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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maanugeetu

chapter-55 awesome, amazing update.

vedanta is so cute and adorable.
geet and vedanta love each other so much.
thanks for the pm dear.




thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjucool

nice update

so geet knows that she was pregnent
hate this sameera nice that she is punished
continue soon



thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for update
dont forget to pm me dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

waiting for update

dont forget to pm me dear



yup dear, will surely pm u...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_ya1408

Superb update tat sameera deserves a lot more slaps from. Geet



hehehe, , yup, she deserve more...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058



thanks a lot dear...
glad that u loved it..
yup that was her stupidity...
hmm somewhere u are right...


means a big scene is cmng wd family... waiting waiting. but more to maaneet's moments
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Posted: 12 years ago




Thank you so
much for the lovely comments and so much likes,... love you for this... please keep commenting and share ur views about this part too... i didn't get much time, ,, i have typed this part too in office itself... so please ignore mistakes...

you'll get to know soon how geet got to know about her
mc? please keep trust in me...
there will be surprise for you... i have planned so
mething , that too maaneet mo
ments, alone... hope you'll like it...

love ya

neha...




part-56


everyone was baffled with the news, , geet was pregnant and had miscarriage also,,, it was so shocking for all of them... suddenly mohinder fell back on the chair in shock, tej and toasty rushed towards him... he was in shock and after that ,

sameera's words echoing in his ears that maan didn't saw her face and all... he was very tensed with it... he doesn't know what to do or what not? it was so difficult for him as a father, whom he believe or on whom not? it was like everything has been messed up...

toasty-papa, , calm down... if you'll break down like this then who will console our gudiya? haan tell me... she was sitting on her knees in front of mohinder... it was like a sudden tornado came in their life and destroyed everything they have,,,,,

tej-haan papa, , toasty is saying right... papa, geet ke liye, please sambhaliye apne aap ko.. please papa.....

tej held his hand in his and kissed slightly on his knuckles... e drop of tear fell down on his hand, tej looked up and wipe the tear with his finger shaking his head in no, saying him not to cry but the pain should be come out and there is only way for it, tears...

dadi maa come forward,,

mohinder bete, i knew that saying is so easy, even i couldn't come over the shock but we have to... we have to only for geet... hamare liye na sahi lekin geet ke liye, , we should understand her pain also, , she knew the truth all the while but she never told us, , somewhere i knew the reason, she wants our happiness, she doesn't see us in pain that's why she hid the truth, , we should respect this efforts of hers, , she bear all pain alone and now this is the time that we have to stand by her side, only for her....

she caressed slightly his hairs, mohinder is like her own son, , he felt his mother's warmth in her, , he nodded slightly and wipe his tears by himself...

on the other hand annie was shocked listening all this... her bhabhi was pregnant and no one knew that... why? and she had miscarriage also... tears fell down from her eyes also... she love her more than she love maan...

she found a sister, a friend in her with whom she can share her secrets, her every small talk... that's why she loved her more than maan... and her pain, she can't bear... she wipe her tears and ran upstairs near vedanta... as soon as she entered in the room, she hugged vedanta at once...

piya was shocked seeing her state, , arjun had seen her going upstairs, he ran behind her and saw she was crying... he slowly entered in the room...

arjun-annie... calm down and come with me... he knew that it's not the perfect time for all this but he has to do, he wants to know the truth, the complete truth... and right now he can only ask from annie...


annie nodded and left vedanta there, , arjun held her hand and took her out, taking her somewhere in the corner of the mansion...

annie-arjun, geet bhabhi, why she arjun? why she? she sobbed,,,, he hugged her , rubbing her back slowly-2 soothing her pain, , he wants to be with geet but he can't... he knew that maan will handle her properly, after all she is his wife and maan also lost his child... he was in pain also...

arjun-annie, ssshhh... calm down... aise nahi rotey... geet keliye be strong... aur haan remember, only for geet's sake, we have to be happy in front of her... like she was with us... happy and jolly... he wiped her tears and she nodded in yes...

arjun-annie... wo... I... i... wa... i mean... he was fumbling with words... he doesn't know how to ask her? it is a big question, , if he was wrong then , oh god, he was in dilemma... ask or not?

annie-what happen arjun? she asked to him holding hm by his arm...

arjun- nothing annie... it's only... i mean, i want to ask something from you...

annie- then what's the problem? replied annie...

arjun-wo annie, actually... it's... it's about... umm... yeah... it's about maan and geet...

annie-what about maan and geet? what's the matter arjun? you are sounding tensed...

arjun- actually,i wanted to assure myself... jo kuch bhi sameera ne kaha... i want to the complete truth...

annie-kya kaha sameera ne?

arjun-wo, she said that maan wants to marry with her and he didn't saw geet's face whole month... maan doesn't love geet and all...

annie-then what do you want to know? asked annie...

arjun-wo, kya ye sach hai jo sameera ne kaha? dekho annie don't hide anything from me... annie knew that telling him everything will create problem in thier life so she can't tell him the truth...

