MG SS~SUHAAGAN Part9/Pg45, Note/Pg51 11Apr - Page 13

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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
so should we be scared then about the imminent arrival of who ever it is thats coming
okay it cant be her kid though because by the sound of it the kid seems to be older and she hasnt been married long enough to have that old kid right
oye teri what is happening here man
things are getting even more mysterious than ever before man
now you have just given us another twist with this bacha business
and maan almost missed her in the hostel
well he will be seeing her if he goes to malhotras for the presentation since she works there
lets see what else shocks twists and turns we will see here

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Posted: 12 years ago
GREAT
MORE CONFUSION
FIRST RV AND NOW BACCHA
AND THE CONFUSION BETWEEN HOSTEL AND VILLA😕
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Posted: 12 years ago



now this is my last comment in ur thread...

until u clear all confusions...

this is my badla with u...

u r making us confuse I am making u lose ur comment pages...

ab jaake khelo ussi bachcha ke sath...and Geet ke sath milkar RV ka ghar sajao...


Edited by tushti-kiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok now I am getting upset =(( now please reveal the suspense soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part ... loved it

so much confusions .. hmm now cant wait for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm...i am all calmed down now...
i think bacha is Maaneet's and either RV does not exist or just gave name to help her
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update
loved it
do continue soon
you are amazing gal
very nice work👏 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Continue soon

Waiting for more⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago

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sdlife19, lovesia, MonaLovesMaan, pari_jyothika, mayurmaaneet, valli22, : All those who wanted to know about the baccha… Nichewala updt for u all… Enjoy!!! 😉

Jeba.Rahman : Dear.. You are so close yet so far… Par guess accha tha… I liked it… 👍🏼

chavvi16 : Kash… I could meet u personally n give you a tight jhappi Yaar..!! 🤗 I love reading your comment… ❤️ You summarise my updt so brilliantly… And don't b scared for the new entry, Bacche se koi darta hai kya…?? 😆 Tell me after reading the updt…

tushti-kiran : Oyye… Tu dhamki kisse de rahi hai…??? 😡 RV ko pata chala na toh woh mere liyein official leave leke waapas aa jaayega… 😈 I guess so (Geet ka sunta kaha hai joh meri sunega… ) So darne wali nahi hoon main of ur dhamkis… 😆 Par dnt worry RV ke aate hi sab clear ho jaayega.. Until then enjoy Maaneet bcz RV ke aane ke baad ur gonna miss dat I suppose… 😒

ritzy09 : Sorry Dii!! But baccha Maaneet ka nahi hai… 😔 Geet was jst 17yrs old when Maan left her and then 5 saal ki doori… Baccha kaise possible hoga…?? 😒

LonelyPlannet : M glad you liked my work… Thanks 😃

3295, rubinahansa, anky_s, aamirkhanfan, dona86, krithi12, meena.., lenageorge, punam2712, dreamy, anshra, anmirza, mollycoddle, JayaR, anupm04, geet.lover, ammu5, anjucool, dreamymishti88 : All the confused souls sab kuch about RV, Geet ki shaadi, Hostel-Villa confusions will be revealed as the story progresses… For now enjoy Maaneet nahi toh RV ke aate hi u'l regret later…

SweetestPari : Updt ke chalte meri raaton ki neendh aur din ka chain chhin liya… Yeh le tera updt…. 😈 Ab khush ho jaa… Aur lambawala comment de dein…. 😉

Thank you all... ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

P.S : I have replied to all of you' Plz check above post' 😳

This updt is dedicated to SweetestPari who was always there for me when I was disappointed with the amount of likes and encouraged me a lot'

Love U Dear'!!! ❤️

Part 5

6:30pm ; Shekhawat Villa

Geet had nice refreshing shower after her tiring day and went to grab a cup of tea from the kitchen when the door bell rang. She knew who it was and so ran maniacally towards the door and opened it instantly. There was no time to greet each other, they both hugged almost crushing each others bones. The cute, fair girl around 19yrs old came out of the hug and started wailing like a small baby.

"Arrey' Bacha kya hua..?? Ro kyon rahi hai'??"

Geet wiped her teary face and pulled her inside the house after locking the door. Both settled down on the sofa and again she hugged Geet and started whimpering.

"Woh I missed you so much issiliyein'"

Geet patted her hair and answered calmly.

"Meri itni yaad aa rahi thi jaldi kyon nahi aayi' Tumhare Bhaiya ka toh samajh sakthe hai par tum toh leave le sakthi thi na'"

The girl came out of the hug and looked at Geet with a Sorry face and holding her throat spoke.

