MG SS~SUHAAGAN Part9/Pg45, Note/Pg51 11Apr - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
U just loe torturing your readers, don't u??? Geet is a mystery n I am hating her for now!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my my my this sure has given us more insight into what may or may not have happened leading to the marriage of geet and RV
but i still dont get if she married him happily and without any complusion why does she still love maan
well there is really more to this than is meeting the eye right
the story of leading to their marriage is confsing
the handas said she ran off with gurvinder which aint true
gurvinder said handas were trying to force her to get married which is possible
but she was studying in delhi
and adi pinky knew of her studying but not her marriage but how is that possible if pinky was her good friend surely she would have invited her friend to her marriage
their wedding sure is a mystery and hope maan solves it and soon
so maan made sure she will be in front of him a lot and her reaction to the news ure was what maan expected
hey how can he not after all he knows geet well minus the whole shaadi thing
hope the mystery is solved of this marriage
while our maan does all he can to fluster geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
GEET'S LIFE IS STILL A MYSTERY
FROM LIVING AS PG WITH PINKY SHE WENT TO A HOSTEL AND THEN GOT MARRIED TO RV
BUT WHERE WAS MAAN ALL THIS TIME AND WHY DID HE LEAVE HER IN HP
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum part dear😊

maan makes yash to partner to get close to geet👏

geet shock😲

pre😉ca😉p
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Posted: 12 years ago
heartbreaking as always...tumhein humein tad[ana mein mazaa aaata hai na...isiliye toh...rv...rv...rv...aur kuch baki bacha hai toh woh bhi kar do...ek aad bache bhi paida kardo...dil ko thandak pad jayegi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
So much lovely part exciting 4 the next part dear...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it a lot eagerly waiting for the next part lekin Q Geet Maan se door hai or Q?

Kya majburi hai jo Geet ko apne prince se itna door rehne pe majbur kr rahi hai...


But don't worry Geet Maan hai na wo sab theak kr de ga...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 9

11:00am ; Orbit Mall, Delhi

Pari was looking at the two heels of same size yet different colours brought by the shopkeeper. She spoke to herself getting confused.

"White or Red….??? Dono kitne sexy dikh rahein hai… Babaji main kya karu ab…???"

She picked the red one very sadly. She already had a white pair at home.

"Bhaiya ji aap yeh wala pack kar djiyein…"

She took her other bags and stepped out of the shop when her cell started vibrating. She received the call at once and started moving to the food court.

"Hello Tammy… M fine Dear…!!! Tu bata…???"

"Kya…??? Parson se… Fine…!!!

Nahi toh… Pehle se pata tha…."

"Dear abhi mall mein thi brought new heels hope they match with the new uniforms we will be getting…."

She sat on one of the tables in the food court and ordered for a chocolate milk-shake with cheese sandwiches.

"Dear main bhi…

Haan haan… I love you…"

Replying happily she had disconnected the call when some one replied from behind.

"I love you too… Angel"

She wanted to turn behind to see who was trying to flirt with her but the word 'Angel' made her shrug her shoulders and she muttered under her breath.

"Not again…."

She saw him taking a sit in front of her without asking her permission. She sipped her chocolate milkshake without looking at him. He came close to her face and spoke flirtingly again.

"Can I have a sip…???"

She glared at him flaring her nostrils.

"Nahi dena hai mat don par gussa kyon ho rahi hon Angel…???"

Pari lost her last bit of patience and blasted on him.

"For the last time stop calling me Angel... Why can't you stop following me and haan not to forget stop calling me again and again… Kissne diya tumhein mera no. ???"

"Arrey Angel ko angel nahi toh kya chudel bulaunga…??? Agar aisa hai toh bol don woh bhi maan lunga haste haste… And when did I follow you…??? God…!!! Pari Darling kitni buddhu hon tum…Jab hum dono Delhi mein rehte hai toh kahin na kahin toh mil hi jaayenge na….??? And the last time I called you did you let me explain…??? Call toh aise cut karti hon jaise its your favourite hobby…Pichhle janam mein kya naai (Barber) thi….???"

