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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet

loved the way maan expressed his feeling...
n others saying about geet ...
bn vedu hapiiee buddayy to u :P n iss bachu ne toh mama papa ki pol khol di..
precap waiting...
waiting 4 nxt part..



thanks a lot dear...
haan pol khol di sach me...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: billy_ritu

does she knw abt the baby?

oh my god abhi toh unhone hasna seekha tha nd ab dukhi ho jayenge



thanks dear...
everything will be fine dear... keep faith in me...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthich

that was sweet update...
GEET ke liye sabika pyaar muje bada pasand aaya... n that camerea record bi...
n vedanta comment bi😉

awee... MAAN ka description abt GEET bada pyaara hai!!!
waise why GEET is in pain???
waiting for next...



thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...RIDDHIMA...

wow what a lovely part...haaye sab geet se kitna pyaar karte hai...MSK n singing!!!!lolz...oye last me ye kya tha??? y geet is in pain???n what pain??? chalo next part mein toda sa teaser to milega...jaldi update dena...eagerly waiting...



thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

lovely part...

geet is the fav of all... in a short span she have won every ones hearts... just loved cutie pie vedu... the way he was telling all his parents romantic details was nice...

waiting for the next



thanks a lot dear... yup in a short span of time, she won everyone's heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago


updating dear,...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zee_News

Pain? Which pain?...


And precap, it seems Sameera back for troubles... I hope that Maan shows that he is worth Geet's love and trust her...

She lost her child, which might be the pain u talk about as one of members mentioned, but yet she didn't want to make him feel guilty, he needs to stand up for Geet...




thanks dear...
u'll get to know in further parts...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hi Neha,


Awww...such a sweet and cute update dear...loved it to bits as always.

Loving this Maneet a lot...who are opening up to each other with their talks, naught and bold, and actions😉.

Happy to see bubbly and lively Nidhi back..the way she was fighting and teasing Arjun, being a kid with her father, and cribbing cutely with Alka and Vicky, and her pouting with Misha and piya...feels so nice to see her like that.

Loved the idea of Rey to know every1 feelings of Maneet...me toh happy with the love she is getting from every one and how Maan is cherishing this time and he happy with dadi's words..

And the best part was the way Maan expressed his love..and their dance was beautiful

But the end was so unexpected...so is it that Geet knows about her baby and thinking that no one is aware of it or what...but how...omg poor girl...hope she opens up with Maan and he helps her to come out of it with his love and saath...




hi anu...
hows u?
thank u so much for the longgg comment... every time...
nidhi????? u got confused kya?
well, about the pain, u'll get to know in further parts...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for so much likes... love you all...

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Posted: 12 years ago



whoaaa gals... i have checked now part-51...i was shocked after seeing co
mplete 200 likes over there...thank you so much for making it double century... muah to every single person of 200 buddies... a big thank u from my heart and a big hug...


@ ritzy di- thanks a lot di...
u always left me speechless with ur comment...
yeah this is patakha before dhamaka...
yup me too liked the female version but i found that on net, that was a short song specially for male...
yup a girl wants nothing if she got love...and care...
di, i always admire ur word which u left on this fanaa thread... ur pov about the characters... sometimes i changed the track because of your pov... it effects me a lot... i really admire you... seriously...




Part-53

They were engrossed in their own world that they didn't realize that they both only on the dance floor and dancing and rest were watching them with a huge smile on their face,,,,, lights were dim and the environment was perfect for the romance, ,

A huge applauds broke them from their dance, they come out from their lala land and geet blushed profusely when she heard the sound of clapping, , she is getting what she wants,

the love from maan's and his family…..

she is feeling the most happiest person on the world but somewhere a tinge of pain deep inside of her heart, , the craving for something what she never knew

that it existed in her life but when she came to know, It had gone, , like a sand from her hand….. she didn't able to stop, and how will she able when she never knew that she is worth for it….

maan held her by her waist and led her near to dadi... they stood thier silently, when dadi come forward and kissed geet and maan on thier forehead... she got that what she desired for maan, and now she is not regretting for her decision to forgive maan,,,, he truly repent his deed and starts loving her, , she wants this from maan and now both are happy in their life...it doesn't something that they desired... it is like beyond of thier desires...

later after some minutes, dadi announced for Laxmi pujan... all gathered in the temple , geet, annie, ash, alka and toasty come forward and lit all the diyas... dadi asked maan to accompany geet in laxmi puja... he nodded and went ahead... geet glanced at maan and their eyes met for a second, , they smiled at each other..this smile of his is something like snatch any girl's heart and here so many girls present who are bachelors, , they are literally jealous from geet when they were dancing holding each other so close, thier close proximity is like burning thier heart in to ashes...

maan held puja thaal while geet held his elbow standing right side of his... the sang the laxmi aarti and all were along with them singing the laxmi aarti... after that geet take the thaali , gave the aarti to all... after some time girls went outside taking diyas in a thaal and put them outside and the terrace of the mansion...

all were very happy and enjoying the double celebration.. kids were engrossed in thier own world... playing, jumping, eating...

maan directed to nakul that bring the cake, , nakul followed and brought the cake... all were gathered in the party hall and waiting for the delicious cake desperately and kids specially... kids were having a hard time for the cake... after all it's vedanta's birthday, , maan singh khurana's son... everyone was so happy , vedanta was jumping in joy, and in love he is getting from so many peoples... playing with so many kids...

