FF - Hui Sabse Parayi - Pa 11/Pg 23 - May 3-12 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: swetha10

wow nice one.. so sam married to maan...

hmmm sounds interesting.. continue soon



Yep, Maan and Sameera are married... its just the beginning.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

nice part dear..

soo sam married to mann...

i guess more is coming..

thnx for the pm...



Yes, Sameera is married to Maan... and yes, there is more to come out soon... just keep faith in me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Glad you like it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

is sameera maan's wife?
pl cont soon



Yep, Sameera is Maan's wife.. and its the beginning of a real story not the end..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ambbiha

awesome update

continue soon
😊😊😊



Thank you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Ooh sameera married to maan but she's also geets cousin but by the looks of it sameeras married life isn't good and awe geet calling karan anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊



Yep, they are married and from the sound of it their married life isn't going.. yes they are cousin and Geet is mostly attracted to Karan (and more to it)... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Thank you for the comments... they have made my day.

Count down as begin for Maan's introduction, his family will be shown in this part. Just don't hate me if you get a shock throughout reading it. Trust its the beginning not the end!

since its about Geet's struggle against life...

based on today's teenager and their thinking about life.

Enjoy!


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Part VII


I woke up earlier for a change... stretched out my arms.. brush my teeth.. wash my face.. put on my puma track suit.

I tie-toe into Bro's room.. leaned on his bed.. shouted inside his ear... he woke up shouting Dhara's name..

I laughed...

He glared at me...

Rishi: What the hell was that for?

I couldn't stop laughing "woh kya hai.. you need to get into shape" he looked at me with wide eyes "so lets go and I'll wake up Dad as well"

Rishi groan...

I stop before turning the knob "if you don't come down in five minutes.. i'll throw cold H2O on you" Rishi marched into his bathroom. Also cursing Karan underneath his breath.

{Geet inside her Parent's room}

I tip-toe down the stairs towards Mom and Dad's room.. I knock twice before walking inside...

I smiled!

Without making noise.. I jump on the bed.

"Earth Quake" I heard Dad shouting..

I smiled at Mom while she controlling her laughter..

Dad kept on shouting...

I winked at Mom..

Mom smirk..

Suddenly bucket full of water splashed Dad on the face..

"Its raining... raining" Dad shouted again.

I burst out laughing...

Dad glared at me!

"Come out in two minutes.. cause you need to get in shape like bro" I smirk "otherwise no tasty food" I winked at Mom.

I ran out before Dad could trickle me...

{Sameera begging someone on the phone}

"please!" Sameera begged on the phone

Voice: I don't care!

Before Sameera could say further... it was disconnected!

{Breakfast Moment}

Kashish: How was your jog?

I smiled.. at Mom

Geet: Great! But I am warning you Mom to stop making tasty food for bro and dad

Sujal moan: Kashish!

Rishi groan: Mom!

Kashish: Keep me out of it! Its between you and your laadi!

Geet winked at her Mom

Sujal marched into his room same with Rishi while Geet hugged her Mom.

Kashish: Badmas! Why you tease them?

Geet: Its fun!

Kashish smile... Geet ran into her room.. frown (cuz her Mom took out anarkali suit) took a shower.. wore the suit with long shiver earring... tiny shiver chain with D.K (D means Dishika and K means Karan)...

Afterwards Geet came downstairs with Rishi.. both of them took blessing from their parents than Dadi (Dadi looked impressed) both of them together marched into prayer room.

Dadi: Where did they go?

Kashish: Puja room

Sameera: par kyun?

Dadi glare at Sameera to keep quiet!

Sameera: I mean they grew up in pardes...usually they disbelieve in tradition.

Sujal: Nahiin.. our kids aren't

Kashish smiles..

Sujal: They might behave western, but they are pure Indian from heart!

Dadi smile! Her mind thinking something that could never happen...

Sameera just smile!

Rishi came and sat beside Sharvan

Kashish: Rishi, what will you eat and our laadi?

Rishi: I'll have toast with jam and Dish would have those stuff up pancake (the potatoes) kind

Kashish nods her head

Geet came and sat beside Rishi//

Sujal: What's wrong? Geet

Geet sighs!

Sujal: Kya hua?

Geet: I know after yesterday.. you won't give me your phone... but need to make a urgent call?

Sujal gave his phone...

Geet thanked her Dad afterwards Rishi whisper into Geet's ear.. she smacked him and left with the phone in her hand.

{Geet chatting with Karan}

Karan: Hi Babes!

Geet: Hey Karan.. you weren't in bed?

Karan: Nah! Just came back?

Geet: Oh! Went clubbing

Karan: Yeah

They talked for awhile, but Geet notice someone dressed in black-half sleeves shirt.. with grey vest along with bluish-black tie and black pant...

Karan: Are you listening?

Geet: Huh!

Karan:What are you thinking?

Geet: Nothing! Got to go! Bye

Karan: Bye!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

that was a really nice part..

loved hw geet teased her bro n dad...

it was really a very sweet family bonding...

n i guess geet saw maan..

waiting for his entry..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys can u please tell me what PM means?? and how can i know when someone is updating their ff?? bcoz i m new on IF
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

that was a really nice part..

loved hw geet teased her bro n dad...

it was really a very sweet family bonding...

n i guess geet saw maan..

waiting for his entry..

thnx for the pm...



Just read the next part.. and you'll see how things take place...

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