"Bhabhi' Sacchi mein I tried for leaves but meri ek kamini saheli hai na ussko achanak leave leni padi aur as a substitue mujhe waha rakh diya' Aap toh janthi hai na mera British Airline kaisa hai'??"

Geet shook her head and moved towards the kitchen to get something for them.

"Haan janthi hoon' Tu aur tera Britsh Airline' Yeh angrez hote hi aisen hai' Issiliyein toh kehti hoon tujhe hamare India ke kissi bhi airline ko join karle' Par tu toh hai hi pehdaishi ziddi' Uppar se tere Bhaiya ne tujhe laad-pyaar karwa ke sar par chada rakha hai'."

The girl gave her a yucky look hearing about Indian Airlines and then a baby face as if wanting to say agar Bhaiya itna pamper karte hai toh main kya karoon.

"Bhabhi' R u crazy?? Sab chod ke Indian Airlines eww' Mujhe nahi pehnni woh sari and salwar-kameez' Pari toh formal tops aur skirts mein passengers ki line laga deti hai' Uss desi vesh mein meri taraf dekkega bhi koi nahi'"


Geet glared at her for talking so shamefully in front of her and caught hold of her ear.

"Pari ki bacchi' Yeh tere joh nakhre hai tere Bhaiya ko pata chal gayye na, na rahegi videsh ki aur na rahegi desh ki' Siddha teri doli utva denge aur siddha pahonch jaayegi sasuraal'"


Pari winced with the pain and made a sorry face again.

"Bhabhi' Aap toh jaanthi hai na' Aisi baatein mein sirf aapse karti hoon' U think yeh baatein Bhaiya ko main pata chalne dungi' (winks) Aur rahi baat shaadi ki' Main aap dono ko chhod ke itni jaldi nahi jaanewali'"

With that she hugged Geet from behind and Geet giving up resumed with her work.

"Toh khaane main kya banaya hai aapne'??"

"Angrezi phooljhadi ke liyein angrezi khana tera 'Pasta'"

"Ohh' Cool Bhabhi' Aur Desigirl kya khayegi'??"

Geet hit Pari on her forhead for teasing her.

"Main fresh hoke aati hoon'"

With that she started humming the song 'Desigirl' and at same time naughtily smiled at Geet who was glaring her with her infamous look.

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10:00pm ; Drawing Room (SV)

Geet was sitting on the sofa and applying some herbal oil in Pari's hair and Pari sat on the floor flipping a magazine.

"Bhabhi' Thoda right mein lagao na'"

Geet smiled at her antics and did as she said.

"Bhabhi' Woh aapne mere bathroom ka shower check nahi kiya...?? It was not working mujhe bucket mein paani dalkar nahana pada'"

Geet got alarmed on hearing her say that she got scared within and self-thought I hope isse doubt na ho jayye ke ghar bahot dinon tak band tha.

"Aah' Woh.. Ugh..Baccha maine jab check kiya tha tab chal toh raha tha pata nahi ab kya ho gaya' Aur angrezi ma'm ek din bucket se naha legi toh kamar nahi tutegi teri' Kasrat toh karti nahi.. Kam se kam thoda haath-pair toh chalaya kar'"

"Bhabhi' Aap ki baatein mujhe hamesha Maa ki yaad dilathi hai' Bhaiya ne lakh koshish ki iss kami ko pura karne ki par yeh kami bass aapke aane se puri hui hai' I can't thank the day Bhaiya brought you in our small family'"

"Itna bhi senty hone ki jaroorat nahi hai' Jab tere saiyaan milenge tujhe toh meri aur dhekhegi bhi nahi'"

"Shaadi ke baad bhi aap meri Bhabhi hi rahogi' Isse jaldi chutkara nahi milnewala aapko'"

Both chatted for sometime and then retired to their beds.

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10:15am ; KC Premises

Geet entered the lift holding the remaining design papers and files close to her body in one hand and tried managing her purse on her other shoulder. She mentally chided herself for sleeping so late. But it wasn't her fault actually. It was obvious whenever she went to any new place, she took time to get accustomed to it. Her thoughts were broken by her cell phone's ringing. She answered it without waiting.

"Hello Yash' Haan aa rahi hoon 10min mein' Lift mein hoon' Plz handle till then'"

She could feel the heat in Yash's words. Seemed like he would blast on her any moment and why not they were about to gain such a big deal. And God forbid if it got declined it would be only bcz of her fault, her unpunctuality. Yash had told her the MD was strict in his timings and a real time Khadoos. As soon as the lift halted at the desired floor she left out a heavy breath and moved towards the reception.

"Excuse me' M Geet from Malhotra Enterprises.. Can I know the directions to the conference room..??"

