FF - Hui Sabse Parayi - Pa 11/Pg 23 - May 3-12 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MashiatMimosa

Guys can u please tell me what PM means?? and how can i know when someone is updating their ff?? bcoz i m new on IF



Actually "PM" means private message that people give out to notify people for several things. Just got keep your eye open for update in people's fiction you read.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you for the comments... they have made my day.

Most awaited part is updated. I hope I've done a good job or if not please forgive me.

since its about Geet's struggle against life...

based on today's teenager and their thinking about life.

Enjoy!


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Part VIII


I played with my breakfast...

Sujal: Geet... why aren't you eating anything and playing with your food?

I looked at Dad!

Geet: Can I ask you question? Dadi

Dadi nods her head...

Geet: Who stays in the another flat beside here?

Sujal: Geet!

Dadi: It's okay... um woh its Dev's older brother

Sameera look hurt and stares at Dadi with watery eyes "thank you for destroying my imagine in-front of my cousins" she gave the message with her eyes to Dadi.

Dadi just shook her head in disapproval...

Geet: Oh!

I saw Dadi smile...

I smile back...

{Most awaited Moment}

Khurana Construction.. is most well known construction company... its success.. its growth.. by one person... Maan Singh Khurana..

Inside Khurana construction.. everyone enjoying themselves... suddenly a employee screams his lungs out "HITLER"

Everyone disappear into their work... footstep get louder... two people quickly fix themselves..

"Good morning DD" His secretory greet him...

Maan shot her glare...

Secretory: I mean Maan Sir

Maan: Tasha, come into my cabin with Khanna Group file..

Maan went inside his cabin...

Tasha knocked...

Maan: Come in

Tasha walked inside with several files "Sir.. files"

Maan took the files from her.. quickly going through them "Tasha I asked for K.D Khanna Group files not S.D Khanna" he threw them across face.

Tasha: Sorry Sir

Maan wait for five second "are you waiting for special invitation to escort yourself out from my cabin"

Tasha disappeared...

{Shopping Moment}

"Its so hot" I complained to Mom

Kashish: ssh!

Geet: Mom, where is Dad and Bro?

Kashish: Next building beside us.

Geet: Why?

Kashish explain Geet about her Dad and Bro absent... Geet made funny faces... Kashish pick two-daily wear in Sari and three designer for the wedding.

Kashish: Geet pick two anarkali dress for daily and few designer style for the marriage and one sari

Geet: Yes Mom

Geet chose three simple anarkali dress in (sky blue, baby-pink with white and navy blue) than give designer anarkali in random colours and white transparent sari.

Sujal came into the building and paid the bill of the girls shopping

Geet: Dad now phone place..

Sujal: Okay!

{Khurana Construction}

"God! Tasha drives me nuts" Maan rub his temple "I just want to get rid of her, but I can't since she's Sameera's friend" thinking about Sameera made him anger and continue rubbing her temple.

{Phone Shop}

Rishi chose latest version of I-phone in black... than explain the clerk to transfer his other phone data into his new one after its activated.

Geet looked around.. finally chose I-phone as well.. also in black (but slightly different than her brother's because its also Mp3 player install as a feature) also asked him to transfer her ex-phone detail into her new phone.

Sujal help Kashish chose a phone for himself and her afterwards pay the bill.

Sujal: Now what?

Rishi + Geet: We are hungry?

Sujal drove to famous restaurant in Delhi

Receptionist: How may I help you?

Sujal: Table for 4

Waiter: This way sir

Sujal thank the waiter for showing them their table after he pull out chair for Kashish to sit and Rishi pulls a chair for Geet.

Sujal order spicy veg. Samosa for starter...

20 minute later

Sujal: We'll have one hot paneer with Naan and steamy veg. Stir fried rice

Waiter: Drinks Sir and Ma'am

Sujal: 7up with Ice

Kashish: Mineral water

Rishi order for himself and Geet extra spicy veg. Stir fried and Manchurian with 2 fresh orange juice.

Geet excuse herself..

{Geet calling Mr. Boyfriend}

Geet stood outside the lobby area of the hotel and dial Karan's number.. few minute later Karan pick up from other side.

Sleepy voice of Karan: Hey

Geet: Sorry par wanted to hear your voice

Karan: its okay! So how's your day going so far?

Geet: Dam boring without you and the rest. And store my new number into your phone.

Karan: Sure! Even classes are too long without you guys and

Geet: Missing me.. even me too

Both talked for while than Geet hang up.. started walking back to her table..

Thud!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.amazing update.
love it.
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear looks like she colided with MSK
hope that from now u may give us regular update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates...
awww cant wait for maneet meet..
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the updates...
so maan is introduced..
waiting for the story to move fwd...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovley
loved the teasing section
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shah10

wow.amazing update.

love it.
thx for the pm.



Thank you so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome dear looks like she colided with MSK
hope that from now u may give us regular update



Maybe she did collide with MSK
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome updates...

awww cant wait for maneet meet..
plzz continue soon



They'll meet very soon... I promise.

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