geet's friends were not leaving him, , sometimes pull his cheeks or sometimes kissed him, , making geet jealous that see they love vedanta more beside of geet, but geet was geet, , she was not in a mood of jealousy today... she is having fun totally, enjoying the day fully, being with her love, her maan, , her family from whom she got whatever she had desired, ,love, attention, and so on... friends, who love her more than anything... her bestest buddies, arjun, alka and vicky, who being with her in her hard time also...

whenever she had needed a shoulder for cry, arjun or vicky would be the first one while alka stood in front of her holding tissue box... but somewhere there is a emptiness in her heart, craving for that what she didn't got... yah, craving for that, that was not hers, , actually seems that is not in her destiny, , otherwise she would surely get to know about that...

but seems that it's god wish for not fulfilling her demand,,,, this is not necessary that person get everything in her life... there is always lacking something, , after all no one can be perfect with all things,,,,, that is the rule of nature...

nakul brought the six layers cake, flavors with chocolate, vanilla, raspberry, dark chocolate chips over them, and garnished with orange cream and pineapple peices, , and don't know so many flavors in that cake... different layers with different taste... all were gathered around the table, , vedanta is in mid, in left is geet, in right is maan, dadi was standing near geet while annie was beside of maan, rey and ash were capturing the moments... tej, toasty, arjun, alka, vicky, piya and all were either beside of them or behind of them...

maan held the knife and placed it in vedanta's tiny hands, , maan held his hand over his while geet also held their hands... all were smiling and laughing... it was the best day in khurana mansion, so much happiness in one day... double celebration,,,, some were waiting for burning the crackers while some were waiting for getting the big piece of delicious cake... kids were waiting for cake and return gift... it was like everyone is waiting for something...

tall have start singing the birthday song, some are in thier sweet tone, while some are in their besura tone, but when every tone mixed up, it was like sweet birthday song reflecting love, affection, eagerness for the cake... they were about to placed the knife's sharp edge on the cake just then a voice stopped them from their track and the birthday song has been stopped...

"wait maan, , vedanta will cut the cake with his mama only" said the lady... well an evil lady... all were stood rooted at their place sameera there, , geet's eyes popped seeing sameera there, , she stood rooted at her place, ,but soon she come out from the shock and her eyes filled up at once hearing that... though she very knew that vedanta is not her son but still hearing that from other's mouth affected her... it pinched her heart...

sameera come slowly towards maan and stood near him , , everyone knew that vedanta is not maan's real son cause he got married before 4 months only... he is a adopted child and all respected maan for this...

maan was shocked seeing her there, how can she come out of jail and that too from Europe, , he is not getting anything, while rey and ash were also shocked seeing her there... the case was so strong that she couldn't be come out then how??? sameera was very happy seeing maan's shocking face while she was burning seeing geet with him...

""how the hell you are here? maan demanded an answer from her, , geet raised up her face looking at maan, the hateredness on his face, his face was shaking with anger, , his jaw was tight, eyes were spitting fire…. Still his hand was clutching Vedanta's hand tightly giving him more pain….

"aah" Vedanta hissed in pain, , maan looked down hearing the voice filled with pain, his eyes soften at once seeing Vedanta in pain…. He loosened his hold on his hand, , and knelt down in front of Vedanta forgetting that sameera is here…..

"sorry baby….. papa is very sorry for hurting you…. " he blew on his hand like it was burned from something…. And kissed numerous times on his hand….. geet felt her heart will choke with emotion, , she couldn't control anymore and held maan by his shoulder…… "he is fine maan…. Nothing happened to him" geet spoke softly……

Actually maan felt suddenly like if sameera take away Vedanta from him….. the pain of distance, , the pain of going away from their beloved person is very hard….. it was a sharp pain he felt for Vedanta….. and geet, , how will she survive without Vedanta, , he was the only source when he was away from her, ,


Vedanta is the only one who brought the smile on her sad face, , who cheered her up with his innocent talks, , it was like Vedanta is everything for her….. she never told anything about Vedanta to anyone but everyone knew that what Vedanta meant for her, , and specially dadi & annie….. but maan knew that what type of bond geet shared with him…..

Maan nodded and stood up straight looking at sameera, , sameera was beaming with happiness seeing the fear on maan's face for Vedanta but soon that fear turned up from the dangerous look, , the famous look on maan's face….. sameera was scared from inside but she knew that she has to put up the brave face…. And her motive to come here is not only Vedanta but something else which none knew that…..

"Vedanta, baby… come mama ke paas…. See yours mama is here on your birthday…. " she came forward to Vedanta raised her arms signaling him to come in mama's arms….. geet at once pulled Vedanta towards her hiding his face in her stomach so that he won't be witnessed of her evilness……

"she is not my mama" said Vedanta hiding his face in her stomach more…. His voice mere audible but geet was able to hear that…….. she at once knelt down matching his level…..

"no baby…. She is not your mama… I am your mama…. Sirf mai" geet trying to assure him in her strong voice but only she knew that what kind of trauma she is going through….. and waise bhi, , they had adopted him by legally and no one can separate them….. Vedanta hugged geet while sameera come forward trying to touch Vedanta but soon maan held her arm and pushed her back…..

This is only this time…..well no much short…. Enough long na…. yah comparing to my other updates, shorter little bit…… seriously gals not getting much time to type anything…. I have typed this in my office hours when I got free time….. please ignore mistakes….. from 5-6 days not getting much time because guests were coming at home, so many preparations and at Sunday , , would be in-laws of my sister came at home and her alliance was finalized….. that's y I was so much busy…..

Thanks a lot for the likes and comments….

Please press Like and do Comments…

I needed your support for this phase of this FF…..

please keep faith in me, in next part, everything will be out….

Love ya

Neha





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