Pari glared at him like she will eat him in one go now. How dare he call her Chudel, Buddhu and Naai that too at once.

"Tum jaante nahi ho tum kisse uljh rahein hon…??? Agar mere Bhaiya ko pata chala na… Na ghar ke rahoge na ghat ke…"

She spoke pointing a finger at him. He got up instantly and twisted her finger with his.

"Mujhe na ghat chahiyein na ghar… Hum toh aapke dil mein reh lenge… Waise bhi woh kuch nahi kar paayenge…??? MSK ka bhai joh hoon… Hawa bhi nahi choone denge mujhe… Bulao tumhare Bhaiya ko…."

"WHAT…??? Tum MSK ke Bhai hon…???"

With that she got up holding her bags and turned behind to look at him once and burst out laughing loudly.

"Tum aur MSK ke Bhai….!!! Shakal dekhi hai apni…????"

She walked away and Vicky followed her, trying to make her believe he is the youngest Khurana.

"Angel… Sacch mein main MSK ka Bhai hoon… Plz aisa mat haso…"

She stopped her laugh with difficulty and spoke.

"Tum apne aap ko MSK ka Bhai kekte hon na than….. PROVE IT…!!!!"

"Par Angel…. Main kaise…???"

"Batati hoon…. I'l let you knw kab, kaha aur kaise…??? Wait for my call….!!!"

She spoke evilly scaring his heart to death and left.

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12:30PM ; KC (Geet's cubicle cabin)

Everything was made ready for the Malhotra's working. Some of the KC's staff were allotted new cabins in the other floors. Geet's cubicle cabin was designed differently compared to others. All appreciated her for being lucky. But Geet knew already it was not her luck. Maan's master-mind was behind all this. This was taking a toll on her head. She had finished her work long before and was waiting for all the employees to leave as it was a half-day and so she could talk with Maan. When she saw no sign of anybody. She sped towards HIS cabin with the file. She didn't wait for knocking and barged in HIS cabin. He was engrossed in his laptop. Her sudden appearance first amused him but then he too smirked kind of happy looking at her sherni look. She threw the file towards him.

"Yeh kya hai Maan…???"

Maan opened the file to see the legal papers of partnership between KC and the Malhotra's. He closed the file and looked back at her with a care-free expressions.

"Jaan…. Ab tum aisen bologi toh kaun kahega you have topped Delhi Uni…???"

God that 'Jaan' word tickled her senses first but she controlled herself and her feelings.

"Dekhiyein aap… Phisool ki baat mat kariyein… Aur meri kaabiliyat ka bilkul bhi mazak mat udayien…!!! Siddhe-siddhe jawaab dijiyein…"

Geet asked him angrily spitting fire. He got up from his chair and came towards her with the file and opened the 1st page.

"Jab tum isska matlab bhi samajh nahi sakti toh main kaise maan loon you have topped Delhi Uni…???"


He asked her teasingly.

"Yeh waqt mazaak ka nahi hai Maan…!!! Aakhir kya chahte hai aap…??? Kyon yeh sab karke mushkilein badha rahein hai…???"


He looked at her possessively and spoke out.

"Main bhi mazak nahi kar raha Geet... You want to know…. Mujhe TUM chahiyein… I want you Dammit…!!! Kyon yeh jhoota bakwas ka khel khel rahi hon…???"

"Maan aapko yeh sab khel lag raha hai…?? Yeh sacchai… Aap jitni jaldi sweekar kar lenge utna hi accha hai aapke liyein…"


"Kya sacchai Geet…??? Yeh kii tum shaadi-shuda hon… Tum jaanthi hon Geet... Tumhare Babaji bhi mujhse aakar kahenge toh bhi main nahi manunga…. Tumhe bhi pata hai ke tum sirf meri hon… Sirf mera haq hai tum pe…."

