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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
congrats for the new thread👏
nice teasers
some are good n some are confusing
will be waiting for the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

thank you so much for liking the part...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all, thank you so much for the love you have showered on me….. we have reached on thread 5, , yippie…. Thank you so so much…. Muah….. and thanks a lot for liking the part and commenting, , hugs to all of you….

@anshra-thanks di for ur comment..

@Sdlife19-sorry dear for not commenting on ur work, , I have to catch up with the updates…. I am on my way of Dangerous love , last night I had read 2 parts, actually u gave longgg parts then won't be able to read much so going slow… then will read Destiny…. Then will comment… don't think that I left your ff in mid…

@Zohafarheen-dear, u used to comment on my work na, then what happen that you became silent reader.. craving for your comment dear...


@popanecon-dear, hoyi comes after karwachauth and before Diwali…. It is said that diwali comes at the same day of hoyi next week…. And I don't know that in South, East or West, Hoyi celebrate or not but here in North, we celebrate Hoyi with a great zeal..

It's my pleasure that you like Hoyi vrat…. And you got to know about this…. Hope you would had enjoyed it….

Love ya

Neha

Part-50(D)


"geet, , every time when I see in your eyes, , I felt that I have seen these eyes of yours before, like I have some kind of unknown connection with these almonds, I don't know where I have seen? I don't know I am asking right or wrong? But I thought to ask you once , please tell me kya hum pehle miley hai? I am not able to regain anything, , your eyes remind me something, , you know your eyes remind of that girl once I have saved her but couldn't able to saw her face…. I don't know why I am joining those eyes with your face" he paused for a min seeing her reaction where he saw a little happiness on her face….

"geet , I know you are thinking me insane but I am really restless , I felt like I have an unknown bond with you before our marriage", , he caressed her face again pecking her forehead,,,,

Her heart beat raised hearing his words, , she was thinking all the while that he remember her but no he doesn't remember her, , only new about her almond eyes, , she felt choking but then she thought for a moment that he never saw her face then how will he remember her, , she smiled at her thoughts, , sometimes we expect more than its needed….

First time she was wearing yashmak , her face not visible, only her eyes were visible… and then in Spain, , in that night, her shiny eyes were only visible otherwise her whole face was covered with his shadow, he didn't saw her that time also…. She shrugged off all her thoughts while maan was waiting for her reply…..

She was so much engrossed in her thoughts that she doesn't get to know that maan is watching her every changed expression… he slowly caressed her face with the tip of his fingers taking her back from her thoughts….he patted her cheeks slowly, his lashes going up and down checking her facial features….


"what happen geet? You didn't reply me, , did we meet before geet? Bolo na" he asked impatiently to her….

She gasped at once, his closeness taking a toll on her hormones, , something is happening inside her, , she was feeling differently, , "wo maan" she whispered slowly, , their breath was mingled with each others, , both felt each others hot breath on their face, , it was really new for both, though both slept in each other arms sometimes but they were never so close like this….

"haan bolo na geet, , I want to know, , I don't know geet why I am feeling so restless, bolo na geet, , kyo mujhe tumhari aankhein kisi ki yaad dilate hai, aisa lagta hai like I knew you before the marriage…mai tumhar chehra unn aankho ke sath jodta hu jisey mainey ek baar kuch boys se bachaya tha, I don't remember clearly but still some faded memories are there…. "

"Maan, , really aapko kuch yaad nahi hai?" she asked finally…… (maan, really you don't remember anything?)

"nothing like that geet, , I remember little bit but not in a exactly… you tell me na…" he set her hair strands behind her ear, , she smiled now remembering those meeting with him, , the first time when her eyes met with him, , her second meeting with him….

"geet, why are you smiling? " he asked from her feeling like an alien who doesn't know anything…..

She circled her arms around his neck and brought him more close to her suddenly…. He fell down on her, the little bit was left between them covered by that sudden pulled, , the air also can't pass between them….. " geet, what…" he gasped at once and he was about to say something but his talk was left in mid when geet placed her finger on his lip silencing him further…

"sshh maan…. Aapko pata hai sunsaan sadak par, ek akeli ladki aur uske pichhey kuch gundey, , wo help-2 chilla rahi thi, , ladki aagey-2 aur gundey pichhey-2, , bechari ladki dari si sehmi si, , kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare, , aur uska chehra……", , this time she was silenced by maan….

(you know maan , an alone girl in an empty road and some goons behind her, she was asking for help, , she is running ahead and goons were behind her, , poor that girl scared and feared, she didn't understand what to do? And her face….. )

"aur uska chehra covered with yashmak, , ek ladka jiski car khraab thi wo waha apni car repair kar raha tha, , tabhi wo ladki uss ladke se takraati hai aur kehti hai please help me, , aur ladka uski aankhon mein dekhta hai, , tabhi wo gundey…" now maan was silenced by geet, , and she told him…

(and her face was covered with yashmak, one boy whose car was damaged, , he was repairing his car over there, just then that girl bumped with that boy and asked him for help, and that boy saw in the eyes of that girl, just then those goons…..)

"tabhi wo gundey waha aa jate hai aur wo ladka unn logo se uss ladki ko bachata hai, unse fight karta hai" replied geet, ,

(just then those goons came there and that boy fought with those goons and saved that girl….)

"par jaise hi wo ladka palat kar dekhta hai to wo ladki gayab, , uss ladke ne uss ladki ko bahut dhunda par ladki bina kuch kahe waha se chali gayi, yeh nahi ek thanks hi keh kar jaati…. Wo ladka bahut niraash hua" said with such a disappointment …..

