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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
superb update

Thanks

Originally posted by: shah10
amazing update.
thx

Glad you like it.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
awsum part..
loved it...
maneet r always unpredictable..
waiting for the big blazing argument soon..
thnx for the pm...

Indeed they are unpredictable...

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: sharmake11
amazing update
wonder maan i'll do to geet

pls pls update soon

thnx so much

I don't know what Maan is plan for Geet

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ytanuja
Awesome update, love it.

Happy to know that you like it. I promise to update regularly over here... now

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: queenofdarkness
bookmarking...

You bookmark this! I hope you'll love it more

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

I am back
after such long time ago.

I know many people
might be upset
or can't
remember much about this
fiction.

It's my fault
I hope my
readers
can forgive
me.

I just needed a break
after my granny's
death.

The most important
part is finally up.

Are you guys
excited for
Maaneet finally
coming
face
to
face.

Enjoy!

***

Part X

{Outhouse Room}

"Tum"

"Tum"

Both looked at each other in shock

"What are you doing in my room?" I shouted in anger

Only thing came out of her mouth "woh..woh..woh" I shout double more "woh..woh kya?"

Geet quietly explain herself and rush out of his room through balcony

Maan confusingly what her go.

{Back To Geet's Place}

Kashish touch Darji and Beji's feet

Darji: God bless you

Beji: God grace remain with you and your family

Briji and his wife touch Kashish's feet... She bless them than Sameera took blessing from her grandparents an her parent.

Sameera's mom: How are you and where is?

Sameera: I'm fine and woh office mein hai

Nainatara hug her sister

Darji look at Sujal and Kashish

Darji: Bachche aayee ye phir

Sujal: Babuji woh aayee hai... Kashish

Kashish nods her head

Kashish found Rishi and Geet together in Geet's room. Rishi helping Geet straighten her hair.

Kashish cough

Rishi: Mom

Kashish: Come down stairs once you are done.

Geet: Why?

Kashish: Your grandparents have arrived and your Uncle and auntie too.

Rishi: Yes Mom

Kashish leave them alone

Sujal: Babuji and Ma ye mera beta Rishi

Rishi touch their feet, but Darji took him in bear hug.

Sujal: aur ye hai meri beti Geet

Geet bend down touching Darji's s feet par he back away

Darji: Tumhari beti ye Rahul ki

Sujal close his eyes Geet look at Sujal and Kashish with moist eyes.

Sujal gather courage par Rishi shouts in anger

Rishi: NOBODY DARES TO QUESTION MY FAMILY OR MY SISTER. DISH (Rishi walk toward Geet) IS APPLE OF OUR EYES (wipe her tears

kissed her forehead and hugged her)

Geet mumble: I love you, Bro

Rishi: I love you too, Dish

Everyone gather around dinning table.. Sujal sat beside his father and brother while Rishi looked for Geet.

Rishi: Dad, where is Dish?

Sujal look for Geet

Rishi get up par Sujal stop him

Rishi nod his head

Geet stood outside her balcony looking at the darkness.. Maan also stood outside his balcony looking at darkness (Irony - both are lonely yet afraid of the darkness).

2 week later

Everyone busy in arrangement for wedding and tonight is Sangeet. Geet hardly speaking with anyone.. mostly her Bro or her parents, but afraid of Darji and Briji Chachu. Mostly stays in her room. Missing Canada and mostly her friends. Dadima is happy that Maan is eating his meal with his family and attending his younger brother's wedding celebration too.

Kashish worried for Geet and her worrness is displayed on her face.

Sujal: Kya hua?

Kashish: I'm worried for Geet. She is hardly coming out of her room. I'm afraid if she..

Darji over hears them...

Maan wore black shervani... Geet wear white-black anarkali dress... both of them look inside the mirror.

Geet wore her ankle bracelet... putting on her earring when here door slowly open.

Geet turn around

Darji shouts in anger... "YOUR MOTHER TOOK AWAY MY SON AND NOW YOU WANT TAKE MY ANOTHER SON AWAY"

Geet: What are you saying?

Darji: Chup! Tu aur teri Maan ek jasie

Geet: My Dad taught me... respect elders but I have no respect for you... so leave

Darji burns with anger and slap Geet across her face.. don't dare come down to spoil my granddaughter's celebration and lock Geet in her room.

Geet touch her face... with watery eyes.

Darji order his wife and Briji's wife to keep Kashish busy and away from Geet.

Sameera start event with giddha

Nainatara enjoy her sister's dance

Dev dance on Maine Dil Tujhko Diya

Nainatara blush

Rishi look for Geet.. even Kashish.. par she can't even check upon her.

Dev force Rishi to dance with Vicky on Mein Ishq Uska while he kept on looking for Geet.

lights suddenly switched off from main source...

Geet stood looking at her reflection.. when door flew open three people came inside...

Geet: Who's there?

Voice: Your death!

Geet: What rubbish... get lost otherwise my Bro and Dad will throw you out

Voice: In your dream

Maan couldn't stand sangeet anymore and head up the stairs, but stop halfway by a scream...

Maan ran toward scream

Geet struggling on her bed.. second person with knife ready to stab her when Maan come from behind.

Three of them start fighting Maan... Maan smash then into black N blue...

Everyone came rushing into Geet's room. Geet ran in Rishi's arms that her mother's arms.. crying nonstop.

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago