoy the story i just give third
Introduction this is simple love story... where u see maaneet cute nok zhok, ruthna manana, both love, breakup... geet doing job in Maan company
This stored based on geet original story... Am continuing this story after maan memory loss he not except geet as his wife... am already posted...
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