(but as soon as that boy turned up, that girl was disappeared, that boy searched that girl but that girl went away from there without saying anything, , at least she can say thanks , , that boy was very disappointed….)

"thanks maan, uss ladki ki help karne ke liye…. " replied geet tightening her hold on maan's neck….

"that means wo ladki tum hi thi, , hai na geet?" asked maan….. she nodded smilingly….

"par geet, why were you running and why those boys were chasing you?" asked maan going hyper….

"nothing maan, , it's a long story , leave it…waise maan thanks for beating them, bahut maza aaya" replied geet….

"geet, tumhe maza aaya, bechare ladke ke bare me nahi socha, , uski kya haalat huyi hogi?" told maan dramatically….

"oye khabardaar jo uss ladke ko bechara bola to, , I saw , his biceps, , uske dole sholey, , his red eyes when he saw those goons, majaal hai koi usey hath bhi laga de…"

"achha ji, , itna confidence achha nahi aur ye kya tum mere samne uss ladke ke bare mein soch rahi ho, not fair…" he chided like a cute baby….

"ale, , mere cutie jealous hai?" she asked pulling his cheeks…. He snapped at once and glared her back calling him cutie…. And jealous,,,,, no ways…. He thought…

"geet, , none call me cute and you, you are calling me cute… and jealous no ways,,,, I am not jealous… aur uss ladke se to bilkul bhi nahi…." Replied maan with a confidence….

"but mai to jealous hu with that girl, , and yes I have only right to call you cute…. My cutie hubby" she laughed so maan also. , , now he is feeling light after knowing that geet is that girl whom he had saved…. Both rolled on bed laughing, enjoying but suddenly maan regained something and stopped, , now geet is over him, , maan is underneath her….

"and geet, , I had saved again a girl and that too in Spain, , when I was diving and she was also diving… I can't understand one thing, , why that girl was diving that too at night, , usey pata hona chahiye tha ki at night it's not safe diving in the sea… " maan complained cutely….

"ohho maan, , that girl saw that boy who saved her, she saw him, he was going for diving so she also went behind him, , she was crazy you know , ," replied geet…

"but why she was crazy for that boy? Usmein akal naam ki cheej hai ya nahi?" asked maan…. Both were smiling and sharing their thought with each other in a different way….

"maan, what are talking, I said na she was crazy then how come she will have brain, , common sense nahi hai aap mein…" she replied jokingly….. maan smiled and rolled over….

"achha ji, , mujhme common sense nahi hai, , then how come you fell in love with a senseless person?" asked maan to her….

"maan because I am crazy and only crazy person can fall in love with senseless person… you got it…"

"bilkul geet, , perfectly…..waise geet, , how come you fell in love with me?" asked maan finally…. He wants to know the reason behind this…. He never knew her and she was in love with him….

"maan, , actually I don't know when it happened? May be at our first meeting when ours eyes met or may be second meeting or may be I used to drool over your pic in fashion magazines…really I don't know…" replied geet with a serious face, , she really knew when it all happened with her, , it was like she was going deep and deep inside the pool of love…or in ocean of love…. Her friends used to make fun of her but then they become serious after seeing seriousness over maan….. maan sensed seriousness , he thought to change the topic…. He smirk and told to her….

"btw geet, , that night in Spain, , you were wearing shorts and b (words stuck in his throat when he was about to voice out what it was, , he felt shy only with the thought and geet's eyes widened hearing him, she was wearing shorts with blue color bra, , words stuck in his mouth when he remember she was wearing shorts & bra) umm nothing, , I mean leave this topic…."

"maan" she whisper slowly…. She felt shy, he cheeks reddened, , and blushed profusely , , he was also blushing…..

"btw geet, , I can imagine you know now in that dress" he smiled sheepishly , , she hit him on his shoulder at once…. Suddenly maan stopped and stared at her face, , his intense gaze stopped her smile also, , she can see the so much intensity in his eyes, the love,, and what he wants right now…. Thinking about that she blushed again….

His warm breath become more warm with his demand , her fingers reached in his scalp and massaged his hairs, , she closed her eyes indicating him to go one, , move ahead with your demand….he bend slowly his face, turning with the angle of kiss, , slightly brushed his lips with hers, ,their body jolted at once, , their body stiffed at once with the feel of each other lips second time…..

He brushed his lips again with hers while her one hand was roaming on his back shamelessly, , he grabbed her lips in his, , and nibbled slowly, , she too responded him back in the kiss, , and the slow kiss turned a passionate kiss, , both were chewing each other lips, , she gasped for air and he at once caught her tongue, , their tongue danced with each other, tasting the sweet honey nectar of their mouth, , it was like a heaven for them…

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love ya
neha





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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first for the first time

now back to update
it was awesome
maan finally got to know the girl whom he saved was none other than geet
nd the way they were talking about each other
love it
maan nd his shameless comment☺️

cont. soon

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome update
loved it
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome Update ...loved their teasing and romance ...
waiting for next update
Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesome update neha!!!!
Thnx 4 pm...
Bt one doubt...teaser kab aayega????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome update
loved it...
dey shared deir thoughts... lovely n cute
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome blossom...loved the update
so now finally Maan knows abt the crazy girl who had fallen in love with him...i just loved the way they shared thoier past moments with each other...it almost felt like there was no past and they were just knwoing each other after an arranged marriage...
very beautifully penned down indeed
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

kiss☺️ loved it

thanx for the pm

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