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waiting dear...sry couldn't comment for the last couple of updates..but u know na will do soon including the one being updated now
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Thanks a lot for liking and commenting... 1 thing i wanted to that some are scared because of annie lied to arjun... they are scared if any mu will happen in future...then i want to assure that nothing will happen like this as i didn't plan this track here... so don't worry... here Annie is such a darling... she wants only maaneet's happiness... whatever she will do that will be in maaneet's favor...



Part-57


maan-wait geet, first eat something, you didn't have anything from noon... she shook her head in no and made baby face... she doesn't want to have anything... she wants stay near him, in his arms... she is feeling solace in his arms, , where maan was confused that how geet came to know about her miscarriage?


he wanted to ask from her but how? this is not the correct time for these types of talks, he knew how much disturbed she is now! it's not teh right time... he should wait for a while, , first let her come out of this emotional phase then he'll ask to her...

he sighed thinking this and pulled her in him more, there is no space between their bodies... but suddenly he hear her whimpers again, tears were welling down on her cheeks... he doesn't know to made her calm down?

maan-geet, geet please calm down... dekho that was not in our hand na... we can not fight against it... sshh don't cry.... she shook her head in denial and cried again... there was no way left for him... he sighed and cupped her face , , in another second her lips was in his... her eyes widened with the sudden feel of his lips over hers,,,, she was shocked... he had only this way to keep her silent, , otherwise she was not going to calm down...

her whimpers stopped and she lost in his kiss... that was not a passionate or aggressive kiss... it was a kiss for soothing pain, emotions, telling her he is with you, he'll not leave her alone... finally she gave up and closed her eyes in acceptance... she started kissing him back with the same emotions... her whimpers finally stopped and tears were also stopped coming out from her eyes...

...

mama... where is mama? he cried calling his mama his eyes out... his nose, cheeks were red due to crying... annie and piya were not able to handle him... annie gave him pastry because he didn't cut the cake... she thought that he can cut it tom or later.. right now she should give him pastry... but he was crying for his mama... they don't know what happened to him and he started crying , tears trails on his cheeks...

annie-baby, don't cry too much... mama is not well.. wo jaldi aajayengi... chup ho ja vedu... she wiped his tears and trying to calm him down...

piya-mai chocolates laati hu, may be he'll convenience... annie nodded...

vedanta-no, mujhe kuch nahi chahiye, mama... mama kaha hai...? mama... he screamed her name...

...

suddenly she backed out from the kiss... she was restless suddenly... her heart beats were fast and a fear ran through her nerves...

maan-geet what happened?

geet-vedu... maan, vedanta... vedanta maan..... she was taking vedanta's name again and again... she got up and sit on the bed...

maan-geet, vedanta is fine... nothing happened to him... calm down... he also sat on the bed cupping her face in worry...

geet-no maan... he called me,,, just now... i heard his scream... maan he is alone...

maan-geet, annie is with him.. shaant ho jao....

geet-no maan... oh no....

maan-geet kya hua? look at me...

geet-maan, how can i do this with him? maan mera baby is crying... maan today is his b'day and he didn't cut the cake... see how careless i am... mai apne dukh mein sab bhul gayi... kaise?

maan understand her inner turmoil... "geet nothing is like that... first calm down..." maan tried to console her...

geet-no maan, how can i? mujhe vedu ke paas jana hai... he is waiting for me and cake... see i failed again... she threw the duvet and ran away leaving maan alone... maan shocked with her sudden disappearance... he to ran behind her... she straight away went in kitchen and took the whole big cake with her... maan was behind her...

geet-maan please side.... geet said in hurry to maan... she was guilty that how can she forget about vedanta? he is first priority for her than her own baby... how careless she can be? it was her thought... she was shivering due to guilt or her careless nature or she was restless because of his cry...

maan stopped her, , "geet ruko...give this to me.. now come " he take the cake from her hand and she ran away in vedanta's room leaving him alone...

"geet, please go slowly... geet listen to me" maan tried to stop her but she was no where to listen him totally ignored him ran away in vedanta's room... maan sighed and ran behind her holding cake properly in his hands... he was really worried for her condition, the trauma she was going through was really emotional...

when he reached the room, he saw geet was hugging vedanta tightly where their tears were no where to stop, , vedanta was sobbing for her... his heart ached after seeing them like this... but he was feeling contended after seeing the love between them...

"mama, , aap kaha the??" he wiped and pouted cutely... geet chuckled at his face and maan also... maan called annie by signaling her with eyes... she came to him... maan told her that call everyone here, she nodded and went away for calling everyone...

"mama sorry hai... sorry baby... mama ko maaf kar do... " geet said to him... he nodded and hugged her back...

"arey mera bacha . kya hua?" asked maan placing cake on the table... vedanta saw the cake and his eyes delighted seeing the cake, , his mouth watering seeing the cream and choco chips on the cake... maan looked at his mouth, , he was licking his lips... maan smiled where geet still holding him murmuring continuously sorry,,,,, maan knew her inner turmoil, what she was feeling at this moment...

he stood up and sat beside her taking both of them in his embrace...

"sshh geet, stop now... don't say sorry to him... it's okay... nothing happened to him na...." maan rubbed her arm for soothing her pain...

