MG SS~SUHAAGAN Part9/Pg45, Note/Pg51 11Apr - Page 9

Originally posted by: CiaMaaneet

Brown-Eyes: I really lv ur profile name Dear... It reminds me of DD...

Dazzling Divz: Tere commnts pad ke bahot accha laga... U r really sweet Dear must say... No wonder tumhe sab cutie pie, bachha bulatein hai...

Fabulous update dear

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Kriti_rox, geet.lover, 3295, MonaLovesMaan: OMG..!!! 😲 M feeling so happy reading ur commnts.. Does my writing confuse so much k u'l feel Geet will love some1 else…?? 😆

lovesia: Jst would like to say they are Handas.. Kuch bhi kar sakthe hai… 😕 But they had a vry big reason behind it..U'l vl get 2 knw as the story progresses.. 😳

Jeba.Rahman: Haan hai… U'l come to knw lekin a little later… I knw kissi ke bhi dil ko thandak nahi milegi jab tak RV ki identity reveal nahi hojaati… 😈 Par main kya karoon agar usse saamne aane mein tym lag raha hai… 😒

pari_jyothika: Glad to knw u liked my style of writing… 😃 M writing for the 1^st tym Dear… so thodi tariff ke saath mere writings mein kissi baat ki kami hai toh usse bhi be-jijaq mujhe batana…

sdlife19, tushti-kiran, anmirza: Jst few more updts Dearies.. Phir saara golmal clear ho jaayega.. U c sabr ka fal meetha hota hai… 😳

chavvi16: Itna kahungi ke jitna tum Maan ko nahi dekh sakthi Geet ke bina tadap the huye waise hi main bhi nahi dekh sakthi.. But whatever is happening has some reasons.. Stay tuned Dear everything will b revealed aur Maaneet ko koi juda kar saktha hai kya…?? 😳

angelic_cute: Your wish is my command.. Nichewala updt full with Maaneet moments.. ❤️

shabnam22: You will get to knw soon Dear… 😊

vandana73: Yes they are meetng nichewale updt mein, lekin in flashback Sorry.. 😉

ritzy09: Haan Dii Geet sirf Maan ki hai… And I hope RV too agrees vd it… 😕

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Part 3

11:00pm ; Khurana Mansion

Maan reached KM smiling blushingly. The whole KM was calm and most of the lights were off, perhaps all had gone to bed. He decided it wont be fair to talk to Dadi at this time. He climbed upstairs and had just passed Vicky's room when he heard some romantic talks. He smirked and went inside the room making no noise. Vicky was in the balcony attached to his room and was trying to manoafy someone on the call.

"Baby… Sorry naa..!! I just wanted to surprise you…"

"Tum India aanewali hon naa… Issiliye main pehle aa gaya… Angel suno toh..."

"Plz let me explain…"

Maan looked at his flirty little brother and self thought yeh kabse itna serious ho gaya. Jahaan tak I know he cares a damn agar isski koi GF isse naaraz ho gayyi toh. Vicky could not speak much as his so called Baby had angrily cut the call. Getting disappointed he turned towards his room to see his Bro looking at him with yeh-sab-kya-chal-raha-hai look. Ignoring his teasing look he spoke keeping his cool.

"Bro..Aap kab aayein…"

"Tabhi jab tum tumhari BABY ko mana rahe thein…"

Vicky looked at him sheeplishly and Maan wanted to know is his little brother in love.

"So Vicky are u in love…??"

"I don't knw Bro… Pata nahi iss ehsaas ko pyaar kehte hai ya nahi…?? Kaise pata chalega mujhe whether m in love or not…??"

"Vicky… Kya bataaun tumhein..?? Love is the feeling of contentment when you see her smiling face. It is the best thing you ever had felt."

"OMG… Bro..!! You love someone… Kab?? Kaise?? Tell me Bro…"

Maan smiled at his little brother's eagerness and started telling of his 1^st crush, his love Geet.

"Remember Vicky.. How we always spent our vacations in HP Haveli..Uss time pe tu hamesha apni kitabon mein duba rehta tha... Book-worm!! Aur mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha..Uss Haveli mein mera toh mann hi nahi lagtha tha… Aur iissiliye main hamesha bahar ghumna prefer karta tha.. Nobody knew me there as a Khurana.. Aise hi ghumte ghumte pata nahi when I reached near the village dam… Aur phir

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Flashback

Play Dis

Music

10:30am ; Hoshiarpur

Maan had never seen traditional street-dances. Looking amused at the dancers he too felt joining them. But as you all know the Khuranas and their reputation. Though nobody knew him phir be he kept calm and started enjoying the public performance. A girl aged around 16yrs with two long plaits tied ran across the dam and mingled into the crowd of dancers. Looking at her dress, Maan could say she had just returned from her school. Her back was facing him and so he couldn't see her face. He tried moving in front but the crowd was not allowing him. Getting irritated he stood on the railings of the dam only to see the girl moving her hands in rhythm to the beats of the music. She shook her legs elegantly doing the official bhangra step.

Koi dil bekaabu kar gaya
Aur ishqa dil mein bhar gaya

The way she gracefully danced to the beats was enchanting. She looked so pure, serene with that glowing smile and those be-witching brown eyes. The sight was mesmerizing and made Maan lose his senses. He felt his heart beating faster and all random thoughts just vanished from his brain. Was he dreaming, can any angel descend the ground amidst so many humans.

Koi dil bekaabu kar gaya
Aur ishqa dil mein bhar gaya
Aankhon aankhon mein who lakhon gallan kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye

Music

6:00pm ; Hoshiarpur

Maan and Vicky were jogging along the fields. Vicky couldn't match up his Bro's pace and was left behind huffing and puffing. Maan was dressed in his vest and tracks was completely drenched in sweat. He stopped near a dhabha to have a sip of water. When he caught sight of his angel again.

Ab dil chaahe khamoshi ke honthon pe main likh doon
Pyaari si baatein kayi
Ho kuch pal mere naam kare woh, main bhi uske naam pe
Likhoon mulakaatein kayi
Ho pehli hi takni mein bann gayi jaan pe
Naina waina uske mere dil pe chapeh
Ab jaaun kahan pe, dil ruka hai wahaan pe
Jahaan dekhke mujhe woh aagey badh gaya oye

She was busy having the sweet-sour golgappes and near the chaat stall. Her mouth was stuffed with a huge golgappa and simultaneously she was passing golas to her other friends. The way she was talking, animatedly moving her hands made Maan get lost in her antics. He felt the need to go close to her and hold her, talk to her and involuntarily he started moving towards her but within no time she climbed on her bike with another younger girl and zoomed away in front of him. He just kept staring at her retreating back.

"God.. Bro agar thoda ruk-rukar jog karthe toh kya ho jata…??"

Vicky's words made him come out of his dazed dreamyland but this is not going to repeat again he decided because he will meet her tomorrow any how. He made up his mind with a hidden smile on his lips.

Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye

Music

It was a Sunday morning and Maan got up early. Arrey to accomplish his mission finding+meeting Mishti. The name which he thought looking at her sweet, luscious lips while she ws having her gol-gappes. He reached near the dhabba in the hope of catching a glimpse of her, he didn't have enough patience to wait for her. He saw some girls playing on the swings near a lake, opposite towards the field. He heard a musical laughter and soon recognized it. His Mishti was looking like a sarso ka phool with her Punjabi choti, swinging cheerfully in the beaming sunlight.

Mausam ke azaad parinday, haathon mein hai uske
Ya woh bahaaron si hai
Sardi ki woh dhoop ke jaisi, garmi ki sham hai
Pehli puhaaron si hai
Mera pyaar ka mausam bhi hai, lagey meri mehram bhi hai

After 2-3 rounds of swinging she bid her friends started running towards the fields. She ran spreading her dupatta on the ripened field making them bend as if bowing in front of the beautiful angel. She twirled, giggling in between unknown to her dat her cute, unintentional actions were creating havoc in Maan's insane heart.

Mera pyaar ka mausam bhi hai, lagey meri mehram bhi hai
Jaane kya kya do aankhon mein main padh gaya oye

He started moving towards her in a trance and instantly caught hold of her wrist. She turned abruptly on feeling a warm touch on her wrist.

Maan couldn't stop drowning in those deep hazel eyes… Hayye.. And to add misery to his state her cheeks had started getting into a red shade. She kept gazing at him with that red blush trying to sense the unknown feeling arising in her heart. Both stayed calm feeling each others closeness and eagerness. When some1s yelling made them come out of their mini eye-lock.

"Geeett… Oyye Geeett… Geettt jaldi aa Tayiji bula rahi hain…."

"Haan… Aa rahi hoon Rajji…"

She replied back to the young girl and started moving away but suddenly turned back towards Maan and smiled with a darker shade of blush and ran lowering her head down.

Oh rabba main toh marr gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh marr gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gay aoye

Maan had totally been stumped with her reaction now. He self thought trying to comprehend the situation. Does that mean she liked him too..?? Does that mean she admired him too…?? Does that mean she could be in love with him…??? Ohh God.. He felt himself floating in air. How much he wanted to see her again and talk to her. But wait a second in his excitement he forgot to apprehend His Mishti's name. He spoke out gleefully.

"GEET… Meri Mishti ka naam Geet hai… The love of my life. heart of my life… GEET…"

Koi dil bekaabu kar gaya
Aur ishqa dil mein bhar gaya
Aankhon aankhon mein woh lakhon gallan kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye
Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye

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Flashback Ends

Maan smiled blushing remembering their first meet, how she reacted to him and how he came to know about her name. He turned towards his left to see a soundly sleeping Vicky snoaring like a pig. He felt a little vexed and self thought. Issko main apni prem kahaani sunaa raha tha aur dekho toh kaise so raha hai as if I was singing a lullaby… He ducked him in a cozy blanket and went towards his room making a call to start acting on his mission Finding-Mishti.

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Precap : Geet's Office and The Phone Call/s

Sorry..!! For keeping you all waiting..

M free till 14^th n so v'l try giving two updts of my both the FFs every week.. 😊

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