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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: preethia
loved the updates...
so maan is introduced..
waiting for the story to move fwd...
pl cont soon

Yep, Maan is introduce.. and now the story is going to take place.

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: ambbiha
lovley
loved the teasing section

I love them too... those moments only happen once then they are gone forever... if you don't use the moment wisely.

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: sharmake11
both wonderful updates

Glad you like it...

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Thank you for the comments... they have made my day.

So how did you like the introduction of Maan Singh Khurana... I hope it was enjoyable.. Let see who Geet collide with?

since its about Geet's struggle against life...

based on today's teenager and their thinking about life.

Enjoy!

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Part IX

{Restaurant... where Geet is with her family}

"excuse me gentlemen" Maan leave to attend his phone call...

Maan: What?

Voice: Listen to...

Maan: If you are gonna request me... than forget it..

Maan hung up...

Thud!

"Oye... can't you look where your going? Oh my god! My dress!" I heard her complain.. I just walk pass her without saying sorry or anything.

***

Geet return back to her table cursing the person who bump into her and didn't even say sorry.

Rishi: What happened?

Geet: Nothing! Dad may I have car key?

Sujal: Why?

Geet: Cause god answer Mom's prayer

Kashish: uh!

Geet told her family the incident.. Sujal gave Rishi car keys... Rishi got Geet's dress (that is baby blue).. Geet changed her western outfit to Indian.. her and Rishi walking back toward their table par her eyes caught something.

Geet: Bro excuse me

Rishi nod his head..

Geet walk toward the waiter... grab a drink... tap that person's shoulder who bump into her... and pour the drink on him.

{Back to Khurana Mansion}

Geet ran into her room... flop on her bed... smiling over the cruel person's reaction.. also he had to pay for the entire lunch of her family.

Geet text away to her friends...

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Three days later

Sujal went to pick up his father and his brother's family at the station.. Kashish wore a sari and took out anarkali dress for Geet on her bed.

{Geet and Rishi gone for Jog}

Geet: Bro, have you asked Dad?

Rishi stop jogging and looked at Geet...

Geet: Not yet!

Rishi: Haven't had the moment with Dad alone.

Geet: Just remember.. more you delay.. more difficult it will get. Lets go lazy bone.

Geet race Rishi home...

{Out house of Khurana Mansion + Mansion itself}

Maan does his daily routine.. took nice shower, but can not forget yesterday's incident that took place between him and that girl who he collide with by mistake. Wore his fade jeans and white T-shirt...

Dadi walks into Maan's room...

Maan look at his Dadi

Dadi: How are you?

Maan: Fine!

Dadi: Fine that you don't have time for me or few minute to come and see me.

Maan look hurt...

Maan: Its not like that, but you know why?

Dadi: I know per tolerating her for me... please

Maan hugged his Dadi "just for you" Dadi mumble "thank you" Maan watch his Dadi leave afterwards his inner soul question him.

Maan sighs after breaking his mirror into pieces..

***

Geet came out on her balcony and began wiping her drench hair peacefully before jumping in fear...

"Should I or Should I not" She asked herself...

***

Sameera saw Dadi coming from Outhouse...

Sameera: Dadi woh.. woh kasie hai?

Dadi glare at Sameera

Dadi: Why would you care... because of you my (Dadi spot Kashish) grandson is hardly home... always working hard.

Kashish: You are lucky Beta

Sameera smile...

***

Geet carefully enter Maan's room through his balcony (their balcony is connected) look at the broken pieces of glass.

So much pain... Geet thought to herself.

Maan came into his room grab his car keys...

Geet felt someone's shadow behind her..

Maan stood frozen...

Geet stood up slowly..

Maan: Tum

Geet: Tum

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Awesome...

luved it..

wonder wht next... continue soon

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

awsum part..

loved it...

maneet r always unpredictable..

waiting for the big blazing argument soon..

thnx for the pm...

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@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

amazing update

wonder maan i'll do to geet

pls pls update soon

thnx so much

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Author's Note: Sorry Friends, I know many of you guys are upset that I wasn't able to update for awhile - well my laptop was gone for service and now I am going to India for few weeks. I'll update once I am back.

I hope you understand..

Thank you.