FF - Hui Sabse Parayi - Pa 11/Pg 23 - May 3-12 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..amazing update.
love it,
hate darji.
continue soon plz
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shah10

wow..amazing update.

love it,
hate darji.
continue soon plz
thx for the pm.



I also hate him 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey

I am back again!

Enjoy Next Part

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Part XI

Maan called off Sangeet and question his bodyguards... Darji shot nasty glare toward Geet and Geet grip tightly onto Sujal's hand.

Sujal: Dad's here now, why worry... no more tears... sweetie... now give daddy a smile.

Rishi's phone rang... par he disconnect it and sat beside Geet. Geet hide herself in Rishi;s arm "Dad's right! Give us a smile sweetie"

Rishi smoothing out Geet by rubbing her back gently.

Maan dismiss his bodyguards and turn around looking at Geet who introduce herself as Dishika.

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3week pass by.. nothing change.. Geet each night turn out shockers... Rishi trying his best in protecting his baby girl. Sujal worried for his daughter... Kashish has been staying beside Geet's side most of the time.

Dadi pause-phone Dev and Nainatara wedding celebration... Maan arrange more bodyguards for his family's protection... Sameera trying her best to win Maan and his Dadi's trust again.

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I kept on massaging my temples.. when my phone rang.

"Hello"

"Plea" He just hung up the.. afterwards Tasha came inside his cabin with coffee.. I took it from her.

Took a sip.. closing my eyes... only to have her fearful eyes flashing in my mind. At first I thought I was nuts for a day, but three weeks non-stop of her thoughts flashing... that means Maan Singh Khurana cross the line of madness.

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Frighten Geet sat on her bed with red eyes.. lack of sleep...

Kashish came inside her room.

Kashish: Beta eat something

Geet just crawl backwards from Kashish's touch. Kashish felt hurt and left crying from her room.

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Maan came home earlier for dinner with Sujal. Both of them saw Kashish running out of Geet's room with tears..

Sujal excused himself.

Maan smile

Sujal went inside his room and saw Kashish crying non-stop.. Sujal just took her in his arms.

Sujal: Kya hua?

Kashish sobbing: I can't take it anymore... I just want our daughter back and those happy days in E-town. I miss our home badly. Why didn't we have to come here?

Sujal promise himself.. that he won't let his daughter shut herself again..

...

Sorry this part is very short

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago
shah10 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.
poor geet.
hope she's fine.
continue soon,
thx
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upadte
poor geet😭
swetha10 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update..
awww poor geet..
hope she is back to normal..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

poor geet..

darji n birji r sooo cheap...

thnx god maan come on the rite tym...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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