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Part 7
6:30PM ; Geet's Bedroom (SV)
Geet was sitting on the floor next to her bed. She had a photo frame in her hand and was caressing the picture in it. Some tear drops fell on it and she wiped those instantly and also her tear stricken eyes but they didn't stop.
"Mujhe maaf kar dena' Maan' Main aaj bhi aapko bhool nahi payi hoon' Bahot miss karti thi aapko' Uss tanhaahi se accha toh mar hi jaana behtar tha mere liyein' Par aapki jaan ko main kaise mar deti'
Pata hai aaj iss tadapte dil ko aapki ek jhalak se kitni thandak mili hai... Kyon Maan aapne aane mein itni der kyon kar di'?? Kyon Maan'??? (Crying very bitterly) Kyon'?? Main toh hamesha se aapki thi Maan.. Aaj bhi hoon' Farq bas itna hai ki main ab aapke saath nahin hoon' Aur shaayad kabhi ho bhi nahi sakthi'
Majhbur hoon aapse door rehne ke liyein' (Looking at her broken mangalsutra and then looked back at the frame) Aapke pyaar mein koi kami nahi hai Maan shaayad main hi aapke laayak nahi hoon' Kash yeh baat main aapko bata sakthi'"
Na chahte huye bhi door rehne ka dard kaun samjhega,
Aapke khushi ko barkarar rakhne ke liyein yeh dard bhi sehna padega
She brought the frame close to her heart and silently cried accepting her destiny.
She was brought out of her misery by the continuous bangings on her door. She could hear Pari whimpering badly. She wiped her ters and opened the door hurriedly. Pari looked all worried and was crying badly. Geet cupped her face and asked getting more concerned.
"Baccha .. Kya hua'??"
"Bhabhi' Woh.. Woh'. (Pointing towards the drawing room) News' Head'lines' Bha..bhi.. Bhaiya'"
She was crying so badly and getting choked up that couldn't speak a sentence. Geet hugged her sideways and came into the drawing room and saw the flashing headlines on the T.V which brought a shiver down her spine.
"Dispute between Indian jawans and terrorists at Jaisalmer.
Sources say around 12 jawans were injured and 2 lost their lives."
Geet got startled with Pari's cries and cupped her face.
"Dekho Baccha Manna ke RV is posted in that area par aisa bhi ho saktha haina kii he is fine' Ruko main abhi unnke camp call karti hoon.."
Geet dialed the no. to the inquiry office of his camp station. Pari instantly put the phone on speaker mode.
"Hello Sir' Main Geet Shekhawat bol rahi hoon.. Abhi abhi news ke mutabiq aapke yahaan terrorist attack huye hai.. Kya aap Lt. Shekhawat ke info bata sakthe hai'?? Woh thik toh hai na..??"
"Sorry ma'm par Sirji toh ussi battalion ko lead kar rahe hai' Abhi kuch pata nahi chala hai' Abhi bhi firring aur hamari sena wahaan jhoonjh rahin hai' Aapka phone no. hum note kar rahein hai jaise hi khabar milegi we will inform you.."
11:30pm ; Drawing Room (SV)
Its been more than 6 hrs but there was no sign of their call. Geet sat on the floor gazing at the landline with Pari laying her head in her lap both waiting for the phone call. Hunger, thirst was long forgotten. Sleep too seemed aloof to them. Only a chant 'Hope he is safe'continuously was going in their heart and mind.
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[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DNDBugmpg70[/YOUTUBE]
Music
5:00am ; Pokhran (Jaisalmer)
A guy aged around 25yrs dressed in an Indian Army millitant's uniform got down from the Army jeep holding a walky-talky in his hand and an army back-pack containing the necessary equipments. He commanded the battalion behind him to take their positions. All the jawans bent on the ground with their rifles positioned in front of them waiting for the command. As soon as they saw a green light beeping from their leader's position the firring started.
Aankhon mein sapne liye
Ghar se hum chal to diye
Jaane yeh raahein ab le jaayengi kahan
Rivals had started back-firring with blasts of hand grenades. The leader of the Indian battalion put on his walky-talky and commanded them to move forward.
"Leo Spark' Move ahead' Robin Shield commanding' Over and Out.."
The recipient moved ahead crawling but unknown to them the area was laid with mines and in next second some of them were flown away with the blast impact, making the environment more smoggy.
Mitti ki khushboo aaye
Palkon pe aansu laaye
Palkon pe reh jaayega yaadon ke jahan
Robin Shield saw the sight and regretted his decision but he can't simply leave atleast the wounded ones there. He ordered the remaining jawans to take position and wait for his final command.
Manzil nayi hai anjaana hai kaarvaan
Chalna akele hai yahan
Tanha dil, tanha safar
Dhoonde tujhe phir kyoon nazar
Tanha dil, tanha safar
Dhoonde tujhe phir kyoon nazar
Tanha dil
He moved towards a rock and looked ahead trying to see any sign of the terrorists close by. Seeing no sign of them he crawled holding his rifle. Sun-rise was yet to happen in another hour. He moved ahead and saw his colleague Leo Spark laid wounded there.
Music
He lifted him and gave him some sips of water from his bottle and patted his cheeks.
"Lucky' Utt aankhein khol'"
The wounded guy somehow got his conscious but couldn't speak properly.
"Ran..veer' Lag'ta' Hai' Mera' wa..qt.. kha..tam.. ho' gaya'"
"Kaisi baatein kar raha hai' Abhi toh tujhe bahut kuch karna hai' Itni aasani se haar maanli' Dekh meri aur' Kuch nahi hone dunga tujhe'."
