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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

nice part

geet was lost in past
then remembering ved she was back to herself
cake cutting moments cute..



thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Finally geet apne dukh se bahar aa gayi...so she was holding her greif only b'coss of ved...really a best mother...

Uuhhh...kidnapping...whose...?
Update soon



thanks a lot dear...
thanks for giving her best mother title...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

awesome

liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting
waiting
waiting



thanks a lot dear and yeh updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome update Neha...wow...that wa sjust amazing

finally Maan ne mana liya Geet ko and then she was so hyoer tinking abt Vedu...
i just loved the cake cutting scene
as to your precap - hmmm why do i think it will eb a sweet kidnapping which will bring maaneet closer...



thanks a lot di...
glad that u loved the cake cutting part...
hehehe, , 😉😛
i hope u'll love cake applying part also...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago


yeah dear updating... bas kuch mins...
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yeah updating dear...
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Last precap is not here'. I thought to give you some happy moments after the saddy past, the pain' so here is the little happy moments of the cute family and little romance of maaneet'..

hope you'll like it'.

Thanks a lot for the likes and comments'.

Please like it and motivate me further by your comments'.. and thank you so much, you know what part-56 has been reached to 204 likes'. I have updated though me very sad because today my cousins met with an accident'. Both are very critical' admitted in hospital now...

Finally i got to know that how to add links in Signature... that too by myself... at least kuch to apne app kiya bina kisi se puchhey... and sabse badi baat it is working...hehehe...*happy*


@brandgurti- please delete some pms from ur inbox... u r not allowed to get pm... ur inbox is overflowing now... pls do something...




Part-58



everyone laughed a lot holding their stomach at the vedanta's antics... he was running behind geet holding cake's piece where maan was also behind them... all bid bye to each other and wished good night... they retired to their respective rooms... where geet reached in her room.. she was laughing and screaming saving herself from cake's cream... she doesn't want to mess herself but she know that vedanta and maan will not leave her...

she is happy now, , somewhere the pain she was hiding in the corner of her heart went away... it was not like that she didn't know about her miscarriage, she knew that but she was hiding her pain because of everyone's sake... because of maan, , she doesn't want that maan will go again in his guilt trip, ,she couldn't see him like this, she knew that if maan will come to know that he will surely blame himself and that was the fact... maan blame himself but geet didn't know that...

she was protecting maan from this pain but she never knew that maan already knew about this miscarriage thing...he was also hiding this pain from her but it was so selfless for both of them, , they wanted to protect each other but their love was so strong that they knew but still they hiding for their well being'..

Geet hid behind the curtain for saving herself from her naughty son, , though she wanted to play the game with him but still she thought to tease them, ,maan and Vedanta reached to the room and searching geet'.. Vedanta's face was fell off not seeing geet there'.. he made a face'.. and he asked cutely to maan'' "papa, , where is mama? i also want to apply this cake on her face like she did with me" he sat down on the bed with the cute & angry pout on his face'..


(Here is my cutie pie, sweetie pie, chhotu sa, mera, geet ka, maan ka, aap sabka laadla vedanta...aka vedu... 😊, , i have searched a lot but u know what where i have found it, in my lappy itself... hope you'll like Vedanta's pic...)




Geet was having fun teasing them so much but she couldn't see him like this'. Maan felt bad for Vedanta but he knew that he can't be angry from geet'. He called geet but she didn't reply'.. now only there is one way left for him'.. he sighed and went on his knees in front of Vedanta , ,he bend down matching his level of height'' maan singh khurana, who never bend his face in front of anyone and here he was totally bend in front of his son, that is the love & affection he has for his son'.

"okay beta, , if mama will not come outside then papa is here na'. aap papa ke face par cake laga lo'" maan said to Vedanta pinching his nose a little and messing his nose a little with cream'.. Vedanta smiled because getting chance messing his father otherwise when he'll get this golden chance''.

Vedanat was about to apply the cream on his face but suddenly geet's voice stopped him'.

"arey when I am here then why will you mess your papa? Haan bolo" she said standing little far away from them , putting her hands on both sides of her waist'.. cheeks were puffed little bit and she was tapping her foot continuously demanding the answer , , maan inwardly jumped in joy getting her out from her shell where she was hiding'' but he thought to play further'..

"arey geet, , tum rehne do' I'll manage him'.you go & take rest" said maan shooing her away where Vedanta was looking at both of them who were fighting for the cake, on whose face Vedanta will apply cake'.. ? uff geet stormed her foot in anger, her lips were curved in anger, looking very cute she was'. She went near Vedanta and held his hand, , she by herself applied the cake on her cheeks then applied little on maan's face also still holding Vedanta's hand'.

Geet was so much engrossed in Vedanta, , maan thought a plan, he was having cake in his hand, , finding the perfect chance, maan mashed whole cake on her face'. Where she was startled suddenly, she blinks her lashed couple of times which were also messed with the cake bread & cream'. Her mouth was wide open and hands were in air , ,

she was dumbstuck'. Vedanta was laughing like a maniac where maan also'. But geet's cheeks were fuming in anger, , her cheeks flared and puffed more'. She groaned inwardly and was about to clean her hands on maan's face' he signaled to Vedanta that go away from here'..

he nodded and went away closing the gate behind'.. maan knew her very well' now she'll take her revenge from maan, , maan laughed pointing his finger at her, she curled her finger in a fist and ran behind him where he was running around the bed saving himself'. The reason of this behind was so clear'. He wanted to see her laughing not a sad geet'.. he wants that she'll enjoy fully not to capture herself in a shell'. And he was succeed'.