annie thought for a while what to say him or what not? then she took a deep breath and replied that which is good for this current situation...

annie- arjun, we know sameera from a long time, , she was bhai's friend in college but we never thought that she can do something like this... bhai only helped her when he got to know that she is mental asylum... and there was a big reason behind this,,, she was the wife of bhai's best friend and he thought to help her in her bad state...


and vedanta is her child... that is true but bhai had adopted him legally... how can he leave that small child without his parents alone... rahul died and sameera was in mental asylum... and rest about the question you asked from me after the marriage affair... that is not true...

you knew about sameera, how cheap she is! she can do anything for money and that is she was doing , she wanted to threw geet bhabhi away from bhai's life that's why she was trying to trap you all... that is only... bhai & bhabhi loved each other and now passing from a bad phase after loosing their child... why this happened with them arjun? why? saying so she sobbed in his arms...

the doubts arjun was having all cleared... he knew about sameera from so long, if she can kill her husband then she can do anything...she knew the truth but how can she let down her bro in anyone's eyes... she knew he did was totally wrong but he repented his deeds and now both love each other very much... that is enough... both are happy with each other...

...

maan lied down geet properly on the bed but she was not letting his shirt, , crushing his coat in her fist tightly pulling him towards him, , he knew that she needs him badly... he slowly loosened the hold around his coat and then tucked the duvet over her till neck...


he lay down beside her taking her in his arms while sheturned and hid her face in his chest sobbing, , he was carressing her hairs soothing her pain while his another hand was on her back calming her down...

his eyes were wet also... they say that father has a strong heart than a mother but that doesn't mean that they didn't feel pain or they can't cry... they also feel pain , their heart also ached when they lost someone... they also have emotions,,

he was not crying properly but he was also feeling pain , pain of loosing child, pain of seeing his geet in this state, pain for that he couldn't able to do anything... his heart was filled with pain... he felt a lump in his throat when he tried to speak something... he gulped hard because his throat was dry... he gathered courage and trying to calm her down...

maan- sshh geet, calm down... look in my eyes geet... look here... he cupped her face... she raised her face hearing his soothing voice but she can feel pain in his voice also... her face was messed up with tears and hairs were wet due to tears... he slowly tucked her hair strands behind her ear with his long fingers and wipe her tears by his palm...

she was continuously looking in his eyes then suddenly she broke down...

geet-hamara baby maan... hamara baby... i was failed in saving him... i was failed maan... i am not a good mother, i failed.... she cried her eyes out...

maan-sshh geet... aisa nahi kehte... you are best mother you know, , and why are you saying that you failed... you can never fail... it was our fate and believe me, , our baby will come back soon near us... in you, then you can feel him... don't cry... jo kismat mein tha hi nahi uske liye kya rona... hum apne kismat se to nahi jhagda kar sakte na... understood geet...

geet-par maan...

maan-sshh no more words... think about vedanta... he is your child na... then how can you fail... you know na how much he love you and how much you love him... then how can you fail... tell me.... he slightly kissed her forehead assuring her, bringing her back in her usual self,,

geet-maan, , wo.. wo vedanta ko mujhse dur le jayegi.... she looked at him while pointing her finger somewhere at the word "wo"... maan understand her pain, her fear, her over flowing emotions... he held her finegr in his hand and kissed it...

maan-no one take away vedanta from us... samjhi.. no one... he is legally our child.. samjhi.. don't scared for this... we have done al the legal procedure, no one can gather this courage to take away vedanta from you... he is our child and will be always... now calm down...

geet-sach maan...

maan-hmm... sach... now take a little nap... you'll feel better....

geet denied... she doesn't want to sleep... he careesed her face slowly...

geet-par maan, hamara baby... please maan aise kaise wo chala gaya, mujhe pata bhi nahi chala... why this happened to me maan? why? she asked to him shaking him slightly... he took her face in his hands and hid her in his chest... she hugged him tightly, he was telling her soothing words...

maan- , geet, don't think like that,,,,, please, there is no fault of yours... geet shayad god wants this only that's why he didn't let you feel about the baby...geet think like that, , god has plan something more special for us...

she nodded slowly wiping her tears...

maan-wait geet, first eat something, you didn't have anything from noon...


precap

suddenly she backed out from the kiss... she was restless suddenly... her heart beats were fast and a fear ran through her nerves...


confusing??????????? 😉 but you'll love it... that's a pro
mise...

now please co
mment a lot... ...this time no pics as i was in hurry and didn't get time to gather pics...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5


means a big scene is cmng wd family... waiting waiting. but more to maaneet's moments



umm, , not that big... but some doubts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful update
maneet heart was too strong
they both knew the truth then also everyone
they took all pain alone
annie also told lie to save her maaneet realtion
maan is trying his best to comfort geet but its not easy

precap

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


updated... look prev page
Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago

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