"no maan, , how can i forget vedanta, i was so engrossed in my pain that i forgot him, , it was his b'day maan... aur mai bas apne dukh me hi thi... i am so bad.... " she sobbed hiding her face in his chest while holding vedanta so close...

"not at all geet geet, , sshh , , calm down... nothing happened , aisa kuch nahi hai geet... kuch bhi nahi... there is everyone for vedanta na then why are you feeling like this? you are the bestest mama, , you didn't let us know about your pain and you bear it all alone just for other's happines... then how can you selfish... you are selfless geet... you always care and worried for everyone... now calm down... sshhh... abhi no tears... at least for vedanta...hmm" maan tried to convenience her...

everyone was watching them, they were emotional seeing the love geet has for vedanta... in today's time, no one loves anyone without any reason... geet come forward and placed her hand over her head...

"geet bete, aisa nahi kehte...we know that how much you love him, you yourself know that, and vedanta, he himself know that how much you love him... isliye remove this thing from your head,,,, understood...."

and then she placed a kiss on her forehead, , geet nodded slightly and she kissed vedanta's cheek who was looking them with his innocent eyes... vedanta smiled when geet kissed him, , he also kissed on geet's cheek...though sometimes he said yuck to his cheek kiss but sometime he felt pampered by this kiss...

"maan, why you called al of us here?" asked mohinder...

"papa, you forgot, today is vedanta's b'day... arey cake nahi cut karna" maan said enthusiastically... vedanta jumped in joy from geet's lap and ran towards the cake... all laughed at his excitement...

"yippie... chalo mama cake cut karte hai...."

saying so vedanta pulled geet by holding her hand pulling her down from the bed, , al smiled at his excitement and the way he was in such hurry... geet smiled finally at his antics seeing his cute faces...seeing geet smiling, , other also felt relieved , she'll come out from her shell soon because of vedanta... she really loves him a lot...

geet was taking baby steps... maan sighed and pulled geet in a jerk that she landed direct on his chest and poor vedanta crushed between them... all gaped at his sudden act where geet was shocked first then blushed thinking about thier closeness in front of all...

"geet, jaldi karo... dekho baby is waiting for you only..." geet nodded , , all stood around the table and vedanta was in mid where geet & maan were by his side left & right respectively... all stood behind them blessing them by thier heart, , and hoping that no evil eye will look at them... they always be happy...

maan placed knife in vedanta's hand and then maan & geet placed their hands over his tiny hand holding him & knife properly...vedanta raised his face and have a glance of his parent's face, looking at them that how much they are happy now... before some time ago they crying... he didn't like that... there was a reason behind of his cry that is he heard his mama's cry...

geet saw the twinkle in his eyes, , she felt guilty that she left him like this all alone and she was so engrossed in her world that she forgot about vedanta... she felt bad but then smiled at him... she bend down and placed another kiss on his cheek...

"chalo cake cut karte hai..." said geet... those were the first some happy words from her mouth ,,,,

trio bend down and vedanta blew air from his mouth blowing the candles... maan & geet helped him because the candles were

fired again n again... vedanta was jumping in joy when the candles lit again and he blew them again... this session goes on, all were laughing at his antics and geet too by whole heartly...

after some time finally... the candle gave up and all were clapped a lot, , vedanta now jumped in joy more... now maan & geet held his hand properly and cut the cake, , all sang the b'day song and clapped a lot... blessing them a lot... maan & geet took the piece of upper layer and fed vedanta, , geet was in jolly mood now... she took little cream and applied on his cheeks...

"ewww, , mama, , abhi mai bhi karunga..." he also took some cream... geet horrified from that little vedanta and ran away... all laughed at their antics,,,, vedanta ran behind her, though he was too little by this cream applying session, , maan thought for a while, , he also took some cream and ran behind them telling annie to serve the cake at all' she nodded'.

"mama, meko bhi lagana hai",,, cute Vedanta cribbed running behind her but they were tiny steps'

Precap

Kidnapping'



Now socho... about the precap... kya ho sakta hai? kidnapping but kiski?????? and who'll kidnap???? me evil and devil... hehahaha...😉😆



*...Can you please finish the THREAD... Pretty please... *




Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome n Lovely Update

lovely maaneet moments, loved the way how MAAN calm GEET.

love the emotional bond which GEET n VEDANTA share n VEDANTA finally cut his b'day cake 😊

"ewww, , mama, , abhi mai bhi karunga..." ---ab GEET kaise bachegi VEDANTA the little devil se 😆 😆

oppss MAAN is also running behind GEET to apply cake cream 😆

GEET is running to save herself from two most important person in her life

loved the antics of VEDANTA after cutting the cake 😆

kidnapped who 😕 might be GEET

kidnapper may be SAM or VIRAAJ 😕
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update lovely...continue soon
kahi maan tho nahi...who will kidnap his family...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

waiting dear...sry couldn't comment for the last couple of updates..but u know na will do soon including the one being updated now



updated dear...
will be waiting for ur comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
loved it
vedu saw her mama crying thats why he also crying ..
Omg kidnapping kisi ki Vedu or geet...

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Posted: 12 years ago

emotions & affections of da family r gr8t

well written dear👍🏼
nice precap 😉
waiting 4 da nxt dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
after cute lovable update you give scary precap very bad
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mujhe lagta h maine apna muh hi kyu khola... kidnapping aab kiski kidnapping h... abhi to sab kuch thik hua tha. aab fir se... uff

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