Dilkash nazaarein dekhe
Jhilmil sitaarein dekhe
Aankhon mein phir bhi tera chehra hai jawaan
Kitni barsaatein aayi, kitni saugaatein laayi
Kaanon mein phir bhi goonje teri hi sada
"Ran'veer' nahi' hoga.. me..re' se' ab.. Bas' jaa..tein' jaa'tein' Me..ra' ek' kaam' kar.. le' Yeh.. chitti' (Taking out a letter from his shirts pocket) Preetam ko de dena'. Aur.. kehna.. mujhe maaf kar dena' Usska vaada ab shaayad hi'pura' kar paunga.."
With that he let out his soul and Ranveer just hugged him tightly one last time. Without letting a tear slip from his eyes he laid Lucky on the ground and saluted him.
Tanha dil, tanha safar
Dhoonde tujhe phir kyoon nazar
Tanha dil
Tanha dil
Ranveer moved ahead and saw the rivals were trying to approach him. He scanned the area to see two wounded jawans trying to get up but couldn't help themselves. Now he had to escape with them and also backfire the rivals plan.
Music
He caught hold of them on his shoulders and started moving towards their camp area. The rivals had caught sight of them and so continuously kept firring and dropped hand grenades on them but they managed escaping them. However a bullet pierced Ranveer's back but he didn't stop. The rivals too followed them not knowing Lt.Robin Shield's plan.
Aankhon mein sapne liye
Ghar se hum chal to diye
Jaane yeh raahein ab le jaayengi kahan
Mitti ki khushboo aaye
Palkon pe aansu laaye
Palkon pe reh jaayega yaadon ke jahan
Robin Shield commanded cover for them as they entered their area on the other side the rivals couldn't keep track of them and so kept moving ahead and entered Indian Army's area. This is what Robin Shield wanted and he instantly ordered the battalion for firring and hand grenading. Nobody could escape now and all the terrorist were killed.
Manzil nayi hai anjaana hai kaarvaanTanha dil, tanha safar
Dhoonde tujhe phir kyoon nazar
Tanha dil, tanha safar
Dhoonde tujhe phir kyoon nazar
7:15am ; Camp Area (Jaisalmer)
Robin Shield and the other two jawans lay in the medical tent on their beds being treated by the army docs. His bandages were almost done and not much injury as the bullet hadn't pierced much into his back thanks to his back-pack.
Tanha dil,
Tanha dil
Tanha dil
A senior army officer entered the tent and looked at him proudly. Robin Shield got up and saluted him.
"Ranveer you are injured son, don't stress much' I just came to appreciate your job' Your plan worked but am sad we had to lose our efficient officer Lt.Lucky in it' You take rest and your so called leave which was abandoned for last 6 months am granting you now.. Enjoy!!!"
Tanha dil
Tanha dil
The officer patted his arm and left. Ranveer smiled a little finally leave grant ho gayyi. But within next min a jawan entered holding a mobile in his hand.
"Sir Ji' Kal aapke ghar se call aaya tha' Plz aap baat kar lijiyein'"
Music
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8:00am ; Drawing Room (SV)
Geet and Pari had fallen asleep, both got up startled with the landlines ring and Geet abruptly answered it.
"Hello' (after a while listening to his voice) RV tum thik toh hon na'??"
Listening RV's name Pari instantly put the phone on speaker mode.
"Hello Bhaiya' Kaiso hon aap..??? Kahaan hai..?? Bol kyon nahi rahein hon'???"
Listening to the continuous set of questions he self thought lo shuru ho gayye dono but put them to fullstop by answering all their questions.
"Hello Geetu' Main thik hoon.. Aur Baccha.. Bhaiya abhi tent mein bed par leta hai' Aur ab listen and don't panic bas ek halki-phulki goli lagi thi' Which has been treated toh tension mat lena'"
"Hayye Rabba' Goli lagi hai' Aur keh rahein ho tension na loon...?? Aur kitne din rahoge wahaan' Tere uss Colonel Hooda ko sabak sikhaya nahi na toh mera naam bhi Geet nahi samjhe' Kab tak nahi chodega tumhein.. Aur officer ko kya sulakar rakha hai joh tumhein hi wahaan phasaya hua hai..??"
"Haan.. Bhaiya.. Iss baar toh main bhi Bhabhi ke saath hoon' Agar next week tak aap yahaan nahi pahaunche na toh dekh lena' Aap bulaoge tab bhi baat nahi karungi'"
"Filhaal ke liyein thik se khayaal rakhna apna.. Jyada stress mat karna aur ek week mein yahaan nahi dikhe na toh hum wahaan pahaunch jaayenge samajhe' Hum phone rakhte hain' Tk cr.."
Before he could give them the good news of his leave they cut the call.
"Kamaal hai leave ki baat batane ka mauka hi nahi diya.. Accha hai Ranveer tere liyein'Kuch din mauj kar yahaan'Wahaan jaakar dono chudel tera jina haraam kar dengi'"
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Precap : Nahi' Aisa nahi hon saktha.. Maan aisa nahi kar sakthe.. Babaji aap aisa nahi kar sakthe mere saath'. Itni mushkil se main yeh sab karne mein safal hui hoon... Ab phirse Maan ke saamne' Nahi'. Ab toh ussi ke paas' Main kaise sambhal paungi iss dil ko' Apne aap ko'.. Yeh kaisi kashmakash mein daal liya aapne Babaji'!!!
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