"Sure Ma'm.. Plz move straight and then towards your left'"

Geet mouthed a quick thankyou to the receptionist and hurriedly reached near the conference room. She knocked on the conference room and opened it slightly only to see the darkness as Yash was presenting his part. The instant she arrived Yash moved towards her and pulled her towards the projector and muttered in her ear.

"Sambhal lena' Yaar!!! Company ki izzat tere haathon mein hai'"

"The rest will be explained in detail by my colleague.."

Geet first of all smiled weakly at the people sitting infront of her as she could hardly see them in the darkness. (Cia praising heavens..!!! Shukar hai nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jata' 😲) She felt her heart-beats beating at a faster pace then usual. She self thought may be bcz she has to present par pehle toh aise kabhi nahi hua. She chided the restlessness may be bcz she reached late. Yeah could be. But still she felt jittery inside. She self-thought again breakfast thik se nahi karegi toh aisa hi hoga na. With shaky hands she moved towards the lappy and inserted her drive, calmed herself taking in silent breaths and looked towards the people.

"Sorry' Gentlemen for the slight delay' Coming to the designs now.."

Geet spoke confidently presenting her designs showing them each and every attribute and minute importance of the the designs. As remarked earlier by Yash her designs were always flawless and special in its own way. She answered all the queries put forth by the clients which she felt were intentionally asked out of the blue. But that didn't matter to her at all, her past experience had trained and accustomed to answer and solve all sorts of queries. She felt the jitter again on her toes may be bcz their company's izzat was now in the MD's hands. She was so eager to know his riposte. But as soon as the lights turned on.


Geet's POV: Her entire existence came crushing down. Never in her dreams she thought she would meet him this way. She looked at him keenly with the the same feelings she had for him in their adolescence. He looked more muscular, had grown a stubble unlike his teen look in the past, his office formal attire made him look more handsome and not to forget more desirable. She saw the way he was staring with his red eyes at her forhead and her neckline. She felt she was not betraying him but herself standing like that in-front of him. She could see many questions in his eyes that showed the same concern and longing he held in the past. She looked away instantly trying to come back to reality, not sure she will be able to answer him.


Maan's POV : He was lost in her thoughts from last night. But when he saw her entering in the conference room he thought was he dreaming again. He closed his eyes and opened them but she didn't vanish still. OMG'!! She is here in real.. His Geet is here..He felt jumping from his seat and crushing her in his arms. He didn't bother to listen what she spoke, how were the designs etc etc.. He was lost in her angelic face which was still the same the way he left in HP. But as soon as the lights came he could't believe his eyes. His eyes started becoming red, with anger arousing in his veins. His Geet had adorned her forhead with sindoor and her neck with the sacred mangalsutra. His Geet got married to some1 else. Nahi not in his wild dreams and in reality he will believe this crap. He wanted answers to all these questions.

Both were lost in each other's dilemma when Yash's voice brought them back.

"So Mr.Khurana' Aapko meri head architect Mrs.Geet Shekhawat ke designs kaise lage'??"

Geet who was earlier praying for deal to get acknowledged was now wanting the heavens to take back her pleadings and drop the deal. But she also knew it was not that easy to get away from HIM. She kept her head low knowing what he will answer.

"Mr. Malhotra.. I m quite impressed with your architect' I mean her designs were just extra-ordinary' Adi tumhara kya kehna hai'???"

"Sorry Sir to get informal relations in between but agar pehle pata hota ke Geet will present the designs.. I would had not wasted your precious time' I would had directly accepted their contract'"

"What do you mean Adi..??"

"Woh Sir'!!! I know Geet personally' She has been a topper in her University' Hai na Geet'"

Geet just noded trying to calm herself, right now she wanted to run away from this place asap. To thank heavens her cell started buzzing and she excused herself the next second, not b4 having a teasing look from Yash. Unknown to them, Maan was watching silently and trying to understand why the teasing look on Yash's face.

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Precap : Nahi dungi... 😈 Teaser se kaam chala lon... 😉

Teaser : "Ab samajh aaya aapko' Aap ke na hone se Geet ka zinda rehne ka koi matlab nahi hai... Aap ho toh Geet hai.. Aap nahi toh Geet bhi nahi' Toh kaisa bol liya aapne ke main aapki fikar na karoon..??"

"Dobara mujhse door jaane ki baat mat karna Geet' Main seh nahi paunga yeh' Ab zindagi tumhare bina jeene ka soch bhi nahi saktha'" 😳


Now all tell me how was the baccha n the presentation people'??

Plz Like n Comment' 👍🏼

Love Cia ❤️

Edited by CiaMaaneet - 12 years ago

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