She was getting irritated and at the same time losing herself in his possessive talks. She turned her back towards him not wanting to show the desperate side of hers.


"Inn sab baaton se kuch nahi honewala Maan… Sach yehin hai ke main aage bad chuki hoon… Bhool jao mujhe…"

He at once came behind her and caught hold of her petite waist. Shiver ran down her spine and her heart started beating faster. He spoke huskily fanning his breath in the crook of her neck.

"Kuch kuch toh zaroor ho raha hai Geet… Hai na…???"


She was lost in his masculine scent, the same way as she use to in HP. Her determined thoughts had been long forgotten. He started caressing his nose on her rosy cheeks catching hold of her waist more tightly. Her chest was heaving up and down not able to calm her desperation of ages.

"Jab yeh dil aaj bhi mere kareeb aane se zorro se dhadak udta hai toh main kaise maan loon ki meri Mishty aage bad chuki hai…???"

He turned her at once and saw her eyes closed. He brought his face close to hair taking their scent and again huskily whispered.

"Jab tumhari yeh aankhein mujhse nazarein milane ke liyein anjaan ban rahi hai… Toh kaise maan loon kii tum sacch bol rahi hon…???"

He pushed the curls from her cheeks and she opened her alluring eyes with tears trickling down from them.


"Main anjaan nahi bann rahi hoon… Aapki woh Geet ab nahi milegi aapko… Kho diya hai aapne usse…"

He cupped her face and wiped her tears shaking his head.


"Jhoot… Maan ki Mishty kabhi kho nahi sakthi…. Woh toh hamesha se meri rooh mein mein basi rahegi… Jiss din Geet nahi rahegi uss din shaayad Maan bhi"

She instantly put her palm on his lips shaking her head for a no.


Maan smiled at her through his eyes and kissed her fingers. Which she abruptly removed from his lips.

"Itni fikar hai meri… Phir bhi kyon mujhse door jaa rahin hon Geet…??"

She moved away from him searching for some random reason and spoke stammering.

"Ais…in be…hudi baat…ein karne se pehle aap…ko haan ek baar bhi Dadi Maa ka khayal nahi aaya…???"

She wanted to blabber some more but Maan jerked her towards him holding her shoulders tightly.

"Kya chhipa rahi hon mujhse…??? Aisa kya hai Geet joh tumhein mujhe apnaane se rok raha hai…???"


She pushed him with all her force and answered angrily.

"Maan kitni baar samjhau main aapko…??? Shaadi-shuda hoon main… Pati hai mera…


Kaise chod doon usse…!!! (She tried showing him she is not in love with him NOW) Haan karti THI main aapse pyaar (Jhooti Kahin Ki…😳), aur shaayad kahin na kahin aaj bhi hai mujhe aapki fikar, par isska yeh matlab nahi ke main usse dhoka dein doon…


Nahi de sakthi usse dhoka… Nahi chod sakthi main usse…"

"Chodna padega Geet…!!! Mere liyein chodna padega…. I challenge you Geet…. Dekhna kal shyaam tak tum meri baahon mein hogi hamesha ke liyein…


Hamara pyaar tumhein majhboor kar dega yeh shaadi todne ke liyein… Uss Ranveer se saare rishtein todne ke liyein….. Mere paas waapas aane ke liyein Geet….!!!"

He spoke determined like giving his final verdict and left a baffled Geet in his cabin.

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Precap : She hugged HIM passionately shedding more tears. 😲

"Agar aaj aapko kuch ho jata toh main kaise jee paati Maan… Mujhe sata kar aapko bada maza aata hoga na…??? Kar diya jo aapne kaha tha..??? Paa liya na mujhe apni baahon mein…!!! Mil gayyi dil ko thandak…!!!" 😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
ME FIRST !!
SUPERB UPDATE DI
LOVE IT ❤️
PRECAP TOH HAAYEEE 😳
CONTINUE SOON DI

Edited by Brown-Eyes - 12 years ago

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