Geet was very near him from his back' suddenly his feet was trapped in a bed sheet which was lying on the floor, , and he fell on bed where geet also lost her control over herself and fell on his back directly hitting herself on his firm back'. Her whole body crashed on him like a second skin'. Both were startled suddenly'.. her both hands around his face and his face was messed up with the cake'. He close his eyes in defeat where her eyes twinkled in winning the game'..

His heartbeats raged a little feeling her softness on his back , slowly he turned up taking her in his arms holding her by her waist while she was blinking her lashes holding the moment in her eyes, , her heartbeats were fast, , she was feeling weak inside her body'.. he slowly raised his finger tracing her face by the tip of his finger, taking little cream from her face on the tips, she closed her eyes feeling the warmth of his fingers'..

"geet, open your eyes!!" he demanded to her'. He wants to distract her and he was successful'. He traced his finger again on her face applying that cream on her face'.. she slowly open her eyes hearing his demanding voice which has the different impact on her'. She saw the desires in his eyes which make her weak more'' he traced her lips by his thumb and index finger'.

Her heartbeat raised , , his wild desires awaken feeling the ups & downs of her curves which were going up and falling down on his broad & firm chest'.. his warm breath mingled with hers as their mouth were so close'. Slowly he sucked his thumb and then his finger licking the cream over his finger direct looking in her eyes, telling her straight about his desires''.

She blushed profusely feeling his hardened around her belly'. It was really very hard for both of them'. But she was not less than'. He dress getting a wet patch below down between her thighs'.. in a jerk, he turned over and now she was underneath him, covering he petite structure with his manly broad body'.

Her held her hand which was messed with the cake'. And slowly taking the sweet time, he rubbed her hand on his cheek creating havoc inside her tummy when his stubble touched on her soft palm'. She closed her eyes again when he placed a soft kiss on her palm licking the cream by the tip of his tongue sensuously , she curled the bed sheet in her fist by her clean hand''. She was getting weak with this sweet assault only'..

"ohhh geet" he was getting mad by this and making her insane also'. She opened her eyes getting little courage after taking his sweet torture on her'. When she opened her eyes, he saw the glint of naughtiness in her eyes, he knew that she is up to something surely but he was also prepared for this, after all , he wanted her by herself like she used to'.

"maan!!" she whispered, her warm breath fanned direct on his lips awakening more desires inside him, , he was hardened more'. He never knew that he can be hard because of this much only but both of them liked that'. Both were blushing like anything, , she moved her a little taking her face on angle towards his cheeks'. She parted her lips where his eyes stare at her passionately'.

His hold tighten around her waist when he felt her warm soft petals on his rough stubble licking the cream sensuously wetting his cheek more'. It was really hard for them'. Her lips were moving up & down on his cheek licking whole cream from his cheek , slowly-2 her lips moved down on his jaw line kissing him slowly yet passionately making him groan' her face moved down on his neck where she teethed his skin a little, he hissed a little in pain but it was a sweet pain he felt'. and then licked the skin soothing the pain'.

Her waist was messed up with the cake by his hands, , he opened his eyes where his eyes met with her cleavage which was clearly visible by the deep cut of her blouse, though he had gifted her only but he never knew that it can be so perfect & sexy & hot too'. His eyes drugged seeing the view in front of his eyes'.. her hand was in air was about to touch her face but suddenly he held her hand and put her fingers in his mouth sucking them slowly taking the revenge from her, , she closed her eyes in defeat'..

And then he traced the area of her cleavage by his finger then slowly-2 his fingers replaced by his lips, tracing down the valley between her curves over her blouse'.. she doesn't know when her fingers started moving down on his shirt unbuttoning it rubbing his waxed chest by her wet yet warm palm'. He dipped his head in the hollow of her neck and placed some sensuous kissed on her neck, her collarbone'..

The hear radiated in her body when his warm finger clutched her cold ones passing the hotness in her body, , their messy hands clutched together messing the bed-sheet while their lips were doing it's work properly, , his lips placed carnally on her collarbone teething her , she hissed in pain biting her lip in pain, then his sensuous soft yet rough M shaped lips soothed her pain licking the skin , by his lips, by his tongue, she arched back giving him more space for access , ,


her hold tighten more on his hand when he rubbed the tip of his nose between the valley of her cleavage'. She raised her upper body while he dipped his head more in her inhaling the sweet aroma of hers which is snatching the rest sense he has'.!

While annie cleaned Vedanta's face where he was telling her stories that how he enjoyed a lot with his mama and papa'. And annie was laughing a lot hearing the stories in his cute tone'. Later after cleaning him annie make him sleep and then went in her room taking the sweet sleep after all this pain'

Precap

Same "kidnapping"

I want your support gals, please press Like and do Comments, , I want to know your views about it'. How you felt about this'. And please leave long comments'..

Love ya...and Huggss...

Neha...

Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me 1st ...loved the update ...maneet arguing for messing their faces from vedu...really cute ...
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
vedu is sooo cuteee

loved their cute nhok jhok and romance
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Posted: 12 years ago



wow lovely update.. te way ved is sad and my maan bowing in front of his son, and te way geet came out was so lovely.. cake fight turned into passionate moment.. te way my maaneet losing themselves, and burning in they desires was so lovely..i love te update so much

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